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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow! all these wonderful pieces of writing had given me the tempo to atleast try writing one scene for Maaneet !!

Let me try..

Maan needs to go to a business meet followed by a business dinner.. in Ahmedabad. And as obvious ..the only person he could think of ..to take along ..was Geet ! 😳( his Ms.Secretary!!) But back of the mind .. he kept thinking "Waise iss ladki ko saath le jaana ka matlabh hi hai mussibat ko daawat dena..aakhir isse humesha mere saamne hi mussibat mein padna hota jo hai " 😛😛
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Next morning in Khurana's Office:

Geet busy wrapping up some pending work of the previous day.. totally scared of what Maan would say this time when he finds her lagging in work.. .she thinks " Babaji.. abb kya karoon.. kal kitna saara kaam baaki reh gaya.. abhi woh khadoos Maan aate hi honge..itni jaldi kaise sab complete karoon.. aaj toh tum hi bacha sakte ho babaji.. koi toh karishma karo !"😕😕
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Maan enters the office in his usual killer style.. making all gals go dhakdhak n 'oh my gosh' !!! 😳😳He doesn't even reply to their gudmorning wishes.. and just dashes to his own cabin.. sees Sasha waiting outside his cabin.
Sasha: Good mornign MK!

Maan: Morning..(very arrogantly)kya main jaan sakta hoon yahan pe kyun khadi ho?

Sasha : woh Mk..
But maan stopped her mid-way of teh sentence..

Maan: "Jo bhi problem ho.. Adi ke saath discuss karke sort out karlo..sabke problems solve karne ka mujhe itna shoukh hota toh main boss nahi hota.."

Sasha was totally thrashed..and her expression changed.. as if she was hit right on her face!!!

Maan: "Now GO.... aur haan.. Geet ko mere cabin mein bhejo.. IMMEDIATELY! Mujhe usse kaam hai.."

Sasha thinks enviously " Jabse yeh hoshiarpur ki behenji aayi hai office mein.. MK ko sirf ussi se kaam hota hai..aur yeh Geet.. pata nahi isne abb tak resignatn kyun nahi di.. iski toh main..😡"

LAter on in Maan's office:


Geet :" aapne bulaya ,sir?"
MK: " Haan..tumhe aaj raat ko mere saath Ahmedabad chalna hai..kal wahaan humara ek imp. meeting & dinner hai.."
Geet :" Sir..main nahi jaa sakti.. agar main chali gayi toh mera bohot kaam pending reh jayega.. aur phir aap hi mujhe sunaoge (and kya pata mujhe company se nikaal bhi doge) "

MK: "Aur tumhe lagta hai agar tum mere saath nahi gayi toh main khush hoke tumhe inaam dunga???" ( Gives a verrry irritated ,angry look which makes Geet shudder)..

Seeing Geet unable to speak,he composes himself and continues " Aur haan.. yeh apne hoshiarpur brand salwar kameez matt pehen lena wahaan.. tum abb ek multinational company ke boss ki secretary ho.. SAMJHI ?!"

Geet :" Mujhe kuchh sumajh nahi aa raha hai..."😕

MK: " Ohh.. main toh bhool hi gaya thha..ki tum auraton ko ek baar mein koi baat sumajh hi nahi aati.. coz dimaag toh hota hi nahi tumlogo ke paas........😡." (Gives yet another haughty look ).." western outfit toh tum pehenogi nahi.. atleast koi decent si hi saree pehen lena.. ABB JAO .. GET READY."
( He is kindof embarassed himself .😳 😳.coz probably for the fist tym in his life.. he's suggesting a lady on ..what to wear😆 😆)

Geet : " But Sir.. maine kabhi..."

MK : " Tumne suna nahi maine kya kaha??.. JAO .. AND GET READY."

Geet comes out of the cabin..totally puzzled on what to do now.. ek toh itna kaam pada hai.. upar se Ahmedabad iss khadoos ke saath.. corporate dinner..koi idea bhi nahi hai..and above all.. SAREE!! .. "Yeh kahaan fass gayi main..maine toh kabhi saree peheni nahi hai.. aur mere paas ek bhi saree hai bhi nahi..kya karoon ????" 😕 😕 😕

Knowing that Maan would listen to no excuses she somehow finds a chance to slip out of the office with Pinky n manages to buy a very elegant red saree with simple silver embroidery..Pinky acts as a perfect frnd and she not only supplies Geet with the necessary accesories but also finishes up Geet's office works for her..
(Apparently these days even Pinky had started liking the Maaneet jodi and loved to watch them together..)😊 😊
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So Geet n Maan reach Ahmdbd and they r alloted adjacent rooms in the hotel. The business meeting and presentation went 'as planned' ..which leaves Maan in a pleasant ,satisfied mood. And Geet had made her part of contributions so nicely..which lead Maan to think " Kuchh toh baat hai iss ladki mein..jaisa maine socha thha.. usse kaheen aage hai yeh.. (smiles to himself).. good for her" .. 😲 ⭐️

Maan dresses himself up for the dinner that night..still quite satisfied by his performance in the meeting. As he proceeds towards Geet's room to ask if she's ready..he notices they are already late..
He knocks at her door.. twice.. and thrice.. "GEET... GEET..??"
After several such knockings Geet finally replied "Woh.. main.. please..thoda rukiye" 😕 😕 😕

MK waits for 15 more minutes...
Meanwhile Geet in struggling hard with her new saree..she doesnt have the slightest clue how to wear it..The fact that Maan was waiting outside swelling red with anger with every passing minute..made her even more nervous... "Nahi hoga mujhse" she thought.

Maan was infuriated by this delay..and finally decided to ask her for the last time. This time Maan (out of rage) knocked so hard that the door flew open..

*******Moments of silence...********
Maan's eyes had stopped blinking.. and Geet's mouth wide open in a combination of fear,shyness,shock etc etc.. 😲 😲 😕 😳 😳 😳

Maan soon realised it had not been a decent thing fr him to do..He quickly turns the other side..embarassed like never b4.. "Ms. Geet Handa.. aapko andaaza bhi hai hum kitne late hain? aur aap abhi bhi .."

Geet: " MAin kya karoon.. maine kehne ki koshish toh ki thhi..ki mujhe nahi aata pehen na.. parr aap bolne de tabb na ..mujhse nahi hoga..abb aap hi jaiye dinner pe " 😕

Maan ,who had dreamt of this dinner with Geet for the past 2 days,.. couldn't just let this chance go..

Maan : " Tumse koi bhi kaam thik se nahi hota na? "

Geet: " Agar aapko har cheez ka gyan hai toh aap hi pehena dijiye"

This time even she was infuriated and couldn't stop these words raging out of her mouth.. She hardly meant it.

Maan finding no other way out ..faces her "THIK HAI".. He heads towards her..takes the saree from her..
Geet : " Maan please.....yeh aap.....main toh " 😳 😳
Maan : "CHUP !.. ek shabd math kehna..mere chhunney se tumhari pavitrata bhang ho jayegi? daag lag jayega tumpe??"

Before Geet could protest any further, he neatly starts draping the saree on her, trying to avoid touching her ..but ... every other second his touches would make Geet shiver with shyness..her toes curled ..her eyes closed...she turns pink! 😳 😳 😳
Maan had never seen her this close..never seen someone soo beautiful.. For that one moment he had forgotten every thing else in the world.. every other person.. evry business..everything.. He tried hard to keep himself in senses and finished the task neatly.

Maan: " Abb baaki ka kaam toh tum khud kar sakti ho? ya uske liye bhi humesha ki tarah tumhe HELP chahiye?"

Abhi saree ko problem solve hua hi thha..ki nayi mussibat... Eye-liner!! As again Geet starts struggling with it.. and due to lack of practice smudges it her n thr near her eyes.. and is almost close to tears..

Maan: " Tum auratein bhi na.. woh kam karti hi kyun ho jo tumse hota na ho"

He snatches the bottle out of her hand..tenderly wipes the extraneous lines wth his hanky.. which makes Geet turn pink again...
Finally Maan says "Rehne do... tumhari aankhein bina make-up ke bhi waise achhi hi lagti hai" . They both cant help a looong eye-lock..😳 😳 😊

To be continued....


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Posted: 15 years ago
@averma
you are too good!!awesome..loved each dialogue and line dear...😃

@rumi
loved it btw...maan ko saari pehnane kaise aati hai?😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
To everyone: Thanks so much for all your comments. Happy to know you've liked the figments of my imagination so far!

@rumi2004: God, it's tooo hilarious. Mere ko bhi saree pehenne nahin aati, par ek kharoos woman-hating ladke ko pata hai!!! 😆🤣LOL Your post reminded me of the comedy posts that Chullbulli does. Both of you crack me up!!!! Good work! Somehow thinking that Maan gives Geet a beauty complimnet without sarcasm just gets me giggling thinking of the tough glares he gives her!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_chilly


@rumi
loved it btw...maan ko saari pehnane kaise aati hai?😆



Hahahaha.. Maan ne seekh liya hoga kaheen se.. kya pata someday one of his PLANS may require him wearing one !!! LOL 😆 😆
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"Finally Maan says "Rehne do... tumhari aankhein bina make-up ke bhi waise achhi hi lagti hai" . They both cant help a looong eye-lock..😳 😳 😊 " hai hai!! soo cute! i loved the dialog between geet and maan..and maan's inner dialog😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
This is especially dedicated to Salma, who has been asking me for the update for two days 😆 and also for those who enjoy reading my writing 😉
Continuation of Confrontation & Revelation : Geet - Dev - Maan on Pg 17.

Last paragraph from the last update: With that Maan slammed the phone down, grabbed Geet's hand and walked out into the office. Everyone started murmuring and staring at Maan holding Geet's hand. Geet too didn't know what was going on. Maan just pulled Geet along with him to his car.

Carrying on now:

Geet was baffled. She had never seen Maan so angry before, it scared her a little but also she felt protected. For this she was lost for words. As they were walking really fast out of the office, Geet had unexpectedly taken a wrong step and twisted her ankle. She had to stop even with Maan pulling her.

Geet: Ouch.

In a sudden movement Maan turned around to see a hurt Geet, she has tears in her eyes. Maan who was still holding onto her hand, was shocked. Meri wajah say Geet ko chot, thought Maan, he couldn't bear the thought of hurting Geet. So he quickly acted. The anger that Geet saw on his face earlier had totally vanished.

Panicked Maan: Geet tum theek toh ho na? Geet kya hua tumhein? Mujhe batao.

Dazed Geet: Woh mein...meri paire bahut dard kar raha hai, woh mera...ouch.

Maan gave one look to Geet, then let go of her hand, and bent down on his knees.

Maan: Dekhao mujhe.

Geet: Nahi sir, aap yeh kya kar rehe hain? Hum abhi office mein hain, koi dekh lay ga. I'm fine. Bas thora dard ho raha hai.

Maan: Geet mainay tum say pocha nahi hai, meinay tumhein order diya hai.

And with that Maan gently grabbed Geet's ankle and started to examine. In that while Geet who had no idea that Maan was going to do that lost her balance and grabbed Maan's shoulders to keep her balance, Maan looks at Geet's hand on his shoulder and then looks up at Geet. *Maneet Music plays and Maneet EYELOCK*

After a while Maneet come out of their close moment. Both feeling slighty stunned and flustered. Maan gently touched Geet's ankle trying to see what was wrong. On his touch Geet suddenly felt a shiver down her spine. It wasn't a shiver when you feel cold, it was something which made Geet feel warm and tingly. Her heartbeat picked up, sending a rush of blood around the whole body. This made her cheeks pink. Slowly Maan stood up, he saw that Geet's cheeks were pink, it made him smile inside that she was blushing. Geet was feeling more shy as she knew Maan could see her face change colour, but even more conscious as her hands were still on Maan's shoulders. She quickly took them off and lowered her eyes. Maan had no words, as he could not believe that this beautiful angel was standing in front of him. Abruptly he looked away and asked Geet if she could walk.

Geet: Jee, main theek hoon.

But as soon as they started walking Geet was really struggling. Although she didn't say anything, the pain was evident on her face.

Maan understanding this, in the spur of the moment, picked Geet up. This was a huge shock for Geet. She looked at him bewildered and amazed.

Geet: Sir, aap ye...mein...office mein?

Geet was stammering, she was feeling a thousand butterflies in her stomach, the feeling being in sheer bliss was present but she didn't want to show her expressions.

Annoyed Maan: Chup. Miss Geet Handa, agar tumhein yaad nahi, toh mein tumhein bata doon kay tumharay paon mein chot lagi hai, aur agar tum chalo gee, toh hum ghar kal tak nahi pohanchay gay. Ab meray paas aur koi rasta bhi nahi hai.

Maan turned his tone down a little: Aur waise bhi, tumhari har responsibility ab meri hai, aur mein nahi chata kay tumhein kuch bhi ho.

Geet gives him a look of sheer admiration, its as if the void she had felt in her heart for so long, had finally been filled.

Maan walks with Geet in his strong arms to the exit. Geet was in a state of trance, keeping her eyes fixed on Maan, whereas Maan would steal little glimpses of Geet whenever he could.

As they reached his Jeep, Maan laid Geet on the passenger seat and told her to put her seat belt on. Then he walked over to the driver's side and sat in his seat.

-----------Khurana Mansion------------

Dev was worried. He knew Maan was furious with him. He wondered what Geet had told him so far about him and Geet. He was also worried that Naintara might find out about Geet being here. He didn't think all this would happen, the plan was simple then how did it go wrong?

Geet's ankle was feeling better now that she had a rest whilst Maan was driving. Upon seeing the Khurana Mansion Geet was amazed, it was so huge, it this Maan's house? Is this Dev's house? she thought. Maan told her to let's go and with that he grabbed her hand again and walked towards the house.

As they entered the house Maan let go of Geet's hand and started shouting.

Maan: DADIMA. DEV. NAINTARA. KAHAN HO SAB? ABHI ISI WAQT BAHIR AAO.

Maan's orders echoed throughout the whole house. Hearing Maan shout so loud every single person, from every servant to every member of the family came out. They could hear the anger in his voice. Maan angrily dismissed all the servants, only Dev, Dadima, Naintara, Kamya, Dev's mother were left. Both Dev & Naintara were scared, Naintara was shocked seeing Geet with Maan. Dadima was oblivious to the whole charade as she had no idea what was going on. Maan walks up to Dev and gives him a tight slap. Everyone is shocked & Dadima is startled.

Furious Maan: Toh Dev, tum Dadima ko batana chaho gay? Ya mein bataon?

Dumbstruck & insulted Dev: Bhai woh mein'

Maan: Kya hua Dev? Itni jaldi bhool gaye? *sends a poisnous look towards Dev* Mainay toh kabhi socha bhi nahi tha kay mera bhai aisa ho ga. Tum nay aisa kyun kiya? Kya majboori thi tumhari kay tum nay Geet kay saath aisa kiya?

Dadima: Maan beta, kya hua, aap itna kyun chila rehay hain? Humein bhi toh batayen kay hua kya hai?

Dev: Dadi kuch nahii'

Maan cutting Dev off: Kuch nahi hua? Kuch bhi nahi hua Dev? Kyun Dev? Sharam aa rehi hai ab? Tum iss larki ke zindagi barbaad kar kay, isse chor kar chalay gaye, tab tumhein sharam nahi aaye?

Geet looks on in tears while Maan tells Geet's story to Dadima. After he finishes, no one speaks, only Geet's quiet weeping was heard.

Dadima: Dev kya ye sach hai? Kya aap nay'lekin Naintara ka kya? Kya aap aisa kaise kar saktay ho Dev? Humaray paas aur koi shabd nahi hain, hum'

Dev who had had enough couldn't hold it in anymore. He suddenly burst out.

Dev: HAAN. Haan mainay Geet say jhooti shaadi ka natak kiya, haan mainay ye sab sirf uss ke zameen aur uss kay zevaraat laynay kay liya kiya. Haan mainay diya hai dhoka Geet ko. Toh kya hua? Meinay aisa kya galat kaam kiya? Agar bhai nay pehle meri madat kar de hoti toh mein yeh kabhi nahi karti, kabhi mein yeh rasta nahi leta. Lekin meri bhi majboori thi, mujhe apnay karzay chukanay thay aur meri paas bas yehi rasta tha, jo mein nay apnaya! Iss liye mujhe ye rasta abhi bhi sahi lagta hai.

Maan: DEV! *this echoes loudly* Maan gives another tight slap to Dev this time which echoes throughout. Everyone is shocked again.

Maan: Tumhari issi soch ke wajah say toh aaj tak mein tum say door raha, meinay itna chaha kay tum sudhar jao, lekin tum! Tumharay har kalay kaam ke khabar hai mujhe, har baar meinay tumhein maaf kiya, har baar meinay tumhara saath diya chahay who dair say kyun na ho, lekin tum nay apnay bhai ko kya diya? Dhuk? Dard? Tum apni sari hadein par kar chukay ho.

Dev scoffs at this, Naintara joins him at his side.

Dev: Bhai, aap itna ghusa ho rahay ho, woh bhi iss larki ke liye, ye sab toh ek khel tha. Jo hua wo ho gaya, ab beeti hui baatoon ka kya faida?

Naintara: Jee chotay saab, ab Dev mein iss ke koi galti nahi hai, unhein toh sirf paisoon ke zaroorat thi aur humein ek opportunity mili jis ko hum nay apnaya. Ab yeh Geet ke problem hai kay who kaisay apni zindagi ko sambhalti hai.

Maan is furious by this point. Angrily he points a finger at Naintara: Tumhein beech mein bolnay ke koi zaroorat nahi, yeh do bhaiyon ka mamla hai. Aur waise bhi tum jaise giri hui aurat say mein baat bhi nahi karna chata, che, apni pati ko aisay kaam mein saath dey who iss liyak bhi nahi kay uss ko koi kissi ke patni kahay.

Dev who could not take Maan insulting Naintara, grabs his collar.

Dev: Bhai, abhi hadh mein nahi aap par kar rehin hain. Naintara kay baaray mein main kuch galat nahi sun sakta. Aap abhi issi waqt Naintara say maafi mangein warna?

Maan also grabs Dev collar and threatens him: Nahi toh kya kar lo gay tum? Haan? Kya kar saktay ho.

Dev in fury punches Maan. Big mistake, this was the last straw for Maan, he had never expected his little brother to hit him, in rage Maan punches Dev back and a fight ensues. Everyone seeing this is shocked. They had never expected all hell to break loose today. Maan gives Dev a bleeding nose, and a black eye Dev is angered so he punches Maan in the gut. Both again grab each other again & are about to punch each other when Geet intervenes.

Geet: BAS! *echoes*

Both Maan and Dev stop immediately. Geet was infuriated. She knew she had to be strong and this was the time. She walks up to Dev, and spits her words at him like acid.

Geet: Bas bahot ho gaya. Tang aa gaye hoon tumharay iss khel say. Tum nay mera istimaal kiya, apnay faiday kay liye meri zindagi kharab kar de. Tumhari wajan say mujhe meray parivaar nay mujhe doshi theraya. Nafrat hai tumse mujhe, nafrat karti hoon mein tumhari iss gandi soch say. Agar Maan nahi hotay toh mein bhi yahan nahi hoti. Tumhari wajah say meray bhai nay mujhe marnay ke koshish ke, mein dar dar ke dhokerein kar yahan tak pohanchi aur kismat dekho kay mein tum se mili. Kya laga tha tumhein? Kay Geet ek seedhi sadhi larki hai, jis ko tum dhokay dee kar chalay jao gay aur who kuch nahi karay ge? Tumhein toh mein kabhi maaf nahi karungee, tab tak mujhe chein nahi milay ga jab tak tum jail ke salakhoon kay peachy na ho. Mein apna badla lay kar rehoon gee.

Dev smirks at her comments. Mocking Geet Dev answers.

Dev: Zindagi barbaad? Tumhara dimaag toh kharab nahi hogaya? Meinay sirf tumhari zameen lee hai tumse, Bas. Kya sochti ho tum? Haan? Kay tum mujhe kuch kaho gee aur mein maan jaon ga?. Chalo batao he do, aisa hua kya hai kay tumhari zindagi kharab ho gaye hai?

Geet: Maa banay wali hoon mein tumharay bachay ke. *echoes loudly throughout the hall*

Everyone present is shocked except for Naintara & Maan as they already knew. A bombshell drops on Dev, he had no clue of this and gets dumbstruck again. *flashback of D&G's intimate night*

Geet: Kyun? Kya hua Dev? Ab tumharay paas kehne ko kuch nahi? Kya tum yeh bhi kaho gay kay ye tumhara bacha nahi hai? Kay tum nay uss raat' Khair, choro. Mein itni kamzoor nahi jitna tum mujhe samhajte ho. Mujhe sirf tum say badla laina hai. Mein tumhein abhi kehti hoon kay tumhara iss bache par kabhi bhi koi adikaar nahi ho ga. Tumhein sirf adikaar milay ga, toh who sirf mera gunagaar honay ka milay ga.

With that, Geet kicks Dev in the nuts. The pain of it brings Dev to his knees.

Geet walks away but stops midway and says

Geet: Tum isi layak ho. Mein police station ja rehi hoon. I'll see you behind bars Mr. Dev Khurana.

Naintara in rage, goes after Geet to stop her, but before she reaches Geet, Maan steps in between.

Maan: Uss kay paas janay ke himat bhi mat karna, warna anjaam bohat bura ho ga!

Geet turns around at this point and is overwhelmed by seeing Maan defend her.

Naintara angry but also amused says: Oh, Mr Maan Singh Khurana, toh bataye mujhe kay anjaam kya ho ga? Waise ap Geet ke itni side kyun le rehay hain? Kya rishta hai aap ka Geet say?

Maan is caught off guard with this question.

Angry Maan: Insaniyat ka rishta hai mera Geet say. Tumhari tarah har koi insaan dhokaybaaz nahi hota.

Naintara: Oh, insaniyat. *laughs* Lekin aik parai larki ke liye aap apnay chotay bhai say lar paray. Apnay uss bhai ko jis ko aap nay hamesha chaha hai. Kon hai Geet aap ke? Insaniyat ka rishta keh kar toh koi kuch bhi kar lay, lekin aap kyun itna Geet ka saath de rahein hain? Kya aap aur who'

Maan: BAS NAINTARA. Iss say aagay aur kuch mat bolna. Tum janna chati ho na kay Geet aur mera rishta kya hai? Toh mein tumhein bata hoon. Geet meri honay wali patni hai. Mein uss say shaadi karnay wala hoon. *echoes*

Everyone is stunned. Geet who had been listening to this conversation is mega stunned.

Dadima: Maan ye aap kya keh rehein hain? yeh sab'

Maan holds up one hand to stop Dadi from saying anything further.

Maan: Dadi, ye mera aakhri faisala hai. Aur waise bhi apnay chotay bhai ke galti ko sudharna mera farz hai. Dev ke wajah say Geet aaj iss halat mein hai, meinay dekha hai uss ka dard, uss ka dukh, aur mein ye sehan nahi kar sakti ke yeh sab meri bhai ke wajah say hua hai.

Maan: Aur Naintara, jis din Geet is ghar mein aaye gee, uss din say Dev aur tumharay liye iss ghar kar saray darwazay band ho jayen ge. Mujhe nahi chahiye aisa dhokaybaaz bhai, jo logon ke zindagi barbaad kar kay unhein musitbat mein chor kar chala jaye.

Maan to Dev: Mein nahi janta tha kay tum itni ghir saktay ho Dev, har bar, har bar meinay tumhein maaf kiya, har baar tumhari bhool samhaj kar tumhein maaf kiya. lekin iss dhokay kay liye mein tumhein kabhi maaf nahi karunga. Mar chuka ho tum meray liye aaj say. NIKAL JAO MERAY GHAR SAY, ABHI ISSI WAQT.

Dadima tries to stop Maan but Maan tells her that his decision is final, he cannot tolerate Dev being in the same house as him. Insulted, Dev and Naintara leave, but not before Naintara threatens Geet.

Naintara: Tumhari wajah say meray pati ko itni baisati uthani pari, iss kay liye toh tumhein sazza zaroor milay gee.

Geet who is still stunned, looks at Maan, Maan also looks towards Geet. Both have confused expressions. What did just happen?

To be continued'

*phew* Dang. This was really hard to write, there was a lot of hindi used and since I don't speak the language and suck at it, it was just impossible for me! 😆 Sorry for any spelling mistakes guys, I literally pronounce each words so some words may be a bit odd, now waiting for your feedback! 😃 Enjoy! 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow def loved it im lookin forward to the next post plz post it soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome Faz!!! Great update!!

"With that, Geet kicks Dev in the nuts. The pain of it brings Dev to his knees." 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

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Posted: 15 years ago

FINALLY 😆 FAZ. loved everybit of it. so well worth the wait and thanks for the dedication😉.

whilst reading this i could imagine maan and geet there😆. all of the scenes wer mindblowing especially the ankle bit and the fighting bit. and geets kick was well placed😆 i could totally imagine maan saying those things😆
So now i am eagerly waitin for moreeeee😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Oh Faz............the update is wonderful. I just hoped it would happen in the show like this toooo, it would be awesome 👏

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Ineffable - Maaneet FF - Chapter 22 page 28 - 9/12/24 Ineffable - Maaneet FF - Chapter 22 page 28 - 9/12/24

Hi, so I'm bringing you all a new story because Bekhudi is nearing its end. Thank you my loyal readers for giving love to my previous ffs. I...

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Posted by: tellyme

1 years ago

Maaneet FF- Love Echoes Beyond Dimensions -Chapter 2 Pg 10 Jun 25

Dear All, No, no no... No idea of starting it in near future. Just wanted to book this title as I have an overall idea of the story. These days...

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Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Maaneet New SS -Dosti ya Pyaar Thread 2-Part 62 page 40 24/6/25

Prologue Zindagi ke kuch faisle hum lete hai or kuch yeh zindagi humse karvati hai.. kabhi hass ke to kabhi is dil pe pathar rakh kar!! but is...

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Posted by: WaveTeal

1 years ago

LOVEHOLIC * Maaneet FF * 🔺UPDATED CH 24 @ Page 88 || 5th April

Hello, 🤗 Depending upon the response this story will either remain here or moved to wattpad / blog with password protection. Now Let's dive...

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