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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: uzmakhan

OMG!!!

AMAZING!!
i jus loved the way maan finally admitted his love fer her!!!
woaw---geet on lap and kissin him!!! uffff------m gettin highly x-rated here!!!🤪
buh toooo gud soumya!
very well written and yesh u did complete justice to this scene!!
and lol this part is awesumest:
"pareshaan ho?" she asked, pecking him on his cheek.

"hmmm." He replied weakly.

"meri wajah se" she questioned.

"hmmm" came another reply.

"baat nahi karoge kya?" she asked looking into his eyes now.

"hmmm" he replies again.

"mujhe miss kar rahe ho na."

"hmmm"

🤣🤣
🤣
massttttt "hmmmm" convo!!🤣
maza aagaya!!!
lol it luks as if u haf been writin ur ff all weekend!!
carry on carry on..werna hum maaneetians zinda kaisay rahengay??!!


....
i actually love the way , maan(gurmeet) says "hmmm" in the serial... its damn ...*s...*🤬 so i thought it would work well here...!!!!!

soumya

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

wow amazing update. loved it.loved the conversation and scene between maan and geet.



thanks!!!! 😛 ...keep reading...!!!!

soumya
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: *mittu*

OMG Soumya that was such a beautiful part. I loved how Maan came to accept he is in love with Geet. Beautiful. That is the only word here. And thank you so much for putting that teeny weeny doubt about Dev and NT in Maan's mind. This will surely help Geet in the future. Please caontinue soon. can't wait to read what happens next.



thanks mittu (sorry, i dont know your name)!!!! 😊

i'm glad u liked it...and tahnks for the prompt replies...!!!!

soumya
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

"pareshaan ho?" she asked, pecking him on his cheek.
"hmmm." He replied weakly.
"meri wajah se" she questioned.
"hmmm" came another reply.
"baat nahi karoge kya?" she asked looking into his eyes now.
"hmmm" he replies again.
"mujhe miss kar rahe ho na."
"hmmm"
"tuo maan kyun nahi lete. Aap mere bina jee nahi sakte. Aapko pyaar ho gaya hai mr. maan khurana."
He looks at her blankly. "nahi"


I just love this part how cute!!! Really yaar CVs should see this I am going send this part to them!!!! 👏



i'm really really glad u liked it muskan..... u wanted the confession and here it is...!!!! 😛

i thought i'll push it for another 2 posts but then when i read all ur posts i decided to make maan confess...

soumya

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Posted: 15 years ago
Soumya, very very very good... I really LOVED the last line :):):)


please continue.. thanks much for all the efforts you put to keep us busy on weekend :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg omg omg soumya ☺️
really its hard to take breath while reading this part girl☺️really i dont know how i took my breath
maan and confessing his love ☺️
i am dead for now really
manneet land😍😍😍😍
well the conve is really apt and loved it
mirchi sceen🤣 is really good
🤗🤗🤗
loved ur topic girl
suggestion
how abt maan not able to confess to geet and took the help of dev
and dev is at shimla and giving maan some tips and maan trying hard but not able to propose geet 😉
and maan hardly says i mean after trying hard he confessess to daadima that he is in love with geet😉
in between some jokes as maan is trying hard to confess his love to geet😉
i hope i made any sence if so hope u liked the suggestion if not no problem 🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sravani899

omg omg omg soumya ☺️

really its hard to take breath while reading this part girl☺️really i dont know how i took my breath
maan and confessing his love ☺️
i am dead for now really
manneet land😍
well the conve is really apt and loved it
mirchi sceen🤣 is really good
🤗🤗🤗
loved ur topic girl
suggestion
how abt maan not able to confess to geet and took the help of dev
and dev is at shimla and giving maan some tips and maan trying hard but not able to propose geet 😉
and maan hardly says i mean after trying hard he confessess to daadima that he is in love with geet😉
in between some jokes as maan is trying hard to confess his love to geet😉
i hope i made any sence if so hope u liked the suggestion if not no problem 🤗🤗



maan is not going to confess to geet yet...!!! but i'll keep that in mind...right now, i thought he'll just keep enjoying irritating geet, trying to find out what she thinks of him...
tahnks..!!!!!

the next part is ready and will be here once i finish this post...!!!

soumya

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Posted: 15 years ago
okay guys, hope you liked the confession and here's the next part...!!!!!

Part 11: A new beginning!

Maan wakes up with a bad neck ache and realizes he's been sleeping in the chair all night. He walks towards the window and stands there. Everything outside was beautiful-the morning sun, the chirping of the birds, the zephyr that touched his face and the serene atmosphere outside. He could feel the tranquility not just outside but also in his mind. The storm in his mind had finally ended. The reason was because he accepted being in love with geet.

He wondered how he would now feel when he faces geet at the launch party. He quickly moved away from the window in shock that he completely forgot about the launch party. It was already 7:45 am and he was lazing around the outhouse still in his black vest and tracks. He rushed to get ready and hurried with his breakfast. He was literally running towards the car yelling at the driver when mr. chopra calls him.

"good morning mr.chopra. main abhi aapse bees minute mein venue mein milta hoon. Who actually thoda late ho gaya."

"no problem mr.khurana, main tuo aapko yeh batane phone kiya tha ki launch party ke baad hi mujhe kaam ke silsile mein London jaana padega."

"oh okay, mr.chopra, I understand. Main aur geet …" and pauses at the name, this was the first time he took this name after his internal conflicts resolved, but gets out of it and continues, "aapko see off karne aayenge aur airport chalet chalet hum saare details car mein discuss karenge.that would save time for you!"

"That would be wonderful mr.khurana and It sounds perfect!" and hangs up.

Geet on the other hand, is praying that everything goes okay this time. She does not want maan to end up yelling at her. She asks pinky suggestions for what she should wear in the evening. As they were discussing geet gets a call from the venue. She quickly grabs her bag and rushes out for all the last minute preparations.

Maan had just reached the venue and is getting out of the car, when the first thing he sees is geet getting out of the taxi on the other side. Could his day have started off any better? He thought. He slowly walked towards the entrance not removing his gaze from her even for a second. He noticed her smile, her eyes- everything about her was so perfect. How could he tell her that she was no pari?

Mr.chopra disturbed his thoughts and maan finally turns to look at him. They greet each other and look at everything in the hall, when geet comes in running and almost knocks a vase down. Maan looks at her very lovingly. She does not see them and runs to the manager at the venue. "maine aapse kaha than a, white roses nahi orchids hi lagana hai, phir bhi aapne entrance pe white roses laga diya."

"ma'am par aapne kaha tha ki orchids andar honi chahiye or bahar kuch bhi chalega."

"aap pagal ho gaye kya. Maine kab kaha Bahar kuch bhi chalega? Dekhiye aap please samajne ki koshish kijiye, hamare DD ko, mera matlab hai hamare boss ko phoolon se nafrat hai. Agar aap ne roses laga diya tuo wahi roses se haar banwaake mere photo par latkanyenge mere boss."

Maan could not stop laughing. No, matter how much the world changes; his geet would not change- the same bubliness, the same innocence and the same sweetness. Probably that is what made him fall for her.

She then turns around and sees both maan and mr.chopra staring at her and smiling. She regrets whatever she said uttered under stress to the manager. "geet, aj tuo tu gayi. Is khadoos ne sun liya tuo yahi mera chutti karega. Babaji please aaj ke din mujhe bacha lena."

Mr.c hopra walks to her while stands wherever he is not breaking the eye-contact with geet. Mr.c hopra asks geet if everything is okay and she reluctantly turns to look at him. She nods her head and he leaves the venue.

Geet quickly walks to maan who is standing with his hands folded and staring at geet. "sir, aap please kam se kam aaj ke din mujhe ghoorna bandh kijiye. Jab bhi aap mujhe aise ghoorte hai tuo mujhse koi na koi ghalti ho jati hai aur phir aap mujhe daatenge."

"geet ab meri nazaron se bhi tumhe problem hai? Aur waise tumhe itna farak kyun padta hai?" he asks her cunningly.

"sir, aap ne kabhi aapne aap ko aina mein ghoorke dekha?agli baar dekh lijiye. Darawana lagte hai aap.lagta hai jaise aap gusse mein mujhe kha jayenge."

And before maan could respond, geet gets a call from the caterers and hurries away from there. He smirks and says, "ghoorna tuo bandh nahi karoonga. Dekhta hoon kab tak bhagoge mujhse."

precap: geet sees dev and naintara at the airport while she goes to drop mr. chopra at the airport

soumya
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful wonderfful wonderful.. pls continue.... Maan soooooo romantic.. hope this happens in serial tooo... :)

Soumya, you r doinmg a good job
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Posted: 15 years ago
ha ha ha ha 🤣
so sweet 😆
maan and teasing geet wo bhi pyar se 😆
his geet☺️😍😍😍
laughing at geet discription of him☺️
geet asking maan to stair at himself using mirror🤣🤣
maan saying kab tak bagogi mujse🤣🤣
naughty maan☺️☺️
really loved it sweety😊❤️

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