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Kiran

@platy01

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#591

Hi lakshmi,.....i just read all your parts.............wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww amazing.....Plz add me in to ur PM list plz.......

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Sadaf

@kyphfanz

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#592

I started reading your FF today and got done with all the parts !! Realllyyy awesome.

Please PM me wen u update it.

Good Job !

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Priya

@-Priyaa-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#593

short update is way better than no update. part was awesome. love the fact that Maan is starting to accept his feelings little by little. enjoy your weekend.

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LoveManeet

@LoveManeet

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#594

short update is better than no update and i really love how maan is constantly thinking about geet....i kinda want geet to see them this close and then pretend that she didn't wake up 😳

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#595

wow, that was a brilliant part, i loved how Maan gently took Geet into his arms, i could actually visualise the entire thing happening.. please do continue!

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Isha

@Sidarth_lover1

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#596

ahhhhhhhh! Maaneet! tooo frekin cute!

cont soon n thnx!

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sweet_charmed

@sweet_charmed

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#597

Part 25: I loved it!!! What a great update i loved the whole maan and geet rain scene... ahahah maan is such a gentleman getting wet jst for geets sake and giving his coat to geet... and eww than that rahul came ruined the whole thng.. argh guyz like that r soo gross..why can't all man be like maan.. 😳😳lolz jst tone down the anger a little bit though.. but other than eww rahul..i loved the whole update .. it was really really cute and great

Part 26: i'm all thumbs up for short update over no update haha.. this was a very well written update.. i'm glad maan got tht rahul removed from the project and aww my poor maan havin a hard time controlling his feelings for his wife.. but ohh maan she is ur wife..so i guess all of these feeling are more than allowed.. haha i loved the last line 'No matter what lay ahead in their future, Maan knew that he wanted to fall asleep like this for the rest of his life.".. <3<3

Have a great family vacation!! And I hope to read an update as soon as your available again!! Keep the awesome writing continue :)

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Kiran

@platy01

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#598

Hey lakshmi dear Where did u disappear man....leaving us insane...u left my stomach wid tickling..keep a stop ya....

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#599

pl add me 2 ur PM list...😆😆

loving d ff👏👏👏

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Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#600

Loved all the updates 😊😊.. Enjoy ur family vacation.. Thank u for thinking of us before going on vacation- u put up such a nice update for us 😊😊.

I liked the party scene "He had seen her once or twice, and each time she was unconsciously rubbing her stomach. He had discovered that she would do that whenever she had a craving, but he knew that she would be too polite to say anything." and of course the rain scene and the sleep scene 👏👏👏.

Regarding ideas - Not very good with them.. I ll defo try.. Sorry