Tujhpe Dil Qurbaan(RN first meet) (Pt 4 pg8)

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 17 years ago

#31

Sooooooooooooo sorry for late reply yaar.

Superb written dear.

It's just amazing.

In sab ne mil kar jitna accha time spent kiya that the best scene.

poor Abhay us ki sab k sab band bajate hain.

Naina kab aayegi fic me.

Gunny to vaise bhi sharmaata hai ladkiyon se.

Yaar tune kaafi din o gaye phir bhi ud nahi kiya.

update asap.

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gaurav jain

@gain

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

Part 2:

Next morning:

Abhay and Rajveer were coming towards the corridor, form opposite directions. Both were perfectly dressed as Captains. They saw each other and starts moving towards each other.

Rajveer: Hi.

Abhay: Good morning.

Rajveer: Guny kahan hai??

Abhay: Vo Vidya ko lene gaya hai.

Rajveer: Bechara Gunraj? I can understand ki uski kya haalat ho rahi hogi.

Abhay: So do i.

They both shared a good laugh and started moving towards the corridor while talking.

Abhay: Waise cadets ka kya reaction tha?? Are they happy with the introduction of new drills.

Rajveer: No body seemed happy. Actually the new drills are much more tough than the previous ones. They have to be a little bit tough. But yaaar, that's the procedure. U have to be tough mentally and physically, if u r applying for Military.

Abhay: yeah u r right. And our Chandu (their pet name for Brigadier Chandok) is the best . He knows very well how to take out the best even from the dull cadets. Waise mere cadets ka bhi reaction kuch khaas nahi tha. But one thing is sure. These exercises will make the cadets more tough in both ways, mentally and physically.

Rajveer(with a mild smile): Chandu has got a killer mind. But u remebered that day on 15th aug, he got a little bit emotional.(With respect for BC in his voice)Yaar woh bahar se kitne bhi tough ho, lekin andar se bahut hi soft hain.

Abhay(agreeing with him): That's why he's the best.

While talking with each other, they passed through a corridor in which a class was going on. Abhay heard the voice that was giving some instructions to cadets and his feet stopped automatically.

Abhay(stopping for a while): That's Shona Das. She is taking a lecture.

Rajveer(passing a comment): Kya baat hai. Ab janaab awaaz sun kar bhi rukane lage.

Abhay: Aisa kuch nahi hai yaar. Bas itna hai ki agar taj mahal aapke saamne hai aur aap use dekhe bina nikal jaate hain to duniya mein aapse bada idiot koi nahi hai. Waise bhi poora din to bekar hi jaane wala hai to kyun na aankhon ko hi thoda aaram de liya jaaye.

Saying this, he starts trying to sneak in through the door which was little bit open whereas Rajveer nodded his head in disbelief.

As Abhay sneaked in ,he saw a perfect figure wearing light blue half sleeved gown of knee lenght. The lady wearing the gown was so stylish. Her perfect figure, shoulder length silky hairs, designer earrings and watch and above all a good height were accompanying her style statement really well. At the same time she turned towards the door and now Abhay was able to see her full face . Lovely big eyes, pink lips and an angeletic face.

Abhay(whispering): Perfect.

Rajveer who was just watching Abhay got a prank in his mind. He just rolled his eyes and just pushed Abhay lightly who was totally busy in looking inside the class. As a result, Abhay loosed his balance and entered into the class as the door opened and he prevented himself from falling with great difficulty.

All the class was attentioned and greeted Abhay . Abhay handled himself and found all of them totally surprised at his presence.

He looked in front and found two eyes looking at him with a lot of surprise in it. And he became nervous as all of it was unexpected.

Shona : Good morning Captain.

Abhay(trying to be calm): Good......g...g.... good morning.

Shona: What happened? U look so disturbed? Is everything allright?

Abhay: Yes... Actually (gaining his confidence) Main aur Rajveer yahan se gujar rahe the to.... (Saying that he looked behind and found no one) (in his mind) Saala kameenaa. Ise to main dekh loonga.

Thinking that, he again looked at Shona who was waiting for him to finish.

Abhay: Actually maine socha ki aapse pooch loon.......... Class..... kaisi chal rahi hai?

Shona(with a smile): Perfect. Cadets are really enjoying.

Abhay: Great......... great....... Good.

Saying that, he stopped and looked at Shona who was trying to read his expressions. He doesn't know how to continue .

Shona: Anything else captain??

Abhay(again looking at her): Aapne..... aapne breakfast kar liya??

He knew he had asked a stupid question (In his mind) Wah kya question poocha hai? Arre kuch aur nahi pooch sakta tha?

Shona(surprisingly looking at her watch and then at him): Abhi se? Abhi to sirf 800 hours hue hain. Abhi to ek ghanta hai.

Abhay(repeating her words): Haan abhi to ek ghanta hai. (Unable to face her anymore) Ok ... then.. Miss Shona.... have a nice day.

Shona: You too Captain.

They both smiled and Abhay came out of the class. He closed his eyes thinking what he had faced inside.

Abhay(thinking): Shit! Shit! Shit! I was sounding like a fool. Aur ye sab us Raj ki wajah se. I am not going to leave him. Mujhe phansa ke gayab ho gaya.

Thinking this, he clinched his fists in anger n leaved from there.

Shimla Airport:

Gunraj was waiting on the Airport. He looked at his watch in desparation.

Gunraj: Kya life hai?? Pata nahi aur kitna wait karna padega?

At the same time, the flight was announced and he took a sigh of relief.

Gunraj: Finally!

He started looking for her as the passengers began to check out. After 3 minutes he found her. Totally different from the crowd, she was watching here and there, trying to fetch a known face. Gunraj looked at her and kept on looking at her. Normally he was not comfortable at all with this girly girly thing, but that girl had something in her that made him look at her carefully. Average height, cute face like a small school going girl, glittery eyes andhairs properly tied in a ponytail, simple dark blue jacket on pink half sleeved t- shirt with matching jeans. She looks so different from the photograph he had seen in Major Kapoor's family album.She was looking so cute.
Gunraj found himself literally staring at her and shook his head to get back into his senses.

Gunraj: God! What i was doing?

He got control over himself n reached near Vidya who was looking at other side.

Gunny: Miss Vidya Kapoor??

Vidya looked at him after listening her name from his mouth and started trying to recognize him after nodding her head in affirmative.

Gunraj: Hello. I am Captain Gunraj Singh Randhava. Major Sharma has sent me to pick u up.

Vidya(smiling): Oh yes, Captain Randhawa. Papa had told about u. So how r u captain.

Gunraj: I am perfectly fine Miss Vidya. Shall we move now?

Vidya: Oh yes. Why not?

Gunraj took the luggage from her and put that at the backside of his jeep. Vidya sat on the front seat and they leaves from there.

On the way:

Vidya looked at Gunraj who was busy in driving.

Vidya: Papa kaise hain??

Gunraj: Oh! he is perfectly fine.

Vidya: Aur KMA?

Gunraj: KMA is fine too. Thanks.

Vidya: Aur wwoh aapke best friends? Captain Rajveer and Captain Abhay.

Gunraj(a little bit surprised): You know them?

Vidya: Papa has told me about each and everything about The KMA. About brigadier Chandok, and about the firendship between u three.

Gunny(a little bit impressed) : They all r fine. Thanks once again.

Vidya: Aap itna thanks kyun bolte hain??

Gunny was not expecting that type of question . He looked at Vidya and got nervous. He was unable to speak anything. Vidya kept on looking at him for sometime and then burs out laughing.

Vidya(watching Gunraj's expressions): I am so sorry Captain. But u looked so nervous, jaise aapse maine kya pooch liya ho?

Gunraj too had a mild smile on his face after hearing that. For the first time,he was feeling a little bit comfortable in the company of any girl. He kept on driving and they continued their way.

Edited by gain - 17 years ago

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#33

finally its updted....

tooo good.....

plzz keep updtin it

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gaurav jain

@gain

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Posted: 17 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: fanatic 21
finally its updted....

tooo good.....

plzz keep updtin it

thanks a lot. Waise can u tell me how to set a page properly because half of the lines i have written are not visible. i just don't like this new format

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SamLuvsSaRun

@SamLuvsSaRun

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#35

Oh GOD I didn't know this was a

GV FF... 😊😊😊Good to know tht it's also a GV FF, So Thanks a lot...😊😊😊 Im a diehard GV fan so u will see my comments regularly in here...Keep updating......Ive read the 1st part. It was awesome and too funny...I found Abhay very cool and the friendship bet the three is really very gud.....

Now coming to the 2nd part...

It was a gr8 UD... 👏

Abhay to gaya re kaam se...Kaise bewakoofi wale sawal poochta hai yeh...??? Bolti kyun bandh ho jaati hain Shona ko dekhte hi and Raj is not less, phasa diya AV ko aur beech bhanwar mein chodke chala gaya... Abhay ka dimaag achcha hai, achche dialogues aate hain iske dimaag main..I cudnt stop laughing....... Now coming to Gunny, achchi taang kichchai ki Vidya ne uski, Yeh hamara Gunny darr kyun jaata hain yaar..... Achcha hai kisi ladki ko dekhkar kuch toh hua... So cupid is gonna strike GV lookslike.... Hey Bhagwan hamare GV ka kuch kar do yaar jaldi se......Waise yahan bhagwan tum hi ho

gain....

Overall an excellent UD.... 👏Cant wait for the 3rd part

Thank you so muchhhhhhhh.........Waiting eagerly for the 3rd part...😊

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shorts

@shorts

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Posted: 17 years ago

#36

wow ! ! ! ! guys superb concept and awesome updates. i was really enjoying while reading. everything is so nice that i cant compare that which part is better.👏

plz update soon i am waiting 👍🏼

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 17 years ago

#37

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Abhay ko toh Shona ko dekhna hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉 😉Shona is so stylish!!!!😊 😊 😊

Raj ne sahi kaha ke aaj kal awaz sunke bhi rukna lage!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Abhay pe toh woh gaana suit karega😊 😊 😊

Sajde mein yuhi jhukhta hoon

Tumpe hi aake rukhta hoon

Kya yeh sabko hota hai......... 😊

Raj is very naughty!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Abhay ko aise push kiya aur Shona ke samne aa gaya!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Bechara Abhay!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Uski toh haalat kharab ho gayi thi!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Kya bole kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha aur kuch bhi bole jaa raha tha!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣He was really sounding stupid!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Gunny ko Vidya acchi lagi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊And he is even comfortable with her!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊

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Riya

@Riya_16

Rocker

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Posted: 17 years ago

#38

hi!!!
a very good one!!!truly!!!
Loved the scenes between Abhay-Raj-Shona and Gunny -Vidya!!!
Now waiting for Naina's entry!!!!
Too Good.
Continue soon.
Take care.

Love
Riya.