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Antares

@Antares

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#521

Awesome! The whole party description.......portrayal of Maan and Geet's feelings........the convo between the family.......Mama, Mami, Dadi, Maneet........it was all so fabulously done. Loved it! Maan was jealous hun......lolz.....and Geet was amazed at him calling her beautiful......lolz......superb! Can't wait to read the next rain part......do continue soon.

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amotlymileo

@amotlymileo

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#522

lovely update laxmi......wow rain sequence coming up....do we get another song-dance here??😍

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#523

amazing update.loved it.
loved the conversation between dadi and mami.....
continue soon.

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neha2005

@neha2005

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#524

loved this update! cant wait for the next part!

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#525

omg that was an amaing update

i cant wait for da nxt part 👏👏

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#526

lovely part sweety
that creep rahul enters here too but no worries maan is here so no fear
geet was really a hit in the party and maan calling geet beautiful and geet questioning was so sweet dadi was really proud of geet and rajkumarji and her husband was really sweet
do continue

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#527

Loved the update

It was jus fab

Geet ignoring Maan n wat all Maan was thking was awesum😆😆😆

Rahul will be dead for sure

Liked the way Mamu n Mami made Geet comfartable

Maan was hell jealous paka😆😆 n in jealousy n anger he blurted out the words whch he wuldnt ever😆😆😆

Dadi knws Maan well

Liked her convo wit Mami

Geet gettting wet in rain

Matlab rain sequence in next update Awseum

Update soon

Plz dnt scold but jus eager to read aage ki update😊

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Maheen

@sweet_gurl93

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#528

hey

fantastic part, lol really liked maan's jealousy and then the dance,
it was nice on how maan cares for geet, and then the convo between maan's dadi and mami was good
lol cant wait for more
do continue soon

Maheen xx