TD FaNfIcTiOn - Page 9

awsome part!!
please cont soon!! 👏 👏 👏

yeah i hope so too!!!!!! please cont soon!!

awsome part 👏
pleaze continue soon !!!

kajal that was gr8 👏
write soon 😃

i will try to continue tomorrow! Gargi is dead, remember? Vedant just got arrested so i got everyone taken care of! finally 😆

i need a few romantic scenes so can u guys please post them or pm me! i will try to come up with my own but it's hard.

i will con't soon. Rohit looks like Rudra in Sinndoor just to let you noe!

loooooooooooooooooool....gr8 part, yay it was a girl 😳 😛 😃

Bhousle House:

Sukanya: Sanya, did you know when you gave birth no one cared but when disha did there was a whole hungama.

Sanya: Mummyji, let it be. OH well u can't change what happened already.

Suhas: Sukanya, u should learn from your bahu abuot manners.

SEgial House:

DK: Disha where are you?

Disha: HOld on i am coming.

Dk sits down on the couch and Aroah comes and sits next to him.

Aroah: Papa, i want to be just like you.

Dk: REAlly? WHat about mama?

Araoh: I want to be like both of you!

Disha: Dinner is ready!

THey eat dinner and then Aroah goes to bed while they play with Nandani.

Disha: Dk, can i ask you something?

DK: You just did! What happened?

Disha: Can you stay home tomorrow?

Dk: When i want to stay home you send me to work. why tomorrow?

Disha: I want to spend time with you.

Dk: Fine. I called Rohit over and decided we could be partners in business.

Disha: That's great! VEdant got arrrested and Pori came to apoligize today.

DK: Don't tell me you forgave her!

Disha: Yes i did and she helped arrest VEdant.

Dk: Disha, you need to stop trusting poeple so much.

Disha: fine! Nandani is crying i got to go.

DK follows hers and just stares at her while she tries to calm her down.

Disha: WHat are you looking at?

DK: You.

Disha: Dk, you are so....ugghh.

Dk: so what?

Disha: So sweet!

He grabs her hand and hugs her from behind. He just smiles and then picks her up and drops her on the bed.

Disha: DK!

Dk:(childish voice) Disha!

THey have a peaceful night.

Bhousle HOuse:

Rohit and RAno are deciding on invitation cards.

Rano: I want the red one.

Rohit: No i want the blue one.

Rano: Red!

Rohit: Blue!

THey are fighting like little kids! 😆

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great work contiue soon 😉

👏 awsome part kajal
pleaze continue soon !

fab part kajal, cont soon, excellent!! 😛