'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144 - Page 40

nice part he needs to take over horlicks!!!

Hi...
This story is just amazingggg
Please PM me when you update it...
Thanks
Tc =)
Nupur

lovely part. loved it.
continue soon.

Firstly, Congrats on completing 50 pages! 😉

Coming to the FF, it was awesome! Loved it to the core.......the dance, their fight, Geet's indifference.......everything! Hmm.....so our sherni is gonna participate in a race.......great! Maan is worried......lolz......good for him! Can't wait to read the next part.....and I won't kill you.....otherwise who is gonna update......lolz.....do continue soon. 😛😆

hiii pallo

Lines that I loved:

"And did you tell the whole staff to change their ringtones unanimously to 'Pappu Can't Dance Saala'?"

"Right....you didn't tell them to do that and Osama never blew up WTC!" Maan carried on.

"Forget it Maan!....You are just behaving like a ego infected Baboon!" she labelled him.

"Am I?...and you are behaving like a mindless and insensitive buffoon.." he countered.

Now to the actual part. I promise I'll try to make it shorter this time :D I liked it. I can totally see Maan acting that way. Dancing pretty close to her just to prove her wrong. Geet actually apologizing instead of letting this battle get further. Once again, even though you explained the hug thing, I still felt it was a little strange. I dunno why, but that's just how I feel. I wanna see a brooding Maan. I wish you had included that somewhere. Like we saw in the show, Geet decides not to talk to Maan for the rest of the day but Maan tries to force her to talk to him. Maybe you can include that in the next part. I like how you included Angad Khanna in there. Brings up good memories from the show. Hope you don't my long ramblings J A big CONGRATS for finishing 50 pages.

Also, loved the song selection: "Pappu can't dance saala" as well as "Kahin to hogi woh." Seems like you really liked JTYJN 😉

great part!!
Thanks for the PM

awsum as always!!!!👏

update soon!!!

lovely yaar
loved maan geet ice cream pact and vivan was cute
their friendship was great maan being the pigheaded one has to ruin it.
now he is regretting it.
get is full of live and maan friend sameer death was sad.
this race idea was awesome
d continue
bye sumi