CVs-Maaneet scenes for the future: UPDATED pg.31 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
👏 👏 👏 Absolutely loved this one. Could totally picture it happening with facial expressions and everything. Waiting for more. 😍 😍

p.s. Do start writing FFs, will be eagerly waiting for those too.😍 😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
aiye haiya yaar kya baat hai just hankey part so cute
do continue dear
maybe CV's isse padkar ache scenes likhna elage
bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
OMG averma4583!!!!!!!!!!!! This bday scene and esp . Maan keeping the hanky in his left shirt pocket wud b justtt soooooooooooooooooo worth-watching...
Dunno what's on the CVs minds .. but this is for sure that all us Maaneet fans are totally drenched in their love scenes..All the scnes are sooo adorable..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Another scene:

Geet at Maan's Delhi House. Both still unmarried.

Maan is coming out of his room heading off to work. Suddenly he hears screaming from Geet's room. He rushes towards her room and Geet seeing him in fear goes and holds onto him.

Maan looks at Geet all concerned but still with a firm voice-"Kya hua"

Geet-"Woh woh" Saying this, Geet points to the wall. Maan looks at the wall and sees a big lizard (chhipkili), and gets irritated-"Tum ladkiyoon ko toh bas chillaana aata hai". 😆

Dadi comes and asks-"Geet puttar kya hua. Tu theek toh hai na" And Dadi's eyes get widened seeing Geet holding onto Maan's arm.😆

Geet and Maan realize, and Geet moves away while Maan with attitude straightens his shirt. He's also embarrassed to look at his Dadi.

Geet speaks up-"Woh Dadima, woh chhipkili dekh kar darr.."

Maan underneath his breath mutters "Chhipkili se darrti hai, aur khud chhipkili ki tarah mujhse lipatti hai"😆🤣

Dadi who's heard his muttering says-"Maan beta tune kuch kaha?"

Maan just sarcastically remarks-"Daadi, inn ladkiyoon ko har cheez se darr lagta hai. Pata nahin saari zindagi darr darr kaise guzaarti hain"

Geet shoots a deadly glare at him, but she knows it's best to stay quiet in front of Dadi. 😆

Saying this, Maan leaves because he can not face his Dadi's penetrating looks. In his car, he gets irritated at Geet "Ab pata nahin Dadi kya soch rahin hain. Sab uss bewakoof ladki ke wajah se" 😆

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Another scene:

Geet and Maan still unmarried.

It's some significant Khurana occasion, and Dadi is going to the temple with Geet. Dadi sees that Maan still hasn't left for work yet, and she tells him to come along.

Dadi-"Maan beta, tu bhi chal"

Maan trying to avoid, tries to make excuses-"Dadi, mujhe aaj office mein kaafi kaam hai"

Dadi not buying his excuses-"Maan, main tujhse puchh nahin rahi. Yeh mera order hai. Aaj Munshi ji kaam dekh leinge. Kitne dinon se bhagwan ke darshan bhi nahin kiye tune. Ab chal. Nakhre mat dikha. Nakhre dikhana ladkiyoon ka kaam hota hai"

Saying this, Dadi smiles at Geet-"Kyun Geet sahi kaha na?"

Geet smiles back at Dadi and decides this is the best time for a comeback-"So toh hai Dadimaa. Par ab zamaana hi badal gaya hai. Aaj kal ke ladkon mein woh baat kahan. Unhein apne gusse aur naz-nakhron se phursat hi nahin milti"

Geet shoots a smirk in Maan's direction as she knows he can't really argue in front of Dadi.

Maan is fuming at Geet for making fun of him. Maan super irritated-"Kuch logon ko bas baatein banana hi aata hai"

Dadi chiding him-"Arrey ab ja gaddi nikal. Geet Puttar puja ka samaan le liya"

Geet being sweet and demure-"Ji Dadimaa"

Maan takes out his car. (It can't be a jeep this time as there's more than two ppl). Dadimaa sits in the back and Geet is about to follow her when Maan interrupts.

Maan with attitude-"Suno, main koi tumhara driver nahin jo tum peechhe beith rahi ho. Jao aage beitho" [In reality he prolly wanted to have Geet sit next to him. But of course being the kharoos he is, he can't say it properly!]

Dadi-"Arrey Maan, tu itna chhidta kyun hai. Kya hua agar Geet mere saath beithi toh. Chal aa jaa Geet"

Geet ends up sitting next to Dadi. Maan is really angry and frustrated. While at a red light he checks his rear-view mirror and sees Geet's sweet smile. He doesn't realize that the lights have changed. Suddenly he hears cars honking at him, and he comes back to reality and starts driving.

Dadi-"Maan tera dhyaan aaj kal kahan rehta hai. Tune dekha nahin light badal gayi thi"

Maan trying to find an excuse-"Ji Dadi main woh Chopra project plan ke baare mein sochne laga tha."

Dadi amicably-"Puttar, kitna kaam karta rehta hai tu. Thoda aaram bhi kiya kar"

The temple arrives, and Dadi and Geet come out while Maan goes to park the car.

At the temple Dadi does her puja. Geet is praying and has her head covered with her duppatta. Maan comes and prays as well. He unknowingly is standing right next to Geet. As both finish their prayers they raise their hands to ring the temple bells, and their hands touch. They turn around, and another eyelock between Maaneet!

The priest breaks Maaneet's eyelock-"Tum dono ki jodi sada bani rahe"

Geet and Maan both try to protest hearing this, but the priest has left. Dadi has seen and heard everything. Both Maaneet are embarrassed, and avoid looking at each other knowing that Dadi has seen them.

The ride back home was quieter with Dadi being the one starting conversations, and Maaneet would just politely reply to her questions. As soon as they entered, Geet with some pretext hurried to her room, while Maan pretended he received an important call, and went to lock himself in his study. Neither wanted to be under Dadi's scrutinizing eyes!

Geet in her room was reflecting on her whole life (Dev, Maan, the attempted murder on her), and Maan was frustrated in his study thinking why Geet always comes his mind.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
oye hoye kya baat hai yaar geet bhi reply dene lagi
mast hai yaar
maan always irritated yeh khush kab hota hai sadoo
but cute sadoo na.
do continue dear bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

oye hoye kya baat hai yaar geet bhi reply dene lagi
mast hai yaar
maan always irritated yeh khush kab hota hai sadoo
but cute sadoo na.
do continue dear bye sumi



Geet ko memne (lamb) se sherni bhi Maan ne hi banaya hai! So now he's getting the full effects of the transformation! 😆 Plus have you guys noticed as soon as Geet gets a lesson about defiance from Maan, the first person she implements the lesson on is Maan himself. I just can't stop laughing at that. Maan you've got an eager student there! 😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
Geet and Maan still unmarried. However Maan's feelings are getting stronger for Geet.

It's some gala dinner for young businessmen, and Maan has no choice but to attend it.

Dadi asks Geet to accompany her. Geet refuses, but Dadi is adamant so Geet has no choice but to agree.

Maan is waiting downstairs in a black suit, white shirt with a red tie. He is getting impatient, and murmurs to himself-"Yeh auratein bhi. Kabhi waqt par taiyaar nahin ho sakti hain"😆

As he looks up he sees Dadi coming down dressed in a golden colored saree wearing her beautiful pearls. However the image that captivated Maan was that of Geet, who was walking behind Dadi. Dressed in a red Jashn lace saree with a slight loose bun, and wearing a simple yet elegant diamond necklace with matching earrings, Geet looked every bit a combined epitome of beauty, innocence and grace. 😍

Dadi as she approached Maan, breaking him from his trance-"Chal Maan. Arrey haan dekh na kitni pyaari lag rahi hai Geet. Hai na ?" 😊

Maan didn't know what to say. He couldn't say the truth, and he didn't want to lie either 😆. So avoiding the whole question itself seemed to be the best answer.
Maan trying to suppress his emotions, speaking with a bit of attitude-"Kaafi dair ho chuki hai, chaliye"

At the gala dinner, Geet was seated between Maan and Dadi. The fourth chair was reserved for another businessman by the name of Mr. Sanjay Sanghvi. Now Sanghvi had the reputation being of a player, and Maan was not pleased having him for company at his table.

Mr. Sanghvi as he came instantly caught eye of Geet. He addressed everyone, and took the empty chair which made him sit right in front of Geet. When Sanghvi asked about Geet, Dadi answered-"She's my friend's granddaughter. As you know I have no granddaughter, and I always wanted one. So Geet fills that void"
Saying this Dadi lightly patted Geet's head.

Sanghvi chuckling-"Well for an instant I thought she was your granddaughter -in-law! Well it's all good then for me. Chaliye Geet, mere liye chance abhi bhi hai!'

Maan got slightly alarmed by Sanghvi's ending words, while Geet was embarrassed and slightly blushing at being linked with Maan. When Maan looked at her, he noticed her embarresement, and he dismissed Sanghvi's words ''Maybe I'm just over-reacting". Maan feels pleased seeing Geet's shyness, but of course he doesn't display his emotions.

However Maan's fears were not baseless. During the course of the meal, he suddenly felt something on his leg. He looked at Sanghvi who was smiling at Geet. And Geet was eating with her head low, ignorant of Sanghvi looking at her. Maan glared at Sanghvi who was preoccupied at staring at Geet while talking to Dadi. Sanghvi all this time was under the impression that he was playing footsie with Geet, when in reality he had gotten Maan instead! Maan had the urge to just punch him blue & black right there, right then, but he knew better "Haath chalaane se zyada dimaag ka chalna achha hota hai" . He was in a gala dinner afterall, and he couldn't create a scene.

Geet had noticed Sanghvi looking at her, and she felt uncomfortable. Due to her uneasiness, she pretended not to notice Sanghvi, and had quietly ate her dinner. Additionally Geet knew as long as Maan was around, she didn't have to worry. She had this unexplainable implicit trust in Maan, and she knew that he would never break it.

Sensing Maan's glare, Sanghvi looked at Maan who still carried the same serious look. Sanghvi looked slightly down, and realized his mistake. Immediately he retracted his feet. He didn't have the audacity to look at Maan whose eyes demonstrated a fury which was difficultly being suppressed.

Soon Sanghvi realized that continuing his game with Geet could end up costing him dearly. He decided it was best to take leave thinking 'Aur bhi kitni ladkiyaain hain. Baad mei dekhoonga iss Geet ko' . Sanghvi took his leave by shaking hands with Maan, folding his hands in a namaste to Dadi, and finally he came towards Geet and bent towards her. Geet was caught of guard and Sanghvi took advantage of the opportunity, taking her hand for a kiss. Maan sensing Sanghvi's intentions at the very instant purposefully spilled his glass of water on Geet. Instantly Geet retracted her hand and looked at Maan whose eyes held a multitude of emotions all at once.

Maan being the kharoos couldn't apologize, but Dadi rebuked him-"Arrey Maan, yeh kya kiya tune. Geet ki saree kharaab kar di"

Geet trying to damage control-"Ji, koi baat nahin Dadi. Bas paani hi hai. Main abhi aayi issay saaf karke" Saying this, Geet excused herself. Sanghvi being no novice understood Maan's purpose perfectly. He just grinned his teeth, and took his leave.

Maan had a expression of relief as Sanghvi left. As Geet came back, Maan escorted Dadi and her to the car. Also, Maan adjusted his rear view mirror in order to have a glimpse of Geet as he drove back home.

At home, Geet dressed in a simple white salwar-kurti went to give Dadi back the jewellery and the saree that Dadi had insisted she wear. As she entered, she saw Maan with Dadi.

Maan once again was momentarily lost looking at Geet.

Geet speaking softly with a tone of thanks in her voice-"Dadimaa, yeh aapke gehne aur saree. Saree ko kal dry clean karwa doongi."

Dadi-"Arrey Geet, itni jaldi kya thi lautane ki? Khair jaa tu bhi so jaa ab. Raat kaafi chuki hai. Aur Maan tu bhi jaa, kal office bhi toh tujhe jaana hai."

Maan's study:

Maan is unable to sleep, as he keeps thinking of Geet, and then he gets flashbacks of the evening when Sanghvi was trying to flirt with Geet. Maan in a rage bangs his fist. Then he begins to qyestion himself "Why do I get so irritated with someone complimenting Geet. Why do I find myself speechless in front of her at times. Kyun maine jaan-bujkar woh paani ka glass Geet par gira diya tha? Kyun? Kya ho raha mere saath?"


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Another scene: It's Holi.

Dadi is finishing her puja, and Geet is in the kitchen making dahi-bade (dahi-bhalle).

Chhotu and some other servants have bought for themselves special Holi laddoos (bhang waale laddoos).

Munshi ji comes and sees Geet. Geet says namaste to him, and he blesses her. Trying to help, he takes the special laddoos out in the dining area along with thandai (drinks).

Maan as usual comes in his kharoos mood. Munshi ji greets him, and offers him thandai and laddoos. Maan eats one of the laddoos and goes out in the lawn.

The servants are playing Holi outside. Geet comes with the dahi bhalle outside. Dadi accompanies her. They are laughing and talking about something. Munshi ji joins them.

Dadi tells Geet-"Geet zara dahi bhalle Maan ko bhi de dena. Ussay bade acche lagte hain"

Geet-"Ji Dadimaa"

Maan who was far away from them in another corner of the lawn, was getting the effects of bhang on him.

Geet-"Maan, yeh lijiye. Dahi-bhalle"

Maan who's not in control of himself grabs Geet's wrist. Geet is taken aback by Maan's behaviour. Maan has a tight grip on Geet which forces Geet to look directly at Maan.

Maan and Geet have an intense eyelock. Maan's eyes are full of intense love and passion. Geet seems to be getting lost in Maan's gaze. He seems to have a hypnotizing effect, while he himself is fully immersed in Geet.

As Maan's grip tightens, Geet feels discomfort.

Geet grimacing with pain-"Aah. Maan, dard ho raha. Haath chhoriye"

Maan defiantly-"Nahin"

Geet-"Maan, aapko yeh kya ho gaya hai. Mujhe chhoriye"

Maan-"Tumhara dard, par mere dard ka kya Geet? Raat din main" and then Maan holds his head, as the effects of bhang are making his head spin.

Maan falls down on his knees holding his head.

Geet gets worried and puts the dahi-bhalle on the ground and goes to Maan holding his arm-"Maan, Maan kya hua aapko"

Maan-"Aah mera sar. Sab kuch ghum raha hai"

Geet screaming for help-"Munshi ji, Chhotu jaldi aao"

Geet-"Maan uthiye. Main help karti hoon" Saying this, Geet helps Maan get up and places his arm over her shoulders to help him walk

Munshi ji and Chhotu come over and help take Maan to his room. Dadi is worried.

Dadi-"Geet kya hua Maan ko"

Geet worried-"Pata nahin Dadimaa. Achanak se sar pakad liye aur kehne lage ki sab kuch ghumta nazar aa raha hai"

Dadi-"Kaheen isne bhang toh nahin le li?"

Geet shocked-"Maine toh nahin dekha, par ho sakta hai galti se Maan ne le liya ho"

Later in the day, Geet in her room held her wrist trying to comprehend Maan's incomplete talks. She gave up thinking 'Main bhi kya baatein lekar beith gayi. Bhang mein kisi ko kuch hosh nahin rehta ki woh kya kar raha hai. Chalo Geet chhoro is baat ko'

Edited by averma4583 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, love evry scene so far...........so wen will u strt the FF??

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