Geet: Sau dard hai, mere mann mein

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My heart is weeping...I am so shattered...every step I take moves me that inch closer to disaster where my life lies in ruins, in tatters, my self respect and pride shredded and torn apart.

I have come a long way...I have sailed a sea of troubles...but my pain has not receded...it has only grown in proportions.

I wake every day to a new hope that today will be different, that today will be my day, that today I can smile and be serene.

But my pain knows no end, my life gains no succor, there is only endless disdain.

I have no one on my side, no support, not one person who will look into my heart and see that I have nothing to gain but the deepest of open wounds.

I thought in you, Maan, I could find some compassion. You have been kind to me so often in the past...but today, you allowed them to destroy me.

My spirit is broken, my heart is weeping...why can't you see that I am innocent, and like a dried up leaf (sookhe patte ki tarah)...I am flying around all alone...my river of pain is overflowing...the oceans are not receding...another wave hits and shatters me...uproots me...

Resilient

I will fight it out
I am strong
I can win

They can't put me down
No insult is a big insult

My enemies will see me
Emerge out of the embers

Like a phoenix I will rise
And shatter their illusions

They shall know what true grit is
What true determination is
What woman is
What a real woman is
She is the shakthi when she is trampled
Even demons like Mahishasura and Ravana had been destroyed

what are mere mortals?
I shall shine
My light shall shine bright
and blind them
I shall reign
Reign supreme again
Pristine and fine



Respect & Trust


I respect you, regard you, revere you. Through the toughest of times you have been my guide, companion, friend, savior. You never stood by and let me face it all alone, you always stood by me. You gave me courage and strength to fight the toughest of battles.

Why now did you turn away from me? But I know that at the core of your heart you could never turn away from me. That my pain is yours and that if I am hurting you are hurting too. What gives me this belief?

It is you, your mere presence, your every look and the thoughts that reflect in your eyes. Though you yell at me, your eyes speak a different language. They convey so much softness and benediction. They are like pools of love in which I drown. When you look at me...all the world seems to vanish for me, all my troubles seem to be gone from me.

I know that I will always belong to you though unwittingly I might want to believe in some myth that I am apart from you. I know that I only feel complete with you though I barely acknowledge it.




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Posted: 15 years ago
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Translation of the lyrics and reapplying them:

Sau Dard Hai - Here is the song 'Sau Dard Hai' from movie 'Jaan e mann'.

Sau dard hain
A hundred pains

Sau rahatein
A hundred pathways

Sab mila dilnasheen
I got it all my love

Ek tu hi nahin
I just didn't get you


Ruki ruki si yeh hawa
Feels like the wind has stopped blowing

Aur sookhe patte ki tarah
And like a dried up leaf

Shehar ki sadkon pe main
On the streets of the city

Laawaris udhta hua
I am flying around all alone

Sau raaste par teri raah nahin
A hundred roads but yours is missing

Sau dard hain...


Behta hain paani behne de
Let the water flow

Waqt ko yuhin rehne de
Let time stand still

Dariya ne karwat li hain toh
If the river will take waves

Saahilon ko sehne do
Let the shore bear it

Sau hasratein par tera gham nahin
A hundred pains but none of yours


Tanha tanha
Alone alone

Tanha hain tanha hain
She is alone she is alone

Tanha chal tanha chal
Walk alone walk alone

Tanha tanha
Sau dard hain Sau rahatein
Edited by bridgette - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome ... Bri .... Geet's feelings and sense of desolation brought out superbly by you ..... 👏
Is Resilient penned by you ??? Great piece ....👏👏
You have great penmanship lady .... take a bow *applause👏 👏 👏*
You portray raw emotions very well .......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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bridge, amazingly penned down! u wrote geet's feeling lik down superbly! i wish her life becomes easier. hope she doesn't have to suffer any more!!

ayesha😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks Usha and Ayesha...Resilient is written by me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow...Bridge...Excellent!!!👏👏👏 You are very talented.....!!!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow bridgette. these are excellent!!!! 👏 👏 👏
very beautiful!! keep it up!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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this is written beautiful 👏 the song choise is good to
maybe you could write something from maan's point of view?


Marausha
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW... so well written........you have put into words the pain that I too have been feeling since yesterday, with Geet...................I could never have worded it so perfectly....and you have done it so PERFECTLY. ..............lovely and heart wrenching...... thanks, my friend !

My heart broke a hundred times for Geet yesterday.....

the dance and hotness notwithstanding, pain is what I was left with...........How can Maan be so cruel

VJ
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks Hiba, Marausha, and VJ...the Maan part had already been written...please check it out

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