'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144

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Maheen

@sweet_gurl93

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#421

hey great part
lol at "pappu cant dance salla" 😆 and then what maan did was surprising...
now i cant wait for how maan is going to be able to pacify geet again
do continue soon 😃

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lol, i recently commented on the last part, and next thing i know, you've updated again😃
anyway, lol....

😆 the race was jokes, and the way geet replied to perth, that was jokes
and i really liked how maan had all those signs on the way to get forgiveness from geet that was cute 😊
really liked angad and kripa's entry, and how geet was jealous and all, im glad that kripa told her that it had nothing to with "body chemistry" 😆 that was jokes, and good that geet isn't under the wrong impresssion

anyway cant wait for more
do continue soon 😊

Maheen xx

Edited by sweet_gurl93 - 15 years ago

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Harpreet

@Maaneet

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#422

aww angad and kripaa! too cute that geet was jealousss, but maan's apology styles were over the top (in a good way of course ;))

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reshma

@reshmi30

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#423

rocking part. geet won the race and give tip to parth it was funny.

i started loving horlicks now.

pls post next part soon .

ur a bindblowing writer

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#424

Aww man i LOVED how Maan apologised to Geet! That was just utterly sweet! Those placards and all..esp loved that placard msg which had the horlicks lingo...Talking abt that seems like HORLICKS makes an entry again! Love that connection...😉😆...

Geet from body chemistry...to now jealousy..? Wonder what's next! 😆..

Maan seems to nt feel anything yet yaar..hopefully we'll get smth from his side soon...and GO GEET!..That's the way..😎...

LOVE how she threw the money at that guy's face and asked him to buy a doll!..What lines she stated! 😆 ....

Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago

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tanu

@Armu4eva

Moderator

+ 14

Posted: 15 years ago

#425

Wow...u got Angad n Kripa...........in the FF...😛 super duper...rocking..!! Luvd the update yaar........

Plz...do add me to ur Pm list..!! rocking.... luvng the updates very very much...

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Priya

@-Priyaa-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#426

WHAT?? How can u stop there??? I mean we need more. u can't stop their. Plz yaar write soon. I want more. Tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho? Tum aise cliffhanger pe stop kaise kar sakti ho. plz write soon if u don't wanna kill me.

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Antares

@Antares

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#427

Awesome! Loved every bit of it! The race part was superb.....Maan's ways of apologizing......Geet's racing......her putting off that jerk.......lolz......and Maan was really cute.....got her horlicks and ice-cream......awww.......and Geet won....with a crash.....lolz.......and the part with Angad and Kripa was also damn good.....Geet and Kripa's brief tattle.....their jealousy.......everything! It was great! Do continue soon.