'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144 - Page 41

part 11 was great loved the icecream pact!! Vivaan part was so cute geet di loves maan not attraction 😃
As for part 12, i serioisly lykd it! I lykd getting to knw dat maan had a friend nd that he secluded himslf after sameer's death! It wa touching. Geet race, hmmm i hope nothing happens to her! Oye hoye angad khanna! From kaisa yeh pyar hai ryt? Me likey!😃

oh how can i 4get the dance! So well written, gud choice for song! I love kahin to!! Oho maan can b so stupid sumtyms!! Huh! Scolding geet widout evn listenin! He broke the icecream pact!! He sure do need that flask of horlicks now!!!

Pallo,

That was indeed emo-packed! Everything was perfectly done! Maan needs Horlicks! 🤣

Looking forward to the race!

Pallo, can u reply me why u r always worried about your updates. All parts are soo good, excellent. Promise me that u will never be worried.

Nice update

Originally posted by: loveangle_4ever

WOW yaar wow that's all I gotta say. cuz my cheek hurts cuz of all that laughing. I just read the whole thing and it's awesome. plz plz add me to your pm list.

Thanks for the sweet comment...yah added you.😉

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

nice...

rigtone for maan and that of 'pappu cant dance'....amazing....i seriously can't stop laughing!

well....maan should seriously apologize to geet!....

waiting 4 the race to take place!

continue soon!

Yep Maan has to apologize...Race is coming up....Stay tuned. Love you...thanks for the comments!

Originally posted by: taskutbimuff

Hey its a good part.some serious scenes are always needed in a story after all life is'nt alwar fun n frolic:)waiting for next part:)good job

yep thanks gal....Glad you liked the serious stuff as well!😆

Originally posted by: Morning Star

wow chashme bad dooor, fast updater u r and this proves me right tht he CVs must gve u part in making of Geet. hehehe.👏

nice part i so like it the way u make Geet act as tomboy, a fearless girl yet full of passion wht to do it is after all girls nature 2 feel something something 😉

though i wont need to remind u buh hey u know what. waititng for the next dreading action of geet as her bus driving.

ps. thx for wlc me in ur world.

luv

M.S

Do suggest yaar...I don't wanna study nemore...me fed up with books...I wanna join sum production house and help in the creatives team....

Geet is Geet!!! Love her!

Thanks for the comments...they made my day!

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

awwwwww a mug of horlicks will do da trick 😛

cant wait to read ur nxt update

yep yummilicous horlicks...Hope Maan starts drinking it too...
Thanks buddy for commenting!

Originally posted by: jhinki143

just one word....."AWESOME"

One word to you too...*JHAPPIZ*😆😆😆😳

Originally posted by: -sann-

👏fantastic...luved it..

Glad...thanks for commenting!

Originally posted by: reshmi30

no matter it was serious i loved it

Glad..abt it!!! Thanks for the sweet comment!

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

nice part he needs to take over horlicks!!!

after race he needs to be wid geet only!!!!!

He will do exactly that...hush hush hush...I am letting out the next part!!!😆😆😆

Originally posted by: cutegurl224

Hi...
This story is just amazingggg
Please PM me when you update it...
Thanks
Tc =)
Nupur

sure buddy will pm u!
Thanks for liking it!

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

lovely part. loved it.
continue soon.

Thanks😃 Will continue soon don't worry!

Originally posted by: Starry_night

Firstly, Congrats on completing 50 pages! 😉

Coming to the FF, it was awesome! Loved it to the core.......the dance, their fight, Geet's indifference.......everything! Hmm.....so our sherni is gonna participate in a race.......great! Maan is worried......lolz......good for him! Can't wait to read the next part.....and I won't kill you.....otherwise who is gonna update......lolz.....do continue soon. 😛😆

Ahhh! It all goes to you guys...50 pages of ur precious comments...
Thanks for sparing me...waise bhi it is Maan's turn to die at the hands of our sherni...not mine!!!😆
Stay tuned...
Loved your comments!

Originally posted by: sweet-and-cute

ohh...pallo..my sweetheart.....kya tum innn dino main bohot sareeee horliks peee rahin hoo....coz you are sooo fast to updating your ff.....lekin lekiin...... i ammmmm sooooooooooooooo haappy that you are updating your ff so fast..wait...main toh bhul eee gayee thi appreciate kar ne ki...andd...dhan ta naan.....this is really nice part...........

U guessed right...main twice a day horlicks peeti hoon...aur double fast update karti hoon!!!
Thanks for the dhan ta na comment....Loved it!!!😆

Originally posted by: _Monu_

hiii pallo

iot was a great part as usual

he he maneet r always with their

nok joks n challenges..lol

n i love them= )

cont soon

love yaaa

that's what completes them...their ceaseless nok jhoks...warna khali lagta hain!!!
Thanks for the comments...made my day!
Love you!

Originally posted by: Nirali92

Lines that I loved:

"And did you tell the whole staff to change their ringtones unanimously to 'Pappu Can't Dance Saala'?"

"Right....you didn't tell them to do that and Osama never blew up WTC!" Maan carried on.

"Forget it Maan!....You are just behaving like a ego infected Baboon!" she labelled him.

"Am I?...and you are behaving like a mindless and insensitive buffoon.." he countered.

Now to the actual part. I promise I'll try to make it shorter this time :D I liked it. I can totally see Maan acting that way. Dancing pretty close to her just to prove her wrong. Geet actually apologizing instead of letting this battle get further. Once again, even though you explained the hug thing, I still felt it was a little strange. I dunno why, but that's just how I feel. I wanna see a brooding Maan. I wish you had included that somewhere. Like we saw in the show, Geet decides not to talk to Maan for the rest of the day but Maan tries to force her to talk to him. Maybe you can include that in the next part. I like how you included Angad Khanna in there. Brings up good memories from the show. Hope you don't my long ramblings J A big CONGRATS for finishing 50 pages.

Also, loved the song selection: "Pappu can't dance saala" as well as "Kahin to hogi woh." Seems like you really liked JTYJN 😉

Guessed right...I love JTYJN.....and brooding Maan...hhhmmm...never thought abt that...but guess will use it somewhere in my FF....
Itna lamba comment dekh kar..."DIL GARDEN GARDEN HO GAYA!"
Thanks a lot gal....

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

great part!!
Thanks for the PM

thanks😃😃😃

Originally posted by: anufa

awsum as always!!!!👏

update soon!!!

Thanks a lot...will update soon dun worry!

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

lovely yaar
loved maan geet ice cream pact and vivan was cute
their friendship was great maan being the pigheaded one has to ruin it.
now he is regretting it.
get is full of live and maan friend sameer death was sad.
this race idea was awesome
d continue
bye sumi

ahhhh...at last someone mentioned poor Sameer!
Thanks for commenting...it means a lot!!!
It has the horlicks effect on me
love u

Originally posted by: Hiba282

part 11 was great loved the icecream pact!! Vivaan part was so cute geet di loves maan not attraction 😃
As for part 12, i serioisly lykd it! I lykd getting to knw dat maan had a friend nd that he secluded himslf after sameer's death! It wa touching. Geet race, hmmm i hope nothing happens to her! Oye hoye angad khanna! From kaisa yeh pyar hai ryt? Me likey!😃

Angad yep...I wanted to resurrect that rockstar in my FF....glad that so many angad fans still sround.
Thanks for the lovely comments...I am touched.

Originally posted by: Hiba282

oh how can i 4get the dance! So well written, gud choice for song! I love kahin to!! Oho maan can b so stupid sumtyms!! Huh! Scolding geet widout evn listenin! He broke the icecream pact!! He sure do need that flask of horlicks now!!!

Dance...yes yaar...wanted to write more...but was feeling sooooo lazy that I left it like that only!!! Yep Maan ...broke the pact...hopefully Geet will forgive him later...

Originally posted by: tes_v1

Pallo,

That was indeed emo-packed! Everything was perfectly done! Maan needs Horlicks! 🤣

Looking forward to the race!

Yep...Maan needs a bucket of Horlicks!!! I am trying to be a serious writer....🤣

Originally posted by: ffkhan

Pallo, can u reply me why u r always worried about your updates. All parts are soo good, excellent. Promise me that u will never be worried.

Loved the part as usual. Keep it up and continue soon.😃

Yaar I am worried that you all may not accept my SERIOUS MODE of writing. I know that the nok-jhonks are nice...but for the story to proceed I need sum seriousness...And as it is the show is getting so serious...again if my FF also gets serious..the readers will go into a depression ...😆😆😆😆😆😆

K I will not get worried ever again...we will name this the Pallo-Farzu pact!!! Seal it will horlicks!!!🤣

Originally posted by: morlen

nice part yr

Thanks😃

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Nice update

Well Maan wa hell angry on Geet abt tha dance thg

Hate the person who gav wrong info to Maan about ringtone

Geet was lost

Hop the cum back to normal frnds agn

Maan's flashback was really senti

Race wow paka Geet will win

Maan will apologise soon thats for sure

Update soon

Thanks...I love that color...Geet will surely win...but some interesting bits in the race coming up...
Thanks again for you comments...they make me smile!
Love u!

i only just got home frm a weekend away and i was so exctied to c tht u had posted the next part nd thankkks soo much even after writing it twice u didnt get tried and u wrote it a third tym 👏 for ur hard work and finally great post really loved the teddy bear =D

heyy...