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febinyusuff

@febinyusuff

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#571

short update is better than no update.. have a nice weekend :)

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#572

the part was a little short but important maan concern for geet was commendable that creep rahul maan will see to him and geet innocence was so refreshing
maan getting soaked just to make geet comfortable was so cute
do continue
bye sumi

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Anupama

@beforesunrise

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#573

OMG nothing cud be better then this especially i liked the last para i hope cv's use ur dis idea ...........awesum

anu

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Anupama

@beforesunrise

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#574

i feel like reading it agn nd agn like a watch episode agn nd agn

anu

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taskutbimuff

@taskutbimuff

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#575

Hey short update is way better than no update any day yaar:)very well written.enjoy ur vacation:)

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Antares

@Antares

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#576

Awww......that was so cute and romantic! I am feeling mushy after reading the last part.....lolz......that was so well-written......just perfect! Poor fella is having a hard time controlling his feelings.....and Geet also cannot keep herself away from him and sub-consciously gets closer to him and they end up sleeping cosily....in each other's embrace......awesome! Loved it completely! Do continue soon and have fun!