FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet.Part 48..pg190 - Page 102

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lol I'm at my mom's friend's place and using the computer there. Can't stay away from I-F😆
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Ima b online after like half an hour. going to eat dinner here then go home. kay? cya in a while
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Originally posted by: loveangle_4ever

Ima b online after like half an hour. going to eat dinner here then go home. kay? cya in a while

enjoy ur dinner...cya..
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muskaan ,

sizzling hot update......... 😳...... u shud give us a warning before such updates...!!!! 😉.... u know so that we can do some breathing exercises( to prevent hyperventilations , but the update was so so so so so smoking hawwwwwtttttttt..... i guess hyperventilation was inexorable. ).......... and we need fire extinguishers just in case laptop catches fire....😆

but amazing update..... maan's completely lost control and geet din't stop him.. poor thing woh becharei kya karegi??? aur maan us pei chillata hai???

i liked it when maan scolds her for not stoping him and she innocently says, what did i do, u did everything...!!!! 😆

and i lost respect for him when he asks her if that's what she wanted....???? 😡..... aaah.... i dint like him for a second..but anyways, he cannot stay under the same roof as she now??? good! so is he planning to shift out of the outhouse when he realizes she stays with him in the same house??? 😲

lovely update girl.... could not get any better....

muaz.......,

waiting for ur next update...!!!!! 😛

soumya



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just saw that you will be updating in an hr... waiting for it.............
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Hi Muskan, I really don't know what to say about your last 2 updates (38 & 39). You have just excelled in explaining their emotions so well. The way both gave space to individuals privacy by Geet leaving him with his friend without burdening them with her presence, Maan leaving the room while she is having her call, really great. The gift part, i don't feel bad that maan refused it as his ego was hurt that she bought him a gift while she as not got anything for herself. And he was aware of teh fact that she has not bought anything for her and she had expressed her money is exhausted. So as gentleman either he would have bought her something or lend her some money which she would have returned later. He didn't do either of them and how can he accept a gift? So you scored full mark here dear, no complaints on Maan.

he had been trying hard to concentrate on his workout but Geet was torturing him as his memories. He didn't want to accept her as anything other than his trainee and but she haunts him 24hrs a day even in his sleep and while he work. After all that memories (of Geet & Priya simultaneously), he was tired analysing his feelings and was ready for a shower which would have eased his mind & body to certain extent. But what to do, there she comes in her bath robe like a just blossomed lily which made its magic on him. He was mesmorized by her pleasant beauty and couldn't control himself. He closed the gap between them and carried away with his urge which was matched by Geets emotions. All of a sudden he was hit by reality, she is not Priya and he was about consume a fresh flower and would have spoiled her life for ever (Sorry he is not aware of her as his wife and I don't approve him of doing anything further until he was hit with the ground reality of him marrying her and abandoning her in his outhouse and forget.). So when he realized what would have happened , if he hadn't pulled out in time made him furious and yell at her. like why you could not stop me? She would have stopped him or she would not even have stayed with him alone, if she had the slightest inclination on him forgetting her as his wife. So like any wife she kept quiet and carried away. Bruises can be understood and justified. BUt the million dollar question is whether he will apply balm to them or he will just leave it to her due to his guilty conscious & could meet her her? Only you can explain that muskan.

On a lighter note, geet wont tell him that she is his wife as she is ignorant of his understanding. Dadi will not tell as Geet will not confess this incident with her as it is purely between husband & wife. Krish can't do anything as he is too young for all this and moreover he is away from home. So all I can hope is, geet will narrate this incident to priya on compulsion and Priya will have to come all the way to shake Mann from his rigidself.

Muskan here is a 🤗for all your efforts in brining in such a classy post. 👏👏👏 Tha nk you for that.

Jaya
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gr888888888888888 update.superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

waiting for the next one
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hey muskan di. I'm back. mayb for 15 minutes? so is the update coming in 15 minutes?
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Originally posted by: deejagi

Hi Muskan, I really don't know what to say about your last 2 updates (38 & 39). You have just excelled in explaining their emotions so well. The way both gave space to individuals privacy by his understanding. Dadi will not tell as Geet will not confess this incident with her as it is purely between husband & wife. Krish can't do anything as he is too young for all this and moreover he is away from home. So all I can hope is, geet will narrate this incident to priya on compulsion and Priya will have to come all the way to shake Mann from his rigidself.

Muskan here is a 🤗for all your efforts in brining in such a classy post. 👏👏👏 Tha nk you for that.

Jaya

wow...thanxs,,u are amazing..just explained the whole untold parts..love u
muskan
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he just walked out of the room & joined after she completed the
presentation...

Part 40

Geet was stepping out as maan walked in & she glanced at his hand with the bandage..
maan noticed how the anger in her eyes changed to pain..when she looked at those
bloodstains..Maans guilt killed him further...again a question in her eyes..
wat have done to ur self? She almost went to hold that hand to have a close look
but decided otherwise..they just walk pass..
maan had to attend to the clients & geet took the next flight to delhi
she met up with daadi & NT..gave them all the gifts
daadi noticed the marks on her neck..but was not able to connect it to the pain
in her eyes..geet looked withdrawn..she avoided much discussion
about the trip & said I am tried..need to sleep..
geet was hurt ..very hurt..inspite of all that pain with in her..
wat was bothering her most was his hand ...she knew..he does'nt realize wat is he doing
when he is anger..!!! she never wanted to be the reason for his pain..
she knew how much pain he is been suffering being alone...no one to share his feelings
atleast I have daadi, priya, friends..Maan to aapna dil ka haal kissi ko nahi
kah pathe..she lies on the bed with another sleepless night
every time she closes her eyes..his hand soaked in red bandage flashes..

maan reaches very late..& he was very disturbed..his conference was a success
but he looked lost in all the way...he just droped dead on the bed

next day
Maan called geet to his cabin..maan stood facing the wall
as she walked in ...he was feeling quite odd & guilty..
maan - i am ..woh!! did'nt mean..(he was restless & impatient..his words were not
able express his feelings)
there was sudden current passing from his palm ..down his spine
with her soft & caress touch...he would have almost fell down to plead guilty but snaps back
maan - yeh kya kar rahi hoo..(pulling his hand away)
she pulled it back removed the old bandage & dressed it .
maan - leave my hand alone.and turned & met her eyes which were filled
choot mujhe laaghi hain roo tum rahi hoo
geet turns to leave...she did'nt speak a word..
maan - woh!! new project proposal's proposee wanted to talk to u
regarding ur negative view.. geet turns to look at maan..(she was suprised that maan considered her suggestion) maans friend walks in...
Maan - hi buddy...this is geet my reseach advisory...who feels
we should not be doing this project
geet turns to meet armaans eyes.. they hugged...geet got little emotional..since
armaan is the only person she shared her feelings regarding maan
armaan - agar mujhe malloom hota..u miss me so much..that I get such warm hug
I would have planned all this earlier..
(maan stood rooted..& avoided to look at them)
geet pats his back & tears rolls down her cheeks..(maan felt a pinch in his heart)
armaan cups her face in his hand & hey ..are yaar I was just joking
(maan just moved behind his chair & hit his same hand on it)
armman - are u ok..u look totally worn out..kya baat hain geet
maan was little uncomfartable & wondered wat would be her reply
geet - nahin nothing actually...
armaan - so u were missing me thats why & winked
geet frowned at armaan
armaan - ok ok I know tume to aapne MR.lover ke pyar se pyar hain right!!!
maan looked at geet ...wat was that.. geet was little embarressed..
armaan looked at maan & said yaar sorry...me & geet are always like this
maan - umm!!! & so u don't have time for a hug for ur best friend!!
they have a small hugging session..& then
armaan - yaar if geet has said NO..then I guess it is NO
Maan - why do u think so?(Maan was totally shocked)
armaan - no body know this project better than geet
maan was burning from inside at their closeness

armaan - actually yeh project proposal which u admired so much..is drafted by geet
so she actually knows better than u & me
maan remembered the day when he shouted at her in the meeting..without letting her talk
armaan puts his hand around geet & says..

armaan - BTW maam aap meri band kyu bajaarahi hain? why u don't want maan to work on this..
even maan was keen to know why?
geet - armaan this is a very personal & emotional to u...& Maan & emotions don't work togather
(she said that with a taunt)(maan glazed a look at her in anger)
armaan smiles and says..maan yaar she really seems to know u ..
armaan - nahin geet he is not always been like this..
Maan interrupts..I guess we are here to discuss about the hospital project not me!!
armaan - can I take ur geet for a coffee ..I can discuss their with her
(ur geet hit maan really hard..)
maan - umm!!! why should I mind
armaan - actually even if u ..I don't care..& winks😉 at geet
geet notices some thing different in maans eyes..she was not sure wat was that!!😲

every sec passed maans heart was pounding to know more about their relation
he was not able to take their proximity...he realized they were good friends
but..he still did'nt, could not approve it..it was hurting him..
every time..armaan put his hand around geet..& how she was comfartable
with him..pinched him...maan was fighting with himself...😡

Geet & Armaan walk in...armaan had his hand resting on her waist
maan looked at those hands & looked at geet..she moved forward a bit avoiding any further conflicts..
geet - I have work & was about to leave
Maan - I have'nt finished yet
armaan - its ok yaar..we have discussed it ..I understood her concern..
I guess its better I look at some other construction company..
geet stood seeking maan's premission..he looked at her & looked away..she understood & left..
latter on the day..maan walked into geets cabin..
maan - i was very keen on helping armaan..he is my childhood friend
it is close to my heart..I wanted to be part of his dream project
geet was first time hearing maan getting emotional on professional front
geet - aap kaabhi kuch kahthe nahin hain..how would I know?
maan - I always thought u knew me better
geet - nahin woh!!
maan - I still don't understand why u did't want us to do the project
geet - ji woh!! armaan is very emotional
maan - if some one dose'nt express emotions..does'nt mean he is not emotional
(maan looks into her eyes)
geet - nahin mera matlab woh nahin tha..
maan - phir kya matlab tha tumhara?(geet looks away)
geet - the propsal will have lots of last min changes & updates
it will dealy the construction process & we don't have an architect
on board who will can be creatively spontaneous & adaptable to his
changing demands.
maan - u really seem to know him pritty well(that came like a taunt)
geet felt it..but preffered to ignoring....

precap
Maan defintly Jealous..with a capital J

thanxs for all the responses...just loved it..
please keep letting me know..helps me think better love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 15 years ago

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