OSR Samyukta 41-Life afresh at Sawai pg49 - Page 6

Lashy di.🤗

Haashhhhhhh atlast I completed reading all the parts'.🤓🤓🤓 😃😳

This is my first ever comment to ur Samyukta😕😭

Well first of all I m very very sorry for so late comment'😭.I apologize for this'😳

So this time Dakoo Rani Rashi (DRR) is sorry..so be happy😆

Hehehe..well me just kidding di.😉 *giggle😆

U have been our sweetest mod n one of the finest script writer'.

So some thing from me to u

muahhhhh 🤗 *blush☺️

are bahut bore kar liya.lemme be specific to the topic.😉😆

Nahi toh I'll start my chatter patter as usual 😕😉 😆

First of all congrats for completing 22 and 162 pages 👏

Well me saving ur story..n get a printout after completion😛

Well di all I can say about the fanfic is that it is Marvelous👏👏

U have described each and every event so beautifully👏 ⭐️ for it 😳.that I can visualize Dharamveer and all the characters actually acting in front of my eyes.😆

I'll start with apna fav Veer ☺️ 😆

Veer...This is personally my favourate character ..donno why but still may be because Veer in d serial is played by Rajat and I can visualize him in this naughty,playful yet serious,brave,responsible,cute ,Loving ..lolz di I m short of words to describe him😉 nahi toh meri comment will go pages if I stat describing him n each every character.

Dharam...hmmmm Dharam a big brother with so soft hearted,innocent very very brave but yet some times buddhu..😆 the best friend of veer..and a yogya uttaradhakari of Aryanagar..well here also I m not describing much nahi ow "samjho toh accha na samjho toh".😆

Sia...she is so cute innocent and beautiful..i simply felt in love with her innocence.and those pictures of her.ahhhhhh so beautiful sketch of her *dreaming😍

And above that Shera'.uske toh kya kehene a playful and same as veer😉 I mean an ideal match for veer *blush 😆 ☺️

I liked her naughty and teasing nature yet she is so determined about her work and family and responsibility. A simple girl with may be some tragic background' U have potrayed her character so beautifully di. I really fell in love with her character too. Esp her sketch and description made by u of her beauty *dreaming😍😍 she is also so beautiful😍😍😍 .kaashhhhhh.. 😍😍 mein aise dikhti 😳😆

Now comes sia's friends..how can I forget them'..

U have made those scenes so funny'

Esp Daksha...lolz she is behind veer🤣🤣.n veer avoiding her..🤣 bechara kanhiyaan kitni sari larkiyan uske piche piche 😆

Not to forget ..Jaivardhan and Agni..they r the real villons n culprits😡😡.

Hmm I Love to hate those characters😉

Atleast in this script Agni is not so buddhu as in serial a thappad khau😆

Well di bare wih my comment coz I m just mentioning the things as I remember them..not in the sequence'

I won't comment on each n every part'.

Coz if I do so'u'll get bored reading all those stuff n will take ur time'in repling bck..😉

N also the whole pg willl be filled with my comment itself..

Well I just want to tell u that I loved all the situations and each and every..thing described by u in the story'.

From the 21^st part I loved the scene where Shera saves veer'

The dialogs..

'I know why I am doing this Rajkumar Veer...you impressed me by being the first man to respect my feelings and call me by my actual name...Ananya...'

Supporting Veer's heavy person with one of his arms around her shoulders; Shera sighs and then begins to pull him along by herself, complaining to the unconscious prince, as she does so 'I agree I am strong, but do you realize you are not very light'I wish you would co-operate just a bit more and help me out!'

Dragging the injured prince all alone for a few yards, the petite girl becomes exhausted by the arduous task after a short while and finally gives up 'Rajkumar Veer, you are not co-operating with me'so, I cannot take you all the way to the doctor's''

Placing Veer's body back on the ground; she kneels next to him, catching up on her breath and contemplates, as she looks around 'Actually my friend lives in that house there...they are kind people...I think they will take good care of you...they would at least be able to fetch a doctor immediately...'

'Look at what you have done to my favourite dress Rajkumar Veer...now after all this effort that I have gone through for you; you better not die, I tell you...'

This is where I fell in love with Shera'..

Di and one more thing'

The letters..between Dharam n sia so beautifully described'by u'

I just look forward..to veer realize that the person who saved him was Shera n him falling in Love with Shera..n vice versa'.though she has already but yet to realize😉

And some beautiful moments between Veer n Shera aka Ananya'.

Are this reminded me..of the beautiful meaning of Ananya'

Di u described it so well'.

Now bas'I won't write much I have already completed two pages of word doc'😉

I should better stop now..😆

So that u can write further script asap'.

Muahhhh once again di

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

Thank me n update fast 😃

Originally posted by: lashy

loooooooooooooooool i promise promise promise i am updating tomorrow.. with precap today... its ready now so i cant postpone it anymore 😆 thanks girls for being so patient... and thankoo

Fathoming what his brother was suggesting, Dharam refuses modestly "Oh…Veer…her parents will also be there... I don't know... her mother might not...no... no... it would be very disrespectful..."

Swirling around animatedly; the mischeivous Veer kneels on the floor in front of his brother and cries out theatrically "Be brave Dharam... if not at the shrine, surprise her by whisking her away... meet her secretly ...thank her..." placing his hand on his forehead; Veer then touches his heart in histrionic fashion, as he blurts out "She shall be so happy..."

Chuckling at their charade and embarrassed by the thought; Dharam tries to beguile Veer by enquiring playfully "By the way, why are you so desperate about going there Veer…" he pauses "Is it because Daksha might be there too?"

Ciao

Originally posted by: lashy

OSR Promo for Samyukta Part 23

Striding gallantly across the hall clenching to his sword like a king, Veer declares in a majestic voice to his enamoured small audience ?Rajkumar Dharam... you should strive to make her happy... she is obviously having constraints at responding to your messages, possibly due to restrictions by the queen of Niphaud... she did mention in her last scroll that she was going to Gomathi Pashupathinath temple next chaturthi for the Sankasthi Vrat... it?s tryodashi today... start now... you shall reach the temple by tomorrow... meet her at the shrine like a prince??

Following the hint, Bhalla adds ?Yes?

Fathoming what his brother was suggesting, Dharam refuses modestly ?Oh?Veer?her parents will also be there... I don?t know... her mother might not...no... no... it would be very disrespectful...?

Swirling around animatedly; the mischeivous Veer kneels on the floor in front of his brother and cries out theatrically ?Be brave Dharam... if not at the shrine, surprise her by whisking her away... meet her secretly ...thank her...? placing his hand on his forehead; Veer then touches his heart in histrionic fashion, as he blurts out ?She shall be so happy...?

Bhalla nods ?Yes?

Chuckling at their charade and embarrassed by the thought; Dharam tries to beguile Veer by enquiring playfully ?By the way, why are you so desperate about going there Veer?? he pauses ?Is it because Daksha might be there too??

Ciao

Originally posted by: lashy

OSR Promo for Samyukta Part 23

Striding gallantly across the hall clenching to his sword like a king, Veer declares in a majestic voice to his enamoured small audience 'Rajkumar Dharam... you should strive to make her happy... she is obviously having constraints at responding to your messages, possibly due to restrictions by the queen of Niphaud... she did mention in her last scroll that she was going to Gomathi Pashupathinath temple next chaturthi for the Sankasthi Vrat... it's tryodashi today... start now... you shall reach the temple by tomorrow... meet her at the shrine like a prince''

Following the hint, Bhalla adds 'Yes'

Fathoming what his brother was suggesting, Dharam refuses modestly 'Oh'Veer'her parents will also be there... I don't know... her mother might not...no... no... it would be very disrespectful...'

Swirling around animatedly; the mischeivous Veer kneels on the floor in front of his brother and cries out theatrically 'Be brave Dharam... if not at the shrine, surprise her by whisking her away... meet her secretly ...thank her...' placing his hand on his forehead; Veer then touches his heart in histrionic fashion, as he blurts out 'She shall be so happy...'

Bhalla nods 'Yes'

Chuckling at their charade and embarrassed by the thought; Dharam tries to beguile Veer by enquiring playfully 'By the way, why are you so desperate about going there Veer'' he pauses 'Is it because Daksha might be there too?'

Ciao