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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi,

This is for the first time I am writing something of this sort, but this Geet forum has compelled me to pen down my imagination 2. waiting for responses from all u guys.(do ignore spellin and grammar mistakes)

All the characters are same as that in Geet.

The past has became alive. Maan can remember everything that has happened with him so vividly, how he was ditched so badly in life by that woman that now he fears loving any other women. How naintara ditched him and changed the always happy Maan to a moron. No I cant take this any more, said Maan to himself.

In a fury, he stomped out of his outhouse, sat in his car, n drove. He had no idea where he would go, what he is up to, he is just not in his senses. It is raining so heavily. He is still tangled in his past. Little did he noticed that a truck was approaching him with such a speed, suddenly he comes back to his senses, n steers with all his might. He had hit a tree, he is bleeding, fortunately he hasn't got any major injuries. Maan looks up and sees the TAvveej on d passengers seat, all anguish lost. He steps out of his car and is walking g towards Geets house, thinking nothing but just Geet, the moments they had spent together, her eyes, her deadly locks, her beauty, her innocence. Maan is walking totally engrossed in Geets ideas. He pays little attention to how he is totally drenched, and bleeding. He just wants to see Geet, just look at her, wants to talk to her. Slowly he has come to Geet house. However the rain and his wounds have made him miserable, he is weak, feeling dizzy. He is nt even able to satnd on his feet.

With much difficulty, he presses Geets door bell. Geet, whos alone at home, is shocked to hear the bell ringing. She is scared, who can be at d door at this time. She is scared to open the door. She reaches d door fearing d unknown, tremble she asks kkkaun hai.. whaan'.

Geet its me, Maan!! comes a faint voice from other side. An instant relief comes on Geets face n she hurriedly opens d door. To her surprise, Maan just falls in Geets arm n sort of faints. A more intense panic comes on Geets face. She cries Maan.. aap theek to hai na??

Ye kyaa hua hai aapko, ye sab kaise huaa.

Maan is struggling to keep his eyes open. He just want to see Geet. Geet aap uthiye pehle yahan se, n she helps him to her bed. She closes the door and comes back to Maan. He tries saying something but his eyes just gets closed. Geet eyes are full of tears, she touches Maans face, n says Maan uthiye naa, Maan.

Are inhe to bahut tej bukhaar hai aur choote bhi lagin. I need to get a doctor.

Geet immediately dials to a doctor. Doctor arrives n tells Geet that Maan needs to get proper care for at least 12 hours. He dresses Maans wound n gives some medicine. With the doctor gone Geet rushes to Maan and says Maan aapko kucch nhin hoga,aapne aaj tak meri madad ki hai, aaj meri baari hai.Geet starts taking proper care of Maan. For the whole night, as prescribed by d doctor, she keeps on putting the thandi paati on Maans forehead.

The sudden light hurts Maans eyes. He wakes up and tries to gather where he was, he looks to his side and sees that Geet had faalen asleep on a chair, next to his bed. Her one hand was on Maans forhead. Immediately Maan remembers what happened the last night, he realizes that Geet has taken care of him for d whole night n hasn't slept for a moment. Her lovely locks were once again playing across her pretty face, the face tht has always captivated Maans sense. Maan has lost himself completely lookin at her. He was just about to touch her cute face, suddenly Geet yawned, bringing him back to his senses. Maan speaks to himself: MKS what the hell wre you up to, ye ladki bhi na, mujhe pagal kar ke hi chhodegi.

Geet has woken up by now. On seeing Maan wide awake, she says: arey aap uth gaye Maan, ab aapki tabiyat theek hai kaisi. Maan in his attitude says mujhe kya hua hai, I m fine, n im going now. Geet stands bilkul nhi the doctor has advised you to take proper rest and care. Maan stares at Geet lovingly, suddenly d trance breaks and he says, miss Geet I can very well take care of myself, and I DON'T NEED you.Geet is bewildered. She thinks 1 to mai raat bhar iski sewa karti rhi aur ye kharoos mujhe attitude de rha hai. Arghh. Chaddo mainu ki. Maan gets up to leave but suddenly he hold his head and says ahhh.. mera sir'

This was 2 much for Geet to take aap kahi nhi jaa rhe hai yahan se, n kyunki aap mere boss yha nhi hai, to ab mujhe aapki baat Maanne ki koi jarurat nhi hai. Hope that is clear to u Mr.MSK.

Listeninig this Maan smiles to himself and says: dekha Maan is ladki ko sir pe chadane ka nateeja, ab sun iske lecture😳.

Watching him lost in his thoughts Geet says doctor abhi aane hi wale hai ek baar wo keh de to aap jahan jana chahe aap jaa sakte hai. I wont stop you. Par abhi aap khi ni jaa rha hai. Geet goes to call the doctor. While Maan is lost again in her thoughts. The doctor arrives n checks Maan. Meanwhile Geet goes inside kitchen to bring tea for the doctor. Doc to Maan: manana parega aapki wife ko mr. khuraana, she has taken your care very well. Warna itni jaldi recuperatekarna is next to impossible. Abhi aap bilkul theek hai, but I advice you some more rest. Phir aisi wife hai aapki to that wouldn't be an issue, saying that the doctor smiles. Shockingly Maan too is smiling. Somehow Geet being his wife idea made him feel happy, n he didn't mind to correct d doctor. Doctor leaves. Geet comes in and serves Maan food, dekhiye koi nakhre nahi, chup chaap ise khaa lijiye. Listening this Maan drops any idea of arguing with Geet.

Geet says, aap khayiye tb tk main fresh ho leti hoo.

Maan gives hr a silent nod. Although he didn't want her to get away frm his sight but he had no other choice.suddenly Maan hears some voices coming from outside and he goes out of the house.

When he comes back he sees Geet in tears😭. He is panicked. He rushes to Geet, gently taps her and said Geet , Geet kya hua, tum theek to ho na. seeing Maan, Geet just hugs him tightly and says Maan aap kaha chale gaye they, aapko pata bhi hai mai kitni pareshan ho gayi thi aako yahan dekh kar, aap aisa kyu karte hai Maan, aako koi andaza bhi nahi hai ki main kitna dar gayi thi. Maan was too lost in her hug,hugged her back, he never wanted this moment to end, he wanted his Geet to be with him always, caring for him like no one else, yes somebody still cares for him , he isn't alone in da wrld, he too has someone in his life, Maan was hypnotized,but alas a screech of an outside vehicle woke them both up frpm their dreams(the same old DELHI problem he😆😆 he!😆😆!)

Maan wipes her tears and says Geet I m sorry(of course he didn't notice what he was saying coz Maan and sorry are poles apart). I wont do that again. Ab chup ho jaao.

He affectionately asks tumne kucch khaya, Geet moves her head in slightly in negation😳,. To pehle tum kucch khaaogi, then we ll talk, and this is my request not order😉. That brought the much needed smile on Geets face.

All of a sudden Maans phone rings, they have to come out from their dreamworld with the phone ringing, it was Maans dadi. Maan hello, Maan kahan hai aap jaldi aaiye humari tabiyat theek nhi hai.

Maan: dadi aap khabraiye nhi main aa rha hoo.

Maan: Geet I hav e to rush no\w, dadi ma needs me, tum khana jarur khaa lena, nd take care. I will come back, caying that Maan rushes out.

Suddenly Geet fstarts feelinf dizzy, no sleep and hunger has taken a toll onher and she falls down, bt Maan has gone. Geet lies there unconscious.

To be continued''..

Precap: Maans dadi was fakin to get back Maan to his home.

Hope u guys liked it'

Want to here all from u. do give ur reviews and press like if u liked it.

Edited by sarita21992 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks DEStiny!!
glad that u lykd it.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ sarita the name is Lekha
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Posted: 15 years ago
@sarita
gr8 work yaar...loved it...pls continue and pls pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago

WOW everyone i must sy it takes a lot of talent to write..... each and everyone of the scenes that i have read here makeme belive that they are actually happening!!!!

i suck at writing but i really want someone to creat a story out of this thought it would be very cute ( i think)
maan thinking of ways to make geet talk.... he gets the idea and calls her to his room to tell her to write something. and while she is writing he pertends that he out hurt. and right them geet comes to help him and notices that he had actually kept the rose she brought for him.
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Posted: 15 years ago
i thought i might aswel well give writing a chance. i hope you like this:

Everyone had a shocker of their life when they saw that MK or in other girls case DD was very early this morning. The person who had hardly ever shown up at the office came so early today. But no one had the guts to go ask MK, and even his closest employee Adi. Adi would just shake from head to toe at the thought of Maan. While everyone went back to doing their work Maan was still lost in Geets thoughts. He had stayed up so late last night just thinking of ways to get Geet to talk again. But nothing had worked right when Maan thought he had enough and he should go and say sorry to Geet. Geet walked by his cabin and just by looking at her Maan's child like brain that was closed up somewhere has managed to release itself and give Maan a plan. And with the plan making sense in his mind Maan put a huge smile on his face and picked up his phone to call Geet. Geet knowing that is was Maan who was calling her ignored the call and gave him a look saying "what makes you think that I will talk to you today" through the glass window. And Maan understood everything. He came to Geet's cabin the very next second.

Maan says "Geet come to my cabin, I have a dictation for you to write."

Hearing this Geet got up with her notebook and pen and went to Maan's cabin. When Geet settled herself in the seat Maan came smiling right behind her. He started his dictation and when he noticed that Geet was lost in writing he picked up the paper cutter and cut his finger. Not knowing that it would hurt so much Maan yelled

Maan – "ouch!"

Geet came running to his side and got hold of his singer to see his finger was oozing non stop blood. Not knowing what to do she simply just put his finger in her mouth and started to suck the blood to make it stop. And while Geet is doing this Maan is totally lost in her, and their very famous Mahii background music starts to play. Geet takes the finger out to see if it stopped bleeding and looks up at Maan and says.

Geet- "does it hurt really bad…. Don't worry it will get well soon."

Geet- "Maan, what is wrong with you now a day? How can you be so careless? Look how much blood is coming out."

And again she puts the finger in her mouth to suck the blood. When she noticed from the corner of her eye a hand coming up to her face. Maan traces Geet's face with his fingers which send shivers down Geet's back and says

Maan-"Maan…., you called me Maan. I like it when you can me Maan it feels very nice."

And then Maan and Geet have their eye lock. And this time Maan is the first one to come out of the eye lock. And like a very excited kid Maan says

Maan- "yes! Yesssss!!! I did it!!!!!!!! I won Geet I made you talk."

When Maan is trying to rub it in Geets face Geet stares at him and is totally memorised by his innocence and she thinks to her self how happy he looks and what a lovely smile Maan has. Why wouldn't he be like this all the time? And when Geet is about to leave she notices the Ross that she had brought for Maan. She goes and picks it up and asks Maan

Geet-"sir…. What's this?'

Maan-"ummm that's the rose….you brought"

Geet-"I heard you hate flowers then why did you keep this?"

Maan-"I use to hate them……not now!"

Geet couldn't believe her hears. And she quickly ran out the cabin. Turning before she left she gave Maan a big smile.

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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwwwww awesome scenes
dying to see all this in geet soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg Everyone who write something out here are just FABULOUS!!! I've been reading everything from the beginning, (when i get a chance - so basically when i'm not re-watching maneet scenes).. and omg all of you have written such a amazing scenes that i can completely see on maaneet.. hayyye !
i Have Got to give a special mention to:
averma4583
rumi2004
maybe-just
some wonderful work by u guys, and i'm sorry i havent mentioned anyone else! but i have to say keep writing to alll of you -along with awesome ideas the cv's of geet come up with.. damn, this an excellent way to create scenes which might not be shown (HOPEFULLY WILL) - and can be enjoyed in our imaginations at least ;)
love, Saz
xxxxxxx
(i'm still only on pg 22, so lemme read sum more and i'll commnt again :D)
Edited by Chotii - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowwwww.................loved d scenes speciallykarwa chauth n geet setting maan's collar............ 😳 😳 😳 i m dying 2 see these in d show
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SakshiGarg

wowwwww.................loved d scenes speciallykarwa chauth n geet setting maan's collar............ 😳 😳 😳 i m dying 2 see these in d show



where are these scenes??? plz mention the page no. if possible.. I'm dying to read them..😳

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