FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet.Part 48..pg190 - Page 100

jeeezz Muskan!! i hve read this part atleast 5times now!!AWESOMEEEEE

OMG first i was gonna comment and say this has got to be my new fav part of the ff..!!! it was soo cute - all their dialogues and maan calling geet a nautanki and a single piece hehe thats sooooo funny! I LOVE that!! and then all her shopping.. gosh 1 of ur best parts i hav to say!!! =D
also,.. i was dyinnng to comment about ur previous part as well.. well the 1 before the last where geet walks out leavin maan/shilpa alone.. i just wanted to say how impactful the final line of the part was when geet declared herself as "actually.. no one" i thought that was an amazing touch to the end! it actually broke my heart.. and then it was the sweetest thing to see what u had planned in mind, that geet knew of maan and his friend and just wanted to give them time together - u have a beautiful plot to this story and i totally lvoe where its goin! i'm slightly angry tho - sorryyyyyy but i really disliked the way maan got angry at geet for buying him something its moments like that which really bug the hell outta me and i just wanna wack maan and say DUDE shes ur wife so give her a break! plz relieve our tension soon! actually, take the time u think fit, cos woteva u right is just AWESOME to read!! i lvoe everrrrrrrry scene u create!! wonderful wonderful wonderful and simply ADORABLE update!!
HUUUUUUUUUGE JHAPPI for all ur terrific parts!xxxxxxx

Originally posted by: Chotii

OMG first i was gonna comment and say this has got to be my new fav part of the ff..!!! it was soo cute - all their dialogues and maan calling geet a nautanki and a single piece hehe thats sooooo funny! I LOVE that!! and then all her shopping.. gosh 1 of ur best parts i hav to say!!! =D
also,.. i was dyinnng to comment about ur previous part as well.. well the 1 before the last where geet walks out leavin maan/shilpa alone.. i just wanted to say how impactful the final line of the part was when geet declared herself as "actually.. no one" i thought that was an amazing touch to the end! it actually broke my heart.. and then it was the sweetest thing to see what u had planned in mind, that geet knew of maan and his friend and just wanted to give them time together - u have a beautiful plot to this story and i totally lvoe where its goin! i'm slightly angry tho - sorryyyyyy but i really disliked the way maan got angry at geet for buying him something its moments like that which really bug the hell outta me and i just wanna wack maan and say DUDE shes ur wife so give her a break! plz relieve our tension soon! actually, take the time u think fit, cos woteva u right is just AWESOME to read!! i lvoe everrrrrrrry scene u create!! wonderful wonderful wonderful and simply ADORABLE update!!
HUUUUUUUUUGE JHAPPI for all ur terrific parts!xxxxxxx

U didn't say anything about part 39?
Really glad u liked these parts & made an effort to comment..thanxs feels good rather grt
Love
Muskan

Originally posted by: kyphfanz

jeeezz Muskan!! i hve read this part atleast 5times now!!AWESOMEEEEE

OMGGG- i think ill dream about this tonight!!!

ur sooo goodd..perfect..

Do let me know if u dreamt..can't wait for ur reply!!!!

superb as always!

Hey Muskan!

Read all the 3 updates at one go.....lolz....that was fabulous! I just loved all the 3 parts! The 1st part was so cute......lolz.....that room scene was hot.....lolz.....those were such awesome updates! Ugh Maan......finally Geet walked out on him.....he deserves that! I just hope she continues to act pricey for some more time.....lolz......can't wait to read the next part.....do update soon.

Wow maan kissed geet wid soo much passion ... 😳

@how odd was that ....she was giving a gift .....

hey muskan caught with both the updates ...........very well written!!! the room part was a complete roll over maan's n geet's emotions ............maan is in guilt .......poor dude wish he knew that he's married to the woman.

Wow...great update as usual
why did geet have blue/red marks on her back?