CVs-Maaneet scenes for the future: UPDATED pg.31 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Another scene: It's one day before Rakhi. This scene comes because of the news that Maan has a sister

So Pinky has been pointing out to Maan to realize and accept his feelings for Geet. And Maan adamantly brushes her off everytime. Today she has had enough of it, and decides that she will get to him to accept it.

Pinky with a serious tone-"Well Virji, agar aap Geet ke liye kuch aisa feel nahin karte hain toh koi baat nahin. I'm sorry maine aap ko bahut tang kiya iss baat ko lekar"

Maan getting a lil relaxed-"Chalo, ab kam se kam tum mujhe pareshaan toh nahin karogi iss baat ko lekar"

Pinky who still hasn't given up, thinks 'Agar ghee seedhi ungli se nahin nikle, toh ungli tedhi karni padti hai. Aur waise bhi Mr.Maan Singh Khurana, main bhi aapki hi behan hoon, Pinky Khurana. Dekhtein hain kaun jeetta hai'😆🤣

Pinky-"Waise Virji, kal rakhi hai. Aur mujhe rakhi par iss baar ek special present chahiye"

Maan disinterested-"Kya chahiye?"

Pinky-"Well, since Geet is all by herself, I think it would be nice if you had Geet tie a rakhi on you! I mean it will make her feel happy, and I don't see why you would object to it since you obviously don't have amorous feelings for her" 🤣

Maan is utterly shocked, and trying to suppress his emotions, and trying to be kharoos at the same time -"Geet, rakhi aur main. Dekho maine har kisi ka bhai banne ka theika nahin liya aur na hi main koi social worker hoon"🤣😆

Pinky-"Arrey Virji iss mein itni pareshaani waali baat kya hai? Bas ek rakhi ki hi toh baat hai! Kal main Geet ko ek rakhi de doongi aapko bandhne ke liye. Ok Vir ji chalti hoon, kaafi dair ho gayi hai, aur mujhe kal ke liye kuch shopping bhi karni hai"

Pinky leaves before Maan can even say anything. Maan is in a fix.

Maan talking to himself frustrated "Ab kya karoon? Yeh Pinky baat samajhne se rahi. I mean kitna kaha ki eisa kuch nahin hai. Yeh ladkiyaain bhi na! Koi baat inke dimaag mein aati hi nahin. Ab agar kal woh Geet ko rakhi ko de de aur sab ke saamne mujhe kahe rakhi bandhne ke liye. Hadd hoti hai bacchpane ki"

Maan again bangs his hand on the wall and then "Kyun mujhe itni pareshaani ho rahi hai? Kyun? Kaheen Pinky sach toh nahin keh rahi ki mujhe Geet se… I mean no it can't be. Main uss baddimaag, badtameez, bewakoof Geet se…" And then again he gets all his flashblacks of Geet's hanky tying, saving her from drowning, hugging her in the jungle, and their jungle eye-lock.

Maan in complete disbelief of himself "Or can it be?"😆😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
very nice you should write a ff yourself.... unless you already do and have not read it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@averma4583 - Superb superb superb!!!!!!!!!😛😉 What an outstanding way to use the fact dat Maan has a sis!!! Geet se RAKHI 😆😆😆😆😆😉😉😉 Maan's dilemma ! Surely this is One of the best scenes one can think of at this point!!👏👏😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
hey guys I am not very creative but i have a scenario maybe one of you more talented could expand on it...
well it would be set when geet is preggy but like HUGE and staying with maan during this time and at her every move he will sweat bullets cause he has not had a woman in his care in such a situation...etc etc....we have all seen him in a reluctant knight in the shining armour role...but now I want to imagine and hopefully see him caring but ignorant to his reactions...it would be something of a treat

another thought (as i was typing this out) would be a scene of maan with geets child...either the first time he holds the baby on the day of it's birth or when he is playing with the baby/toddler...it may just be me but seeing a rough-tough guy holding a baby just makes me go all mushy inside 😳 😳

thanks guys...just wanted to share some thoughts but could not expand sorry 😭

also a big thanks and salute to all of you who have come up with such great scenes... 👏

Ps sorry for any typos
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: dahi

hey guys I am not very creative but i have a scenario maybe one of you more talented could expand on it...
well it would be set when geet is preggy but like HUGE and staying with maan during this time and at her every move he will sweat bullets cause he has not had a woman in his care in such a situation...etc etc....we have all seen him in a reluctant knight in the shining armour role...but now I want to imagine and hopefully see him caring but ignorant to his reactions...it would be something of a treat

another thought (as i was typing this out) would be a scene of maan with geets child...either the first time he holds the baby on the day of it's birth or when he is playing with the baby/toddler...it may just be me but seeing a rough-tough guy holding a baby just makes me go all mushy inside 😳 😳



You are no doubt creative.. and these imaginations should be read by the CVs... wanna see them onscreen.. 😊😊👏👏 esp. Maan caring fr pregnnt Geet & him holding the baby for the first time..😊 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: rumi2004



You are no doubt creative.. and these imaginations should be read by the CVs... wanna see them onscreen.. 👏 esp. Maan caring fr pregnnt Geet & him holding the baby for the first time..😊


😳 😳 Thank you 😳 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow lovely maan and geet bhia behen hehhe i can't stop laughing
maan was so cute with snaghvi he actually poured watre to save her and also he was fultoo latoo on geet
pinky is damn clever ab dekte hain kaise kya hota hai
do continue dear
bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Another scene which would fit in perfectly after today's episode! I know he's the boss and all but try to imagine this! 😉

Geet is in her shocking pink attire that she had on today's episode and Maan has his waistcoat look! 😍

Geet is in Delhi looking for a job, she goes to "Something" Industries (business partners of Khuranas) to give a job interview. Incidentally Maan also had decided to visit the same place for a meeting.

This is going to be one heck of a long lift/elevator ride! 😆

Geet is going up to the highest floor, the lift has only a couple of people in it. Two of them are eyeing Geet *probably with not very good intentions* Geet is feeling conscious since she is new and doesn't know how to deal with such things. Her eyes are low and her palms are sweating and she's literally very scared. As she is leaning on the wall of the lift, she wishes she could just disappear into it so that no one would look at her!

Meanwhile Maan is waiting for the lift to come *with other half a dozen workers*

Geet gives another very frightened look to the two men. PING! The doors open at that very exact moment. Maan looks up as the door opens and instantly his eyes find Geet as if a force was pulling him towards her. He sees Geet looking behind her but faces forwards as lift doors open and is surprised to see Maan. Both have a quick very eye lock. Everyone starts filling the lift and the lift is full. Maan had to go stand near Geet as there were too many people who wanted to get into the lift, *isn't that a surprise 😆* also the reason why the lift is tightly packed. His body is slightly turned towards Geet though he isn't looking at her.

Geet again is very conscious as the two men are giving her even more bad looks, they have moved a little closer however due to Maan being in the way, they could not move fully next to Geet. *Thank God Geet thought* But Geet's discomfort doesn't go unnoticed. As Geet tries to move away from the two men*, she slightly bumps into Maan. Geet hasn't noticed this but Maan has. He is about to get angry at Geet when he sees her frightened face, her eyes first travel from the two men onto the floor. After seeing this, Maan slightly turns again to see the two men eyeing Geet and staring at her in a perverted way.

Maan feeling a little protective, gives a cold, hard stare to the two men. They look at Maan once scared but then go back to their antics! Maan is very annoyed by this point, so he decides to do something unexpected, something even he didn't think he would ever do. *Maneet music starts* He puts both his hands on either side of Geet's head & leans on the side of the lift towards Geet. And with this he also had to look at Geet, as soon as he sets his eyes on her, he gets lost in her beauty.

Geet looks up to meets Maan's gaze and is surprised as Maan's both hands are beside her head but quite far apart. She is relieved and thinks that whenever Maan is near her, don't know why but she feels protected. As if no negative force in the world could ever hurt her. 😳

Both Maan and Geet are lost into each others eyes.

Meanwhile the two pervy men have turned away as they understand that Geet is with Maan *or at least they think she is.* Maneet's close encounter is also noticed by the other workers in the lift. Everyone is staring at Maneet with smiles on their faces but are gossiping about the situation in the lift. Geet who had been staring at Maan with the same loving gaze as Maan, manages to break away first.

Feeling shy and embarrassed Geet lowers her eyes but is compelled to look up again as she hears people whispering, she looks around and sees that everyone is talking about her and Maan.

Geet feeling even more shy, quietly says Maanji...

PING! The lift doors open again and everyone evacuates the lift.
*Maneet music ends*
*Maan BG music plays*
Geet is still hesitant and says Maanji a little louder this time & manages to get Maan to stop looking at her in that way. 😳 Maan is a little startled as he looks around and sees that everyone has left. He is also embarrassed like Geet and is hesitating.

Finally he manages to clear his throat and quietly says, Mein chalta hoon *without any saru attitude* 😆

*Maan BG music ends*

Short version of Maneet music plays*
Geet who feels confused by the whole encounter, also follows Maan behind but as soon as both are outside the lift, they walk in different directions.
Later on at night, both think about the day's events and Maneet think about the lift scene again.
😳😳
Hope you guys like it! 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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just loved each words penned by you ,moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
pls
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@maybe-just: great scene! I think we'd make great addition to GEET's creative team! 😆

Imagine only Maaneet in the lift, and the lift gets stuck, and there's no way out!! Maaneet ek lift mein band ho, aur lift atak jaaye! 😆😉

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