'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144 - Page 44

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOEEEMMMMMMMMGEEEEE Angad and KRIPA I LUBBBBBBEERRS YOUUUU so much after reading this! I want Maan to feel something though! LOLZZZZ

i hope u dont get bored and keep updating the FF so quickly!!! 😃
awww the apolgy was so cute!!! dangerous as well!!!!
angad and kripa, one ov my all tym fav couple😃 lovd reading this part!!! maneet and angad and kripa together 😃 nyccc

awesome update Pallo!!!

n Angad...ufff.....n Kripa n Geet at least know their feelings!! these men na!!

Dude, I absolutely loved this part. Like, everything (expect for one thing)!! Bad thing first. I kinda disliked the way Geet keeps on giving random dudes a piece of her mind. I mean, I'm a girl and all, but I think it's kinda scary the way she does that. I think it's courageous of her, but at the same time, I think she's gonna get herself as well as Maan in trouble with her bindaas attitude.

Good things now!! I love Angad's sense of humor. Seriously!! I liked two dialogues by him.

"You two used the MUSIC ROOM to do your business!" Angad looked appalled.

"Women seesh! Nature called both of them at the same time huh?" Angad sniggered.

I don't know why, but they keep on cracking me up. I can totally imagine Angad saying that. Also, have I told you how ah-mazing it is that you brought in Angad and Kripa. Angad and Maan are similar. I hope they kinda bond in your fanfic.

Next order of business. Loved how Geet asked herself, "Are Maan's smiles exclusively for you?" I also liked the convo that Geet and Kripa shared. It was so cute how the girls were able to recognize the other's feelings and they only know each other for like a couple of minutes. Anyways, now I wanna see Angad and Kripa's love story progress.

The only thing that confused me was the ending. What does the song have to do with anything?

Before I end this longgg note, it was soooooooooooo cute how Maan apologized to Geet. Another thing I was confused about was that if this was a car race and you could bang other cars, then why did Geet stop in the middle of the race to ponder over the placeboards. I think you're gonna kill me for writing such long notes and for asking so many questions. I'm really sorry. Eagerly awaiting the next part though J

lolz soo pallo wat can i say .... that prolly hasn't been repeated but I loved loved this update!!! And i really really love maan... haha he is soo sweet.. bringin her horlick and icecream!!! lolz on a sidenote.. i had been wondering for a while wat was horlick... finally googled it today!! haha.. i kept thinkin it was a flavor of coffee ...that i didn 'know of ..hahaha.. the thngs you learn in a ff.. anywhooo back to the ff.. soo maans' apology very sweet and haha geet is so lost about her feelings... i loved it when kripa and her were talkin alone and she was explaning the whole body chemistry shabam... lmao... she wants to believe in that soo badly it soo cute ..hahaha soo i prolly already said this but i lovvveeeedd it 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

wow....angad!!!!

ab maan ko b jealous hona chaiye na!!!!😉

update sooN!!!

update soon. its fantastic. please please please update the next part now !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111
cant wait longer.................................

u r doing awesome job.

Fantastic part! Just loved it! Waiting for the next chap.

Great update. However I didn't agree with Maan complimenting that girl, cuz it just doesn't seem 'Maan' yknow? However I did love Geet being jealuse.