FF: you are mine! part7 on pg-16 - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update, n thnks 4 d pm, luvd tht d nxt update will b a happy one:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwww uzma! their hug is sooo lovely at the end..a www maneet!!!!
lovely part hun! x
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg omg omg omg omg omg that was fantastic.... ur ff is amazing plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz CONTINUE SOON 👏👏👏 thanks fpr da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pickle6586

uzma,

tumne maan ko rula diya...????? bechara.......!!!!!!

awesome awesome awesome awesome update....!!!!!! 👏 completely loved it.....😳

haye.......ishq vishq.... ho raha hai....??in the next part..!!! 😍

yaar tumhaare comments padh ke sach mein serious emotional gripping scene comedy mein badal jaati hai......🤣 ....!!

Buh maan waz onli leaving her hand, in an attempt to hold her tight by her waiste!! 😆(it's a serious scene!! No hahaha or naughtiness here!!😆😆😆) 🤣🤣🤣🤣

waiting for your update...... PM me..... i want to know what happens next...!!! dont you forget.... PM !!!!

soumya


shukriya shukriya shukriya!!🤗
hehe i made maan cry....did u get dishum dishum???😆😆
lol meray her part main, ishq vishq hota hai yaar!!Embarrassed😆...lil soft romance...😉😉
yaar maine previous parts main her 2 lines kay baad comment mara hai---is tension, serious walay scene main itni lines marney ka dil chah raha tha...perh too much mushkil sey i stopd myself!😆
part 5 main toh aik bhi nahi mara!😲
and ooooo i will pm u fer sure the next time i update!!Clap
kab update kerongi pata nahi!😆😆
muaz!
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Posted: 15 years ago

uzma dear..... Its a treat to read your updates.......and I thoroughly l enjoy reading it........😉 ...... love the way your story line is progressing......👏👏......Really liked Maan's reaction on hearing the truth about Geet's past....OMG he is just awesome 😍 Haiiiiiiiiiii......I simply loved the ending.......I am in swarglok right now 😆 😆 ...I just hope Maan reacts in the same way inthe serial as well....I really don't want Maan to misunderstand Geet after he learns abut her pregnancy.....

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: namita25


uzma dear..... Its a treat to read your updates.......and I thoroughly l enjoy reading it........😉 ...... love the way your story line is progressing......👏👏......Really liked Maan's reaction on hearing the truth about Geet's past....OMG he is just awesome 😍 Haiiiiiiiiiii......I simply loved the ending.......I am in swarglok right now 😆 😆 ...I just hope Maan reacts in the same way inthe serial as well....I really don't want Maan to misunderstand Geet after he learns abut her pregnancy.....

thanx hun!!🤗😳
yah i really hope too that maan reacts like that! buh thatz onli possible if geet tells him the reality--otherwise if he hears from sum1 elses mouth especially dev or churailtara--then geet is doomed!🤢
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: uzmakhan


muhahahahahaha!!!😈😈😈


tarsa ker update kerongi!! muhahahahaha 😆(once agen)




Uzma!

Tum aisa karogi? Mere saath? 😲

Tumse ye ummeed nahi nahi! 😔 Pehle khud hi sapne dikhati ho aur phir itna pareshaan karti ho! *pouts at Uzma*

Jaldi update karo na! 😭




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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: tes_v1



Uzma!

Tum aisa karogi? Mere saath? 😲

Tumse ye ummeed nahi nahi! 😔 Pehle khud hi sapne dikhati ho aur phir itna pareshaan karti ho! *pouts at Uzma*

Jaldi update karo na! 😭




😈 muhahahahahaahaha!!!
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mujhe laga monday aagaya hai is liyay abh contiue kernay ki zaorrorat nahi hai!
i waz thinkin to add the next bit the coming weekend!😆
buh tum kehti ho toh i will add in the next bit by today!😉
abh khush??!!😃😃😃👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow maan my hero he actually proved geet wrong geet was so relived
lucky girl geet now never leave your Saviour alright.
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 6 on page 14

Part 7:

He brings his lips close to her neck, geet senses wat hez upto'shez shy buh doesn't wana back off😳😳 (badmash larki😉)'.hez on the verge of kissin her'buh then all of a sudden he thinks its too much too soon'😕

Instead, he tilts his face towards her face, moves sum of the few hair strands restin near her ears-from his nose'and wid open eyes he whispers into her ears "I love you"😍'..and smiles naughtily---as if he knew geet waz expecting the kiss (oii gurls! Break lagao!! Kiss perh kiss!! Kitni kisses chahyay yaar😆)

Maan moves himself a bit away, jus to see her expressions.😳

Geet blushes, her head tilted down'

Maan jus cant get enouf of staring at her innocently gorgeous face'.

Geet: (luks up at him)"aisa kya dekh rahey ho"

Maan: (still starin) "yayhe kay koi pario sey zyada kaisay khobsurat ho sakhta hai'" (kya dialogue hai yaar👏)

Geet gets shy at first, buh then she rememebers the last time maan sed she aint a pari'she gets nakhrile and sticks her nose up😳 "acha, toh abh main apko pario sey bhi zada khobsurat lagnay lagi'.office main toh barey taywer dikha rahey tha"😛

Maan: "ummm'(gets naughty)--us waqt tumhare baal bandhay huway tha'(strokes his fingers in her hair) laykin kholay baloon tum toh jaanleywa lagti ho☺️ (maan starts getting x-rated thoughts👏)----

Geet's face turns yellow agen' she recalls dev praising her fer luking beautiful wid opened hair on their wedding night '(🤬'maaneet ki saari x-ratededness is dev ki wajah sey kharab hojati hai!😡)

She gets depressed'she walks a bit away from him'(no no no!! she isnt cryin like crazy!😆)'

Maan notices the change of mood'he feels like killin himself fer reminding her of that ullu ka patha agen...

He walks upto her with guilty eyes'"geet mujhe maaf kerdo main tumhe'."

Geet: (interrupts)'.nahi sir'app kis baat ki maafi mang rahain hai'maafi toh us aadmi ko mangni parhaygi'.(her voice trembles)'jisne meri zindagi ka tamasha bana ker rakhdiya.."

Maan: (infurated) "us kamina ko toh main zinda nahi choronga" 😲'he thinks out loud'

Geet: "nahi maan'woh zinda rahega'laykin who har pal hazaro moauth marega'"😲😲😲👏🤢

Maan seems to be surprised'he cant belev a soft innocent creature like geet can think that way'he gets flashbks of the time wen brij tried to kill her.. "iska matlab brij or tumhara parivaar is liyay tumhe marna chahtay thay" (brij parivaar mainse nahi hai kya🤣)

Geet: (teary)'"haan'"

Maan reminds himself not to question her further'this isnt the right time he thinks to himself'

Maan holds geet's hand reassuringly'. "geet main tumse waada kerta hoon'jis insaan ki waja sey tumhare ankhon main ansoon aae hai..us insaan ko main''"

Geet begins to feel dizzy'.she holds her head slightly...

Maan: (extremely worried, holds her from her stomach)---"kya huwa geet?"

Geet: (still feels weird) "nahi sir'kuch'kuch'.nahi''"

Maan immediately lifts her up in his arms (golden chance kaisay miss ker sakhta hai yaar😉😆) they both share another eye-lock *mahi plays*'.geet circles both her arms arnd his neck😳 (maukay pey chauka👏)'.maan walks upto the sofa and carefully makes her sit there'.

(it's a 3 seater sofa)

"tum thek toh hona'.." he doesn't noe wat else to say'(aaj tak kiski ko itni concern dikhai hai jo dimag main kuch aaega!😆😆)

Geet simply nods.

He tries standing back'buh geet holds his hand (wah yaar'kya boldness hai!!😲 Not bad!👏😆)

Geet: (makes a puppy face) "mujhe chor ker mat jao" '.(apnay mathay perh liklay kay woh tumhe nahi chor ker jaega!🤣)

Maan smiles slightly at her (yaar issay koi dil khol ker smile kerna sikhao na)'. "main kahin nahi ja raha geet (yay huwi na mardoh waali baat!😉) main dadima ko inform kerdaita hoon kay main aaj raat office main he rahonga"😲😲

Geet: (smiles) "toh maan singh khurana abh jhuth bhi bolnay lage hai"👏

Maan: (gets closer to her, holds her hand close to his heart)' "dekhlo, pyaar main kitnay paapar bailnay perhtay hai"⭐️👏

Geet: (moves her face closer to him, smiles wide) "sirf paapar nahi'.rotti paratha, puri'..aurrrr bohot kuch bhi bailna parhta hai'.".😆😆

Finallly'..maan smiles widely'.(breaking news!🥳)

Geet: (surprised, opens her eyes wide) "aaj suraj kahan sey nikal gaya?"😆

Maan: (makes a str8 face agen, irritated) "geet"'kisses her knuckles once agen'"main abhi aaya"

He goes into geet's room and calls up dadima.

Maan: (str8 face) "hello dadi, aaj main ghar nahi aa-paounga'wohh actually'.*stammers* 'woh actually...office main bohot kaam pending parha huwa hai (says it quickly)'.khatam kertay kertay subha hojaegi" (from noe kaam ka matlab starin, kissin and caresing geet😲😆)

Dadi: (she noes maan is lieing👏) "maan aisa kaunsa kaam hai jo aaj raat ko he hosakhta hai?'aph subha bhi toh yay kaam kersakhta hai na"'smiles at herself.

Maan: (irritated)'.woh dadi'.(pauses) actually kal subha meeting hai, usskaay pehlay yay sab kaam kerna zarrori hai'."

Dadi: toh phir main aisa kerti hoon kay dev ko apki madaad ka liyay bhej deyti hoon'🤢🤢🤢apka kaam bhi aasan hojaega aur ap ko thori company bhi miljae gi'🤢🤢

Maan: (says it immediately) nahi dadi!!!😆😆....uss'uss ki zarrorat nahi hai'main apna kaam akela sambhal lounga..

Dadi: (tryin realli hard to control her laugh) "uffo maan'apney hamari baat na sunney ki thahn lee hai'hum kuch nahi jantay'ap akela kaam'"

Maan: (interrupts)'.perh geet hai na yahan!!! (he holds his head in regret'thinks quietly to himself 'yay maine kyun boldiya'😆)

Dadi: (laughs her heart out🤣) "maan..hum bas yahee sunna chahtay thay😉'thek hai'ap apna so called kaam kijeya'hum fone rakhtay hai...."

He can hear her laughing while shez keepin the fone down..

Maan: (annoyed) "yay dadima bhi na'.kuch na kuch kerkay baat ugalwalayti hai"

He keeps the fone in his pocket and goes bk to the living room.

Coming up: next morning, maan making breakfast fer geet!

Edited by uzmakhan - 15 years ago

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