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amazing!!!!!👍🏼

jealousy...ahm ahmmm!!!!😆

update soon!!!

Originally posted by: *angel94*

-Reserved-

I'm waiting for your comment, Anj!

Originally posted by: sweet_charmed

you updatd yay!!!!! So i'm really enjoying maan's jealousy ..haha i hope that doesn't make me a bad person :P lolz soo cute maan is pining over geet.. lol it took Geet getting married for maan to realize that... gosh boys can be soo slow sometimes... lmao.. dev is hilarious... hez is totally enjoyin torturing maan.. and i totally love geet and dev's friendship..they are gonna be an adorable bhabbi and devar 😆😆😆 ... and geet kiss was soo cute and innocent 😛😛 loved it!!! I absolutely loved the whole update ..can not wait for the next update!!! ohh please add me to ur pm list!!!

p.s. i loved how you describes maans sweat pants... hahaha dhotii pants.. just love it!!! 👏

Thanks hun! 🤗

Aw, no, it doesn't make you a bad person. We all enjoy his jealousy! Yeah, Dev & Geet would make a great bhabhi-devar pair.

Will update soon and you're already on my PM list.

Originally posted by: shalini_s

jealous Maan... waiting for the next part..

Thank you, Shalu!

Originally posted by: *mittu*

Some one is jealous. I loved Maan's reactions. If only Dev were like this in the show. Please continue soon. I can't wait to see how Maan comes to the realization that he is in love with Geet.

Thanks Mittu!
Dev is an imp charach in the FF here jus like Maaneet. The realization will come soon!

I love this! Haha! Maan's jealousy is something really cute to read! :D
I have sent you a buddy req! Please add me to the pm list. :D

Originally posted by: muskanp

hi tia

really loved ur update

the kiss was so perfect!!

update plz

luv

muskan

Heya Muskan! Thanks for the comments. Shall be updating soon!

Originally posted by: Starry_night

Fabulous! Oh, Maan was jealous......lolz......but refused to accept it.....duh! Lolz.....Geet and Dev are scheming to get Maan to confess his feelings......I loved Dev here......he is too good.......so mischievous........lolz......I am loving the trio! The way you penned Maan's anger, frustration, confusion.......it was beautiful. Loved it completely! Do continue soon.

Thanks hun! Maan will take some time to realise. Dev's mischeivious nature is gonna bring fruitful results for once. 😉

Originally posted by: Roshni.

OMG!!
Tia, it was just wonderful! I love those reactions Maan is giving!!
Oh boy! He is jealous!
Geet actually kissed Maan? I think I'm blushing too imagining all possible things!

Continue soon Tia! Excellent write up!

Thanks Rosh! 🤗

Yes! Geet actually kissed Maan! You're blushing? So easily? 😲 Baat kya hai?

i'm enjoying it so much.........please lengthen this jealousy phase a bit more