FF: you are mine! part7 on pg-16

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neha2005

@neha2005

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#91

great update!! wonder what is going to happen next! can wait!!

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Saz

@Chotii

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#92

OMG uzma... from a really fun ff.. u made this so heartbreakign!! awww bechara maaaaaan!! nahiiiii pooor maneet - awww its so sad but lovely! well done hun.. but plz in dono ke beech sab kuch teek kar do!! lol
xxxxx
(i'm gonna go see the pic of maan staring at a sleeping geet just to make myself feel SUPER HAPPY!! =D) xxxxxxx

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#93

i have just reAD all the parts!....truly amazing!.....especially the confession!

continue soon!

plzzz add me 2 ur pm list!

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uzma

@uzmakhan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#94

😆

Originally posted by: Chotii
OMG uzma... from a really fun ff.. u made this so heartbreakign!! awww bechara maaaaaan!! nahiiiii pooor maneet - awww its so sad but lovely! well done hun.. but plz in dono ke beech sab kuch teek kar do!! lol
xxxxx
(i'm gonna go see the pic of maan staring at a sleeping geet just to make myself feel SUPER HAPPY!! =D) xxxxxxx

hehehe, this is called the twist in the tale my friend!!!

life can never be all happy nor can b ff's😆😆😆

although we can control the amt of happiness and sadness in them😉

dunt worry--in donno kay beech kuch galt huwa he nahi jo kharab hoga!!😳😳

all will turn out to be well soon...itna meethay meethay ff sey diabetes hojae gi na!!

isliyay maine thora namak add kerdiya😆

and OMG!! maan starin at geet!! *faints*

wow wow woow!! wat a katelana pic!!! the way maan is smiling...ahhhhhhh!! wat if he gets x-rated??!! asli main nahi toh atleast dream he kerlay na!!! 😉😆

i soo cant w8 fer tomorrow now!!!😳😳😃😃⭐️⭐️

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uzma

@uzmakhan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio
i have just reAD all the parts!....truly amazing!.....especially the confession!
continue soon!

plzzz add me 2 ur pm list!

glad u like 'em!!😃😃😃😃😃😃

i will continue soon, the next part will be up by tomorrow morning!!😳😃

i will surely pm ya once i post it!

xoxo

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Anum

@anufa

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#96

awsum....👏👍🏼

update sooN!!!

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uzma

@uzmakhan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: anufa
awsum....👏👍🏼

update sooN!!!

thanx hun!

m gonna upate it real soon!😃

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uzma

@uzmakhan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: sweet cherry
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

next bit is gonna be up in no time!😉

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uzma

@uzmakhan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#99

Part 5: on page-11

Part 6:

Maan, who is left completely shattered in a matter of seconds, is tryin hard to gather courage to face geet. He needs to talk to her. He needz to sort out everythin. He needs to comfort her and tell her that everythin will be alright. 👏
He agrees wid himself nt to ask her the million questions prompting his mind, as this will not solve any problem buh hurt her evn more…
Hes thinking of all this while geet, on the other hand, gains control over her emotions as well…she turns around to talk to him….she realli doesn't noe how to break the silence…😕
seeing maan standing wid his back on her and not uttering a word makes her assume, like any other rational human being, that he too is gonna abandon her.😭

This thought it onli tears her apart….in hoshiyarpur, wen literally everyone turned against her, maan waz the one and only person who supported her. Since then, this has been the case. Whether this support came from his taunts, or his sarcasm…she knew it subconsciously that in this whole world there is one person who will alwayz stand by her…

buh now….she felt "abh sab kuch badal chuka hai, is bar mere wajah sey maan ko bohot takleef huwi hai, is bar woh mera saath nahi deyga…is bar koi mera saath nahi deyga" tears agen begin to roll down her sparkling eyes….😭😭😭😭

She walks closer to him…shez abt to keep his hand on her shoulder, buh then pulls herself bk "shaid maine yay bhi haq khodiya hai" she thinks to herself…🤢

she stands still in her place, pondering how things will turn from bad to worst now…however, she felt she will reflect upon these things later….buh fer now…she wanted to talk to maan…she waz absolutely ready to hear anythin from him…whether it waz an accusation or whether he wanted to take his frustrations out on her…she waz just desperate to hear his voice fer now….this awkward moment and silence seemed unbearable fer her. 🤢
she gathers courage and tries to speak up in a str8 tone…buh her constant weep made her voice tremble… "abh kya hua maan....abh tum chup kyun kharay ho?" pauses…waits fer him to reply bk..

Maan cumz outa his thinking mode, still facing his back on her…he doesn't reply her, yet….🤢
Geet continues "main isliyay apko mujhse dour rehne ko kaha tha…kyunkay main jaanti thi, ap sachai nahi sun paogay….main jaanti hoon ap kay manh main meray character ko lay ker hazaar sawal uth rahein hogay…….app bhi yahee soch rahein hogay na kay is sab main meri galti hai??!" 😕pauses
she gets xtremely annoyed by his quietness..
"ap kuch boltay kyun nahi??? Aap sab merd aik jaisay hotay ho😲…(makes an angry face, pauses agen)…sachai samney agai hai sir, abh toh aap meri shakal bhi dekhna pasand nahi keraingay…" (says it sarcastically)---

Maan who waz trying his best to control his temper, loses his cool…though geet hasn't directly pointed at him buh he gotta hold of wat she waz trying to say…

He cannot believe geet thinks so low of him….he turns arnd to face her, luks at her angrily and grabs tightly both her arms and pulls her closer to him once agen😍…*mahi plays* they share another deadli buh a very teary eye-lock…

Maan: (xtremely angry) "toh tum yay soch rakhti ho meray barin main….(gets over-whelmed wid emotions, pauses)…..tumne soch bhi kaisay liyay kay main tumhe chor donga?? *tears rolling down his face*😭😭😭-mujhe itna gira huwa samjti ho tum?" (feels disgusted)—Geet: (feels embarassed yet astounded to wat shez hearing, she tries to free herself from his grip)---"sir ap ko…."

Maan: (interrupts, firms his grip on her, pulls her so close that their forehead touches each other's once agen)…."geet tumhare sachai ney mujhe itni takleef nahi di jitni tumhare is baat ney mujhe di hai…." (he slowly leaves her arms jus to hold her hands back once agen..he bring them close to his face and kisses on her knuckles…)😳 "geet maine tumhara haath zindagi bar thamne kay liyay pakhra hai…bari sey bari cheez bhi mujhe issay chornay perh majboor nahi ker sakhti"😳😳

Geet is dumbfounded😲….she realli cant believe wat she just heard…she sighs wid relieve…her flawless lips tremble and slowly stretch into a slight smile😊…*mahi plays* The storm seems to haf settled as well,(bahir ka bhi aur andar ka bhi!😉)-- causing dead silence in the room. Maaneet are staring crazily once agen at each other….as if they are able to read each others mind thru their eyes...😳they are standing in the same posture fer a couple of secs…they both seem to be lost.maan slowly loosens his hold on geet…😕

Geet gets a feelin as if this is the last time maan is holdin her soo close….she's not yet ready to let go of him…she feels as if maan is lossening his grip to bid a final goodbye….

Though maan onli a few minutes back assured her that he will be by her side and will never let go off her…buh still geet has becum a lil too senstive abt this matter…or shud i say, extremely afraid of losing the man she adores more then her life…

Buh maan waz onli leaving her hand, in an attempt to hold her tight by her waiste!! 😆(it's a serious scene!! No hahaha or naughtiness here!!😆😆😆)

Geet luks questionably at maan (how can she noe wat her bf is upto??😉😛)---

The second he left her hand, the next second geet hugs him tight….she criss-crosses her hands on his back and tries to push him as close as possible...as if she dint want evn the thin air to come in between them!

Maan seems shocked by geet's gesture….widout thinking further, he hugs her back….his hands are swirled arnd her lower back(stop getting x-rated gurls!! Concentrate!! Don't go in lala land already! Akhri line perh ker jana😆)---

He gradually begins to move his left hand (rememeber right hand injured hai!!😲) up to her neck and then slowly moves her hair aside with the intention of kissin her neck…..😍

part 7 will be up soon!!

hope this one sounds gud enough!!😃

Edited by uzmakhan - 15 years ago

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Tia

@tes_v1

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#100

Uzma!

Love you! Maan confessed?! OMG! *hugs*

Aw, but the devastating after effects... *sniff*

Poor Geet, her life is a mess! Do update soon! Thanks for PMing me and reminding me abt this one. Since you changed the name, I'd lost it!