'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144 - Page 45

amazing part. loved it.
angad is here now.
continue soon.

Beautiful Pallo!

Maan really went out of his way to apologise. I really loved how Parth was treated! Buy a Barbie and drugs too...🤣

I liked Angad-Kripa in this part. Are these girls gonna help each other to get their guys in their senses? 😉

Me eagerly waiting for next part!

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Great part!!!

Thanks😃

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Pallo...Just read the last three parts...they were great. Looking forward to the next part!!

Thanks gal...😃

Originally posted by: guglu088

Awesome update...I knew they would start fighting soon... hope something positive happens between them... Waiting for u to update at the earliest....

Earliest updates....Hey Bhaggu I am exhausted after these updates...I never managed to reach Part 13 in any FF of mine till now....😆😆😆
Thanks for liking it!😃

Originally posted by: Kaval05

thank you so much for the pm. And i really do love this ff poor geet she is feeling jealous and she doesn''t even know anyways update soon

Yep she is jealous...but don't worry she'll know soon enough abt her growing feelings for Maan...

Originally posted by: rushtrip

hmmm

ehsaas ho raha hai.pyar ka...Geet ko

loved the sign board apology...very very..cute...

you are a gem...love your imagination...and the cute little things you come up with...

excellent..stuff....

yep she is realizing....slowly ...
Thanks for the comments....Maaneet are gems they keep me going!😆

Originally posted by: muskanp

Lovely.. Really enjoying this.. Angad and kripa part!!!
I like them too!!,

Yep I am glad I brought them in...but yah don't get used to them...they are her only for a short time...😆😆😆😆

Originally posted by: guglu088

Another amazing part.......wow................ that was really fast...the talks between Kripa and Geet was much needed...update soon...

Yep...a heart to heart talk between the females!😃

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93

hey great part
lol at "pappu cant dance salla" 😆 and then what maan did was surprising...
now i cant wait for how maan is going to be able to pacify geet again
do continue soon 😃

-edit-

lol, i recently commented on the last part, and next thing i know, you've updated again😃
anyway, lol....

😆 the race was jokes, and the way geet replied to perth, that was jokes
and i really liked how maan had all those signs on the way to get forgiveness from geet that was cute 😊
really liked angad and kripa's entry, and how geet was jealous and all, im glad that kripa told her that it had nothing to with "body chemistry" 😆 that was jokes, and good that geet isn't under the wrong impresssion

anyway cant wait for more
do continue soon 😊

Maheen xx

Thanks for this lamba chauda comment....It made my day!
Glad that you enjoyed the part....
Stay tuned....
Love you!

loved them togethr!!! and the way maan apologized...amazing!!!
but i really hope that angad does not even start liking geet in any ways...because that will jst b too much of complication then...

Originally posted by: Maaneet

aww angad and kripaa! too cute that geet was jealousss, but maan's apology styles were over the top (in a good way of course ;))

Aww...thansk a lot!!!😃

Originally posted by: reshmi30

rocking part. geet won the race and give tip to parth it was funny.

i started loving horlicks now.

pls post next part soon .

ur a bindblowing writer

Thanks for the lovely comments...I am touched!😃

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Aww man i LOVED how Maan apologised to Geet! That was just utterly sweet! Those placards and all..esp loved that placard msg which had the horlicks lingo...Talking abt that seems like HORLICKS makes an entry again! Love that connection...😉😆...

Geet from body chemistry...to now jealousy..? Wonder what's next! 😆..

Maan seems to nt feel anything yet yaar..hopefully we'll get smth from his side soon...and GO GEET!..That's the way..😎...

LOVE how she threw the money at that guy's face and asked him to buy a doll!..What lines she stated! 😆 ....

Vini.....Thanks a lot gal for commenting!!! Yep Maan hasn't still started feeling for Geet...but soon enuff you'll see some light...

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Wow...u got Angad n Kripa...........in the FF...😛 super duper...rocking..!! Luvd the update yaar........

Plz...do add me to ur Pm list..!! rocking.... luvng the updates very very much...

Yep AK in here...Miss dem yaar...will add u...Thanks for commenting!😃

Originally posted by: loveangle_4ever

WHAT?? How can u stop there??? I mean we need more. u can't stop their. Plz yaar write soon. I want more. Tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho? Tum aise cliffhanger pe stop kaise kar sakti ho. plz write soon if u don't wanna kill me.

Yaar I was tired...brain aur kaam hi nahi kar raha tha...dun worry I will update soon!😆😆
😆

Originally posted by: Starry_night

Awesome! Loved every bit of it! The race part was superb.....Maan's ways of apologizing......Geet's racing......her putting off that jerk.......lolz......and Maan was really cute.....got her horlicks and ice-cream......awww.......and Geet won....with a crash.....lolz.......and the part with Angad and Kripa was also damn good.....Geet and Kripa's brief tattle.....their jealousy.......everything! It was great! Do continue soon.

Thanks a lot yaar...and I noticed...you too put lots of dots in between sentences.....heheheheh One of my habits!!!😆😆😆

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

awwwww that was amazing update

especaily da barbie doll 😆😆

cant wait for ur nxt update

thanks for da pm

I know...but if she told him to buy a X-Box it wouldn't have been insulting😆😆😆
Thanks for the comments!😃

Originally posted by: neha2005

great work!

Thanks😃

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

omg wowwww amazing fan fic

continue sooon

Thanks a lot!😃

Originally posted by: miss_precious

oh my god.........my favourite angad khanna is in this one!!!

cheers for the pm.......... want more maneet scenes...

Yep Rockstar ANGAD back in my FF!!! Yep Maaneet scenes cuming up....in tons!

Originally posted by: scorpiangyal

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOEEEMMMMMMMMGEEEEE Angad and KRIPA I LUBBBBBBEERRS YOUUUU so much after reading this! I want Maan to feel something though! LOLZZZZ

Love you too....And love AK too....
I know Maan is acting like a wall...but you know na...walls also crumble😉!!!

Originally posted by: Hiba282

i hope u dont get bored and keep updating the FF so quickly!!! 😃
awww the apolgy was so cute!!! dangerous as well!!!!
angad and kripa, one ov my all tym fav couple😃 lovd reading this part!!! maneet and angad and kripa together 😃 nyccc

Pray to that!!!!
Thanks for the lovely comments..they made me smile!!!

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

pallo jappies n pappiz to u kudiye!!!

u included AK wid maneet it was fab!!!! jus lub the update

jhappiz and pappiz to you too sana...
AK and Maaneet double dhamaka!!!
thanks for the lovely comments!
love ya!

Originally posted by: hapinezz13

awesome update Pallo!!!

n Angad...ufff.....n Kripa n Geet at least know their feelings!! these men na!!

Men...yep...the boon and bane of our existence!!!😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Nirali92

Dude, I absolutely loved this part. Like, everything (expect for one thing)!! Bad thing first. I kinda disliked the way Geet keeps on giving random dudes a piece of her mind. I mean, I'm a girl and all, but I think it's kinda scary the way she does that. I think it's courageous of her, but at the same time, I think she's gonna get herself as well as Maan in trouble with her bindaas attitude.

Good things now!! I love Angad's sense of humor. Seriously!! I liked two dialogues by him.

"You two used the MUSIC ROOM to do your business!" Angad looked appalled.

"Women seesh! Nature called both of them at the same time huh?" Angad sniggered.

I don't know why, but they keep on cracking me up. I can totally imagine Angad saying that. Also, have I told you how ah-mazing it is that you brought in Angad and Kripa. Angad and Maan are similar. I hope they kinda bond in your fanfic.

Next order of business. Loved how Geet asked herself, "Are Maan's smiles exclusively for you?" I also liked the convo that Geet and Kripa shared. It was so cute how the girls were able to recognize the other's feelings and they only know each other for like a couple of minutes. Anyways, now I wanna see Angad and Kripa's love story progress.

The only thing that confused me was the ending. What does the song have to do with anything?

Before I end this longgg note, it was soooooooooooo cute how Maan apologized to Geet. Another thing I was confused about was that if this was a car race and you could bang other cars, then why did Geet stop in the middle of the race to ponder over the placeboards. I think you're gonna kill me for writing such long notes and for asking so many questions. I'm really sorry. Eagerly awaiting the next part though J

Hehehehe...you are one deep reader!!!!
@ red...WWWWhhhhaaaaa you stole away my next part!!!! Now I'll have to think of something different!!! But yes Geet's attitude is purely bindaas. She is fine with nice men but to chauvinists...she gets all rude!!!

@ pink....defo!!! They feel like fast friends material to me!

@ purple....Nothing...It was absolutely insignificant...Angad was just humming that tune and Geet felt is odd cause of the lyrics...and at that particular instance...coz she had just got to know that was feeling jealous...and everyone knows..jealously is the first step in the ladder to love!

@ blue...Oh Man! I never thought of cars getting bumped...Did I mention nething abt bumping newhere? I was purely imagining a fun race with no violence....

Thanks for the long in-depth comments...
I loved them!!!
love ya!

Originally posted by: ZaraSalvatore

GREAT JOB !

Thanks😃

Originally posted by: sweet_charmed

lolz soo pallo wat can i say .... that prolly hasn't been repeated but I loved loved this update!!! And i really really love maan... haha he is soo sweet.. bringin her horlick and icecream!!! lolz on a sidenote.. i had been wondering for a while wat was horlick... finally googled it today!! haha.. i kept thinkin it was a flavor of coffee ...that i didn 'know of ..hahaha.. the thngs you learn in a ff.. anywhooo back to the ff.. soo maans' apology very sweet and haha geet is so lost about her feelings... i loved it when kripa and her were talkin alone and she was explaning the whole body chemistry shabam... lmao... she wants to believe in that soo badly it soo cute ..hahaha soo i prolly already said this but i lovvveeeedd it 👏

Wow you googled horlicks!!! Great Geet's asar!!!
Glad you liked it...and do taste horlicks sumtime...it is *no comments*😉

Originally posted by: anufa

wow....angad!!!!

ab maan ko b jealous hona chaiye na!!!!😉

update sooN!!!

Maan...jealous...abhi tak toh nahi...kyunki he is still treating geet as a frend!!!
But dun worry...jab pyar hoga toh...wohi zyaada jealous hoga!!😆😆😆
Thanks for commenting!
love

Originally posted by: billih

update soon. its fantastic. please please please update the next part now !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111
cant wait longer.................................

u r doing awesome job.

Thanks a lot...first day f college do a bit busy now..will update as soon as possible!😃

Originally posted by: ffkhan

Fantastic part! Just loved it! Waiting for the next chap.

Farzu...ahh! Thanks girlie...love ya!

Originally posted by: alias90

Great update. However I didn't agree with Maan complimenting that girl, cuz it just doesn't seem 'Maan' yknow? However I did love Geet being jealuse.

Ah..he complimented her coz her eyes were like him mom's...otherwise..Khadoos Maan singh khurana..and complimenting...NOWAYS!!!
Thanks for liking the part!😃

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

amazing part. loved it.
angad is here now.
continue soon.

Thanks a lot gal
love ya!

Originally posted by: tes_v1

Beautiful Pallo!

Maan really went out of his way to apologise. I really loved how Parth was treated! Buy a Barbie and drugs too...🤣

I liked Angad-Kripa in this part. Are these girls gonna help each other to get their guys in their senses? 😉

Me eagerly waiting for next part!

Hopefully Girl Power works!!!
But these guys are thick headed buffalos...so time will surely be needed...
Thanks a lot for commenting!
love ya Tia!

Originally posted by: gauri92

loved them togethr!!! and the way maan apologized...amazing!!!
but i really hope that angad does not even start liking geet in any ways...because that will jst b too much of complication then...

Rest assured..no angad Geet track...I can't even imagine them....😆😆😆😆
Thanks for commenting!
Love ya

too damn good yaar maan was so sweet
those hoardings idea was awesome that concern and geet explanation about chemistry to kripa
too damn good
geet please be careful about slime yaar
thank god maan was with her.
do continue dear
bye sumi

oye hoyye kya UD hain ji?????/ekdam idbal khan aur neha bamb ka bhi entry karwa diya..!!!!! i m sooooooo luving the update babes.

Nice update

hi dear! superb update..luvd it..lukin 4wd to angads concert. so ul seriously make me da co singer?realy?thnks hun..my name s harsha by d way..do update soon..