Originally posted by: -shabnoor-
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Finally for the first tym i'm commenting on ur ff....
and i must say it's lovely !!
i loved the way you've chalked out the char as they r a bit diff frm d orignals...
and d concept is also diff....thnk god dev is nt a villain out here... 😆
hmm....i'm liking d way ur shaping up d story..
and was this really a short update ?? 😉
nyways wht i loved d most abt this update was
""Maan there is no need to look like you are ship-wrecked....I told you that I love you...There is no compulsion that you should love me back. Nobody defined love as a two way journey...It can be this way also...my heart takes a one way ticket to you and remains there..." she said...her voice getting a bit stronger."
wow must say...geet is really a strong girl....at least she displays tht 😊
and yeah im damn sure...brij will thnk all's well betwn d duo and thnk of contemplating marriage ....it wud be lovely if it turned out tht way !!
do continue soon
and thnx fr d pm....it was unexpected 😊
tc
fatima
Wow...the length is amazing!!!!😳
and @ red...my fav dialogue too...
yep Geet is one amazingly strong gal...She knows to live life in the real sense....
Brij getting them married...Wow great idea!!! Will alter and use...🤣
Thanks ton for commenting...It made my day!!!
luv ya fatima!
Originally posted by: Starry_night
That was splendid! Love Geet......she is so vibrant and brave......she just suffered a heartbreak and yet managed to conceal it so beautifully......not letting it weaken her.......for a few fleeting seconds she did feel hurt but managed to come out of it and was back to her normal self......I really like girls who are mentally and emotionally strong.......and Maan did feel something......it pained him to see her hurt......and it stirred him from within.....ooo....and the hug......beautiful! He was feeling content.....and later was thinking of that "kiss"....lolz.....not a bad start.....😉😆😆.......and then the dance........awesome! I loved that line......Maan's brain one.......lolz.....am so in love with this FF.....it's intense and gripping! Do continue soon! 🤗
Geet owes it to HORLICKS!!!!🤣
Thanks for commenting I seriously love your comments they keep me writing on!!!
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Love you!!!
Originally posted by: Blueberry_07
First of all.......Brij is back..?? 🤣
Oh Pallo, you brought your jaanemann back..How sweet..😳😆..His izzat is gonna be at stake..when he's sees Maan hiding in the bushes......😆 😆
What a lovely update!! I know it's sad that Maan has no feelings for Bharti..but it's totally okay! I liked how Geet is remaining strong..and didn't take the rejection to badly..plus Maan was really nice, the way he broke it to her..You've got some wicked lines in there girl..!! 😉
My faves...They were hilarious and @ Blue: love that cheeky lil' thought of Geet...😳😉😆..
"It is raining....and well both will be under the blanket tomorrow...." Maan said thoughtfully. "Mr. Maan Khurana....Aren't your thoughts getting a little wild? 'Under the blanket tomorrow' itseems" Geet chuckled.
"God! You have a sword for a tongue...." he told her and fished out his phone.
"Maybe a snog will correct your assumptions...Mogambo!" she thought to herself cheekily.
Nice long list of names you've got there huh..I assume those are the list of guys you're crazy about yourself...😆......
So what's up with Brij now..if i recalled correctly, Brij does have a thing for Geet right...? I think you wrote this in the earlier part...hmm..
Keep them coming in! :D
@ Red- Vini *thadam* Brij is Geet's bro...own bro...🤣...But I wish he hadn't been...I could have made him line marofy on Geet...It would have been amazing!!!
Don't worry about Geet..she is a strong gal...Itni saari horlicks pee rakhi hain ..ab kaam nahi aayega to kab aayega?
and yep those lines are my favs too...the cheeky way Geet thinks....I makes me feel all naughty!!!🤣
And yep those guys are all I am crazy about....😳😳😳
Thanks a ton Vini for commenting...Love ya
Pallo
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