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Hey guys!!
I had a few ideas in mind that I wanted to express in rhyme.
these are a few that I have tried to write a poem about
tell me if you guys like it
comments and criticism welcome!!
All my dreams came shattering down,
dreams I had yet to even dream,
you walked away and left me all alone,
i wonder how I could ever be with someone so mean
It seemed the end of the world to me,
what am I ever going to do?
How can I live with this betrayal?
if the people who support me are none to few?
Then I saw you, angry,cynical and bitter,
somehow, you were always there to save me,
Though angry,you helped me in a myriad ways,
Everytime we came across each other, I felt completely dazed
You gave me strength to carry on,
You gave me strength to move on,
If I live today, it's because of you,
that I thank the stars under which you were born
You pushed me away at every point,
scolded me, screamed and shouted,
and yet you would rush to be by my side if I needed you,
this I never have doubted
Lately, I see a kind of gleam in your eyes,
something is changing and I dare not question what,
I m grateful to you and nothing more,
then why is this doubt niggling at me like a gnat?
That you're coming closer?
that you're getting under my skin,
why do my eyes find you and my ears recognise you,
over and above all the noisy din?
Is there something I'm missing?
Do I have the strength to find out?
No, I think it best if I leave alone,
all that this is about
Lots of love!
Geet
I had a few ideas in mind that I wanted to express in rhyme.
these are a few that I have tried to write a poem about
tell me if you guys like it
comments and criticism welcome!!
All my dreams came shattering down,
dreams I had yet to even dream,
you walked away and left me all alone,
i wonder how I could ever be with someone so mean
It seemed the end of the world to me,
what am I ever going to do?
How can I live with this betrayal?
if the people who support me are none to few?
Then I saw you, angry,cynical and bitter,
somehow, you were always there to save me,
Though angry,you helped me in a myriad ways,
Everytime we came across each other, I felt completely dazed
You gave me strength to carry on,
You gave me strength to move on,
If I live today, it's because of you,
that I thank the stars under which you were born
You pushed me away at every point,
scolded me, screamed and shouted,
and yet you would rush to be by my side if I needed you,
this I never have doubted
Lately, I see a kind of gleam in your eyes,
something is changing and I dare not question what,
I m grateful to you and nothing more,
then why is this doubt niggling at me like a gnat?
That you're coming closer?
that you're getting under my skin,
why do my eyes find you and my ears recognise you,
over and above all the noisy din?
Is there something I'm missing?
Do I have the strength to find out?
No, I think it best if I leave alone,
all that this is about
Lots of love!
Geet
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