Tujhpe Dil Qurbaan(RN first meet) (Pt 4 pg8) - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ok got that!!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Thanks a lot!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hay im new to reading and 1st of all an awsome FF..totally enjoyed reading it..n da character intro
were realy well done..aww..i loved the way u portrayed Abey as a total casanova reminded me of
our PM...lolzz
anywas the stupid way he behaves wth shona is hilarious and so totally entertaining to read..๐Ÿ˜†
poor porr abhey๐Ÿ˜›i never thought he'd do this tongue tied role ever๐Ÿ˜†
and aww..shona is so totally collected and sweet...๐Ÿ˜ณloved the exchange between them..
and the repport the 3 captains share is also wonderfull//enjoyed th eway they pul each others
legs..
and looking forward to reading abt shona's b'day party๐Ÿ˜ณand the way abhey'd react๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey thanks a lot Sunara for your great comments. Nice to see u here. Waise Abhay kaise react karega, ye to Abhay bhi nahi jaanta but i think everybody will be shocked after the party . And prerna dpn't worry , i will uppdate soon. May b today, or tomorrow. Thanks a lot gyus for your great comments and support
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 4:

Everyone was getting ready for the party arranged by Shona Das. The clock showed 6:30 PM

Major Kapoor?s house:

Vidya was roaming here and there and was unable to decide what to wear. Al last she entered into her parent?s room who were almost ready to leave.

Vidya (totally surprised) : Arre , aap log to taiyaar bhi ho gaye. Aur main to bahi tak decide bhi nahi kar payi ki pehanna kya hai??

Saying that she looked at her dad who was looking so impressive even at this age in a blue suit along with light blue shirt n matching tie and her mom who was looking equally gorgeous in a designer sari.

Vidya(in an appreciative tone): Aww? you two look gorgeous. But what about me?

Major Kapoor looked at his wonderful daughter n smiled.

M.Kapoor: I think that?s not a problem for Major Kapoor?s daughter. She knows very well what she has to wear that will compliment her beauty in a true sense .

Vidya was deeply impressed by her father?s appreciation and nodded her head.

Vidya: U r right dad. Just give me ten minutes and I will be ready.

Saying this, she storms off the room when she heard her dad?s voice.

M.Kapoor: 10 minutes means 10 minutes. Being an Army officer, I don?t want to be late.

Vidya: I know dad. 10 minutes.

Major and Mrs. Kapoor looked at each other and smiled.

KMA:

Abhay and Vansh were getting ready in their respective rooms and both of them were as obvious confused.

Abhay: Yaar, what shud I wear?

Saying that he picked up one suit n started to get ready.

After 10 minutes, they both came out. Vansh was looking like a perfect gentleman in a blue colour suit along with navy blue shirt and matching tie whereas Abhay got ready in his true manner, that is as a Casanova who is going to kill all the girls present there with a white suit along with full white sleeve t-shirt. They both looked at each other and showed thums- up as they approved each other. And why not, they both were dressed to kill.

Vansh: What about Raj?

Abhay: He s going to reach directly at the venue.

Vansh: So, what are we waiting for? Let?s go.

Abhay: I was waiting for you only.

They both leaved from there.

As they came out, they found a Honda City outside KMA parking.

Vansh(a little bit surprised): Ye Honda City kiski?

Abhay: Meri ?.(correcting himself) Mera matlab mere ek dost ki hai.

Vansh: Lekin, yahan kyun?

Abhay: Comeon yaar, party mein jaane ke liye.

Vansh: Lekin hamare paas to already jeep?

Abhay looked at Vansh deeply and nodded his head thinking about Vansh?s simplicity.

Abhay(holding Vansh?s chin): My dear Vansh baby, you r so simple.Arre yaar, KMA ki jeep sirf Captains ke liye hain. You want to go in that jeep after wearing such clothes, that will not go well with our dressing sense n personality. Right now we are off duty n going to party, so we have to be in style. Wahan koi bhi in army jeeps mein nahi aane wala. Samjhe.

Vansh simply nodded his head n sits into the car along with Abhay who sits on the driving seat. At the same time, Vansh?s mobile rangs.

Vansh(looking at the no.): It?s Raj. (On the phone) Haan Raj.

Rajveer: Haan vansh. Kahan ho tum log?

Vansh: Hum log bas nikal hi rahe hain. Tu kahan tak pahuncha?

Rajveer: I am on my way . Theek hai , main tumko hotel ke bahar milta hoon.

Saying this, de disconnects the line.

Abhay puts the car into gear, presses the accelator and they leaved from there.

A little away from Grand Regency Hotel:

Rajveer was on the way to the hotel in a black Chevrolet Aveo. All the captains of KMA are too stylish and redefines style in their own manner, that can be felt after watching the dressing sense of the 3 captains of KMA. They were so distinctive from each other , yet so stylish. Rajveer was wearing a sky blue shirt along with a grey 3 piece suit and a matching tie that was fitting so perfectly on his well built physique n he was looking irrestible hot in that. A song was playing in the car and he was enjoying his drive along with the song.

Suddenly his flash light falls on a girl standing on the side of the road , along with her silver santro. The lights were so sharp that it made the whole girl visible clearly even in that dark . The girl kept her hand in front of her eyes to avoid the flash lights that were making her blind. Rajveer recognized the girl and stopped his car. He came out of the car and the flash lights became a little dimmed. The girl removed her hand and her face was fully visible now. Her long black hairs were coming over her face due to the breeze. She was looking absolutely stunning in her red knee length off- shoulder gown. Her big black eyes looked at him and recognized him too.

Rajveer(a little bit surprised) : Miss Naina Singh Ahluwalia? Right?

Naina(nodding in affirmative): Yes Captain.

Rajveer: Oh my god! What a pleasant surprise? Going somewhere?

Naina: Yeh actually! (Looking at her car) But my stupid car?.

Rajveer(looking at the car): Oh! Don?t blame it. It?s only a machine. By the way, if I can help you?

Naina: No captain, I will manage??

Rajveer: Oh come on Miss Naina. Don?t worry about me. Waise aap jaa kahan rahi thi?

Naina: Grand Regency Hotel. Miss Shona Das?s birthday.

Rajveer: Hey! Then there is no problem. Main bhi wahin jaa raha tha. I think now u can come with me atleast.

Naina : But captain?..

Rajveer(understanding her problem): I know Miss Naina ki aap strangers se help lena pasand nahi karti, but we r not strangers as far as I knew. Aur aap mujh par trust kar sakti hain.

Naina: Of course I trust you Captain, that?s not a problem. I just don?t know how to thank?

Rajveer(opening the door of the other side as a perfect gentleman): Woh aap raaste mein aaram se soh lijiyega. Waise the pleasure is all mine.

Naina gave her beautiful smile and entered into the car. Rajveer shuts the door after she was comfortable . He then sets on the driving seat and they leaved from there. Meawhile Naina called her chauffer and ordered him to pick the car from there.

They were on their way when Rajveer looked at her who was busy on her phone. He looked at her and then concentrated back on the road with a charmin smile on his lips.

Naina too looked at him who was looking at the road.

Naina: Thanks a lot Captain . Agar aap nahi aate to pata nahi mein kitni der tak.

Rajveer(cutting her short) : Thanks kis baat ka Miss Naina. Hum dono ki manjil ek hi hai aur hum Army officers to hote hi hain, doosro ki madad ke liye . (Looking at her, in a true appreciative manner) Aur aap is dress mein itni khoobsurat lag rahin hain, kaun aapki madad nahi karna chahega.

Naina started blushing after hearing that. That?s the unique style of praising her beauty she had ever experienced.

At the same time, this beautiful track starts playing in the car:

Pehli Nazar MeinKaise Jaado Kar DiyaTera Ban Baita HaiMera JiyaJaane Kya HogaKya Hoga Kya PataIs Pal Ko MilkeAa Jee Le Zara Mein Hoon YahanTu Hai YahanMeri Bahon Mein AaAa Bhi JaO Jaan-E-JaanDono JahanMeri Bahon Mein AaBhool Ja Aa Rajveer(enthusiastically): Hey, that?s one of my favorite tracks. (Looking at Naina) Oh I am so sorry. Main to poochna hi bhool gaya ki if u r comfortable with the music. Saying this, he was about to turn off the music when Naina stopped him. Naina: It?s ok Captain. That?s one of my favorites too?.. Baby I Love U, Baby I Love You, Baby I Love You, Baby I Love You ? So..Baby I Love UOh I Love UI Love UI Love U SoBaby I Love U Rajveer: Oh I see?. That?s great. Saying that, he concentrated back on the road. Naina: Waise captain, you look so different at off duty hours. Rajveer(quickly): Why? Because I am listening this song. Naina(surprised by his question): No, no I didn?t mean that?. Mera matlab Har Dua Mein Shamil Tera Pyaar HaiBin Tere Lamha Bhi Dushwar HaiDhadhkon Ko Tujhe Se Hi Darkar HaiTujhse Hai RahteinTujhse Hai Chahtein Har Dua Mein Shamil Tera Pyaar HaiBin Tere Lamha Bhi Dushwar HaiDhadhkon Ko Tujhe Se Hi Darkar HaiTujhse Hai RahteinTujhse Hai Chahtein Tu Jo Mili Ek Din MujheMein Kahin Ho Gaya Lapata Rajveer(with a smile on his face): Hey, I was just joking Miss Naina. Mujhe maloom hai aap kya poochna chahti hain? Saying that he looked at Naina n smiled n Naina reciprocated that smile. O Jaan-E-JaanDono JahanMeri Bahon Mein AaBhool Ja Aa ) ?.. 2. Rajveer: Actually, duty hours mein aur Army rules follow karte time humein strict hona padta hai. Agar hum strict nahi honge aur rules stricty follow nahi karenge to cadets par ek wrong impression padega aur woh log woh nahi ban payenge jo hum unhe banana chahte hain. Aur agar Army officers rules follow nahi karenge to kaun karega. Lekin off duty hours, hum log bhi insaan hain aur enjoy karne ke mauke dhoondhte hain. Hum log bi normal persons ki tarah movies dekhte hain, music sunte hain, dosto ke saath hang karte hain. Saying that he looked at Naina who was looking at him .Rajveer: Kya hua? Aap mujhe aise kyun?? Naina: Nahi, I am just a little bit surprised by your different side. Rajveer: I hope it?s a surprise and not a shock. Naina: No, it?s a surprise definitely. (Kar Diya Deewana Dard-E-Kash NeChain Cheena Isqh Ke Ehsaas NeBekhayali Di Hai Tere Pyaas NeChaya Suroor HaiKuch To Zaroor Hai) ?.. 2 Yeh DooriyanJeene Na DeHal Mera Tujhe Na Pata Rajveer: Waise mujhe bhi ye pata nahi tha ki aap itni baat bhi karti hain kyunki on work u look so silent. Naina: Woh, actually main jyada bolti nahi hoon aur?.. Rajveer: Oh.. then I hope I didn?t bored you. Naina: No, no, not at all Captain. I really felt nice after talking to you. Rajveer(with a smile): My pleasure again. They both shared a good smile and the car moved on it?s way Baby I Love U, Baby I Love You, Baby I Love You, Baby I Love You ? So..Baby I Love UOh I Love UBaby I Love UI Love U? ....

Edited by gain - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey that was great
to Raj Naina ek dusre ko pahle se jaante hain so its not going to be love at first sight so sad
plz do continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!
Vidya bahut confused hai ke kya pehena hai!!!!๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜•Kya baat hai??๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
Major Kapoor is looking very nice and so is Mrs.Kapoor!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
Vansh is looking great!!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ŠAnd Abhay is just dressed to kill!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Abhay apni friend ki car le aaya hai to be in style!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›
Raj is looking so dashing and irresistably hot!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณHe is just looking so handsome!!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ
Al the three captains are stylish in their own way!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
Raj ko ek ladki mili and she had covered her eyes with her hand and her hair was coming over her face!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ŠWow!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
This reminds me of Anjali in Kavyanjali!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
Raj aur Naina ek dusre ko pehle se jante hai!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›Thats great!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ŠBut how did they meet??๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
Naina ki car kharab ho gayi thi aur woh bhi Shona ki birthday mein hi jaa rahi thi!!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ŠThats great!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
Raj is just so charming and the perfect gentleman!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Raj complimented her and Naina started blushing!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธHaaiiiii!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ
The song is great and suits them perfectly!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I loved Raj and Naina's convo!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
Naina is surprised to see the different side of Raj!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›Wow!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
Toh Naina is silent at work!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
I hope party mein dono dance kare aur saath rahe!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
luvin the humour btween the friends, RN gr8 as alwes..plz cont
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
Hello!!
Nice update....loved the first meet between Raj and Naina.....
Please continue soon....
take care
continue soon
love
Riya.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
LGood update....
Mrs Kapoor and Mr Kapoor were already looking gorgeous.
Need to see how the confused nisha is gooing to look.
Very much loved the first meet between Raj and Naina.....Good conversation. Seems like Rajveer going fida
on Naina but not showing it out.
Can't wait anymore, Please continue soon....
take care
continue soon
jyothi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice ff...
plz cont. soon

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