wow!!
loved it!!
Sasha vs Nainu...great dialogues!!
thank you geet !!! 😊
any suggestions or ideas??????
-soumya
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wow!!
loved it!!
Sasha vs Nainu...great dialogues!!
Originally posted by: uzmakhan
ooooooooooo soumya!! m soo glad u thought of writin FF!!
part 1: loved geet's boldness!! she dint start tearin buh handled the whole thing very confidently--i love that bit! geet tearing down???remember she is maan singh khurana's girl..she's going to tear him down for sending her away..!!! 🤣part 2: uff kya luck hai yaar!! that is one awesum news if dev leaves fer shimla b4 confrontin geet--cuz m realli not lukin forward to their confrontation at the moment! i want maaneet to fall in love and develop tremendous faith in each other b4 deveet track begins!gr8 way of kickin him out of the picture!!👏
and naintara is a very confusing character---abhi toh dev key saath shimla main romance kernay ka soch rahi thi, so y is she hafin prob wid sasha wid maan? lol i loved the way sasha asnwered her bk--hahahaha--mast!👍🏼 why naintara is mad at sasha will be explained in later parts..!!! dont worry no romantic linkups between maan and naintara...🤢... even i loved the scene... sasha challenges geet and naintara challenges sasha...!! u know like they say.. whatever u do , u get it back. same way, sasha plans to throw geet out of office in 4 days and naintara decides to do the same with sasha and that too in 4 days...!!!!oooiii! part 3 kab likhogi?? tarsaogi toh nahi na??🤣 ..... tumne update kiya kya.??? confession pe chod diya ...!!!! 😉... ab jab tak tum nahi karoge tab tak main nahi karungi....!!!!! 😆 just kidding.... i'll comne up with something...!!! i'll consider your ideas too and come up with something nice..even i'm bored of dev , naintara and sasha..ab thoda X rated ness ho jaaye...!!!!!! 😉yaara i want sum hawt romance in the next scene!!! like maan gets a fone call that sum lady got hurt on site and maan assumes widout any second thoughts that its geet and rushes to the site and --2 options then:if she isnt hurt---maan sighs wid relieve and hugs her tight fer being ok(not in senses, immediate first reaction to find her ok)--2nd option: if she gets hurt or is in the process of gettin hurt lol like stuck in a whole or sumthin😆 then maan rescues her and does marham patti fer her!!jus a random suggestion dear! buh u haf better ideas!! --laykin jaldi likhna !!!!
thanks for the suggestions... i'll consider them...!!1 and i'm glad u like my post uzma...!!!!
Wonderfull..plz continue writing!!,
Originally posted by: *angel94*
Interesting FF! Continue soon.
hello everyone,😊
a quick recap of parts 1 & 2:
- maan decides to send geet away from office for 4 days
-geet is not shattered instead decides to just accept maan's decisions.
-sasha challenges geet and geet gives her a piece of her mind.
-dev and maan talk of business and maan allows dev to work in the office for 4 days and then gives him a 150 crore project in shimla.
-dev confuses sasha as maan's love interest and tells naintara about it.
-naintara does not like sasha and warns sasha of throwing her out of khurana constructions in 4 days.
and here's part 3: hope u like it...!!!!
Part 3: day 1: khurana mansion outhouse, night:
Maan had been busy the whole day and finally decides to take a break. He walks into the lawn and looks at the mansion. He wonders if he should go meet his dadi and spend time with her. But something makes him decide against it and he simply sits in one of the chairs in the lawn. The weather was pleasant and slightly breezy. The zephyr calmed him and he closes his eyes and decides to just relax there. His thoughts suddenly move to geet. He wonders if she reached home safely and then dismisses the idea thinking that adi was with her so she would be okay.
He felt someone caress his forehead gently. He quickly caught that soft hand. He knew who it was; he had held that hand a lot of times before. And without opening his eyes, he said, "geet tum mujhe chain se jeene doge ya nahi? Chali jao aur mujhe akela rehne do." Saying so, he pushes that hand away only to hear laughter.
He opens his eyes and sees his dadi. maan jumps up from his chair. "dadima aap yaha?". Dadi, still laughing, replies, "kyun maan? Yaha sirf geet ko entry hai?"
maan slightly turns red at her comment and says, "dadi main abhi aapse milne aane wala tha bas…" and dadi completes it for him, "bas, thoda behek gaya geet ke khayalo mein" and winks at him. She knows he is a little embarrassed and to not irritate him further she decides to end the matter there.
She says, "raat kafi ho chuki hai, jaake so jayeeye maan. Hum aapse kal baat karenge." And she walks towards the mansion. "dadima lekin aapko mujhse baat karni thi kya?" "good night maan" and he could still hear her laugh.
"yeh geet bhi na, Neend mein bhi mujhe akela nahi chodti. Aur khud aaram se so rahi hogi." And he was right, back at her place, geet was actually sleeping peacefully after a long tiring day.
He walks back into his bedroom. Unable to sleep, he keeps staring outside of the window from his bed. He suddenly felt someone hold him from behind. He held those hands tightly closer to his heart. "tum mujhe aaj sone nahi donge kya?". He turned towards her, angrily; he looked at her with intense eyes. "tum mujhe jaane dogi tuo main tumhein sone doongi", came back geet's voice. "theek hai, ab jao" and he closes his eyes. He slowly falls asleep unable to get rid of geet's thoughts no matter what he does.
hope u liked it...!!!!
-soumya 😛
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