'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144 - Page 63

Originally posted by: rushtrip

hmmm...he doesnt love her....eh?

koi baat nahi...Geet ke charms se kab tak door rahega....

nice part...

Originally posted by: revav

mazaa aa gaya...............😊

terrific...................loved it..................muah...................👏👏👏

thnx for making my mood wit this wonderful update...........thanku...............😃

reva😆

Originally posted by: revav

pallo.tum toh kamaal ki cheez ho yaar.............

fantastic dialogues.lovable................i hav fallen in love with ur writing.....................terrific jobbbb....

u ff is addictive.....superb...............👏

u made my day yaar,.............😊😛

love reva😲

Originally posted by: sweet coco

thanks man...loved it!!

Originally posted by: LoveManeet

I LOVED the dance..too cute :)
thx for the PM

Originally posted by: kyphfanz

Awesome ! these FF are soo much fun to read.. urs saved me today at work-didnt hve much work..Good time spent- Thanks!

Please add me in ur PM list. would love to read wht happens ahead.

Originally posted by: gauri92

im glad that maan just did not say that he loves geet as well 'cuz i dont really know if he does till now...
but now tht brij is here....i wonder what will happen....

Originally posted by: kooliio

Heyy...
Great part...
I feel bad for geet but no problem he will fall for her soon...
Ohhh brij is back...hope he won't cause any problem...
Plz cont.soon and thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

wah mundey ne mast maal haath se gawa diya..............lol jus love hw u have explained one sided love's emotions...........beautifulll!!!!

fab update gal!!!! so brij is here if am not wrong kuch dhamak hoga;)

Originally posted by: loveangle_4ever

loved it par ab kya hone wala hain yeh Brij kyun aa gaya? jaldi update karo.

Originally posted by: Nirali92

Sooo I lied last time. I loved this part more than the last one!! Totally loved Geet's spirit. I love how she explained to him that he doesn't have to feel the same way about her. Also, I loved how you put them in their normal bantering stance again. I was totally waiting for Maan to be like "I love you too" but it never happened. Oh well, a girl can dream, right? Two dialogues that I absolutely adored in this part were:

"Maan there is no need to look like you are ship-wrecked....I told you that I love you...There is no compulsion that you should love me back. Nobody defined love as a two way journey...It can be this way also...my heart takes a one way ticket to you and remains there..." she said...her voice getting a bit stronger.

"Maan Singh Khurana....Stop looking at me as if I put you at gunpoint!!! All I did was confess my feelings for you..." Geet told him.

I've started to love Maaneet more and more due to your fanfiction!! I'm happy that they can still act normal despite this "turning point" per se. I couldn't stop laughing at the fact that Maan didn't know who those "handsome...dashing...drool-worthy actors" were. Also, at the end when Maan seemed super annoyed when Geet advised him to stay in the bushes. Yaar, you always leave your story at such a cliffhanger that I go crazy thinking about what's gonna come next! Once again, eagerly awaiting the next part. Update soon!!

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93

hey awesome part

i hope geet is able to revive those feelings in maan, lol really liked the dance and the song 😃 great choice
but oh no! [:O] why is brij back?? man i just hope nothing bad happens between maan and geet now
do continue soon

Maheen xx

Originally posted by: hapinezz13

Brij is back...LOL sahi hai yaa!!

Loved the part....Geet being so brave n Maan being so nice and obliging!! He feels that the world is complete with her in his arms ....stupid man that is love....hopefully he realizes it soon!!

Originally posted by: rusha4003

Awesome update Pallo

Loved your twist of Maan not actually in love with Geet ...

Yaar ... ek request hai ...

Can you put links of all the parts in the first page ... it's easier for us to find any part we want that way .... please consider this !!! 😊

Originally posted by: sweet_charmed

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woow... i actually surprisingly loved this update too 😉..despite maan not getting up and screamin his love for geet... haha.. okay soo i thought it was very realistic to show maan letting her know that he didn feel the same way ... and aww my poor geet is soo mature she was able to handle the whole thing so maturely... not lettin maan feel too bad bout it intentially.. haha i'm sure maan will start to develop more than friendly feelings towards geet soon..but needs time .this is a guy not so open with his feelings.. so harder for him to fall in love.. which is understandable... lol don worry bout the dancin i love the dancing!! dancin is soo mch fun!!! i can dance all night!!!! haha and lol i love the ending... brij bro back in geetland... lolz this is goin to be interestin heehee.. maybe hes come to take geet back to abohar or there a rishta for geet.. 🤓.. lols well all of those tricky and sticky situations are only goin to help maan realize his feelings ... 😆😆😆so i am all okay with them 👍🏼...

lol.. update soon.. i can't wait to know brij bro is gonna add to this ff!!! 😊😊

p.s. haha geet (lol or should i say you) and i have the same taste in guyz..😉😉😉hahaha ""Ofcourse....I was hopelessly in love with Edward Cullen (Robert Pattinson),Ian Somerhalder (love vamprire diaries...sigh) , Iqbal Khan, Shahid Kapoor, Matt Lanter, Harshad Chopra, Imran Khan....Never got a chance to tell them...." she chirped. " .. lolz just add Maan to the list and i'm good ..haha oh and also shahrukh khan ... lolz hez my first ever ever crush..😳😳 .. lolz i love them all!!!!

Originally posted by: livelygal

Oyee..mere Brij ke khilaaf ek lafz nahi!!🤣...Thanks for commenting....I am seriously blushing...your comments are have a serious damage on my blush control program...
Thanks again for commenting.😃

arre sorry sorry dinno that ur fida over Brij😉😆😆 but then i guess it's good for me cuz you might make him nice??? haina haina plz plz??😆 and am glad that am damaging your blush control promgram kyunki you truly diserve all those complements, cuz you make me love MANEET more and more!!! you know it's sunday and i've come on geet forum every hour pretty much checking for a update from you... i knw am being really greedy😳😳 lekin all your fault yaar 😉😉 chalo now enough of enjoying all the reviews, jaldi update karo na phir main aur blush karwaoongi😆😆☺️😆😆 jk... take your time.... but am still waiting impatiently!!!!!!

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love,

Heena

Edited by wintersunshine - 15 years ago