OSR Samyukta 41-Life afresh at Sawai pg49 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
neeri, sumi, hiri and reena i typed such a long reply to all of you and lost everything 😭 i am so heartbroken... now... actually not heartbroken but irritated...😡 laptop internet ho to bhi mushkil na ho tho bhi mushkil
so i am writing to thank all of you sincerely from the bottom of my heart and writing your comments here as well as this REALLY MEANS A LOT A LOT A LOT...
and is one of the prime things that actually keeps me going amidst the crazy stuff happening at home... 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

neeri, sumi, hiri and reena i typed such a long reply to all of you and lost everything 😭 i am so heartbroken... now... actually not heartbroken but irritated...😡 laptop internet ho to bhi mushkil na ho tho bhi mushkil

so i am writing to thank all of you sincerely from the bottom of my heart and writing your comments here as well as this REALLY MEANS A LOT A LOT A LOT...
and is one of the prime things that actually keeps me going amidst the crazy stuff happening at home... 😆

awwww no probs chech!!!!!!! 🤗 agla part kab post kar rahi ho?? 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😳Lovely part Shradz.......... very emotional.

Loved poignancy of scenes between Veer and both his moms! Some guys have all the luck......... imagine being loved and doted by 2-2 moms ...😊

But oh lord .......this Shera is really cunning!😲 She did not miss how Veer was trying to protect the humble shramik family........... And the way she thought to herself that the shramik family is hiding something sent jitters down my spine............ I hope she doesn't bring any harm to this family,............... she is so crafty and devious..........She did not miss how Dhruv was hiding from the guards....... I hope she plays none of her crafty tricks at the wedding. Wonder what her ulterior motive was while saving the prince.

And the reunion of DV was so very dreamy...... devoid of melodrama, yet touching and tender.

Pari is so sweet.......... poor lady served the prince so well with her humble means, but is very self consious about it. The humble lady pleading with the prince so as not to forget her. .............. I pray to lord that no mother ever has to endure this humiliation.😒

And adorable Bhalla waving at the crowd.......... i can actually imagine him doing that.*giggle giggle*😆

And so much of variety in this trio's behavior......... Bhalla waves at the happy crowd, Dharam conceals his pride and Veer bellows at a devious but hapless shramik girl. Thank Dharam for stopping the unpleasant chirade😔.......... I felt Veer could have got her arrested for causing so much misunderstanding between himself and his brother, but shouting at a girl in public is so very unbecoming of a prince. ........... but I guess Veer being Veer, and Shera not being another royal, it is ok to shout........... Does Veer know that she is a part of Agni's schemes😲

Aww........... the royal mothers waiting for there wounded warrior prince with almond milk ........... Swathi preparing the almond milk for Veer........... so nice of her.😳

The reunion was so very touching. Veer basking in the loving concern of mothers and Dharam teasing him.

Wow, the adorable Sia is so mischievious too......... who would have thought that the innocent princess would write a letter addressed to Veer, her sweet revenge for Dharam.😆 And she even sent some prasad and herbs for them. The brothers are so very enamoured of the delightful girl.

Dharam must be be so proud of his beautiful warrior princess.⭐️

Now eagerly waiting for the counter plans of the intelligent brothers and off course Balramji *giggle giggle*........ 👍🏼

Edited by minnie2308 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
thank you so much for explaining everything in detail di 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks a lot lashy.. as always... it is so refreshing to read samy.. n sorry for the late reply
what i loved:
1)veer n shera behaving like, they r strangers.... n veer controlling his anger cos, he didn't want to create a scene in front of the family..... might be he cldn't control it more.. n had to take it out on her in the street😃
2)shera finding out that everyone r hiding something.. smart girl👏
3)veer preventing the soldiers from questioning them👏
4)pari's parting words to veer.... it was so emotional - pari asking veer not to forget her
5)dharam n veer agreed to come for sakshi's wedding...
6)dharam stopping veer when he was continously shouting at shera
7)the happy reunion of veer with his family, n dharam irritating veer with almond milk... hope even sagars show such light moments.. its been ages since we saw some moments like this
8)sia - the character i adore the most in samy.... he is smart.. sending msg to veer to take the revenge...👏👏.. i loved it....
9)veer teasing dharam, abt the letter....
10)dhram snatching hte letter from veer..... n bhalla saying that "he has just started communicating with her, n he is already avoiding us"
11)dharam eating all the prasad.... n innocently giving a reason
waiting for sat lashy, to read the next... hey will dharam-sia meet int he next part😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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🤗me back with comments again 😆
What i loved :
  • Loool veer is too much trying to take siya?s message and dharam is sounding happy that veer cannot chase him for the message.
  • Love the way they both tease dharam, just wait till your turn comes and than we will see what happens 😆
  • Dharam goes near Veer and ruffles his hair into a mess, aware that it would aggravate him immensely. awwwww even dharam is teasing veer so sweet 😆 As Veer tries to lunge forward to take his revenge, he feels a gnawing pain and instantly stops to hold his torso.
  • "You would never understand... but my biggest relief and happiness was only when I found you safe and sound…" looking at Veer's understanding glances i love this dialogue 👏👏👏and how both brothers care so much about each other
  • dharam telling veer that he was not successful in implication jai and agni and how veer reassures him that they both will make jai and agni's life difficult. 😆 yey me looking forward to this. 👏👏
  • i like how veer says that with the people's support and belief in their capabilities they can and will stop jai and agni's evil plots.👏
  • The resolute princes exchange cynical grins, mentally charting shrewd plans and subtly deceptive schemes driven this just shows that when these three are together and no one will be able to defeat them. i am so looking forward to see what plans they are thinking about 😆😆

lashy

👏👏👏 such a brilliant part. I am really looking forward to the next part to see what dharam writes to siya, if veer will beat agni up once he gets better 😆😆 and about shera.

lots of hugs from me 🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I love this part shrads.....sweety u r such a🤗darling...muaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh

i liked shera ws silently teasing veer...n veer tried to controll himself as he didnt want to create scene in fron tof that family

sakshi asked them if they know each other...but hamare hero heroine to bhai kya puchhna....dono ek jaise hai..akadu...manaa kar diya nahi jaante!!! ...but i like it..dono ne ek jaisa hi attitude dikhaya...chalo ek jagah pe sto same hinking hai!! ...wow!!! shera is being so nice to pari n sakshi n asked them if they need anything...i must say she is so nice at heart...hai na Shrads??

oh my god!!! those soldiers came to questioning pari and sakshi about revolts ..and i like the way pari ws worry abt sakshi,dhruv n orphanage..n the way see looked at to veer for help

hhehheeh...shera..prankish girl..she noticed everything..naughty

i like this part the most...the way veer scolded at those soldiers n explained everything how this family saved him n treated him n feed him though they r poor..but they sulsilled their duty beutifully...veer ws superb...this shows how mush he cares for other people though they r poor ,it doesnt make any difference to him....

shera noticed everything..how pari n sakshi ws scared by those soldiers n dhruv also aced strangely...ye ladki bhi na...uski aankho se kuchh nahi chhupta!!!

so kya shera intentionally waha se chali gayi dharam waha aaye usse pahele??

wow!! dharam ne kya entry mari.. ...he is so nice..he remebered pari n sakshi...n pari ko namaskar bi kiya...dharam is really very gud person

wow he wanted hide his feelings...but... n i like the way he started to talk to veer..so here u r...sleeping...peacefully...

and veer replied him...yes i ws busy dharam..n he also teased bhalla

i like that dhram teased veer..pahele hi yudh me wounds bhi ho gaye!!! ..both r praising each othr for victory...wow..both love so much each other

so its the time to leave from his own home ..n pari's words ..so emotional yaar..dont forget us..

veer also got emotional...my ababy ....he thanked them for everything by saying ki everything ws perfect n woh bach bhi nahi sakta agar un logo ne usko nahi bachaya hota!!..n woh har month waha khana khane aayega,,...wow!!

so next month... pari's marriage!!!...wow..veer will attend it...so we know that dulha is dhruv..so now dhruv is also in picture..dharam recognize him...

dharam asked him for help but he denied him to take any action for orphanage..n ohh...he finally invite them for marriage...so they will attend...wow veer will attend his sis's marriage..so cute

sakshi said they will be very disappointed if they wont attend her marriage!!!abb to veer zarur aayega...

i like dharam said to them they can come to the palace if they need any help

"In spite of looking forward to the impending rejoinder with his family; Veer finds himself strangely silent, contrary to his other two lively companions"

what happened to veer?? Waht ws he thinking???

Shrads, u made this scene so emotional when Pari ws thinking to herself,"The only time that you could spend with me, you were injured and I could not even speak to you…I could not even feed you a morsel of food…" she pauses to wipe her tears "But then... I must consider myself fortunate that as a mother, I could at least care for you…"

This scene ws so emotionsl as Pari knows she wont be able to address veer as her son...sooo emotional yaar...this made me cry

I like the way veer found shera again n yelled at her…actually for veer she deserves it…she cheated him n dharma so badly..just win their trust first n then betrayed them by creating misunderstanding…hope shera understand veer's Gussa soon ..so she wud understand how veer is right on his place!!! N she is also brave that she accept whatever she did…but also lied him that she did prank…but who can trust her?? Veer is so right..how come one can do prank which hurt others??

But I m sad as shera took wrong veer n thought," Rajkumar Veer... I thought you were probably different... but your words and actions now appear frighteningly similar to those of any other man I have known all my life..." she smirks to herself in loathe "With the horrible fate that the Lord has etched for me, so far... and with all the horrible encounters I have had with men, is it any wonder that I now hate the very sight of them?" ..i hope she understand him soon…he is not bad..its her who made him bad for her…he ws just angry with her only because of her did!!!!! Why don't she understand that it ws her fault not veer's??

Ok so finally all of three reached at the palace!!!..swathi prepared almond milk for veer and worried it is ok or not…so sweet of her!!! ..Nivi got shocked to see veer in very very bad state as she never used to see him in that state!!!!! ..n I like the way veer console her mom..i m here ma…I m fine…ur son is a warrior!!! ..soo gud shrads.…

I like thw way dharma teased nivitri…"Bua...what about me... you didn't enquire about me... not once...ever since Veer has arrived..."..he is sooo funny…I liked him….and he also added," See... bua... I am also injured... I fought the whole battle all alone..." he sulks playfully "But, who cares for me these days..." ..and Swathi also support him and teased nivitri n as well as veer regarding almond milk which is very very favourite food of veer…it is sooo sweet scene of four of them!!!...so lovely yaar….n dharma tries to take sip of milk n nivi stopped him …so funny…

Veer tells nivi abt the family who saved him..n asked her to help them..n also nivi replied him..they will surely help that family…too gud Shrads…. Veer still remember abt that family…

N after knowing their name nivi remembered them when they gifted a bamboo idol…wow she still remember them ..so sweet of her!!!..then tboth ladies left from there..

Oh so dharma ws waiting for that only..heheehhe..why?..then he showed them sia's letter which ws for veer!!!!

So after a while finally dharma handover that letter to veer!!!..i like veer ws teasing dharma by talking abt him with bhalla…who bhi kuchh kam nahi hai!!

These boys r so….. sia ne to likh diya ki she knows veer will read this letter for dharma…n dharma thinks because of veer's handwriting she found out that his letter wrote by veer!!! ..sooo funny…….

I like each n every word of sia's letter..u put all her feelings for all of them very very beautifully

And specially the last line of the letter," I sincerely request you to pass on the message to your brother that I will in all earnest, be awaiting a personal message from the prince himself, in future. …it ws sooo gud….kya shot maara sia ne ek hi jhatke me dharma ko!!!! ..she is so smart…ek hi line me kitna kuchh likh diya!!!

Veer ws saying dharma that he wud have to write his own letter from now on…n bhalla ws asking abt Prasad..!!! …he is also soo funny…

Wow..what an explaination by dharma to them…he ws alone..there ws no news abt veer..n he got sia's letter..so he eat all Prasad!!!

Veer bhi kam nahi hai..he wants to keep that letter with him..because it ws for him..n dharma denied that..heheheh

The way bhalla n veer teased dharma or I can say they tried to make him emotionally blackmail…n irritate dharma…n they tried to fight..but poor veer,…u made this brotherly moment so lovely Shrads!!!!! …I like that scene soooooo much…it ws very very lovely moment for them!!!

Dharma told veer abt ghadvar commander-in-chief..and how he lied them!!!n how he failed to dealing with agni n jv….

But veer make him happy n relieved by his words…as he always do!!!

So totally awesome, fantastic n mindblowing part…n mainly very very emotional part DEAR Sharads!!!

Thanks a lot dear for lovely story….. love u dear soooo much!!!!...

Waiting for the next part!!!!! ..

Sorry ek to me last me itne din baad comments kar rahi hu n next part ka wait kar rahi hu….

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Congo lashy, as usual a very entertaining and lovely update.

I liked veer and sheras confrontation in the beginning of the epi but I am really getting very tired of her this know it all attitude

"Revolutionaries? Strange! Sakshi didi and Maaji have been very fidgety ever since the soldiers came and ever since the word 'revolutionaries' has been mentioned. Do they know or have something to do with them? Dhruv ji has also been acting secretively ever since the guards arrived... additionally, it almost seemed like Rajkumar Veer was shielding all of them from the soldiers... hmmm... this family is definitely hiding something and it appears like Rajkumar Veer is probably aware of it..."

this goes so well with the new attitude of dharam "Dharam gently folds his palms at them, as a mark of gratitude"

I just loved dharam veer and bhallas reunion, with each trying to hide there emotions behind fun teasing and veers pride over dharams victory was so sweet

Woooooooooow lashy are u gona treat us to a nice marriage between dhruv and saakshi omgggggggggg I cant wait for all the preparations and celebrations, but pls pls pls somehow get sia and shera to be part of these celebrations toooo. It wld be completely awesome.

Ohhhhhhhh this is so bad, somebody kill this rajya sabha too, my handsome dhruv cant have a marriage of dreams coz of them

This dhruv is such a silent type, but still inspires so much confidence and faith in everyone around, u really need to give him a face lashy, I really want to see how dhruv looks like in yr imagination.

This was so touching"The only time that you could spend with me, you were injured and I could not even speak to you…I could not even feed you a morsel of food…" she pauses to wipe her tears "But then... I must consider myself fortunate that as a mother, I could at least care for you…"

Bhalla takes entire advantage of the grand opportunity to beam and wave out excitedly to the audience……………he is just too cute

Ohhhhhh this confrontation between veer and shera was so ugly, I kind of felt bad for poor shera

But the very next scene between both the mothers, veer and dharam was so beautiful and light hearted, u hv balanced it really well lashy, one scene confrontation and the very next one cheerful and light hearted.

Looking up to smile at the suddenly conscious Dharam, Veer addresses Bhalla aloud "No wonder someone has been chirpier and more frolicsome than usual... Dharam and mischief? We should have guessed that something like this must have been the reason..." …………..omgggggggggggggggg this was so funny

And sias letter is the ultimate omggggggggg poor dharam ek veer kafi nahin tha bechara

Rajkumar Veer,

Hope this message finds you, your brother Rajkumar Dharam and friend Balaram ji well. Since your noble brother does not seem to scribe his own messages, I wondered if he read his own too. Hence; please excuse my discourtesy at having kindly addressed the letter to you instead, in hope that you might read it out to him!

"How did she know that I wrote the message Dharam?"

Shrugging his shoulders, Dharam lets out a sigh and then mumbles naughtily "She probably guessed from the messy scroll... the handwriting..." omggggggggggggggggggg where do u get these ideas lashy

Veer winks at Bhalla and then the two boys turn to glance at Dharam, who desperately tries to conceal his blush and looks away to evade their teasing gapes at him……………….i want to desperately desperately want to see something like this.

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I sincerely request you to pass on the message to your brother that I will in all earnest, be awaiting a personal message from the prince himself, in future.

"Dharam... that one letter has worked wonders... she has now become like a warrior princess

"By the way, it seems like you would have to write your own letters in future Dharam... not my orders...someone else's..."

Sporting a guilty look; "I was becoming insane for the past two days… there was absolutely no news of Veer or his wellbeing…hence, when I received this letter, it was the only thing that kept me company…I had no other choice... I used to eat a few morsels of the Prasad and then read her letter over and over again…hence, in the end I was only able to save some bits for you…"

Veer reprimands Dharam "Dharam, I never thought that you would lack in manners and ethics… you read other's letters… eat other's Prasad..."

"This letter has been addressed to me…it's mine now…hence…I shall keep it safely…" housing a dreamy gaze, Veer enacts "As it is, I don't remember the last time when someone sent me a letter..."

Dharam becomes annoyed and replies "Well... no... the message in it is for me... so this letter shall remain safe with me... anyway, you can't chase me down the hallways now so, I will just leave..."

"You would never understand... but my biggest relief and happiness was only when I found you safe and sound…"

but this was the most sweet and touching line of the whole epi.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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lashy, samyukta back on top..... waiting desp for next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Minnie waiting...............patiently.......................🤔
She will wait till eternity for Shradz to update Samyukta..................*sighs deeply*.............. *takes a deep breath*........
Hum intezaar karengey..............hum intezaar karengey.......... tera quayamat tak.................😍

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