CVs-Maaneet scenes for the future: UPDATED pg.31 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
The last line 😆
Wowwwwwww Yr writting is addictive ...........😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely yaar
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow how addictive.. you guyss rockkk yaar😃 ... hat of .. keep continue😳 .. just luv it 👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW all of theese ideas are so Amazingggg!!I loved the karva-chauth idea! wiked! 😍 can't wait to seeeee what's in store fo us all! :D.Dont want dev interfering betweeeen Maneet!
👏 ⭐️ A bigg Thanks for the Creative thoughts ⭐️ 👏
Edited by Priyaa. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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CV WHERE ARE YOU PEOPLE?? Such intense moments. THEY NEED TO BE SHOWN!!! OMG how dreamy. I can't get enough. I was melting and smiling away while reading these. So beautiful god damm! I can already imagine Maan's expressions and small grins 😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW.... Such Romantic Moments... Love it... AM in dreams now...

CVs...Learn form these wonderful moments....

Gosh.. I love it.. if it Happens ...Want to happen.....

Wonderful works guys.... Rocking...👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: bubblygal1711

WOW.... Such Romantic Moments... Love it... AM in dreams now...

CVs...Learn form these wonderful moments....

Gosh.. I love it.. if it Happens ...Want to happen.....

Wonderful works guys.... Rocking...👏



one question what do you guysmeans by CVs?............... cinevistas? geet kya cvs ka show hai ??
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barbie3143



one question what do you guysmeans by CVs?............... cinevistas? geet kya cvs ka show hai ??



i think that CVs mean creative visual/visualiser!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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^^ thanks dear .. he heh he he .. mein bhi na ..cinevistas pe hi aataki huyi hu he he
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Another scene suggestion:
It's in Delhi at Maan's house, Geet is living with Maan now.
Maan find out everything that has happened to Geet. Maan brings his step-brother Dev to meet Geet and show him the aftermath of what happened between him and Geet and all the consequences Geet had to suffer.
All are in a room, Maan is at a distance watching the showdown between Dev and Geet. Geet is furious with Dev, she blasts him left, right and center, screaming at him and accusing him of being a filthy cheating rat and telling him that he ruined her life. She's in full Dev hate mode and is insulting him for being so cheap. Dev tries to intervene to explain but no such luck.
Finally being sick of Geet saying all this crap to him, Dev gets angry and angrily shouts at Geet to shut up. Maan by this point gets alarmed. Dev threatens Geet and moves towards Geet in order to teach her a lesson. However just as Dev moves forward, Geet takes a step back and in that instance Maan steps in between Dev and Geet!
Geet is obviously a little frightened of Dev, so she grabs Maan's arm very tightly giving an indication to Maan that she's feeling afraid. Maan by Geet touch, looks down to the side, at his arm, then gives a little look to Geet realising what Geet is feeling. Maan loses it and in his angry young man mode, slowly looks up at Dev first with disgust then with rage, ready to rip his brother apart anytime he moves towards Geet.
Dev is mega angry too and is giving fuming looks to Geet, but comes back to his senses after seeing Maan inbetween him and Geet. *Dev and Maan eyelock (not like the one GM have 😆 its an anger one*
Maan isn't keen on Dev right now, so he threatens him, "Agar tum nay Geet kay paas aanay ke, ya uss ko kuch kehne ke himmat ke, toh mujh say bura aur koi nahi ho ga Dev, oh yeh mera vaada hai"
Dev is mega annoyed so he retaliates saying "lekin iss larki ko chup rehna ho ga, mein apni itni baseti bardasht nahi kar sakta, aur waise bhi jo yeh keh rehi hai woh..."
Maan cuts him off "woh bilkul sach hai. Itna toh mujhe bhi pata hai, sab kuch janta hoon tumharay karnamon kar baray mein. Chi, sharam aati hai tumhein apna bhai kehte huay. Mera nazaroon kay samnay say daffa ho jao iss say pehle kay mein kuch kar bhethoon."
Dev getting more angry, question's Maan "Aap kyun beech mein aarahein hain. Aur aapka aur iss ladki ka kya rishta hai?Main achhi tarah jaanti iski jaisi ladkiyoon ko. Bholi dikhti hain par hain kuch aur. Pehle isne meri izzat par kichad uchala, aur ab yeh aap ke saath rang-raliyaain..."
Maan holding Dev's collar-"Khabardaar agar shabd bhi aage bola toh. Abhi ke abhi jail mein dalwa doonga tumhein. Aur tum rishta janna chahte ho. Toh insaniyat naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai. Aur agar issay bhi tumhein santosh nahin (Maan bangs his hand on a window resulting in his bleeding hand, and goes fills Geet's maang with blood) ab ho gayi tasalli? Ab daffa ho jao yahaan se"
Dev is shocked and wants to say something but thinks better of it. *in his thoughts Dev thinks "Veerji, ab iss larka ko tabah karnay mein mujhe zaida waqt nahi lagay ga, badla toh mein iss say lay kar he rahoon ga, bay shak ab yeh aap ke patni kyun na ho" giving another hard look to Maneet, Dev leaves in a hurry.
Maneet's gaze follow Dev as he leaves and then Geet lets out a sigh of relief. She has tears in her eyes but still hasn't let go of Maan's arm. Maan turns slightly to see Geet distressed, instantly he mellows down and looks at Geet with concern. Geet also looks up and both look deep into each others eyes, feeling like nothing else exists other than just the two of them. Geet comes back to her senses and lowers her gaze, embrassed, Maan however takes a little longer to look away but then looks at Geet again and says "Geet tumhein darne ke koi zaroorat nahi, mein hoon tumharay saath, aur jab tak mein hoon, tumhein kuch bhi nahi hoonay doon ga, kabhi bhi nahi." Then slowly Maan moves his hand to Geet's cheeks and wipes away the tear. Geet looks up once again at Maan and feels overwhlemed by his concern towards her. Without giving it a second thought, Geet hugs Maan and holds onto him tightly, crying her heart out. Maan too puts his arms around her and consoles her. Both just stand there holding onto each other, not caring about the world.
*should be an epic scene if it happens, would look amazing😉😍*
Edited by maybe-just - 15 years ago

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