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Posted: 17 years ago
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Okay huggies and kissies 😛 for writing yet another beautiful part .. me eager to comment so jumping straight to business without wasting another moment.. 😆 😉

Opening scene Agnis Chamber was very well written lashuu 👏👏👏 The first line itself was sooo beautiful ambiance of the shrouded chamber that constantly houses a distinct aura of displeasure seems increasingly unsympathetic during this rueful evening 😵 I could sense a not very well lit, suffocating though luxurious chamber I like your villains too.. I think Agni is a very smart chappie 😳 Still knows that he needs to separate the bros to win n I was jumping up and down since I knew it he will turn to only 1 person for this my most favourite fictional character ever created And the only... only person who has come even close to bringing a misunderstanding in between those two brothers in all these years... was the most capable and observant spy I have ever come across... Shera..." My Annnuuuuuu 😍 ❤️🤗The nicest of emoticons fall short to express my adoration and regard for her !!

The soothing deep pink is the perfect color to do justice to the soothing beautiful tranquil lines 😍 As the tumultuous storm that briefly clouded Aryanagar finally passed away; life at the kingdom slowly begins to lull and regularize, while people's lives return to normalcy🥳 My favourite boys 😳 Dharam continues to aide his father in dealing with and sorting out post-war affairs Trust you to have think with a practical head where its required and pilot the readers to dream land at other times. Frolicsome Veer heals well from his war wounds, bringing cheer and laughter back within palace walls. Awwwwwww This boy is soo perfect.. Mature , brave, has a great sense of humor, handsome looks, playful too.. where can I get someone like him ☺️Agni and Jaivardhan lie low, patiently watching the events unfold before them 😳. I repeat.. nice sensible intelligent villains you have.. a cool headed intelligent villain is more dangerous than otherwise. I am actually looking forward to see their plots and how DV win .. Bhuvi interested in action now.😲. Wht did your story do to her Lashu 😲

For me so far in Sammi the war scenes were the best described scenes but the court assembly now competes for the best described scene 👏 I could see in my mind as I was reading the grand splendor of the hall, the smug nobles and commanders, the proud king on his grand throne, adoring proud onlookers, the queens proudly looking from some jharoka (I dunno as much as you do about palaces 😳.. ),the formal proceedings normally politics and assemblies dont interest me in the least but I thoroughly enjoyed this part.. 😛

The best lines of this scene Smiling to himself softly, Dharam replies "The Department of Revenue 😳 ahhhh a soft smile on that serene handsome face 😍 and 'Standing up with dignity; Veer clinches his sword, as he replies confidently "The Defense ministry"☺️ Bhuvi went allllllll 😍for a full 10 mins after this scene

OMG you showed conspiracy, poverty, politics now accounting too 😲👏!! WOW what a treat this part is .. nav ratan kurma *slurp.. Dharam had a good head for numbers too😳 awwwwwwwww n look at my brilliant lashu she even describes the revenue office sooo beautifully 🤗 (proud hug that was). "Amidst hundreds of monumental ebony shelves housing records in the form of crude papers, scrolls and mighty bound books. I could smell the old papers and books"

And here comes notty Veer boy and Bhalla 😛 awwww soo sweet.. throwing leaves on Dharam.😆. and veers chides to Dharam (me chosen pretty pink since this scene deserves appreciation in pretty pink 😳 )but you have become very dull... lacklustre... boring..." The docile Bhalla adds "Yes" .. Lashu you must find a girl for poor Bhalla too.. maybe adorable Daksha or the sensible nanda.. OMG I just cant stop quoting lines of this scene.. Veer replies chirpily "I am far more efficient than you judge me to be...I finished examining..... I don't neglect my duties like you, Rajkumar Dharam'"Bhalla supports Veer proudly "Yes" * Bhuvi shakes head n gives a sweet giggle to Bhalla..

OMG OMG Dharam sent Siya a letter.. you didn't show us lashuuu🥺' as it is I don't get to see any love letters but for the lovely scrolls you show me.. this is not done yaar 😭 and Dharam observing Veer and Bhalla's disgusted frowns, Dharam resumes explaining himself "I mean...I thanked her for the war... but... and... I expressed some feelings... I mean love... I..." *bhuvi blushes for Dharam.☺️. silly boy shut up.. your friends will tease you bad now.. 😵 Taking the cue, Bhalla drops down to the ground and starts coughing out loudly too. OMG I have fallen in love with all 4 boys in your Sammi now.. ( in case your are confused 2 heros, 1 villian + Bhalla)

*yawnnn🥱 Now you know how lazy I am.. I am not gonna tell you again how I loved this scene since I already did in the promo * notty wink to lashu 😉

"Oh I see...anyway...Veer... how long did it take for both of you to prepare this drama?"very fonny Dharam😆.. you have a good sense of humour too..☺️

Adjusting his sword irately; Veer stands up in mock resentment, as he grumbles morosely "All right Rajkumar Dharam'we have after all, entered Kalyug *Bhuvi goes awww again☺️frowns thinking.🤔. Kalyug began back then ? my history weak 😕 😆

"You are such a fine actor Veer... you always manage to..." Fine actor too *Bhuvi blushes☺️☺️☺️ .. oh my cheeks burn with soo much blushing.. 😆

Ending line the flushed Dharam laughs aloud, amused at how he always succumbed to his brother's pranks Me chuckling with Dharam too aww that prankster bro of his 😆😆😆

NOW you must be wondering in case you did notice.😛. impossible not to.. that Bhuvi did not comment on what you thought will be her most favouritest part 😳' Bhuvi saves desserts for the last😃' awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww pretty purple for the the pretty girl in purple dress😳' MY DEAREST ANU 😛😳!! *Bhuvi still in Anus basti .. I want to be with my girl.. she shouldering as much responsibility if not more than Veer 👏 ! 'Baba... I work day in and day out at the shop...I feed 20 mouths everyday... I am forced to risk my life, working with a rogue like Rajkumar Agni... now... now I am even getting involved in Aryanagar politics...I am killing my conscience on all levels... and here you are just spending all the" I am not going to shed tears and insult my proud girl or pity her and insult her self esteem.. I am proud of her !!! Her sarcastic humour 😆 👏"Rajkumar Agni, I apologize for the fact that I did not store the Prasad for all these days... but why do you worry... I am not angry with you..." LOL Agni serves you right.. I want to see proud Veer boy at the receiving end of this sharp tongue at their next encounter.😉 Entertained by his fraudulent confessions, she disguises her grin my dear girl her wit 👏 I really don't want to walk on gold... nor do I need gold to sleep...her intelligence 👏now, what task do you want me to complete?" her courage while dealing with Agni and those rogues awww constant torture and lone harassment' *bhuvi sniffs.. 'muffle her mildly bedewing eyes, ensuring that her tears did not flow down.(Even in her pic you have tried to capture her mildly bedewing eyes, haven't you Ms Perfectionist Lashu😆 .. *huggie to you 🤗) I am not going to sympathise with her or something or be worried about her blurting out about sakshi.. since I know my Anu will make sure they come to no harm.. she will not let her friend suffer because of her and *rubbing hands in glee.. this promises of further encounters and clashes between Anu n Veer .. 'Watching Agni and his friends walk away nonchalantly; Shera takes a few deep breaths and closes her face, hoping God would show some regard and a positive end to the ordeal that she was facing yeah get lost Agni n company.. get lost n suffocate to death in that chamber of yours ! *hugging Anu🤗🤗🤗.. it will be over soon Anu.. A loving, handsome prince is going to come and take you away from all the horrors you are facing 😳.. If anyone deserves a prince in of dreams you do, my girl.🤗🤗🤗. more hugs to you.. Take care and stay out of danger, will you.. 🤗🤗😛

Now back to you lashu 😛.. dont waste your precious time and internet ink replying to my post.. If you want to thank , you can do it without saying "t h a n k s" 😆 you can post part 24 sooooooooonnnnnnnn .. until then I stay put with Anu in her basti 😳😍
I have been engrossed in reading commenting on part 23 ever since I woke up n its late afternoon now 😆 .. Thankoooooooo for a wonderful morning/noon with Sammi.. 🤗 yet another perfectly written part 😛
Edited by bhuvana3 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72

Excuse me for the lack of emoticons... i am so fed up of this new IF's formatting flaws.... i posted the entire answer 3 times and then i sorta gave up😡

@ Kiran

Wowow lashy what an awesome update and I am so happy to be the first one to comment again

Mee tooooooooooooooooooooooo yayyyyyyyyyyyy… kiran jaan… big mwaah mwaah…

But I am still angry at u for making us wait so long *gulp*

I just loved jaivardhan trying to throttle Dhananjeya., but if it was agni I wld have been even more happy. Yahaan kaaa agni would throttle his father back looool

pls lashy don't let dv go completely against each other as in the serial. The DV in this story would go as much against each other as two misunderstood brothers would go... so don't worry not more not less… not immediately start off with swords against each other… thoda meeta tho thoda khatta bhi hoga na…

And I just did not like him flirting with shera he is so stupid. He is just using her left right and centre and she can do absolutely nothing but listen if she wants her people and herself to be alive…

And this harsh he is like a scorned lover now, he is going to try to create probs for dharam and sia… he joined the bad boy gang!!!

Ohhhhhhhhhhh ab for shera I was so sad, poor girl is like a female robin hood, she is killing her conscious and doing all this work. U really pity her now. She is so alone. She does not even have the support of her father. And I felt very sad when she says that dv don't trust her anymore. U can feel how much that fact hurts her.

kiran ji she not majorly sad that DV don't trust her… in a way she has accepted her fate… her job was just that of a spy…and she knew that once D/V come to know she was creating MU.. they would ditch or more importantly maybe even imprison her (which fortunately for her both D and V gems)…she is sad as she doesn't want any more part in all this politics and spying as such…she has been hurt enough…yes definitely she had nice time when she was with D and V… though only very formal and short… her mischievous prince needs to know the truth and save her…

OMggggggggg but what did shera do she has told agni abt saakshi and her having info abt the revolutionaries and that veer saved them from the soldiers I know… she was harassed into it... especially by Tasha… 😡

And I just did not like agni get praised for doing something that veer alone did They have always had their way hai na…

yeah veer bahut sochta hai… hee hee aryavardhan was saying that all shramiks knowing anything abt the revolts would have to be imprisoned na… so he was worried for that family…

But I just loved there new plan to expose jv hee hee… thankoo jee

Aur veer ki nautanki ke bare mein what to say jo pehle nahin kaha hai, it was the best scene of ur epi and a lovely way to end it. Dharam ji ja rahe hain sia se milne Yes… thodi achi news jo aanaa hai... aage…😛

@ archana

I shall wait for you to comment… do take your time… yes shera's life is sad... but she lives it with a smile… that's what makes her so special… 😃

@ Reena

Thank you so much reeens… thanks for all your complements…. 😳

Bechara everyone seems to be making a fool of Agni.

Hee hee but actually Agni is pretty cunning himself… an apt contemporary for Dharam and Veer… will always create problems for them…

How could harsh tell everyone that it was siya who informed dharam and veer. I hope dharam beats him to a pulp if he ever meets harsh. Harsh is a jealous and sick guy. how dare he think about destroying siya's happiness and crushing them.
Yup he is hurt and wants to take his revenge too…

Agni has realised that he can never win as long as veer and dharam are together and wants to split them up using shera
Yes he is using the right trump card…

Will wait for more hun...

@Bhuvi

Mwah mwah… hot chocos to you too… and baaap re you made up for not having commented all these days *giggle* with 3 pages of comments.. looool I loved reading it…

Opening scene Agnis Chamber was very well written lashuu. The first line itself was sooo beautiful. I could sense a not very well lit, suffocating though luxurious chamber I like your villains too.. Agni knows that he needs to separate the bros to win n I knew he will turn to only 1 person for this my most favourite fictional character ever created.

I could almost smell the old books and papers in that revenue chamber…
Blush for all your comments above...So bhuvi interested in action, plotting and politics too… looool… that's what happens if shradu plants her wicked spells…

So I see you still oscillating between dharam and veer… and now two more guys to add to the list… Agni and Bhalla too…

OMG you showed conspiracy, poverty, politics now accounting too !!

Yes this is what reminded me of you in this part… the tax and accounting.. loool…

And here comes notty Veer boy and Bhalla awwww soo sweet.. throwing leaves on Dharam. .

To tease him as he was so immersed in his work that he didn't even realize these two stepped in…

Lashu you must find a girl for poor Bhalla

We need atleast one Brahmachari in this story… and you guessed who it was…loool

OMG OMG Dharam sent Siya a letter.. you didn't show us lashuuu ' as it is I don't get to see any love letters but for the lovely scrolls you show me.. hee hee… tho sammi sirf love letters hi hogaa bhuvi…

Bhuvi again frowns thinking.. Kalyug began back then ? my history weak

You need a hammer bhuvi…yugs last for thousands of years not hundreds… kalyug started after Krishna left the earth…. Roughly from about 3100 BC…So roughly the past 5000 years has been kalyug...all kings queens we know kalyug…*giggle*

Bhuvi saves desserts for the last awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww pretty purple for the the pretty girl in purple dress MY DEAREST ANU!! *Bhuvi still in Anus basti .. I want to be with my girl.. she shouldering as much responsibility if not more than Veer at this point of time, she is definitely shouldering more responsibility than Veer…

Looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool and hugs to all your self-talk, self assurance… and everything with respect to Anu's dilemmas state and predicament…

Even in her pic you have tried to capture her mildly bedewing eyes, haven't you Ms Perfectionist Lashu .. *huggie to you

I completed that picture in 20 mins… genius aren't I? (actually I never thought I would be able to capture any expression apart from that one picture I have of her's…..so I must say I was pretty pleased…)

ok dee thats all for now.... for commenting... on everything... love you loads... and will post part 24 soon...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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me back with more comments.😊
What i loved :
    the way you describe shera's tribe and how she is helping the elderly man. you get to understand why shera is helping agni. her baba 😡😡 who is spending the money gambling while shera is having to work with agni and spy for him to feed the tribe😭😭😭
"Baba... I work day in and day out at the shop...I feed 20 mouths everyday... I am forced to risk my life, working with a rogue like Rajkumar Agni... now... now I am even getting involved in Aryanagar politics...I am killing my conscience on all levels... and here you are just spending all the?" this touched me 😭😭😭, it made me want to go and hug shera as i can imagine her pain and helplessness. She is having to work with sick people like agni and deal with her conscience when agni says"Shera I know that you are angry with me... the other day you came to me with the Prasad at the wrong time... I was extremely agitated on that morning, as all my plans were failing... do you have any of the Prasad left now? I shall gladly take it from you..."its a bit too late asking for the prasad now, he is being nice to shera now as he wants her to do some work for him😡 "Rajkumar Agni, I apologize for the fact that I did not store the Prasad for all these days... but why do you worry... I am not angry with you..." i love her reply, 👏 she is too good😆 "For a person who loves you so dearly Shera, you hardly seem to share the same feelings about me... anyway, I don't mind... this is what true love is all about... I still care for you and would continue to do so?" care for her, you just want her to do some work for you and that is why you are being so nice😡 Entertained by his fraudulent confessions, she disguises her grin and interrupts him dramatically "Rajkumar Agni, I heard that you did not suffer any major injuries... even if you did, you seem to have recovered very well... you look hale and hearty now..." she smiles "Anyway, why the formalities? I shall not mind if you come to the point. What do you need me to do for you now?" i love her reply, she is too good and intelligent 👏👏👏 and does not want to listen to any of agni's bakwas and wants to know what he wants her to do "Rajkumar Agni, I really don't want to walk on gold... nor do I need gold to sleep... now, what task do you want me to complete?" kya dialogue hai shera ka 👏👏👏, makes me want to go and hug her. "You are more capable, witty and vigilant than anyone else I have come across... even that shrewd Veer trusted you, didn't he?" agni knows that shera is the person who can spy on veer and dharam and get away with it. She is the perfect match for veer's intelligence and humour.😆 shera remebering her meetings with dharam and veer and how veer insulted her in front of everyone. Veer why did you have to open your mouth in front of everyone. He could have shouted at her when there was no one around😡 shera come out of your thoughts otherwise agni is going to suspect something😭😭 someone shut up tasha, me hate him, 😡😡 leave shera alone and go. He is trying to cause trouble. I really hope veer beats him one day 😡. me want to go and protect shera as agni is trying to make shera reveal information 😭😭 shera is so along against these sick people 😡😡 and oh no she tells them 😭 but not the whole truth and just about the revolutionaries. 😊 that tasha 😡😡 why did he have to go and mention pari and sakshi. lashy can you use floo powder and send me and bhuvana so we can go and beat tasha up😡😡 agni knows about sakshi and now he is not going to rest till he finds something out as to why veer helped them 😭😭 😭 me really feel for shera, she is all by herself against these guys and trying to protect sakshi and pari at the same time. i just want to go and hug her and stand beside her for support🤗🤗 agni leave shera alone 😡😡 and shera is trying hard to protect them and pleas against agni on not harming them till she finds out the truth 🤗lashy i want veer to beat agni up for upsetting shera and annoying her😳😳 please Agni dont bellow orders at her 😡 and dont call veer a brat. 😡 Shera takes a few deep breaths and closes her face, hoping God would show some regard and a positive end to the ordeal that she was facing. 😭😭😭 this really touched as me as i can feel shera's sadness and she is trying so hard not to cry. Her pictures shows the amount of pain she is in but at the same time it shows that she is trying to be strong and not lose hope. The picture conveys so much 👏 Its like she wants to cry but is not and the tears formed affect me too much 😭😭😭
  • tasha stop trying to emotionally blackmail shera by reminding her of the debts owed and that she is doing this for the tribe😡
  • lashy some more comments from me 😆
    I loved :
    • the way you have written the speech which is read by the petite man. i love the words you have used👏👏👏
    • veer thinking about pari, sakshi and dhruv 😊
    • dharam's speech sounds so grown up. He is talking like how a king should talk. 👏👏 i like how he says him and veer want to be involved in administration. He says it so calmly and nicely that no one refuse😆 😆 Agni is going to get it now😆
    • "Which aspects of the administration were you looking to start working in Rajkumar Dharam?"Dharam replies "The Department of Revenue" I was in fits when i read this 🤣
    • Veer meekly "Which aspects of the administration were you looking to start working in Rajkumar Veer?" Standing up with dignity; Veer clinches his sword, as he replies confidently "The Defence ministry" Veer and meek 🤣🤣🤣 thats like asking a lion not to growl 🤣🤣🤣 it was 🤣 when agni and jai grumple as soon as they hear this. they know that with veer and dharam they will not be able to take any money or mess with the defence 🤣🤣👏
    • awww i can imagine dharam sitting around with various books spread around and him trying to understand how the books has been balanced. He must be feeling very dizzy by now. 🤣🤣
    • the minister saying that agni used to praise his accounting and i felt like saying "what accounting" , can agni count and add up😆😆😆
    • i am glad dharam understand how much money shramiks have been charged😭 and that it is not fair to do so.👏👏
    • he is so intent on looking at accounting that he does not even realise that veer and bhalla have been throwing leafs on the book pages. Dharam you should try and read siya instead, she is much more interesting than accounting 😳😳😆
    • mantri wants to escape as well and veer tells him to leave before dharam says anything😆
    • you don't realize this Dharam... but you have become very dull... lacklustre... boring..." veer i agree to, he needs to go and see siya😳 bhalla keeps saying yes to everything veer says😆😆
    • I don't neglect my duties like you, Rajkumar Dharam…" loool veer reminding dharam of siya, i like his way 👏👏👏 lets hope he does not reminding with shera 😳 i love how dharams expression changes at the mention of siya.😍 lashy when will they meet?😭
    • I sent her a long letter thanking her for her help with the war… but I have not received any replies yet..." observing Veer and Bhalla's disgusted frowns, Dharam resumes explaining himself "I mean...I thanked her for the war... but... and... I expressed some feelings... I mean love... I..." realizing he was mentioning more than necessary, he pauses "Anyway, that is personal... why should I tell you both..." kyaa baat 👏👏👏 dharam has alredy sent her a letter and he starts stuttering when he says that he has explained some feelings and gets shy when he realies he has mentioned love 😆😆😍
    • Breaking out into fits of cough, Veer jests his nave brother "Oh God" he coughs "Someone please" he coughs "Someone please teach this ignorant prince…"since when did veer and bhalla become experts at love that they are giving dharam advice. 🤣
    • Striding gallantly across the hall clenching to his sword like a king, Veer declares in a majestic voice to his enamoured small audience "Rajkumar Dharam... you should strive to make her happy... she is obviously having constraints at responding to your messages, possibly due to restrictions by the queen of Niphaud... she did mention in her last scroll that she was going to Gomathi Pashupathinath temple next chaturthi for the Sankasthi Vrat... it's tryodashi today... start now... you shall reach the temple by tomorrow... meet her at the shrine like a prince…why messages and letters..." kitna nautanki veer karta hai 🤣🤣🤣 i can just imagine this scene with veer walking gallantly with the sword. i like his idea about meeting up instead of writing letters. 🤣 bhalla agreeing to everything veer says like a parrot
    • "Be brave Dharam... if not at the shrine, surprise her by whisking her away... meet her secretly ...thank her..." placing his hand on his forehead; Veer then touches his heart in histrionic fashion, as he blurts out "She shall be so happy..." i love veers idea of whisking her away👏👏, i hope he does that to shera as well and than me will faint😍
    • "By the way, why are you so desperate about going there Veer…" he pauses "Is it because Daksha might be there too?"🤣 veer will run the other direction with or without you dharam the minute he sees daksha. he can fight many men but with daksha he runs like a missile🤣
    • kitna drama veer karta hia by saying that they need to get out o fthe palace walls 😆😆 and dharam has know that him and bhalla have planned this drama😆😆😆
    • Veer stands up in mock resentment, as he grumbles morosely "All right Rajkumar Dharam…we have after all, entered Kalyug…I should learn to reconcile myself… honest people and good intentions are rarely appreciated…." he knows how to convince dharam 👏
    • "You are such a fine actor Veer... you always manage to..." realizing that Veer was not about to stop, Dharam calls out to him "Oh Lord…all right Veer... I am coming... I am coming…we shall leave today…" even dharam knows that he will not be able to win in words with veer so just gives up. Veer likes to have his own way and dharam so sweet knows it but still lets him get away with it😍
    • sweet that veer wants to thank his bhabi 😊
    • yey dharam is looking forward to meeting siya 😍

    lashy lovely part 😍 me so looking forward to the next part.👏

    Edited by divareena - 17 years ago
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    Posted: 17 years ago
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    okays... me here with my reply... 😊

    agni!!! haa!!!! serves him right.... 😈

    Observing his unused sword; Agni nurses his ego, hurt by both the failure of his ambitions and the popularity garnered by his rivals Dharam and Veer during the war. Screaming in frustration, Agni stands up vehemently....

    but this is the agni i always wanted to see in the show... not a clown... but a real villain with a brain of his own... 😊

    "Anyway, I shall eradicate all the revolutionaries at once... they dared to raise their hand against me…to injure me... I paid them... I provided them with manpower and they set out on me!"

    Agni mutters in a comparatively hushed tone "Dharam and Veer are aware of our plans… pitaji, I think it would be better to lie low for a while and resume our strategies only after taking very cautious steps…"

    hmmmn... but how did this 'friend' know that sia gave the news to dv?? 🤔

    .....the friend concludes foolishly "B...besides, I... I... just wanted to ask you if you knew...did you know that Dharam and Veer managed to get the news about Chatarpur's attack, from the princess of Niphaud?"

    oh how i wud love to get my hands on that harsh ka baccha...😈 😈😈 .....Harsh laughs at the proposition, before continuing with an expression of disgust "Ha! Rajkumar Dharam... it seems she apparently has her heart set out on Rajkumar Dharam and cannot imagine living a life with me... that... that ungrateful... malicious... spiteful witch... she thought she was doing me a favour by breaking off all ties with me..." he pauses to vow with fervid vindictive conviction "After everything that I did for her, she dared to insult me... me - the prince of Chatarpur... I want to see her life and happiness destroyed... she thinks she shall live happily with Dharam...I would like to see their lives wrecked and Dharam crushed!" really??? hmmph.... we'll see about that harsh.... u even dare touch dharam and sia and u wont know wat hit u.... 😡😡😡 this guy thinks too highly of himself... 'after all that he did for her' it seems... tsk tsk... now look wat all dharam will do to u... 😆

    oh no... this agni's evil... i dont like the sound of this -

    "....they have to be split... only then shall they become broken souls... when together, they are always successful in all their endeavours…"

    oh i love this shera... she's so sweet and caring 🤗-

    Moving close to sit beside the old man, Shera helps him to turn over on his back and then ensuring she had his attention, begins to advice him "Bade baba... I have brought you your medicine... the vaidyaji has asked you to have one pinch of this powder everyday after your noon meals... hold on to this tightly... please don't forget to follow the vaidyaji's orders..."

    Repelled by their very presence; Shera masks her feelings to force a false grin of hospitality at the hostile men. Taking a few steps away from her father; her immediate thoughts are for the safety of the innocent children scampering around, obliviously.

    oh my poor girl... i feel so bad for her😭 -

    "Baba... our shop materials are not available in gambling dens...or in bar rooms. However, that is where you seem to have spent all of it..." observing his disinterested expressions; she holds him by his shoulders in order to make sure he paid heed to her pleas, as she continues to implore "Baba... I work day in and day out at the shop...I feed 20 mouths everyday... I am forced to risk my life, working with a rogue like Rajkumar Agni... now... now I am even getting involved in Aryanagar politics...I am killing my conscience on all levels... and here you are just spending all the…"

    agni's attempts at wooing shera wud have been slightly amusing in some other situation-

    Agni winks at his friends and then quickens his pace in order to catch up with the girl, as he professes "Shera I know that you are angry with me... the other day you came to me with the Prasad at the wrong time... I was extremely agitated on that morning, as all my plans were failing... do you have any of the Prasad left now? I shall gladly take it from you..."

    ....moving close to her; he looks into her eyes, as he continues sadly "For a person who loves you so dearly Shera, you hardly seem to share the same feelings about me... anyway, I don't mind... this is what true love is all about... I still care for you and would continue to do so…"

    "This is hardly worth your merit Shera... but then, once I become a king... and then an emperor... you shall be by my side, walking on gold... sleeping on gold..."

    but here i just felt like kicking him away from shera... stay away u brute... u dont deserve her ... 😡😡😡
    aaaah but our shera can handle the situation very well - Breaking out into an amused smile, she pulls back her veil and responds sarcastically "Rajkumar Agni, I apologize for the fact that I did not store the Prasad for all these days...

    Entertained by his fraudulent confessions, she disguises her grin and interrupts him dramatically "Rajkumar Agni, I heard that you did not suffer any major injuries... even if you did, you seem to have recovered very well... you look hale and hearty now..." she smiles "Anyway, why the formalities? I shall not mind if you come to the point. What do you need me to do for you now?"

    "Rajkumar Agni, I really don't want to walk on gold... nor do I need gold to sleep... now, what task do you want me to complete?"

    i'm so proud of her.... go girl!!!! 👏👏👏
    aaaaaaaarghhhh!!!!!! this tasha's so irritating... agni ka chamcha 😡-

    However, the guileful Tasha spots the change in her demeanour and aggravates her by revealing his suspicions aloud "You are obviously hiding something Shera... why do you want to hide what you know... even if it is something small, do tell them what you were thinking about... even a small clue would help... "

    no wonder shera hates all men... her baba, tasha, agni... but once she gets to know dharam and veer and of course sweet bhalla her misconceptions will be cleared...
    poor girl... she must be feeling terrible about giving away information about sakshi and pari... 😔

    "Rajkumar Agni... please don't do anything to them…let me find out for sure and then I shall tell you everything…" mentally recollecting the dialogues she heard Sakshi, Dhruv and Veer have about the revolt, she continues "All this is only something I am inferring... I could be wrong... I would need to find out more... give me some time Rajkumar Agni..."

    i'll come back and edit this place with more comments.. 🤗
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    😳Applaud for a very well thought out, planned and penned part of Samyukta.
    Minnie pleased as punch to read it!

    But I demand in all earnestness............ what , just what took you so long to post this part..😕............ I would wait and wait on my lappi refreshing the same page🥱.............. and atlast,, Shardz updated Samyukta.

    I loved the way Agni's chamber, his frustration, his anger, his convo with his gang of bad boys was described. I can visualize it all .............👏

    Harsh has joined them all in full earnestness now........ the villian with the broken heart as I would like to call him. But no matter how heartbroken .....calling bad names to a lady.............is a strict no no.😡

    The tribal settllement of Shera and her realation with the people of her tribe , almost one of guardian, with specially kids and elderly members.............. ⭐️

    I always felt the girl was brave and right I was!! But you can thank all her hardships for making her the wonderful stoic girl she is right now. ............ And this damsel in distress sure needs no knight in shining armour⭐️

    I liked her convo with Agni and the way she had a reply to all his jabs. ............. even when she knows that one stroke from his sword and she might be finished and her non-existence may not even be questioned, since AryaNagar is such a badly ruled kingdom.................... where royalty is always right even when they are wrong. People like Shera have to resort to means they do not entirely approve of..... to earn money, because of the unmeritorious rulers. Hope DV come soon to restructure the stinking political system there.

    I loved Shera's 'mildly bedewing eyes' and Shradu's handiwork.😃

    And the court scene competes with the war scene in aptness.⭐️........... *Applause*

    And Dharam the hardworker.................... I can imagine how he must toil for his exams, burning night oil...............😛

    Veer smart chappie delt with his work , but I could do with some peek into his activities apart from pranks..........😳

    Now I'll wait for Dharam and Sia to meet😍

    Edited by minnie2308 - 17 years ago
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    #76

    Originally posted by: minnie2308

    😳Applaud for a very well thought out, planned and penned part of Samyukta.
    Minnie pleased as punch to read it!

    But I demand in all earnestness............ what , just what took you so long to post this part..😕............ I would wait and wait on my lappi refreshing the same page🥱.............. and atlast,, Shardz updated Samyukta.

    I loved the way Agni's chamber, his frustration, his anger, his convo with his gang of bad boys was described. I can visualize it all .............👏

    Harsh has joined them all in full earnestness now........ the villian with the broken heart as I would like to call him. But no matter how heartbroken .....calling bad names to a lady.............is a strict no no.😡

    The tribal settllement of Shera and her realation with the people of her tribe , almost one of guardian, with specially kids and elderly members.............. ⭐️

    I always felt the girl was brave and right I was!! But you can thank all her hardships for making her the wonderful stoic girl she is right now.

    I liked her convo with Agni and the way she had a reply to all his jabs. ............. even when she knows that one stroke from his sword and she might be finished and her non-existence may not even be questioned, since AryaNagar is such a badly ruled kingdom.................... where royalty is always right even when they are wrong. People like Shera have to resort to means they do not entirely approve of..... to earn money, because of the unmeritorious rulers. Hope DV come soon to restructure the stinking political system there.

    I loved Shera's 'mildly bedewing eyes' and Shradu's handiwork.😃

    And the court scene competes with the war scene in aptness.⭐️........... *Applause*

    And Dharam the hardworker.................... I can imagine how he must toil for his exams, burning night oil...............😛

    Veer smart chappie delt with his work , but I could do with some peek into his activities apart from pranks..........😳

    Now I'll wait for Dharam and Sia to meet😍

    Is this someone I know 😲 😲
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    Originally posted by: bhuvana3

    Is this someone I know 😲 😲

    Bhuvi you dont remember me anymore😭
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    Posted: 17 years ago
    #78
    Thank you chooooooooooo much reens, eesha, minoo, 🤗 neeri jaan, reserved nemo and reserved rashi *giggle* 🤗
    @ neeri
    this is the agni i always wanted to see in the show... not a clown... but a real villain with a brain of his own... 😳 thankcooooo
    hmmph.... we'll see about that harsh.... u even dare touch dharam and sia and u wont know wat hit u.... 😡😡😡 this guy thinks too highly of himself... 'after all that he did for her' it seems... tsk tsk... now look wat all dharam will do to u... awww i enjoyed reading your emotions here neeri..😆
    hmmmn... but how did this 'friend' know that sia gave the news to dv?? Aur kyaa woh Harsh ne ispe confide kiyaa.. and this lesser intelligent of the group of intelligent villains blurts it out... 😆 tabhi tho he doesnt know when to keep quiet and bhadkaafyes an already bhadaked group.. 😆
    no wonder shera hates all men... her baba, tasha, agni... but once she gets to know dharam and veer and of course sweet bhalla her misconceptions will be cleared...
    beautiful analysis darling.. 😳
    thanks and a big hug to your comments... i know how busy you are... *hugsssssssssssssssss*🤗
    @ minoo
    chollie... starting your comments with daant... ye kaisaa insaaf hai ji.. 😭
    I loved the way Agni's chamber, his frustration, his anger, his convo with his gang of bad boys was described. I can visualize it all .............👏
    thank you choooooooo much.... 😳

    Harsh has joined them all in full earnestness now........ the villian with the broken heart as I would like to call him. But no matter how heartbroken .....calling bad names to a lady.............is a strict no no.😡

    I know he a baaaaaaaaaaad boy.. shall we both run to him and teach him manners...😡
    The tribal settllement of Shera and her realation with the people of her tribe , almost one of guardian. I always felt the girl was brave and right I was!! But you can thank all her hardships for making her the wonderful stoic girl she is right now. ............ liked her convo with Agni and the way she had a reply to all his jabs. ............. even when she knows that one stroke from his sword and she might be finished and her non-existence may not even be questioned, this damsel in distress sure needs no knight in shining armour⭐️ sooooooooo very true minoo.... 😃

    Since AryaNagar is such a badly ruled kingdom.................... where royalty is always right even when they are wrong. People like Shera have to resort to means they do not entirely approve of..... to earn money, because of the unmeritorious rulers. Hope DV come soon to restructure the stinking political system there.

    your points are completely true hun... but Shera's people being a nomadic tribe dont have to stay back at Aryanagar... their job is to move kingdoms and make money... they could have stayed back at Niphaud which is so much more pleasant... but apart from the fact that Aryanagar is a bit of a military kingdom when compared to Niphaud (hence greater requirement for weapons and business for blacksmiths) they also have another reason they are forced to stay back which shall be revealed soon... 😊

    I loved Shera's 'mildly bedewing eyes' and Shradu's handiwork.And the court scene competes with the war scene in aptness😃 *blush* 😳

    And Dharam the hardworker.................... I can imagine how he must toil for his exams, burning night oil...............😛 Veer smart chappie delt with his work , but I could do with some peek into his activities apart from pranks..........😳 oh darling dont worry its only been 3 days since he has taken up responsibilities... sammi shall see the transition of the prankster to worker... plenty of parts with him toiling... *giggle* but possibly with his shirt on..... 😛

    Now I'll wait for Dharam and Sia to meet😍 we shall all...😍

    🤗🤗🤗 big huggggggggggg to you dear...
    @ reens
    Shera touched me 😭😭😭, it made me want to go and hug shera as i can imagine her pain and helplessness. She is having to work with sick people like agni and deal with her conscience .. yes dear... 😭

    I love her replies to Agni, 👏 she is too good😆 She is too good and intelligent 👏👏👏 and does not want to listen to any of agni's bakwas and wants to know what he wants her to do ... yup she is a lioness... ⭐️

    Agni knows that shera is the person who can spy on veer and dharam and get away with it. She is the perfect match for veer's intelligence and humour.😆 bang onnnnn.... precisely why he doesnt want to let go of her...

    Shera come out of your thoughts otherwise agni is going to suspect something😭😭 ... it was a bit too late... 😭

    someone shut up tasha, me hate him, 😡😡 leave shera alone and go. He is trying to cause trouble. I really hope veer beats him one day 😡. that tasha 😡😡 why did he have to go and mention pari and sakshi. lashy can you use floo powder and send me and bhuvana so we can go and beat tasha up😡😡 people like tasha are more dangerous and annoying than outright villains like Agni..

    agni knows about sakshi and now he is not going to rest till he finds something out as to why veer helped them 😭😭 me really feel for shera, she is all by herself against these guys and trying to protect sakshi and pari at the same time. i just want to go and hug her and stand beside her for support🤗🤗 very well said and analysed dear.. yes agni is not going to let them or even shera rest till she keeps revealing info...😕

    agni leave shera alone 😡😡 and shera is trying hard to protect them and pleas against agni on not harming them till she finds out the truth 🤗lashy i want veer to beat agni up for upsetting shera and annoying her😳😳 please hee hee... sab ka time aayega... 😆

    Her pictures shows the amount of pain she is in but at the same time it shows that she is trying to be strong and not lose hope. The picture conveys so much 👏 Its like she wants to cry but is not and the tears formed affect me too much 😭😭😭 thank you soooooooo much dear for the complements....

    🤗🤗🤗 big hug to you
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    OSR Samyukta - Promo to part 24
    Carefully selecting desolate streets to avoid any form of speculations or gossip; Veer briefly realizes that for being a novice rider she managed to hold on securely and remained distant, never seeking his assistance at any speed or gradient through the uneven routes. In spite of being delayed for the meeting with Dharam; the impatient Veer rushes his horse chiefly to unburden the vexation of riding with the discomforting presence of the girl, as soon as possible. The only thing remarkable during the entire length of the duo's fleeting journey is the prominent ambiance of a forced silence between the two.

    Aryanagar, Besides the Devi Mandir street

    Eventually as the riders approach the princes' conventional meeting junction; the alarmed Veer brings the horse to a screeching halt, rattling Shera's otherwise unruffled composure. While the prince becomes confounded; the eager girl bows forward and begins to relish in its entirety, the beautiful spectacle displayed a short distance away. As the duo swiftly dismount the horse, the amazed girl eyes the extravagant retinue consisting of the lustrous golden royal chariot housing the king, followed by the lordly palanquins of the two queens.

    Panicking at the thought of being seen with the girl, Veer dictates the serene Shera fiercely "Leave...now... leave immediately... disappear from here as soon as you can... go..."

    Reacting to his orders without any delay, the modest girl quickly bows to offer her parting regards to the prince. Suddenly; the unexpected gruff neighs of Veer's horse distracts the train of royal attendants; including the guards flanking the monarchs, foot soldiers heaving trunks of royal personal belongings and bevies of maids tending to the royalties. Gradually; the bustle of the entourage converges into myriads of whispers, as they catch a glimpse of the prince and his horse having arrived at the scene with a stunning Shramik girl.

    Just as the agile Shera decides to scamper away, Dharam, Bhalla, Nivritti, Maharani Swathi and Maharaj Aryavardhan respond to the mumbles and murmurs around them, by peeping over to detect the pair and become startled.

    Comprehending that they had now been spotted; Veer becomes increasingly exasperated, while Shera stops in her path, unable to abruptly leave the presence of the king due to decorum and respect.
    Catching the puzzled expressions of his remaining family members; the king then beckons the hush pair towards him.
    Edited by lashy - 17 years ago
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    Posted: 17 years ago
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    hailaaaaa😲😲
    yeh kya hua kab hua......😕 *shocked 😆😆😆 *confirm..by rubbing my eyes..
    m i awake or in dreams..*pinch *ouchhhhhhhh 😆😆😆 yup itz lashy di's next promo update 😳😆
    itni jaldi next update lashy di...😛
    kya baat hai dil khush kar diya..😳😆😆
    muahh for early update..
    atleast early precap..i mean promo..😳😆
    wow veer shera together..😍
    finallyyyyyyyyyyyy 😆 😛haashhhhhhhh jaan mein jaan aayi 😕😳😆
    mmmmmmmn they gott caught...
    fishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 😆
    i can imagine veer n his expresion's from now.............🤣
    di plzzzzz post update soon 😳😆
    wow n me to comment first...
    Edited by Rash2cool - 17 years ago

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