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Ayesha.

@cooldude10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#101

OMG. Pickle! (sorry, don't know ur name 😆) i absolutely LOVE this part! and the way maan reealizes he's in LO-LO-LOVE! eep 😆 I'm so going crazy over the weekend because of no Maaneet 😆 But like anywaay. this part's definitely amazing aND CUTE.😍

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#102

Nice Romantic update

Kash Nt n Dev wuld say full truth it wuld hav been ffab than

Maan will paka try n find out

Geet was sho shweet n Maan's dream

Loved his confession

Update soon n longer part

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

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+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#103

amazing part and finally maan confess his love for geet. loved it.
continue soon.

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uzma

@uzmakhan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#104

OMG!!!

AMAZING!!

i jus loved the way maan finally admitted his love fer her!!!

woaw---geet on lap and kissin him!!! uffff------m gettin highly x-rated here!!!🤪

buh toooo gud soumya!

very well written and yesh u did complete justice to this scene!!

and lol this part is awesumest:

"pareshaan ho?" she asked, pecking him on his cheek.

"hmmm." He replied weakly.

"meri wajah se" she questioned.

"hmmm" came another reply.

"baat nahi karoge kya?" she asked looking into his eyes now.

"hmmm" he replies again.

"mujhe miss kar rahe ho na."

"hmmm"

🤣🤣

🤣

massttttt "hmmmm" convo!!🤣

maza aagaya!!!

lol it luks as if u haf been writin ur ff all weekend!!

carry on carry on..werna hum maaneetians zinda kaisay rahengay??!!

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*mittu*

@*mittu*

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#105

OMG Soumya that was such a beautiful part. I loved how Maan came to accept he is in love with Geet. Beautiful. That is the only word here. And thank you so much for putting that teeny weeny doubt about Dev and NT in Maan's mind. This will surely help Geet in the future. Please caontinue soon. can't wait to read what happens next.

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Muskan

@muskanp

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 15 years ago

#106

"pareshaan ho?" she asked, pecking him on his cheek.
"hmmm." He replied weakly.
"meri wajah se" she questioned.
"hmmm" came another reply.
"baat nahi karoge kya?" she asked looking into his eyes now.
"hmmm" he replies again.
"mujhe miss kar rahe ho na."
"hmmm"
"tuo maan kyun nahi lete. Aap mere bina jee nahi sakte. Aapko pyaar ho gaya hai mr. maan khurana."
He looks at her blankly. "nahi"

I just love this part how cute!!! Really yaar CVs should see this I am going send this part to them!!!! 👏

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: *mittu*
Awww... Soumya. Both the parts were adorable. Wah! Kya kya dialogues hain Maan ke? Geet asking him Aap mujhe pakad pakad ke baat kyun kartein hain. 😆😆😆.

Great updates Soumya. Please continue soon. And thank you som much for the PM.

suprisingly geet never questions maan in the serial about always pulling her close u know... 😉... so i thought i'll bring about that angle...!!!! 😆

soumya

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: sravani899
hi soumya 🤗 gm soumya😃 i am back yaar yeh tutions bhi na 😡
anyways soumya soumya wow what a ff

part 8 hai hai😍😍

geet decorating hall with flowers and all wooow

dream - maan and geet having romance that what i am dreaming😆

back to ff maan wanted to meet geet wow waiting for her call hai😳😳😳

and holding her not leaving her hai😍

if need he will lift her and take her to the car hai😍

maan ka sarcasm while talking to geet😆

precap ooooooohhhhhh my gooooooooood😳 u r really becoming like cvs😡😆 thats for sure they also will do the same showing romantic sceens in precap and making us to wait to pass weekend which is damn hard to me😆

but loved it girl👏

😍😍

part 9 : geet and maan conve wow

hazar janam 🤣🤣 geet is that enough say it girl😡😆 coz i will take 1001 janam for maan 😆😆 silly me😆

geet, tumhari baton se aur harkaton se mujhe gussa aati hai. Tumhare soch se nahi."🤣🤣🤣 maan maan wo tumhari tarah xness soch thi nahi🤣🤣

maan sarcasm😉😆 perfect timing and dialogues of maan perfect placement

soumya perfect job girl 👏

rasta manzil🤣🤣

maneet cov and maans feelings and dialogues 🤣🤣

wow soumya superb yaar👏

i enjoyed and loved it alot😊

thanks girl.... now i need ideas...!!!! tell me...what to do next.. confession is over..if have to still read it..!!! 😉

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: cooldude10
OMG. Pickle! (sorry, don't know ur name 😆) i absolutely LOVE this part! and the way maan reealizes he's in LO-LO-LOVE! eep 😆 I'm so going crazy over the weekend because of no Maaneet 😆 But like anywaay. this part's definitely amazing aND CUTE.😍

my name is soumya!! 😊

thanks !!! i typed it out really fast and i was not sure how it would go...!!!!! i did not even re-read it again..simply posted it because it was the confession and i was too excited...!!!😉

soumya

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soumya

@pickle6586

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Nice Romantic update
Kash Nt n Dev wuld say full truth it wuld hav been ffab than

Maan will paka try n find out

Geet was sho shweet n Maan's dream

Loved his confession

Update soon n longer part

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

there's time for dev and naintara truth to come out..!!! but i put a seed of doubt in maan's mind...so that should be good...

yes, i'm working on part 11!!!

soumya

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