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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#201

Hi Tia...........

This was surely such a beautiful update.... yaar, this is amazing.... I am surely loving Maan's jealousy.... And Dev and his plan...step 2 indeed.... oh gosh.... I was rolling down with laughter... waiting for the next part...cont soon...

Love
Guglu

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Maheen

@sweet_gurl93

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#202

hey

great part, lol soo finally mr maan is getting jealous lol, this means that dev's plan is actually working 😃 good good
cant wait for more
by the way thanks for the pm 😊

Maheen xx

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#203

i like it

maan is toooo funny

continue soon

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152265

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#204

awwwww thats soooo sweet a possessive and jealous Maan!

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Saz

@Chotii

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#205

OMG Tia!
Just received a PM from you and wasn't sure if i'd read the ff yet... read the 3rd part and fell in love with it instantly so rushed to read the first 2 parts + the intro and the 3rd part again! lol
My my, oh my! Now this is a fab ff on the Geet characters..!! I'm happy that I can actually love Dev here lol I mean i simply love maneet so hate Dev in the show, altho I think Abhinav is still quite a hotty outside his role, so its awesome to see him as a fun aimable character!!! The relationship between maneet is also very sweeet! its gonna be awesome to see Maan's burning jealousy and maybe sum cute confused moments between Maneet? Love your writing style too - its simply fantastic and so engaging so I just wanna read more!! From dialogue to description I can imagine everything so perfectly and its just a lota fun to read! i'm soo glad ur parts aren't too short either just plllllease dont take long to update, the ff is greatttttt so keep updating fast lol and of course, keep up the Rocking work!!
Love,
Saz xxxxxxxx

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Sadie

@..CountingStars

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#206

Oh Wow!!

Looks Sikk!!

Will Read When I Get Time x

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Jenifer

@Jenifer.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#207

Maan drives a what? An Aston Martin DB Vanquish? Wo-how. Your choice of car couldn't get any better. Love it! Also loving the length of this update. The others were so short (compared to your other FF which is in need of major update, ahem) that before I got into it, it finished all too quickly.

Loving Maan's reaction, poor dude's in for some shock therapy. Loving Dev's playful mind and Geet's confidence - did she really kiss Maan? =D

And last but not least, love you!

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Ayesha_MSK

@Ayesha_MSK

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#208

😃 Maan being jealous is soooooo enjoyable to read about! 😆 😆 😆 I love the way Dev is trying to unite Maan and Geet 👏 Please update asap and add me to your P.M. list if possible.

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FaithnFate

@FaithnFate

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#209

tiaaaaaaaaa msk got kissed nahinnnnnnn...........lol

fab update gal!!!! jus luv the way u penned down........ maan's fight wid his own thought's n i so like this dev......... i can actually imagine abhinav playin this........ he has that thing on his face n eyes.

awaiting 4r the next update gal:))