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Originally posted by: pickle6586

Tia , 🤗

I am loving this....!!!! 😃 MSK all jealous....!!!! that's lovely... he's already missing geet and geet kissed him...!!! love dev for all the planning...!!! (never thought i woud say this u know.... 😉)

Update soon honey...cant wait to read what happens next...!!!

Soumya

Soumya 🤗

Thanks for all the wonderful comments! Yeah, a lotta unexpected things are coming on!

Originally posted by: dipu

hey!!!

supercool update..

loved it man best was when geet kissed him..

really even i can inagine on his face...worth watching...oops! reading...

Thanks Dipu!

I'm happy you're enjoying the updates and that it was worth reading!

Originally posted by: cacoethes

tiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! 🤗

</div>fantastic update....totally loved it

i love this dev😳😆he seems like a cool person to hang out with.....no wonder girls fall him😆😆very charming indeed!😎
maan is so effin jealous......burning inside😆i love a man when he's jealous or possessive.....brings out the best of them😆
geet kissed maan☺️did not see that coming.....maan must be with a WTF?! expression on his face now🤣cant wait for the next part
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update ASAP

Sarirah! 🤗

Thanks, hun! Yeah, Dev sure is a cool person to hang out with! Maan got the second shock of his life wen Geet kissed him!

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nice part
Dev's plan was working quite fast man
Jus loved it
Couldnt stop laughing wen Maan was jus thking abt Geet n imagining Dev n Geet togther😆😆
He was really getting jealous man
I really wish that Dev's plan accomplish that too soon
Waise whose the new competitor in the race
Hop its not Geet but wuld love it if she wuld be😉

Thanks Afsha! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Dev's plan is working and will be accomplished soon! The new competitor will be introduced in the next update. 😉

Originally posted by: sravani899

hi tia😊

really liked ur ff 😊

liked maan geet and dev character alot esp i liked the new character of dev as from his face he really not seemed to be -ve😉😆

well i liked maan character as it is angry young maan😳

really loved the update❤️

thanks for pm😃

really enjoyed ur update 😛

enjoyed maans possessiveness and devs plans ☺️😆

i am laughing while reading abt maans situation and enoying alot dear😉😆

well the possessive side of maan is really nice please continue to some more time and torture him if possible torture him to the max level😉😆

coz i love to see him being tortured in love coz i imagine maan and his expressions while reading and those expressions of maan woth watching ☺️😆

i know u may think i am crazy yes i am crazy of maan☺️☺️

really loved ur update 👏👏👏

with love

sravs😊

Hey Sravs!

Happy to know that you enjoyed the updates. Will surely try to add some more torturous moments for Maan. Well, hun, you're not the only one who's crazy abt Maan, we all are! Thanks!

Originally posted by: geet.a

TIA!!
🤗

That was simply amazing!!

loved it...do continue soon!!
I loved how Maan is getting j but trying to cover up...so like him! LOL

lots of love

Hey Geet!

Thanks! Will be updating soon!

Originally posted by: reshmi30

wow Tia. maans jealousy 🤣.cant wait .pls post next part

Thanks Reshmi!

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Tia...........

This was surely such a beautiful update.... yaar, this is amazing.... I am surely loving Maan's jealousy.... And Dev and his plan...step 2 indeed.... oh gosh.... I was rolling down with laughter... waiting for the next part...cont soon...

Love
Guglu

Hey Guglu!

Thanks! I've tried to make Dev as adorable as possible!

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93

hey

great part, lol soo finally mr maan is getting jealous lol, this means that dev's plan is actually working 😃 good good
cant wait for more
by the way thanks for the pm 😊

Maheen xx

Thanks Maheen! Yeah, Dev's plan is working and the results will be visible soon!

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

i like it

maan is toooo funny

continue soon

Thanks hun!
A lotta hidden feelings of Maan shall be revealed.