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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
wah wah kudiye kya likha saadi dil ki pyaar bhi gaalyiaan mk ko 1 update mein de di khadoos sadu ...............lol
well written love the batameez hawa ka jhoka:P
awaiting 4r the next epi make sure chai wale ka dhaba aas pass ho samkhi!!!!;)🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sweet.melody



hawww really? I am like obsessed with Geet since day one 😆😆

Cause love both couples! haha

Both couples?? which other one?😕
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

wah wah kudiye kya likha saadi dil ki pyaar bhi gaalyiaan mk ko 1 update mein de di khadoos sadu ...............lol

well written love the batameez hawa ka jhoka:P
awaiting 4r the next epi make sure chai wale ka dhaba aas pass ho samkhi!!!!;)🤗

ROFL! sorry yaar, chai wala toh nahi aay, lekin ill make sure you get your chai some other time...😳😉
batameez hawa ka jhoka..that reminds me of Sameer form Hum dil de😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

Im really sorry for the late update!😳
And exrtraa sorry for this lame-o update im about to give you guys, it really sucks, and i apologize, i just wanted to get the night over with so i can move on to the next day. I promise the next update will be like 100 times better than this. 😳
Part 4

"Oh God! This job is going to be a pain", thought Geet as she got into the car, " im soo not getting paid enough to stay up till 12:30!"

Maan started to drive, and they were on the road. Geet lived atleast 20mins away from the office, and she was grateful to Maan for dropping her off, but she wasn't going to tell him that, He wouldn't even bother looking at her if she said that.

"Where do live?" asked Maan.

"Janakpuri…"

Where the heck is that? Thought Maan, but he didn't want to ask her, His male ego was too big for that, and he was in no mood to argue with her about directions, knowing her, she would start something, so he just kept driving on straight.

He turned the radio on, to fill in the silence…he tuned to a channel where a woman was blabbering on about politics and current events.

How shocking thought Geet, Is sadoo ki life me thode bhi rang nahi hai…. Itni raat ko politics ki khabrein sun raha hai.

"Yaha se left" , said Geet suddenly.

"I know, mera dyan nahi tha" he snapped.

"Mene kab kaha ke aapko pata nahi hai? Agar mene kuch kaha nahi hota toh aap age nikaljate, and hum dono ka time waste hojata." replied an irritated Geet.

"Is waqt theek raste par hai na? toh argue kyun kar rahi ho?"

"Me argue kar rahi hoon?!" she said looking at Maan. He looked at her and stopped the car.

"Kya hua?" asked Geet…Oh God! Hes gonna throw me out of the car, what am I gonna do??

"Tum andhi bhi ho kya?" said Maan

"What?"

"Aage dekho."

"He Babaji..yeh kya! Road bandh hai?

They both looked ahead and they saw a check post, and a few police cars and cops out scoping the area. He got out of the car, and approached an officer. In a few minutes he was back in the car, putting his seatbelt on.

'Kya hua? Road kyu bandh hai?"

"Accident hua hai, ek truck aur gadi, do road ke beech o beech hai, toh road bandh hi rahega."

"Kya? Oh god! Me ghar kese jaungi?" she said to herself.

"Officer ne kaha ke ek aur rasta hai tumhare ghar tak, kachha raste hai, jungle se hota hua jaata hai, agar tumhe jaana hai toh me chod dunga, ya phir koi aur jagah hai tumhare paas?"

"Nahi, me yaha au kisiko nahi jaanti"

"Okay…"

And he took a U-turn. Maan was unsure of the way, the officer had explained it to him, but almost every alley fit the description he's given, and it was night time…

"This place looks completely deserted" said Geet.

"Toh tumhe kya laga tha? Raat k eek baje yaha koi party kar raha hoga? Be practical Geet."

"Aapse toh koi theek se baat bhi nahi karsakta" said geet holding in her temper.

"Mujhe tumse gappe ladaneka koi shokh nahi hai, tum chup nahi baith sakti?"

Geet grunted, changed the radio channel and looked outside the window…is se zyada ghussa toh koi nahi karsakta.

Yeh Kali Zehrili Raat

Palke Jhapakti Yeh Raat

Saap Si Sarakti Raat

Kali Kali Kali Yeh Raat

Veeraana Veeraana Hai Veeraana

Dil Ko Lakh Basa Le Yeh Deewana

Veeraana Veeraana Hai Veeraana

Dil Ko Lakh Basa Le Yeh Deewana

Ujhdi Ujhdi Rehte Hai Dil Saari

Veeraano Se Basta Hai Veeraana

San Karke Marti Hai Boom Karti Hai Kali Kodyali Raat

Yeh Raat Yeh Raat

Jali Ki Chipkali Raat

Yeh Raat

Kadi Aur Kombdi Ki Raat

Yeh Raat

Na Ugli Hi Jaye Na Nigli Hi Jaye

Yeh Kali Zehrili Raat

Pal Pal Balkhaati Pal Pal Uljaati

Palke Jhapakti Yeh Raat

Sannate Ki Sij Pe Soye

Saap Si Sarakti Raat

Yeh Raat Yeh Raat

What the hell, thought geet…and turned the radio off.

Maan smirked a lil bit to himself…Ladikyaan…gaane se dargayi…

Thunder roared, Lighting struck and rain started pouring down.

"Bas yahi baaki tha" said Maan, "aur kuch galat ho sakta……." The car skidded to a stop before he could finish the sentence.

"Shoot! This is ridiculous! Gaadi ko kya hogaya?!" he turned the keys 3 more times before he gave up and went outside to check the engine.

"Whats wrong?" asked Geet from inside.

"Pata nahi…andhere me kuch dikhai nahi de raha….."he said slowly.

He was getting soaking wet, and it didn't look like the rain was gonna stop any time soon, in fact, it was getting worse by the minute. "This is just perfect!" he hissed under his breath, and suddenly, he wasn't feeling the rain on him. He looked up and then looked behind him to find Geet holding an umbrella over him.

"Yeh kaha se aaya?" he asked.

"Mere bag me thi, who kehte hai na, Dehli ki bearish ka koi bharosa nahi, kabhi bhi aa jaa sakti hai" she said with a sheepish smile.

"Toh pehle kyun nahi di?" he said, anger rising.

"Bhul gayi thi, sorry"

"How convenient, and BTW that saying is for Mumbai not delhi."

"What?"

"Mumbai ki bearish ka koi bharosa nahi, dehli ka nahi."

"Acha? Kab se…?"

He stared at her blankly, was this girl for real?

Just then the thunder roared loudly, and geet greabbed Maans arm on instinct, and closed her eyes. [the umbrella flew off]

Maan looked at her, she looked beautiful, her locks were getting wetter with each drop of rain, and that made her look even prettier, he keep staring at the scared woman cudling up in his chest.

Geet realized what she was doing and broke away from him…'Sorry" she said, and looked at Maan. He was still staring at her, and she couldn't help look back at him, she couldn't make out the man that stood infront of him, his face looked soo soft, Instead of hatred or anger, their was something else in his eyes, but she couplt put her finger on it. She broke out of her trance, and looked away, making maan look away as well.

"Uh…Lagta hai, aaj raat is gadi me kaat hi padegi."said maan

"Kya? " she said shocked.

"We don't have a choice, unless you wanna go into the jungle and set up a hut."

Geets eyebrows narrowed, and the sadoo's back…she thought.

"Get in the car." She opened the front door…

"You sleep in the back, ill stay in the front" She did as she was told, but grabbed her bag, before getting in the back.

They were both in the car, and it was getting colder by the secong, the engine had died down so the wouldn't work, and they were both wet! If some miracle didn't happen they would both die of pneumonia! This night couldn't get any worse. Geet was drifting off to sleep, and Maan could hear her teeth chattering from the cold. He tried the Heater once again, but it didn't work. He didn't have anything warm in the car. He turned to look at geets shivering body, and felt miserable, he hadn't felt this helpless, ever! Plus the rain just got worse and worse, just then he noticed geet's bag lying on the car floor, a cell phone was visible…and relief swept him.

"How did I not think of this before?! He picked it up, and it was dead. He took out his phone, and [you guessed it] no signal! "Damn it! What the hell, Ugh!" He was about to throw his phone at the window, when a knock startled him. He lowered the glass and found Adi giving him a cheeky smile.

"I thought this was your car" he said.

"Adi! Tujhe dekhkar, aaj tak itni khushi nahi hui mujhe!"

"Gee, thanks, that makes me feel so special…"

"Shut up, and stop brooding"

"this coming from the broodmaster himself? Now that's funny…"his gaze went to the back, and he saw geet, "Ooo, yeh kya MAAN SINGH KHURANA!! Tum, ek ladki ke saath?, gaadi me? Raat ke dhai baje? Sunsan sadak pe?" he made sure to emphasize each word and gave a different expression of shock everytime.

"Shut the hell up yaar! Yeh marnewali hai, aur tujhe expressions practice karne hai? Bring your car closer, so I can get her in it."

Adi realized that he was right, Geet didn't look so well. He did as he was told, and all 3 got into the car.. Geet was in the back, with both the males in the front and Adi driving. Maan was glad to have some sort of heat. He saw Adis jacket at his feet and covered Geet with it. Adi was surprised, he has never seen Maan show any kind of emotion for a girl.

"Raat ke dhai baje, koi shehnaai baje, dil ka bazaar laga…."sang Adi, making sure heard him.

Maan shot him a look. "Kya hai?"

"Kya? " he gave an innocent look, "Me toh timepass kar raha hoon, its gonna be a long ride, tum shehar se kafi door chale aye the…"

"Tum yaha kaise aagaye? Leave par the na?" asked Maan.

"Yeah, Aaj Rashi ka phone aaya tha, and usne clients ke bare me bhataya, so leave cancel karni padi, soooo, kuch karna padega boss"

"Kya karna padega?" he said with a shocked look. "Dude, I cancelled my holiday for your stupid clients, youll have to make up for it. And no stupid gifts this time yaa, please."

Maan gave a small smile. "My gifts are not stupid"

"Yeah rite. Last diwali pe tune mujhe ek pink shirt di thi, me ladki hoon kya? Mere jaisa handsome ladka pink pehnega, toh koi ladki use bhav nahi degi pata hai! Waise bhi handsome ladko ki image kharab hai.."

"What?"

"you don't know? Appearantly, most goodlooking guys are gay, so if I wear pink, meri band baj jayeg…I might as well wear a sign saying I like guys."

"Oh God! Teri sock kachre me hai kya? Bewakuf."

Adi and Maan talked as they reached Geet's house and dropped her off, she looked a lot better by the time they got their. Rashi was glad to see her, and she thanked her Boss, and Maan and Adi left.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
raat ke dhaai baje koi shehnai baje🤣
payaliaaaa chup karrrrrrrrrrrrrrr(dar jee style) kudiye kitna sona likha!!!!!
liked adi n maan convo
gud update*jhappie*
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

raat ke dhaai baje koi shehnai baje🤣

payaliaaaa chup karrrrrrrrrrrrrrr(dar jee style) kudiye kitna sona likha!!!!!
liked adi n maan convo
gud update*jhappie*

😆😆
I wish Adi was really like this in the show, Maan needs a buddy buddy, 😉
Oh no! Daaji--here? i hope he didnt see the baarish wala scene, warna brij se bolke mujhe zinda gaar denge😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
what??? That's it? Why did Adi have to come! It was getting better!!! and then he kind of ruined the moment.

:( Please update sooon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
i m a new reader ....................it is absolutely fantastic story

plz plz plz pm to me the next part and continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: *payal_15*

Both couples?? which other one?😕



D&G and Maneet yaar!! when Geet started out I was crazy for D&G lol but now Maneet too! :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
love;y yaar
loved aid and maan bickering and maan geet was adorable
do continue
bye sumi

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