CVs-Maaneet scenes for the future: UPDATED pg.31 - Page 5

Faz...👏.will be waitin 4 yr imagination 2 roll ..on Maneet thread 😆

Originally posted by: averma4583

@maybe-just: You should include one point that will get Maan completely livid with rage and fury.

Dev should question-"Aap kyun beech mein aarahein hain. Aur aapka aur iss ladki ka kya rishta hai? Pehle isne meri izzat par kichad uchala, aur ab yeh aap ke saath rang-raliyaain..."

Maan holding Dev's collar-"Khabardaar agar shabd bhi aage bola toh. Abhi ke abhi jail mein dalwa doonga tumhein. Aur tum rishta janna chahte ho. Toh insaniyat naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai. Aur agar issay bhi tumhein santosh nahin (Maan bangs his hand on a window resulting in his bleeding hand, and goes fills Geet's maang with blood) ab ho gayi tasalli? Ab daffa ho jao yahaan se"

Nice, do you want me to add this bit because I totally love it! 😉

Originally posted by: averma4583

@maybe-just: You should include one point that will get Maan completely livid with rage and fury.

Dev should question-"Aap kyun beech mein aarahein hain. Aur aapka aur iss ladki ka kya rishta hai?Main achhi tarah jaanti iski jaisi ladkiyoon ko. Bholi dikhti hain par hain kuch aur. Pehle isne meri izzat par kichad uchala, aur ab yeh aap ke saath rang-raliyaain..."

Maan holding Dev's collar-"Khabardaar agar shabd bhi aage bola toh. Abhi ke abhi jail mein dalwa doonga tumhein. Aur tum rishta janna chahte ho. Toh insaniyat naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai. Aur agar issay bhi tumhein santosh nahin (Maan bangs his hand on a window resulting in his bleeding hand, and goes fills Geet's maang with blood) ab ho gayi tasalli? Ab daffa ho jao yahaan se"

@maybe-just: sure why not 😆 Wait let me edit my post to clear grammar errors first ! Ok grammar errors are edited. I added a few more lines as well.
@sofna: you're too cute!😆

Originally posted by: Sofna

Faz...👏.will be waitin 4 yr imagination 2 roll ..on Maneet thread 😆

Jaldi, Waitin for you at the Maneet paradise! 😆

Originally posted by: maybe-just

Jaldi, Waitin for you at the Maneet paradise! 😆

Arrey, I added more lines in the original. You didn't add those!

Geet is at Maan's place. They're still not married.

Maan's garden:

Geet is busy planting some flowers. There's some strong wind blowing as well. Maan is a little far away sitting in a lawn chair reading some project files and he's completely engrossed in his files. Winds blow in his way, and he tries to get his papers from flying. As he gathers his papers, his gaze falls on Geet. He continues looking at her seeing how she's gardening. He gets a smirk seeing how she's dirtied her clothes and a bit of her face with soil. Geet looks very cute and like a doll as she pouts while gardening.

Suddenly strong gushes of wind blow her duppatta away. Geet runs after her duppatta, and stops seeing where the duppatta lands. The duppatta has landed on Maan's face. Geet gets conscious, and turns her back towards Maan '"Ji, woh mera duppatta"

Maan who was caught unaware by the sudden duppatta looks at Geet, instant breaks from his trance, and walks up to her. Looking away and feeling awkwards Maan hands her duppatta. He then collects his files and goes inside. Going inside, he throws a fleeting glance at Geet who has once again busied herself in gardening.

Geet is at Maan's place. They're still not married.

Maan's birthday:

Geet has found out from Munshi ji when Maan's birthday is.

That day she gets up early, and prays. She has also made sure to have Maan's fav breakfast ready.

Maan comes and is surprised to see his fav breakfast. Just then Geet comes. She has a puja thali with her. Maan looks at her questiongly and with a bit of curiosity and attitude-"Yeh sab kya hai?"

Geet ignoring his attitude-"Pehle, aarti lijiye". Maan figures in his head 'Why should I spoil my day so early by arguing', and proceeds to do as she asks.

As Geet does his aarti, Maan has another eyelock with Geet. Geet realizes, and lowers her gaze. Maan as well slowly stops looking at her and gets irrirated at himself for having staring at Geet! Geet then tells him-"Happy Birthday" and as she smiles, she moves forward to put a small tilak on Maan.

Maan is just surprised at Geet when she wished him. And with Geet's touch as she put the tilak, he finds himself again instantly lost for a second. Munshi ji also appears then and wishes –"Janam din Mubarak ho Chhote Saheb"

After breakfast, as Maan goes to his car, Geet calls out to him-"Maan suniye"

Maan looks around seeing her running towards him. He looks at her questioningly, trying to keep an attitude because he's all confused in his poor head.

Geet handing him over something-"Ji, aaj apka janam dinn hai. Bahut socha aapko kya doon. Aapke paas waise sab kuch hai. Par yeh meri taraf ek chhota sa tohfa"

Saying this Geet has a hesitant look on her face as she hands over her present. She wonders and is scared if Maan will accept it or not.

Poor Maan who's already lost in mind games, and staring at Geet, slowly accepts the present. He is unable to say thanks, but he's deeply touched, he only ends giving a small nod woh bhi aankhein churakar, and hurries out to his car. He drives off, and is unable to comprehend what's happening to him, and talks to him "Main bar bar kyun Geet ke saamne. .." Again he brushes his thought aside, basically being in denial with an angry irritated look.

Then he remembers the present that Geet gave, and he stops his car out of curiosity to see what it is. When he opens it, he sees it's a handkerchief that has MSK embroidered with a small rose. Maan touches the embroidery, and thinks of Geet. He gets his fav hanky flashback when Geet tied a hanky on his hand. He once again rolls his thumb across the embroidery, and starts thinking of all that happened. How he saved her, their hugs, and eyelock. Suddenly he hears cars honking, and he breaks out of his trance. He places the hanky in his shirt's pocket (shirt's pocket, ahem maybe symbolic of where his heart is!) and drives off.

13 and 14 toh already ho chuka hai!! baki bhi jaldi hojayega :D