CVs-Maaneet scenes for the future: UPDATED pg.31

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Faz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: averma4583
Hmm, maybe when she initially started, she called him Sir. And Maan found it weird, so he told her it was ok if she called him Maan, as he was used to her addressing him like that!

And Sasha hearing Geet calling him Maan will get double jealous!

That'd be even better! I think we are in Sasha torture mode 😆😆

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@Hot_Indo_Chilly

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: maybe-just

That'd be even better! I think we are in Sasha torture mode 😆😆

Like you said great minds think alike (Sasha torturing!)!😆
I think Pinky is quite clever! Notice how she gets Geet to agree to come stay with her. And I think Adi will help her once she tells him that "Boss Geet ko like karte hain!" He seems like a nice guy, and Maan is actually nice with him (sans attitude).

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Faz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: averma4583

Like you said great minds think alike (Sasha torturing!)!😆
I think Pinky is quite clever! Notice how she gets Geet to agree to come stay with her. And I think Adi will help her once she tells him that "Boss Geet ko like karte hain!" He seems like a nice guy, and Maan is actually nice with him (sans attitude).

😆 Hmmm...seems that way. About Maan and Adi, well it looked like a dostana moment with that small bump/hug yesterday 😆 Well if Adi helps Pinky with the Maneet situation that'd be a really good angle to explore both their characters! 😛

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Faz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

Okay another office scene: Meeting with the Boss!

It's Geet's second day in the office. Everyone is amused by Geet's clothes *idiots,🤢 at least she is modest and not running around half naked 😆* Geet's first day at the office had been hectic and a bit confusing, she couldn't meet her boss "MK" due to his meeting and it took her half a day to get the hang of things. But finally towards the end of the day she did and she was proud of herself.

Geet's second day started off a bit weird, she felt warm and protected, the same feeling she gets when Maan is around. *flashback of Maan saving her, from drowning, from getting run over in amritsar and from Brij* She snapped herself out of thoughts and got back to work. She had more than a couple of files that she had to sort out and check.

Maan decides to come to the office today and as soon as he's outside the building the alarm goes off. Everyone starts running, Geet who after hearing the alarm is confused, starts panicking, she thinks something big has happened and starts to walk into the direction where Maan is coming from. Maan is on the phone busy talking whilst they both are nearing each other...

Maan looks up to see a girl coming towards him, he thinks he may have seen her somewhere before but cant remember where?

Geet has loads of files and is in a hurry, she thinks that the alarm is too loud therefore keeps her head down and her eyes slightly shut! Suddenly Geet trips sending all her file papers flying around and, before she could fall to the ground, Maan quickly runs in and catches her. She falls in his arms and their eyes meet. Both Maan and Geet are shocked to see each other again *flashback of Maan catching Geet when she tripped previously*

Maan & Geet were so absorbed into each other's eyes, that they failed to notice the crowd that was gathering near them. Everyone was surprised to see MK like this, staring deep into a girl's eyes, and without anger, there was nothing but plain adoration in his eyes and on his face. Geet too had a similar look on her face but a little confused.

Sasha was burning with jealousy, her face went dark with envy. She decided she couldn't take it anymore, watching Maan hold someone else so she cleared her throat loudly and called out MK.

Maneet didn't respond..."MK SIR"

Maneet broke out of their trance, both embrassed at this incident, as Geet got out of Maan's strong arms, Maan and Geet both said "TUM" & AAP" at the same time, everyone in the office was surprised more to see that Maneet knew each other.

Adi decides to intervene, stammering he tells Sir that Geet is his new PA. Maan is even more shocked. Maan gives Geet another look but this time Geet cant figure out what that look was for? In his attiude wala way, Maan tells Adi to follow him, which means Sasha and Geet also need to follow him. Everyone decides to scatter and Pinky runs up to Geet and tells her that Maan is MK Sir and that she needs to go now. But before Geet leaves Pinky says oh haan, I also want to know how you and Maan sir know each other from before? Geet seems upset, and is a little reluctant, she makes an excuse and leaves.

In Maan's cabin, Maan is sitting in his chair, flapping the papers in the file, then he slams them file on his desk in anger, Adi gets scared even Sasha is a little shocked. Maan stand up, looks at Geet and tells the others to leave, he needs to talk to Geet about something important. Sasha feeling a bit suspicious, says but MK we're all your trusted employees, you can say whatever you want in front of us. Maan feeling a little annoyed gives Sasha one look and she shuts up. She says alright and in anger and jealously, storms out. Adi follows behind her and only Geet and Maan are left. Geet is feeling concious whereas Maan is looking right at Geet angrily!

*to be continued* Actaully I'm too tired to write anything! 🥱 I can hardly keep my eyes open!

Edited by maybe-just - 15 years ago

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simran

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

a shortt suggestion from me.:)

enjoyyyy

Geet is feeling really tired and is waiting for maan to come home from office. She gets really worriied since he hasnt come home yet and its past 8:00pm , she wonders to herself why she cares about him so mmuch however she doesnt find a answer. She tries to call maan but sasha picks up and tells her that he is busy in a meeting and she yells at geet for calling maan. She tells geet to back off and that maan only loves her (sasha). Geet gets really upset and starts crying and cuts the phone. After a hour, the door bell fianlly rings geet doesnt hear it as she is sitting in a cornor and cryiing...

maan gets worriied and then he suddenly realizes that he has his keys... then all of a suuudeenn he opens the door and geet is shocked to see him. She is about to get up when maan suddenly comes to her and holds her by the shoulder and asks her if she is okay. Geet doesnt say anything and just cries, maan gets woooriied and yells at geet, then she faintss in his armsss.

Maan carries geet to his room and places her on the bed carefully. he then is about to call the doctor when suddenly geet starts to talk in her sleep saying that , maan aap meri kabhi nahi ho sakte kyun ki aap to sasha si pyar karte ho. all off a sudden maan is shocked to hear that . Geet wakes up and sees maaan and she huugssss him so tightly she criiess her heart out to maan. and maan tells her that he only loves her and will always onlyy love her no matter what. Geet stops crying and thouches maan's face she admires him. he holds her hand and kissses it.

gosh i can imagin this happening guyzz:)

enjooy

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@Hot_Indo_Chilly

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

Hi Faz,

Nice new tripping encounter scene! I can't believe that you got me started at 9 am imagining about Maaneet! That too at work! It took so much of my will power to concentrate on work! lol 😆

Continue the scene quick! I hate when ppl leave me on cliff hangers!

Munda Maan ab kyun naraaz hai Geet se! 😕 Jaldi jaldi batao! Meri neend ud gayi hai

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@Hot_Indo_Chilly

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Posted: 15 years ago

#97

A scene that comes to mind after today's episode.

So Geet has been working for like a month or two now. And Maan has a hard time keeping things professional with her 😆, and he frustrated at himself why he is not able to! 🤣Plus he's aggravated at the fact that Adi is becoming over-friendly with Geet.😆

One day in the morning Geet & Pinky are together when Adi comes and tells them about watching a movie after work. Geet is reluctant, but Pinky insists! Just then Maan comes and everyone disperses.

After the meeting in Maan's room, as Geet leaves Adi reminds her about the movie-"Geet bhuliyega mat, aaj shaam ki movie"

Maan gets shocked😲😡

In the late afternoon, Maan piles up tones of work on Geet. Poor Geet is buried in her work. At 5 p.m when Adi comes, he sees her piled up with work. So he ends up going with Pinky (Waah Maan ji! Pinky ki bhi setting kara di!). Maan is watching all this from his glass partition!🤣😉

In the evening, Maan calls Geet to come have dinner in his office. He took the liberty of ordering sushi! He notices that Geet is miserable with sushi. So he decides to do something else.

Maan authoratively-"Chalo"

Geet puzzled-"Kahaan"

Maan-"Khaana khaane ke liye"

Geet even more baffled-"Toh yeh kya hai?"

Maan-"Mujhe asli khaana khaana hai" and he starts to walk. He realizes that Geet hasn't budged.

Maan-"Ab tumhe kya invitation card chahiye?"

Geet-"Nahin woh files khatm nahin huyi" Then Maan realizes he gave her loads of work to do to prevent her from going to the movies. 🤣😆

Maan damage controlling-"Kam se kam half hua?"

Geet-"Haan kareeb aadha ho gaya"

Maan-"Theek hai. Baanki kal kar lena"

Geet then catches up with him as she doesn't want to be alone.

Maan knows the Punjabi spirit well 😃. He decides to do something hatke, and drives his car into Murthal, Haryana. The dhabas there are fabulous!😃😛

Geet is pleasantly surprised at Maan's choice 😊. Maan gets happy (though no display of emotions!) knowing that Geet is happy. 😳

After dinner, Maan drives Geet home.
On the way home, it's a long drive, and Maaneet are quiet. He tells her to check the CD case, and take anything she likes so he'll play it or turn on the radio because monotony while driving can be dangerous. Geet is unable to find anything.
So Maan turns the radio on "dil kyaa kare jab kisee se, kisee ko pyaar ho jaaye jaane kahaa kab kisee ko, kisee se pyaar ho jaaye" 😳❤️

Maaneet then look at each other and a cute simple eyelock happens. 😍
Both mesmerize each other. Slowly Geet realizes, and lowers her gaze. 😳
This in turn makes Maan conscious, and he too looks away. ☺️
He's flustered at himself why he keeps doing that at Geet! 😆

However Maan continues watching Geet from the corner of his eyes as he drives.
Geet too has given one or two looks at Maan and thinks how Maan has always helps her somewhere somehow.

Edited by averma4583 - 15 years ago

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@Hot_Indo_Chilly

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Posted: 15 years ago

#98

A much awaited Maaneet confrontation where Maan finds out about Channi! Esp for you Faz! Part 1

Gur has come to Delhi to meet Geet. He first goes to the address that Mahinder gave of Manchanda. After a brief 5 mins with Manchanda, Gur heads off to Khurana's where Geet works. Also today Adi is coming after lunch as he had something urgent to do in the morning.

It's lunch time, and everyone is passing by. Gur asks for Geet at the reception, and tells the receptionist to give his name and say it's urgent.

Geet receives the receptionist's call, and hurries to the reception and is pleased to see a familiar face. She has moist eyes, and greets Gur with warmth. Gur explains her the purpose of his coming, and tells her she needs to go back. Geet disagrees-"Main wahaan wapas nahin jaa sakti Guru. Ab mera koi naata nahin wahaan se. Mere saare rishte toot chuke hain"

Gurvinder calmly explains to her how important her testimony is-"Dekh Geet, tujhe iss mukaam par dekhkar bahut khushi hai mujhe. Par agar yeh gawaai nahin huyi humari saari mehnat bekaar jaayegi. Kya tu chahti hai jo tere ya Channi ke saath hua phir ho kisi aur ke saath? Kyunki agar tune gawaai nahin di toh Brij phir se rihaa ho jaayega. Aur yeh toh court ka phaisla hai Geet. Issay toh maanna hi hoga". Saying this, he gives Geet the court orders which demands her to be present.

Just then Maan is coming towards reception and he sees Gurvinder giving Geet the letter. He gives Geet a stern look and says with a mean attitude ignoring Gurvinder-"Woh London project file ke saare papers taiyaar hain. Oh tumhe love letters se phursat kahaan jo apne kaam par dhyaan do"

Gurvinder looks at Geet who's wordless and has tears brimming in her eyes; and Maan starts walking off.

Gurvinder gets really pissed and blasts Maan-"Rukiye zaara aap. Jaa kahaan rahe hain" Maan turns around seeing Gurvinder with a look that says 'How dare you have the audacity to question me'

Gurvinder holding the court papers in the air-"Yeh court ke papers hain, koi love letter nahin. Aadesh hai court ka Geet ko gawaai dene ke liye Brij ke khilaaf."

Maan is shocked. He was so sure of himself. The intensity in his eyes slowly start to decrease.

Gurvinder continues, as he is really mad at Geet's insult because Geet was a good friend of his and Channi's-"Brij ke khilaaf do cases darz hain. Ek toh Geet par attempted murder ka, aur doosra meri Channi aur mere ajaname bacche ke mauton ki"

Maan is just more stunned. He slowly manages to say-"Channi?"

Gurvinder who's just plain livid-"Haan Channi. Meri biwi. Geet ki saheli"

Maan is just ashamed of himself and his eyes lower down as Gurvinder rants on-"Geet ne meri jaan bachaane ke liye mujhe apne hi ghar mein chhupaya tha yeh soch kar ki Brij khud apne ghar ki talaashi kabhi nahin lega. Aur uss din Brij ko shak ho gaya tha jis din aapne mujhe apni gaadi se shehar ke bahaar tak chhor aaye."

Gurvinder recalling Maan's good deed softens a little-"Dekhiye, aapne meri jaan uss din bachayi thi. Main aapka shukr guzaar hoon. Par iska yeh matlab nahin ki aap kisi ke baare mein kuch bhi bol dein woh bhi bina kuch jaane"

Geet looks at Maan with a hard glare saying basically 'God you're so stupid Maan. No wonder I despise you so much sometimes'. Geet turns towards Gurvinder taking the court papers-"Theek hai Guru. Main leave ki application likhti hoon. Court ke phaisle ko sabhi ko maanna hota hai". Saying this Geet gives one defiant look at Maan who's crestfallen and heads out to her cabin.

Gurvinder goes to Maan and says-"Dekhiye aap ko nahin pata Geet ke saath kya kya hua hai. Bahut himmatwaali hai woh. Agar koi aur hota toh pata nahin kya karta" Saying this, Gurvinder leaves. Maan though he wants to stop Gurvinder finds himself unable to as his voice is clumped up.

Maan Singh Khurana who would once hold his head high up with pride, today finds himself completely dejected, and feels ashamed of himself. He gets the flashback of when Geet tells him 'Aap mein bhale mujhse taakat zyada hogi, par aapka dimaag mujhse kamzor hai. Aur aapki soch ussay bhi chhoti'. Today Geet had proved it to him that indeed what she had said was true. She had shown him his place.

Maan didn't have the guts to face Geet. Recalling all the times he taunted her, and didn't let her speak, he loathed himself even more.He in his fury banged on his desk. However, he knew that by banging nothing would get resolved. And his kharoos ego wouldn't let him apologize to Geet.The only thing he was thankful about was that the whole office hadn't witnessed this. Well they were going to witness something more shocking!

Geet knocks on his door. Maan in his irritated tone not knowing who it was-"Come in"

Geet enters his room with her leave application to which she's pinned a photocopy of the court order. Maan is unable to look at Geet directly in the eyes. Geet still keeping her composure, talks in a cold tone-"Meri leave application. Saath mein maine court order ka ek photocopy bhi attach kar diya hai. In case aapko yeh sab ek naya bahana lage." Maan reaches to take the paper from Geet, but Geet instead puts it on his table ignoring his gesture. She turns around and starts to leave. Her face and her eyes are red with fury thinking what Maan has done in front of Gurvinder.

Maan reads the papers, and goes after Geet. Geet is walking fast in fury, and Maan tries to catch up with her. He has no choice but to run now. So Maan runs across the office trying to stop Geet. The whole office is amazed seeing their boss MK running after a girl, and that too his secretary! Sasha is stunned standing like a statue, while Pinky and Tasha's jaws drop!😆😲

Maan catches up with her, holds her arm saying softly-"Geet"

Geet looks at him with a deadly glare instantly stopping him from saying anything else and speaks icily-"Maine pehle bhi kaha hai aapko mujhe chhune ka koi haq nahin." All the office staff are gasping for breath as they hear this!😲

Maan lets go of her arm, and lowers his head a little. Geet gives him her piece of mind-"Bas. Bahut ho gaya. Jab baar baar keh rahi thi, toh bolne nahin dete thei. Joh mann mein aata tha, woh bakte rahe. Mujhe laga tha ek baar ki maine aapko galat samjha, par main bilkul sahi thi aapke baare mein (recall the scene when she says he has low thinking!) Hamesha kehte hain josh se zyada hosh kaam aata hai. Yeh bas kehte hi hain ya iss baat par amal bhi karte hain aap? Khair ab mera raasta chhoriye, mujhe bahut kaam hai". Geet leaves as she says this. Maan feels upset but at the same moment he looks around with a hard look at his staff, who seeing him start minding their own business.

Maan is angry as well because Geet wasn't going to get manofied easily. Maan had never cared to manofy a girl before, but this time things were completely his fault. He's fuming over this when he sees through his glass partition Adi coming with a glass of water for Geet! Adi is in Geet's cabin offering her water, and pats her hand trying to calm her down! Maan gets even more enraged! However, this time the anger he can not take it out on Geet. He's already said so many baseless things to her. He didn't want now to start another mess.

It was evening time and Geet was still in her cabin working. Work was an excuse because she wanted to avoid Pinky's questions regarding herself and Maan. Maan too was pretending to work. He wanted to have a chance to talk to Geet alone. When he figured most of the staff had left, he went to Geet's cabin.

Geet had her back turned to the door, and had moist eyes holding her diary. This was the diary that her Papaji had given her. She felt really lonely, and she was completely disgusted by Maan's behavior. Why did he say all that in front of Gurvinder. What will Gurvinder think?

Maan comes close to Geet, and says-"Geet"

Geet recognizing his voice turns around in a rage, holding her finger pointed in the air. However she didn't realize that Maan was so close to her because when she turned around, her fingers touched Maan's lips, and Maan caught hold of her as she bumped into him. Maaneet have an intense eyelock with Geet's finger on Maan's lips. Maan sees the pain in Geet's moist eyes. He also sees that there is truth in them. Geet also gets held by Maan's soft gaze. She sees the presence of guilt, remorse, and a rare softness in his eyes. Ek alag tarah ki kashish thi uski aankhon mein. 😳

Who knows how long they would have stood like that had it not been for Maan's cell ringing! Abruptly Geet removed her finger, and turned away while Maan attended to his call. After the call ended Maan searched for Geet. He wanted to tell her something important. However he couldn't see her anywhere 'Lagta hai ghar chali gayi'

Next day Maan has come to work a little early. He sees Adi going to Geet cabin, placing a flower bouquet and silently going out. Maan gets irritated and the day has not even yet begun! Maan defiantly walks into Geet's office and checks the note accompanying the bouquet "Kal aap udaas thien. Isliye phool bhej raha hoon taaki phoolon sa chehra aapka din bhar khila rahe"
Maan was furious too now! He took the bouquet, and threw it away in his room.
Maan's thinking now how to handle this situation. Maan knew asking Geet to refrain speaking to Adi was not possible because of all the blunders he had already committed. So somehow he'd have to control Adi himself!

As he's thinking this, he's got his hands on his head as if he's almost going to pull out his hair. Right at that instant Geet who has walked in her cabin sees him doing his weird gestures and thinks "Pata nahin businessman kaise ban gaya yeh!"

During the morning meeting with Geet, Sasha and Adi. Maan tried to keep his cool with the bouquet incident. However restraining his temper was proving to be quite a challenge with Adi constant staring towards an aloof Geet! Maan figured the best way out was to have direct eye contact with Adi. And Maan did exactly that. Poor Adi's stammering then wouldn't stop until the meeting was over.

Maan tries to stop Geet-"Geet"

Geet answering him back curtily-"Mujhe abhi apna kaam khatm karna hai Mr. Khurana. Main chahti hoon woh sab mere jaane se pehle complete ho jaaye" and walks out.

Sasha is silently observing Maaneet's interaction thinks to herself jealously "Life mein pehli baar dekh rahi hoon MK ko kisi ladki ko appease karne ki mehnat karna. Chakkar kya hai?"

Next Scene: Maan also goes to Amritsar to witness the trial!

Edited by averma4583 - 15 years ago

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Ann

@celestae

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Posted: 15 years ago

#99

Actually I would love to see each end every scene that you made on Maneet...... But my favourite among them is

1. Maan placing/fixing a blanket on a sleeping Geet, and softly putting the hair strands away from her face.

2. Being concerned if she ate or not, and ordering Munshi ji with attitude to make sure she eats.

4. Maan after finding out Geet's truth feels awful, and wants to apologize but his ego doesn't allow him to.

6. Geet slowly caring for Maan after seeing his soft side .

7. Geet with Munshi ji's help finds out what Maan likes to eat, and prepares dinner for him. However she doesn't serve him. She watches secretly as he eats. Maan likes the food and compliments Munshi ji. Munshi ji tells him to compliment Geet instead. Maan with an unsure look as what to do!

9. Maan has a headache, and Geet massaging his head.

10. Geet starting to help Maan slowly with office work.Maan realizes she has the potential, so he encourages her (knowing him, that will come through sarcasm!).

20. Geet having nightmares, and is screaming. Maan comes to her, wakes her up, and calms her down by giving her some water to drink.

21. Maan working late at night in his study. Geet brings a cup of coffee, and places it on his desk which he sees. She looks at him, but doesn't say anything and leaves.

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Faz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#100

Absssssss!

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3 Jhappiz for you!

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*wolf whistle*

I love that scene, it was such a stunning scene! I loved the Geet & Maneet's closeness! 😉 Your idea was wayyy better than mine in using the Geet puts her finger on Maan's lips! 😆😉 I loved, loved, loved it! Amazing! 😃

And ohmigosh Maan is going to Amritsar? 😳 Can we expect more Maneet moments? 😉😉