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OSR SAMYUKTA PART 22 - Veer confronts Shera

Recap -

Dharam wins the war and the Gadhwar and Chatarpur soldiers retreat back to their kingdoms. However, Dharam is not successful at implicating Jaivardhan or Agni as the Gadhwar Commander is bribed and tortured by Jaivardhan's aide Dhananjeya beforehand.

Veer is nursed and taken care of by Sakshi and Pari and regains his consciousness. Dhruv joins them to ensure that the family are fine and assures a conscious Veer that Dharam won the war and everyone in Aryanagar is safe. Shera arrives to make sure that Veer was all right

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Aryanagar, the capital - Pari and Sakshi's dwelling

Turning to the seething glares on Veer's irritated face, the prankish girl persists with a silent wink "Why, what do you say Rajkumar?"

Not wanting to cause an unnecessary commotion in front of the family, Veer forces a false smile at her in reply and then looks away, unable to withstand her demeanour.

Watching their entertaining exchanges, Sakshi interrupts them by enquiring hesitantly "Shera... Rajkumar Veer... do you both know each other?"

Both, the spirited girl and the annoyed prince immediately respond to her question with a firm negative shake of their head, amusing the onlookers even more.

Eventually; smiling to herself at Veer's actions, Shera then turns to Sakshi and continues "Sorry didi...I think I have disturbed all of you... I didn't mean to interrupt your conversations... like everyone else, I just came to know that you have been taking care of the prince for the past couple of days... hence, I came to check if you needed anything...I was going to the bazaar to buy some groceries..."

Nodding at her helpful gesture appreciatively, Pari answers "No thank you Shera... it is all right dear... we don't need anything... at least, not for now..."

Smiling at the woman to concur with her reply; Shera mulls on taking leave from everyone and decides to step out of the hut. However; following the faint rhythmic scores of band and fanfare beginning to be heard from the other end of the narrow street, the curious family hastily peep out through the windows of their hut. They catch sight of the organized marching in and lining up of retinues of soldiers in the lane leading towards their dwelling. Indicative of the grand arrival of a member of the royal family; confused yet awed spectators kept in check by royal sentinel on both sides of the rustic streets, strive to watch the rare occurrence of a royal procession in their midst. While few admirers sing odes to the two heroic princes who saved Aryanagar, other grateful subjects join in uttering the victorious and celebratory cries made by the official announcers.

A short while later; repeated vibrant knocks are heard on the unstable door of the hut, housing the wounded prince. Shera gives way to the overwhelmed Sakshi, who quickly opens the door to find the steadfast faces of two Aryanagar soldiers waiting at their doorstep. While Dhruv attempts to remain as inconspicuous as possible by standing at the far corner of the hut, the soldiers quickly scan the interiors and inmates of the modest residence.

Catching sight of the prince lying on a makeshift bed on the floor; they offer him a quick bow. Briefly nodding to accept their salutations, Veer questions them inquisitively "Did Dharam send you? Where is he?"

One of the soldiers speaks up in a low tone to answer the prince's questions "Forgive our intrusion Rajkumar Veer...but, Rajkumar Dharam did not send us... in fact, he is just on his way....we were only hoping to complete a few necessary formalities with this family, prior to that..." as the remaining members, become increasingly perplexed, the soldiers reveal the cause of their presence "We had to check if this family had heard anything about the revolts… if they had any knowledge of any of the revolutionaries and if so, we would have to take them in for questioning..."

Listening to their revelations and realizing the possibility that her family could be summoned for questioning; Pari becomes profusely worried for the safety of Sakshi, Dhruv and the orphanage. Fearful of the soldiers, Pari attempts to conceal the anxiety in her eyes by turning to her calmer daughter for assurance, who in turn looks to Veer for support; all of which the silent watchful Shera notices immediately.

Gauging the mental apprehensions of the family and the precarious situation they were in, Veer quickly reacts to distract the soldiers "What made you both think so? This family have braved revolutionaries... they risked their life to save me... they paid the Vaidyaji, fed me and took care of me; me - an Aryavrat…they have absolutely no idea about any revolt or any revolutionaries... I don't want anyone troubling any member of this family about anything again, or they would have to face me!"

Abashed by his warning, the soldiers apologize meekly "I apologize Your Highness, we were just following our orders and the official decree..." they then pause to reassure the stern Veer "No one shall trouble this family again, Rajkumar..."

While the two guards make a quick bow and scamper out of the hut in order to ensure that they did not incur the further wrath of the young prince, Shera doesn't fail to notice hints of relief on the various faces around her.

Reflecting on everything that transpired around her within the short while, the surprised girl thinks to herself "Revolutionaries? Strange! Sakshi didi and Maaji have been very fidgety ever since the soldiers came and ever since the word 'revolutionaries' has been mentioned. Do they know or have something to do with them? Dhruv ji has also been acting secretively ever since the guards arrived... additionally, it almost seemed like Rajkumar Veer was shielding all of them from the soldiers... hmmm... this family is definitely hiding something and it appears like Rajkumar Veer is probably aware of it..."

Ultimately; as the sonance of the drums, trumpets and announcements grow louder and louder, the pre-occupied Shera snaps out of her thoughts and speaks up mildly in order to take leave before the entry of Rajkumar Dharam "Sakshi didi...Maaji..." she pauses to look at the rigid prince "Rajkumar Veer... I apologize... but I will have to leave now... I have many other chores to attend to..."

Acknowledging the cordial nod of approval from everyone in the devoted family and the cold stares from the prince, the nimble girl bids everyone a farewell and hastily dashes out of the hut into the crowd and hubbub in the streets.

The passage of a brief period of time sees the eventual advent of the proud Dharam; standing at the entrance of the hut, flanked by the curious Bhalla and a few soldiers. Swiftly examining the affable faces of the vaguely familiar dwellers; the fervent Dharam notices the welcome face of his brother beaming widely in response, from his place of rest. Ordering his soldiers to remain outside, Dharam enters the coy home along with the enthusiastic Bhalla. Ambiguously recollecting Sakshi's and Pari's faces from the incident at the prayer festival in the palace; Dharam gently folds his palms at them, as a mark of gratitude. As the gracious mother and daughter smile formally in order to welcome him to their abode, the overjoyed prince wastes no time and then rushes to sit on the floor beside Veer, loyally followed by the quiet Bhalla.

Looking at the authoritative smile on Veer's face, Dharam starts sniggering in order to hide his overpowering emotions of reunion "So here you are Veer...sleeping peacefully ...did you know that at the palace, not one person has had even a wink of sleep ever since you went missing...it has been almost a week since you left for the border and no one heard about you since…"

Glancing at the scratches and wounds on his companions' faces and hands, Veer replies cynically to distract Dharam's fretful complaints "Yes I was busy Dharam... but, look at the two of you...you almost look like warriors now... so you both managed to carry out a lot of stunts on the battleground, without my help…" he indicates towards the plump boy teasingly "Especially Bhalla…"

Pointing towards the massive dressed wound on Veer, Dharam retorts "Then what about you Rajkumar Veer... carrying your first war wounds too...and showing off like a lofty fighter..."

As the excited royals quickly move on to update each other on their war adventures, Veer feels a wave of euphoria overtake him, on coming to know of Dharam's victory at the battlefield and clenches his fist to admit to him "I don't know what to say Dharam... your success... the name you have achieved... I am inundated with pride to know that my brother..."

Patting him on his hand, Dharam interrupts Veer "Shush Veer... you were the reason for the victory behind Aryanagar... everyone is singing 'our' praises not my praise... we all just want you to get well soon Veer..." he pauses "Anyway, bua…ma…pitaji everyone is very eager to meet you…shall we leave now?"

Listening to the words of the prince, Pari summons her courage to address her son "Rajkumar Veer...we are people of very humble means...we tried the best we could... I know the porridge and the milk and even the doctor's care were not up to the standards you would receive at the palace... but I have a small request to make... please don't forget us..."

While the sympathetic Dharam and Bhalla turn to face the woman, Veer becomes extremely touched and replies in a choked voice "How could you say that Maaji..." pausing for a second to muse on the fact that he had actually referred to the lady as 'mother', he subdues his thoughts and continues "Maaji...I wouldn't even be alive if it were not for you...your care... your food...everything was full of love..." he pauses with a naughty smile in order to put her simple mind at ease "In fact, selfishly; I am going to come here at least once every month to eat at your place... and this is a promise... beware... I never go back on my word…I shall be back here next month again..."

Giggling at his frolicsome temperament, Pari answers "Next month? Rajkumar...next month is my daughter's wedding..." looking at Sakshi, she becomes lost in the soothing fantasy of the imminent celebration "The Pandit had mentioned that next month would be very auspicious for them... so the decision was taken to hold Sakshi and Dhruv's..."

Abruptly grasping the fact that Rajkumar Dharam and the prince's friend were also present as audience; she stops her statements, wondering if she had committed a blunder by having mentioned too much.

Interrupting her dilemma, Dhruv steps forward to reveal himself from the inconspicuous spot in the corner "It is all right maaji...they know me..."

Watching Dhruv emerge from the obscure part of the residence to take his place beside the young Sakshi, Dharam and Bhalla stare at each other astounded and then again at the couple.

They begin to recollect Dhruv's disclosures from their past meeting at Sawai, "I am not married… my family are my children… children who have been orphaned, as their parents were either imprisoned or killed…and I changed when I fell in love…when I realized her sufferings…an admirable Shramik girl…Sakshi…"

As everything slowly dawns upon Dharam, he adjusts his voice and asks politely "W...what a co-incidence... D...Dhruv Kumar... here... how have you been?" he pauses with a smile "So... now that you are getting married to the girl you had mentioned about... are we invited too?"

Glancing at the hesitant expressions on Sakshi's and Pari's faces, Dhruv replies with an unpretentious grin "Oh...it is just a very small and hush affair taking place at Sawai, Rajkumar..."

Apprehending that they wanted to attract minimal Aryavrat attention towards the orphanage, Veer assures them "Oh... don't worry... we understand..."

Observing Veer's reaction; Dharam slowly recalls Dhruv's confessions about his mission and the orphanage and then commences to advice them "Now that the war has been over... we are looking to prove the cruelties in the kingdom, just as you had pointed out …it would not be right for you to carry out a concealed operation like this in Aryanagar ... please let me take these points of yours in front of the assembly and the nobles… I will ensure your orphanage gets recognized as a legal institution…if you are doing a good deed why hide it…we will make the assembly understand…"

Sighing deeply, Dhruv immediately refuses the offer in a low tone "No Rajkumar Dharam... please don't do it. I plead with you. I know the nobles better than you do…please don't take any action like this, not at least until you have officially taken the reigns of administration and have the authority to influence decisions…" pausing on noticing the unconvinced yet understanding smile on Dharam's face, Dhruv continues "Anyway Rajkumar... I am unfortunately a convict in the eyes of the law, and will be arrested if spotted at any public functions... hence, the wedding rituals are being held at the orphanage...you are definitely invited... we are only inviting people we trust..."

Suddenly perceiving how much Sakshi and her mother would cherish Veer's presence at the wedding, Dhruv persists again "In fact we would be thoroughly ecstatic if yourself, Rajkumar Veer and your friend attended our wedding..."

Desperately trying to muffle the enthusiasm in her voice, Sakshi adds "Yes Rajkumar... our acquaintance is a lovely co-incidence... we would now be very disappointed if the three of you didn't attend the ceremony..."

Responding with affirmative nods and positive smiles to accept the courteous invitation from the family; the three royals observe, as Dhruv dutifully bows to them in order to take their farewell. Following this gesture; he turns to his lady love and then pats her gently on her hand. Silenced by the presence of onlookers; he communicates numerous reassuring expressions of love to her, through his deep eyes. After a while, he moves over to Pari and touches the gladdened mother's feet to offer his respects. Eyeing the crowd for a final time, the admirable man stealthily leaves the hut through the back.

After Dhruv exits the residence, Dharam stands up to tender his parting address "You have done so much for us... if you would need anything... any help at all in future...please don't hesitate to just step into the palace and ask for us..."

Following Dharam's commands; the soldiers respond by striding into the home and taking their places beside the ailing prince. In spite of looking forward to the impending rejoinder with his family; Veer finds himself strangely silent, contrary to his other two lively companions. Facing a medley of troubling thoughts; Veer feels very guilty about leaving behind the affectionate Shramik family to return to his comforts at the palace.

Oblivious to Veer's dilemmas or the family's heartbreak; Dharam and Bhalla supervise the soldiers to ensure that Veer was carefully and comfortably hauled towards the chariot that was stationed on the streets. Beaming appreciatively at Sakshi and Pari for a final instance; Dharam and Bhalla eventually take leave of the humble household, followed closely by Veer's retinue.

Watching Veer's earnest sombre adieus to them, Pari becomes benumbed to Sakshi's supportive grip around her shoulders and battles to hold back her tears, as she thinks to herself "The only time that you could spend with me, you were injured and I could not even speak to you…I could not even feed you a morsel of food…" she pauses to wipe her tears "But then... I must consider myself fortunate that as a mother, I could at least care for you…"

Aryanagar, the capital – Streets on the way to the palace

Amongst throngs of thrilled subjects singing and cavorting to celebrate the presence of royal company treading through their streets; the stately carriage housing the young monarchs, advances slowly yet steadily. Comfortingly upheld by his brother; Veer watches in amusement as the common people of Aryanagar accompanied the royal chariot, extolling their princes highly in light of their recent victory in the war.

Repeatedly staring at each other with masked pride; Dharam and Veer grasp the sudden positive surge that their citizens seemed to feel towards the princes, due to newfound hope for a better future. Turning to the enthralled crowds, the princes flash modest smiles at the bystanders, while Bhalla takes entire advantage of the grand opportunity to beam and wave out excitedly to the audience.

While the chariot continues to move at a slow pace through waves of gatherers; Veer's elation at the colourful sights around him slowly fades, as he catches the disquieting sight of a familiar face prancing her way through the crowds, not very far away. Unmindful of the unwanted attention it might raise, the explosive Veer speaks out aloud in order to catch her attention "So you here are...again.."

Briefly alarmed by the loud voice resonating from behind her, she turns around to notice the scornful Veer glaring at her and stammers in hesitation "Rajkumar Veer... I... I..."

Weary of her common ineffectual excuses, Veer interrupts her abruptly "Since you seem to know them well, I did not want to disrespect that family by accusing you in front of them…but... I have been meaning to ask... how dare you come to meet me... you even have the audacity to walk about happily in public, after all that you have done..."

Conscious of their chariot coming to a slow standstill, the unwitting Dharam and Bhalla become shocked when they fathom that Veer was addressing someone in a harsh tone, audible above the uproars in the noisy streets. They bend over to find Veer bellowing out to a petite girl, sporting an unmoved yet grim expression on her fascinating visage. Suddenly recollecting how their past seemingly chirpy encounters with her had always ended in trouble for them due to her deadly dialogues and her sly ability to play people; Dharam and Bhalla remain silent, while Veer decides to prod on "Why did you do it? Why did you try to create troubles and misunderstandings for us, when we never hurt or harmed you in anyway?"

Beginning to feel humiliated in front of the smirking soldiers and prying onlookers, Shera replies "Rajkumar Veer... it was unintended... it was just harmless mischief...I am a prankster ...I apologise for my mistakes..."

Experiencing an increasingly piercing pain in his abdomen; Veer flinches and grabs Dharam's shoulder in an attempt to prop himself up, as he retorts "It was not just mischief or prank...it was more devious than that...a prank is when people would be able to laugh at the end of it...if people are going to get hurt, injured or have serious implications, it is not a prank...I never trusted you, ever since the first instance we met... and now you expect me to believe your statements! You act like an innocent girl, but you are capable of spreading poison...what would you know about responsibility... what would you know about seriousness in life? Your very presence here gives me doubts!" he pauses to continue in a low tone "In fact, it makes me feel irritated! I...I don't want to see you around the palace ever again!"

Realizing that everyone around was watching the spectacle, the noble Dharam interrupts Veer's abusive outpour "Veer forget about it... why unnecessarily create a scene in front of everyone and malign yourself... the soldiers are gaping at her in an inappropriate fashion... all this does not look pleasant... let us just forget about everything...promise me you wouldn't ever get into arguments, talk or associate with her again... promise me..."

Looking away angrily, Veer retorts "Why would I even want to ever associate myself with such a devious person again? Of course not..."

As Dharam pats his injured brother supportively and then orders the charioteer to resume their journey towards their home, the palace; Veer's crushing words resound ceaselessly in Shera's ears, while she tries to evade the disgusting glares hurled by passerbys in her direction.

Watching the blissful procession of the chariot disappearing towards the direction of the palace, the demeaned girl thinks to herself in silent rage "Rajkumar Veer... I thought you were probably different... but your words and actions now appear frighteningly similar to those of any other man I have known all my life..." she smirks to herself in loathe "With the horrible fate that the Lord has etched for me, so far... and with all the horrible encounters I have had with men, is it any wonder that I now hate the very sight of them?"

Aryanagar, the palace

Amidst the hectic scenes of construction and restoration to the assembly tower, owing to its partial destruction by the revolutionaries; a modest welcome brigade of shimmering maids and soldiers await Veer's return in eager anticipation near the main august entrance of the palace. Surrounded by the cheerful faces of their chief maids; the ardent queens stand atop the marble steps decked in glistening royal finery, a contrasting gratifying sight to the pitiable state they were in, not so long ago.

Taking a sip of the hot of almond milk from the golden chalice, the apparently jittery Nivritti looks at Swathi with a forced smile "I am telling you didi…it is all right… it is perfect…I am sure Veer would love it…"

Breathing a sigh of relief; Swathi turns to her maids and hands the golden jug and chalice back to them, hoping the entourage of the Aryanagar princes would arrive soon.

After many impatient moments; the sounds of trumpets and drums finally follows a loud announcement by the royal announcers, marking the appearance of the princes at the gates, thus colossally delighting the royal mothers. No sooner than the gigantic gates of the palace are slowly prod opened, Nivritti runs down the marble steps and through the long open course along the sizable red carpet, heedless of the presence of the numerous palace maids and soldiers all around.

Reaching the chariot parked near the gates; the truth dawns upon her, as she hurtfully watches her son sporting torn blood-stained clothes, while his uncouth unshaven face cringes in pain when helped in his descent from the vehicle. Never used to seeing her charming vivacious son in such a sorry state; her eyes well up and she freezes in horror, until Veer manages to spot her through the crowds of soldiers and aides, helping him.

With the assistance of the guards, the enthusiastic Veer rapidly drags himself towards his mother and puts an arm on her shoulder to enquire in a surprised manner "Ma... its me... your Veer... why are you silent? What happened? I am here now..."

Snapping out of her painful trance; Nivritti wipes the tears from her eyes and staring at his deep gash, stutters sadly "V...Veer how are you feeling now?"

Momentarily guffawing at his mother's tears and turmoil, Veer replies casually "Ma... I am fine... I told you, didn't I... your son is a warrior..."

While the glorious Swathi joins the joyful princely reunion in exhilaration; Veer pauses to look around at his now lacklustre comprehensive palace grounds, congested with the presence of construction workers, maids, soldiers and gardeners, racing around to complete their duties. Just as his heavy-hearted mother and protective brother take over the responsibility from the aides to help Veer on his way back to the palace, the injured prince stares at the demolished parts of his home that again bring back haunting memories of his battle with the revolutionaries.

Feeling suffocated, Veer finally mentions in a low tone "Ma...Dharam... is...is...is my room destroyed too... I want to get back to my room..."

Palace of Aryanagar – Veer's chamber

Amused by how engrossed his aunt seemed in tending to the fussy whims and fancies of her ailing son resting on his lush couch; Dharam tip toes from behind and alarms her by suddenly putting his arms around her shoulders "Bua...what about me... you didn't enquire about me... not once...ever since Veer has arrived..."

Briefly mocking the pampered Veer; he then immediately seats himself beside his anxious aunt on the silk rug to show off his comparatively minor injuries with a frown "See... bua... I am also injured... I fought the whole battle all alone..." he sulks playfully "But, who cares for me these days..."

Her golden anklets softly jingling; the loving Swathi walks across the extravagant chamber, holding on to the chalice of hot almond milk she had specially prepared for the occasion and supports her son jovially "It's all right Dharam… I am here for you… so what if your bua has forgotten all about you, ever since her son arrived!" she looks at the chalice in her hand and continues "I had made Veer's favourite drink... hot almond milk …but now, you can have it!"

Widening his eyes at the newfound knowledge, Veer protests rapidly "Mami! Almond milk! I have not had almond milk prepared by you for so long..." as Dharam irritates his brother by nonchalantly taking the almond milk from the giggling Swathi, Veer desperately rebels "Mami no…please no don't hand it to Dharam…he doesn't even like almond milk…mami…I can't even run behind him now…"

In a rare fit of mischief; Dharam tries to sip on the drink, but is stopped by the firm pinch of his ears by Nivritti, who warns him friskily "Dharam… give it to Veer… don't trouble my poor son… he is not well… I shall get you another one…"

Wincing in pain; the vanquished Dharam hands his amused mother back the drink and whines "Bua… you are being partial to him…"

Laughing softly, Swathi takes the almond milk back from her son and sitting on the couch next to the elated Veer, helps the victorious prince sip it.

As the close-knit family spend many beautiful moments with each other, Nivritti savours the scenes with her sons unfolding in front of her and placing her hand on Dharam's shoulder chokes emotionally "I missed all this... all of this... Dharam faced the forces all alone…Veer the revolutionaries... and we were waiting in a cellar for someone to come and save us... someone to give us some good news… Dharam... Veer... if something had happened to you both…I don't know…what…"

Gulping down the delicious drink avidly, Veer smiles at his mother and speaks up to lighten her disposition "Ma nothing could have possibly happened to Dharam or to me... we have the good wishes of so many people who care for and love us… by the way ma…I found another family who love me just as much… they cared so much for me... night and day… If I am alive today, it is because they risked their life to rescue me from the war torn streets… they sacrificed food and money for my treatment, even though they were destitute... I want to help that family...ma, if there was one reason I didn't miss home, it was because of them"

Realizing that even though she should be feeling a sense of extreme gratitude towards that family, Nivritti experiences her gratitude being maligned by feelings of possessiveness towards her son.

Pondering on her son's statements deeply, she replies "Definitely Veer… we will definitely help them out… who are they? What is their name?"

Recalling his experiences with the family, Veer replies serenely "Two sweet ladies … Sakshi didi and her mother..." he pauses "I called her Maaji... I am not sure, but I think her name is Pari..."

Smiling formally at her son; Nivritti becomes lost in a reverie, as she abruptly remembers Pari to be the pleasant lady who had handed her the bamboo idol at the prayer festival and the lady she had met again at the Shramik temple. Distracted from her long state of absent-mindedness only after Swathi calls out to her, Nivritti eventually brushes off her fears to participate in the light chatter and the animated war updates by the princes, dotted with their prankish behaviour. After a long while of laughter and frolic, the queens decide to leave the brothers behind, in order to tend to other important duties at the palace for the day.

As the queens finally exit the room, Dharam carefully bends over and peeps at the door to ensure that they had absolute privacy, before whispering to Veer and Bhalla "Ma and bua have left..." he pauses "By the way, I have been dying to show you both something..."

Having remained silent in the presence of the queens all along, Bhalla hastily joins the curious Veer to investigate what his friend had to show. Surveying their eagerness; Dharam teases his two confederates by taking out a scroll from the folds of his cummerbund in a deliberately leisurely manner.

Gaping at how Dharam dangled the message in front of him, Veer conceives that his brother had no intention of handing over the message easily and warns him "Dharam... what is it... give it to us now... or I shall call ma and mami back..."

After a short while of humorous banter, Dharam hands over the message to the irked Veer. As soon as he receives the scroll, Veer unrolls it swiftly to observe that it was an enchantingly penned letter from Rajkumari Siya with a small velvet pouch folded within.

Looking up to smile at the suddenly conscious Dharam, Veer addresses Bhalla aloud "No wonder someone has been chirpier and more frolicsome than usual... Dharam and mischief? We should have guessed that something like this must have been the reason..."

In a bid to embarrass his brother; Veer begins to read the message loudly, resulting in a thoroughly entertained Bhalla and a confounded crimson-hued Dharam.

Rajkumar Veer,

Hope this message finds you, your brother Rajkumar Dharam and friend Balaram ji well. Since your noble brother does not seem to scribe his own messages, I wondered if he read his own too. Hence; please excuse my discourtesy at having kindly addressed the letter to you instead, in hope that you might read it out to him!

Putting the message down, the surprised Veer looks at the awestruck Bhalla and then peers at Dharam to question him softly "How did she know that I wrote the message Dharam?"

Shrugging his shoulders, Dharam lets out a sigh and then mumbles naughtily "She probably guessed from the messy scroll... the handwriting..."

Raising his eyebrows in false anger, the baffled Veer stares at the laughing duo and then to have his share of revenge, continues to read the remainder of the scroll, even louder than before.

My prayers will be answered and I am confident that victory would be on your side in the war. I write to inform you of pleasant tidings that I have cancelled my engagement to the prince of Chatarpur. I now have my mind, my heart and my priorities very clear and they all lie with the fate and decisions of Aryanagar's first-born prince.

Pausing his narrative-style reading of the scroll; Veer winks at Bhalla and then the two boys turn to glance at Dharam, who desperately tries to conceal his blush and looks away to evade their teasing gapes at him. Silently ecstatic for his brother, Veer smiles to himself and then resumes his rendering of the message.

It is true that my mother still disapproves of my actions and avoids any confrontations with me. In fact, she has even planned to do the Sankasthi fast, coming Chaturthi at the Gomathi Pashupathi temple; in the hope that the Lord would perform a miracle and change my mind. I sincerely pray that this unrelenting stance of hers would change soon.

Any how, I devoutly appealed for God to forbid the possibility; but in case any of you suffered any injuries at the war, I have enclosed in the velvet pouch, a few specially procured herbs that are known to aid speedy recovery of wounds and injuries.

Feeling the dried herbs in the small pouch, Veer smiles dotingly and then reads on.

The large silk bag contains Prasad for all three of you, an offering as part of my prayers for Aryanagar's victory in the war.

Convey my regards to Balaram ji. I wish you health and success, Rajkumar Veer.

I sincerely request you to pass on the message to your brother that I will in all earnest, be awaiting a personal message from the prince himself, in future.

Kindest regards

Rajkumari Siya

Overjoyed for the good fortune that seemed to be surrounding his brother, Veer concludes in a light-hearted tone "Dharam... that one letter has worked wonders... she has now become like a warrior princess... she broke her own engagement... now she is undertaking the difficult task of convincing her mother..." shrugging his shoulders, he continues casually "By the way, it seems like you would have to write your own letters in future Dharam... not my orders...someone else's..."

As Dharam is about to reply to Veer's statements, Bhalla interrupts their conversations boldly "She has stated that there was a large bag full of Prasad for the three of us… where is it?"

Sporting a guilty look; Dharam hands Veer and Bhalla a few leftover crumbs of Prasad from a large empty silk bag. Watching their puzzled expressions, Dharam mumbles in a feeble attempt to justify himself "I was becoming insane for the past two days… there was absolutely no news of Veer or his wellbeing…hence, when I received this letter, it was the only thing that kept me company…I had no other choice... I used to eat a few morsels of the Prasad and then read her letter over and over again…hence, in the end I was only able to save some bits for you…"

Hitting his brother with the scroll, Veer reprimands Dharam "Dharam, I never thought that you would lack in manners and ethics… you read other's letters… eat other's Prasad..." pointing to the scroll, he announces sternly "This letter has been addressed to me…it's mine now…hence…I shall keep it safely…" housing a dreamy gaze, Veer enacts "As it is, I don't remember the last time when someone sent me a letter..."

Snatching the letter back from Veer; the provoked Dharam becomes annoyed and replies "Well... no... the message in it is for me... so this letter shall remain safe with me... anyway, you can't chase me down the hallways now so, I will just leave..."

Zealously finishing off the crumbs of Prasad in his hand, Bhalla instigates Veer "He has hardly begun communicating with her yet and he is already prepared to avoid us... after everything we have done for him…is he not being ungrateful Veer?"

Nodding his head affirmatively, the playful Veer supports his friend "I know Bhalla… he has had everything laid out for him on a silver platter and yet he chooses to shun us. With my help, the revolts were thwarted and he won the war too…you helped him take care of the Chatarpur regiments…at Niphaud, the unfortunate Rajkumari Siya was forced to break her engagement off by herself and is now facing her mother's wrath all alone..."

Folding his hands in anger, Dharam adds "Oh yes… and all the while I have been sleeping in my chamber…" observing the royals teaming up to snigger at him, Dharam admonishes them irately "Veer…Bhalla now both of you remain quiet or I will...I will..."

Irritated by their unstoppable laughter, Dharam goes near Veer and ruffles his hair into a mess, aware that it would aggravate him immensely. As Veer tries to lunge forward to take his revenge, he feels a gnawing pain and instantly stops to hold his torso.

Watching his debilitated brother; the smile wanes away from Dharam's visage, as he gradually sits beside him to advice him calmly "Veer be careful..." he pauses sadly "You would never understand... but my biggest relief and happiness was only when I found you safe and sound…" looking at Veer's understanding glances, Dharam informs him gloomily "Amidst all this fun and frolic, I forgot to inform you Veer...but, I was not successful in dealing with Jai chacha and Agni... I was not able to implicate them with anything... the Gadhwar Commander-in-chief lied to save his skin... "

Noticing the worry shrouding Dharam's face, Veer places his hand on his shoulder to reassure him "Dharam... there is nothing surprising about it…don't worry…now that I am here, we shall make life difficult for them… people have started trusting us and taking us seriously...we shall start interfering with Jai mama and Agni's internal affairs …we shall cramp their sources of revenue…and then let us see how they carry out their bribes and corrupt dealings…"

Listening to Veer's words; Dharam looks at Bhalla and then back at the determinate Veer, breaking out into a gradual lop sided smile, as he feels reinsured. The resolute princes exchange cynical grins, mentally charting shrewd plans and subtly deceptive schemes driven by the thirst to avenge the evil pair, by bringing them to justice.

Ciao soon 😳
Edited by lashy - 17 years ago
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omg chech!!!!! that looks awesome... 🤗 thank u soooooooooo much.... i'll read it soon... 😃 and this time i WILL post a huge reply... 😎 i think last time i forgot...
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wooow...lost for words...nt many ppl can dod t ...hehehe plz update soooonnn...cnt wait to see wah the trio have pland for JV n Agni....xxx
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it's just so lovely😳.i loved the part stating that Dharam ate up most of the prasad😆, and when Dharam was teasing veer about the almond milk.😆 it seriously was a wonderfull update.👏
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hey it was great reading the happenings at palace.I loved how Veer and Bhalla playfully mocked at Dharam and Dharam got angry...When Veer read that letter aloud I thought someone would hear him and come in investigating.I wonder what Shera will do now and what happened to Jai mama and Agni? They were never welcomed? Didn't Aryavardhan return to the palace? Why wasn't he mentioned? I'm really in love with your Sakshi she seems to be a lot lot sensible unlike the horrifying,ugly witch she is in the serial.So the princes are going to her marriage? Why didn't Bhalla think of the feast that would be awaiting him? 😉😆 I liked how Bhalla too had fought bravely in the war not confining him only to be a voracious eater and jovial person he is.It was nice to see the queens' reactions and Pari's warm motherly feelings.But I don't think I liked Shera.I found her behaviour loathsome.She should have atleast felt guilty for being cause for such devastations.She is a human and shouldn't she be concerned over the pain she created?And it would be interesting to know how Dharam would bring up the subject of his love in front of his parents!The part discussing the letter was the most lovely scene.Sia candidly pulling Dharam's leg was amusing.I would love to see Dharam going red and red like that (don't think even Sia felt that coy when her friends teased her) tee hee...but I could keep pinching Dharam's cheeks for that.He would look a lot lot cuter 😍
And I loved how concerned Dharam was even amidst his brief anger.He is choo caring and gentle.And I adore te way he calmed down his agitated brother while travelling to the palace.I would be eager to read how he would confront Shera and exchange few words with her taming her a little bit if you plan to include it in your story.I laughed when Dharam said he ate almost all of the prasad.Guess he was nervous 😆 and Bhalla so seriously pondering over the prasad was funny too.But isn't it quite out of ordinary that Dharam and other royals must remember Pari as the lady who gave that bamboo idol to them during that festival?Being a part of the aristocrat family they meet so many people and how do they identify Pari as that particular woman? In the coming episodes it will be intersting to read how Veer and Shera fall in love with each other and ofcourse the love story of Dharam and Sia and to learn how Sia's mother will finally accede towards her daughter's choice.Now that Dharam and Sia have declared their love for each other I want them to meet.I wonder how they will communicate in each other after expressing love 😳
thankoo for the update 🤗
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i'm so glad to see you back with sammy and that too with a bang!!!!!!!!!! 👏 i missed you and sammy sooooooooooooo much!!!!! 🤗

i loved the eye contacts and understanding between pari, sakshi and veer - .....Pari becomes profusely worried for the safety of Sakshi, Dhruv and the orphanage. Fearful of the soldiers, Pari attempts to conceal the anxiety in her eyes by turning to her calmer daughter for assurance, who in turn looks to Veer for support.... Gauging the mental apprehensions of the family and the precarious situation they were in, Veer quickly reacts to distract the soldiers..... and the fact that shera noticed it... smart cookie that girl is... 😃
i loved dharam's entry into pari's house... very royal but non dramatic... 😉 and the teasing manner in which d and v were praising each other was really sweet - ...."Yes I was busy Dharam... but, look at the two of you...you almost look like warriors now... so you both managed to carry out a lot of stunts on the battleground, without my help…" he indicates towards the plump boy teasingly "Especially Bhalla…"

Pointing towards the massive dressed wound on Veer, Dharam retorts "Then what about you Rajkumar Veer... carrying your first war wounds too...and showing off like a lofty fighter..." 😃

pari's words to veer were very touching - "Rajkumar Veer...we are people of very humble means...we tried the best we could... I know the porridge and the milk and even the doctor's care were not up to the standards you would receive at the palace... but I have a small request to make... please don't forget us..." 😭

i completely adore dhruv and sakshi - ...Following this gesture; he turns to his lady love and then pats her gently on her hand. Silenced by the presence of onlookers; he communicates numerous reassuring expressions of love to her, through his deep eyes. it'll be so nice to see these two love birds get married... 😳😳😳
and dharam is such a darling too - D...Dhruv Kumar... here... how have you been?" he pauses with a smile "So... now that you are getting married to the girl you had mentioned about... are we invited too?"
..."Now that the war has been over... we are looking to prove the cruelties in the kingdom, just as you had pointed out …it would not be right for you to carry out a concealed operation like this in Aryanagar ... please let me take these points of yours in front of the assembly and the nobles… I will ensure your orphanage gets recognized as a legal institution…if you are doing a good deed why hide it…we will make the assembly understand…"
...Dharam stands up to tender his parting address "You have done so much for us... if you would need anything... any help at all in future...please don't hesitate to just step into the palace and ask for us..." mark my words this boy is on his way to become a great king.... 👏👏👏
pari poor thing i felt sorry for her - "The only time that you could spend with me, you were injured and I could not even speak to you…I could not even feed you a morsel of food…" she pauses to wipe her tears "But then... I must consider myself fortunate that as a mother, I could at least care for you…" 😭😭😭
hmmmn... veer lashing out at shera in front of so many people was uncalled for... 😳 he could have scolded her in private... but then again this is veer we are talking about... and i kinda felt sorry for her... not a lot but a little... i wonder why she hates men so much... 🤔 aaaaah but dharam the ever gentle pacifier 🤗 - ..."Veer forget about it... why unnecessarily create a scene in front of everyone and malign yourself... the soldiers are gaping at her in an inappropriate fashion... all this does not look pleasant... let us just forget about everything...promise me you wouldn't ever get into arguments, talk or associate with her again... promise me..."
the scene between dharam, veer, nivriti and swathi was the sweetest ever... kitni pyaari family hain... 😊 and i never expected dharam to act this naughty... 😲 Amused by how engrossed his aunt seemed in tending to the fussy whims and fancies of her ailing son resting on his lush couch; Dharam tip toes from behind and alarms her by suddenly putting his arms around her shoulders "Bua...what about me... you didn't enquire about me... not once...ever since Veer has arrived..."

Briefly mocking the pampered Veer; he then immediately seats himself beside his anxious aunt on the silk rug to show off his comparatively minor injuries with a frown "See... bua... I am also injured... I fought the whole battle all alone..." he sulks playfully "But, who cares for me these days..."

but i love it... 😳😳😳 he's so adorable... and the best part was swathi joining in the fun -"It's all right Dharam… I am here for you… so what if your bua has forgotten all about you, ever since her son arrived!" she looks at the chalice in her hand and continues "I had made Veer's favourite drink... hot almond milk …but now, you can have it!" 😆
poor darling veer... he cant bear his favourite almond milk being taken away from him - Widening his eyes at the newfound knowledge, Veer protests rapidly "Mami! Almond milk! I have not had almond milk prepared by you for so long..." as Dharam irritates his brother by nonchalantly taking the almond milk from the giggling Swathi, Veer desperately rebels "Mami no…please no don't hand it to Dharam…he doesn't even like almond milk…mami…I can't even run behind him now…" that was soooooo cute... 😆😆
and dharam's still in a mischievous mood but bechare ko apne bua se daant bhi padi -

In a rare fit of mischief; Dharam tries to sip on the drink, but is stopped by the firm pinch of his ears by Nivritti, who warns him friskily "Dharam… give it to Veer… don't trouble my poor son… he is not well… I shall get you another one…"

Wincing in pain; the vanquished Dharam hands his amused mother back the drink and whines "Bua… you are being partial to him…" 😆😆😆

but the bestest part of this epi was sia's letter... kya ladki hain.... i'm so proud of her... 😉 she writes a letter to dharam but addresses it to veer 😆 - Since your noble brother does not seem to scribe his own messages, I wondered if he read his own too. Hence; please excuse my discourtesy at having kindly addressed the letter to you instead, in hope that you might read it out to him! i can imagine the look of shock on dharam's face when he first reads the letter... and that on veer's face when he reads it now... 😉
she's so sweet to send herbs and prasad for all of them... but lo behold dharam never ceases to surprise me in this one... he eats up all the prasad!!!!!! i would have thought bhalla would have been the one to do that.. 😆 dharam's excuse for eating up all of it was so sweet and innocent - "I was becoming insane for the past two days… there was absolutely no news of Veer or his wellbeing…hence, when I received this letter, it was the only thing that kept me company…I had no other choice... I used to eat a few morsels of the Prasad and then read her letter over and over again…hence, in the end I was only able to save some bits for you…" awwww... my cutie pie... 😳😳😳
and veer's response to that was typical veer 😉 - "Dharam, I never thought that you would lack in manners and ethics… you read other's letters… eat other's Prasad..." pointing to the scroll, he announces sternly "This letter has been addressed to me…it's mine now…hence…I shall keep it safely…" housing a dreamy gaze, Veer enacts "As it is, I don't remember the last time when someone sent me a letter..." oh boy... 😆
dharam is such a cute lover boy... sia se zyaada toh ye sharmata hain... 😳😳😳 - ...Veer winks at Bhalla and then the two boys turn to glance at Dharam, who desperately tries to conceal his blush and looks away to evade their teasing gapes at him.... the boy blushes.... now me blushing... ☺️☺️☺️
oooooooohhh i cant wait to find out what they are planning to do to jv and agni... i bet its gonna be lots of fun... but not for those two of course... 😈
thank u for the fantabulous update chech!!!!!!! luv ya!!!!! 🤗
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@CutieA
awwww thank you so much cutie... 😃 thanks for your support...
@kiran
awww i am glad you enjoyed it... and that you liked the Dharam-Veer interactive parts the most... hope i am able to produce more parts in future like this... 😃
@abhy
awwww abhy 🤗🤗🤗 hi sweetie.... sorry me yet to reply to your messages... will reply soon... when i am able to get my mind around everything....
The part discussing the letter was the most lovely scene.Sia candidly pulling Dharam's leg was amusing.I laughed when Dharam said he ate almost all of the prasad.
thanks for the complements on the happenings at palace. 😳
When Veer read that letter aloud I thought someone would hear him and come in investigating.
Their palace rooms are almost the size of a flat by itself... so i guess something really loud needs to happen... when the palace is comparitively quiet... 😳 it was more veer teasing/taking his revenge on dharam...
I wonder what Shera will do now. But I don't think I liked Shera.I found her behaviour loathsome.She should have atleast felt guilty for being cause for such devastations.She is a human and shouldn't she be concerned over the pain she created?
shera ka i would advice you to stay back and watch... she never felt bad about veer being angry with her throughout the time when he was sulking at her.. she knew it was coming... the only thing she didnt like was his outburst in the streets insulting her... she even knows what she is doing and why she is doing it (which is the first and foremost thing one might notice through sammi) she has reason to hate men since they have always been the cause of problems in her life... and in a way, veer was another addition... as to whether she feels guilty... whether she understands what she is doing...if she is human.. if she doesnt feel guilty...why or why not.. all should hopefully be explained within the next few episodes... 😃
and what happened to Jai mama and Agni? They were never welcomed?
waise tho even Dharam was welcomed.... but if everything was explained in too much detail then samyukta would go on and on..😆 hence... Dharam was extolled post the war at the borders etc... and the welcome for veer was only a family thing as he almost returned from the dead after going almost missing, which no one else faced in their family... 😳
as for the celebrations on the streets, it was only people celebrating royalty in their presence... besides, agni or jai or even arya were no war heros.. the war heros were only dharam, veer (and maybe bhalla 😆) when these boys presented everything to the assembly about their trip to niphaud...gadhwar...the attack everything etc... no one (nobles or commanders) believed them... but now everyone knows they were saying the truth... plus they took matters into their own hands and saved aryanagar.. hence yes they would have special place in everyone's heart now na...if it were not for them aryanagar could be no more too...
Didn't Aryavardhan return to the palace? Why wasn't he mentioned?
yes he was there in the last episode... he was there with dharam after the war when they were discussing about not raising issues in public.. but things are just beginning to settle in aryanagar after the devastation and destruction.. out of everyone in the royal family, only veer was the one who was immensely injured and went missing for a long time, so his mother/s was/were missing him... Aryavardhan is afterall a king na... he might come to meet veer after his duties are done, just like how the entire family be there to greet everyone at the same time...since i cant type more than so many pages per episode, i am unable to include all characters in every episode😳... it was a small family welcome of veer back home... besides, dharam and his father etc all had returned to the palace over a couple of days (the armies also returned to aryanagar in previous episode and dharam mentions he was going insane not knowing about veer)... the mothers have been rescued from the cellar (by nivritti's dialogue of how they were waiting for someone to come) aryanagar is trying to return to normalcy (construction work etc etc.).. i have kind of made it in such a way that it could be sort of understood from the hidden hints and so that everything need not be spelt or many more parts would have come and it would go on and on forever😳... thats why
I'm really in love with your Sakshi she seems to be a lot lot sensible unlike the horrifying,ugly witch she is in the serial. I liked how Bhalla too had fought bravely in the war not confining him only to be a voracious eater and jovial person he is.It was nice to see the queens' reactions and Pari's warm motherly feelings.
thankoo
Isn't it quite out of ordinary that Dharam and other royals must remember Pari as the lady who gave that bamboo idol to them during that festival?Being a part of the aristocrat family they meet so many people and how do they identify Pari as that particular woman?
what happened at the temple festival was more of an incident right... pari coming forward and the swathi reprimanding her in public.. then sakshi explaining that all she was trying to do was to hand over the bamboo idol..then pari explaining that she had lost her son and then everything about the bamboo idol to Nivritti etc.. and then both of them leave... and Veer, Dharam, Swathi and Nivritti feel bad for the duo... Dharam also watched all this... as it happened when he was just talking to Veer... with all that, one's face would at least tend to be familiar na.. thats why i wrote that Dharam ambiguously placed their faces with the bamboo idol and temple festival .... he doesnt know their names.. 😕
besides, absy... 😳 dharam and veer as royal aristocrats have not taken up any role in the administration and dont meet many people on a daily/regular basis like a king/other people in administration would.. immediately after gurukul days the whole samyukta started off with sonu-> dhruv-> niphaud incident na... so they would tend to remember such incidents and people at least at this stage na... its only after this that they start taking up the reigs of admin..
By other royals if you mean Nivritti - Nivritti became very emotional when Pari and Sakshi came to meet her at the temple festival and gave the bamboo idol... she sees her staring at Veer and when comes to know her son is dead, she later goes to meet her at the Shramik temple na... and they both chat and pari introduces herself... etc etc.. so nivritti would know.. plus with her insecurities about Veer's birth, she wouldnt forget something like this na..
phew hope that cleared most if not all of your doubts.. 😆😛😳 honey i can just imagine how you would be in classes.... 😆
In the coming episodes it will be intersting to read how Veer and Shera fall in love with each other and ofcourse the love story of Dharam and Sia and to learn how Sia's mother will finally accede towards her daughter's choice.Now that Dharam and Sia have declared their love for each other I want them to meet.I wonder how they will communicate in each other after expressing love 😳
😳definitely and hope i dont disappoint.... thankoo honey 🤗🤗🤗 love how you analyze each and everythinggggg and try and assimilate everything ...
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hi shraddaha,
beautiful part i just loved it. 👏👏👏u know what ever since i read ur fic i have some ideas going thruogh my mind.and the way ur story is progessing i might think u have read my mind.
well can i tell u my ideas if u like them u can include them in story (if u haven't completed the whole fic already).
as u know i am a huge veer shera fan ( and now sia -dharam also)
i have idea why not make sia and shera best freinds .
i have an screnario also where shera and sia ca meet also shera& veer can change their thinking.
The situations are like this.
as u mentioned sia is going for a puja with her mother.is it possibel veer bhalla and dharam also go there for some political reasons or just to dharam sia meet so that dharam can assure her.
shera also goes there either following them or withn some other work.
now they all rajkumrs need to reach the temple in short time so veer being the leader they take jungle path and got lost becoz of rain or sumthing else.
here shera also came in the same jungle. the as usual veer shera fight but then shera knew a short being a local tribal girl.
so they all go with her.
there sia and dharam meet but in between shera got injured while saving/helping all of them or sia. then sia will take shera with her as firstly shera do live in NIPUD.
after they go their own ways may be shera and sia became fast freinds.(i really want this not only for dharam and veer freindship but sia also need someone like shera verry strong and trustworthy if u can win her heart).
sorry for the long description but after reading ur fic my ming just start thinking about this screnario.
so i thought may be i can share it with u.
congratulations once again for the lovely part.
sumita
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now it will be intresting noq sia and dharam declared their love it's veer and anaya;s turn btw it was amazing.
esha
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Wow, 👏👏👏lashy another brilliant part full of love, emotions, anger and understanding. 🤗You write so beautifully that it makes it impossible for us to decide which parts we love the most.👏👏👏

What I loved :

    Jootee kahi ke veer aur shera denying that they know each other when clearly everyone can see sparks flying between them 😆😆 Veer forces a false smile at her in reply and then looks away, unable to withstand her demeanour. He is probably thinking of how he should strangle her 😆 Dhruv trying to hide as the soldiers come in the house 😊 Veer's protectiveness towards the family when the soldiers want to question them about the revolutionaries. Shera clever girl noticing how relieved he family were when they heard that no one will be questioning them on revolutionaries the cold stares from the prince, the nimble girl bids everyone a farewell and hastily dashes out of the hut into the crowd and hubbub in the streets. Shere is like better leave before veer loses his patience and starts bellowing 😆 loved dharam?s entry and how he gives both pari and sakshi respect 👏👏👏 Dharam starts sniggering in order to hide his overpowering emotions of reunion ?So here you are Veer...sleeping peacefully ...did you know that at the palace, not one person has had even a wink of sleep ever since you went missing...it has been almost a week since you left for the border and no one heard about you since?? kuch to baat hai as dharam is in a very teasing mood. Loool his question to veer. Veer aaram farma raha hai while everone else has been worried about him 😆😆 Yes I was busy Dharam... but, look at the two of you...you almost look like warriors now... so you both managed to carry out a lot of stunts on the battleground, without my help?? he indicates towards the plump boy teasingly ?Especially Bhalla?? so cute veer is so proud of dharam and bhalla and vice versa 😆. the way they tell each other what had happened and how both dharam and veer are so proud of each other. i love it how veer tells dharam that he has won the war and dharam tells veer that the victory is because of him. 👏 they have such a strong bond even bhalla fought so bravely 👏👏👏 Pari summons her courage to address her son ?Rajkumar Veer...we are people of very humble means...we tried the best we could... I know the porridge and the milk and even the doctor?s care were not up to the standards you would receive at the palace... but I have a small request to make... please don?t forget awww this had me in 😭😭, pari must feel so bad that all she could give was porridge and plain milk and how little time she had to spend with him.👏👏👏 and her thinking that veer will forget her. ?Maaji...I wouldn?t even be alive if it were not for you...your care... your food...everything was full of love...? he pauses with a naughty smile in order to put her simple mind at ease ?In fact, selfishly; I am going to come here at least once every month to eat at your place... and this is a promise... beware... I never go back on my word?I shall be back here next month again...? i love veer's response 👏, its like he feels a strong bond between him and pari but does not know the truth that she is his real mum. I like how he said that he will be back next month 👏 He knows how to use his charm as pari starts giggling wow sakshi and dhruv's wedding i like how pari feels that she has told much about the wedding than dhruv states that he has met dharam before and than dharam remembers about the children. Dhruv's is worried when dharam says that they will attend the wedding, aww he is worried for the safety of theorphange 😊👏👏 i like how veer is trying to help dhruv but than dhruv makes him understand on not taking any action and that they both are invited to the wedding as he trusts them so sweet👏 After all how can sakshi can married without her brother being present there😊 sakshi is trying to hide her happiness and excitement when she is inviting veer, dharam and bhalla to attend the wedding 😆😆 Following this gesture; he turns to his lady love and then pats her gently on her hand. Silenced by the presence of onlookers; he communicates numerous reassuring expressions of love to her, through his deep eyes. aww 😍 their love story is so sweet, 👏👏 kyaa baat hai dono ne akhnon hi akhnon main baatein kar lei 👏😆😳 love the respect he gives pari 👏 In spite of looking forward to the impending rejoinder with his family; Veer finds himself strangely silent, contrary to his other two lively companions. Facing a medley of troubling thoughts; Veer feels very guilty about leaving behind the affectionate Shramik family to return to his comforts at the palace. veer feels as if he is leaving something very precious behind even though he is going back to the palace. he feels his mothers love 👏👏👏 ?The only time that you could spend with me, you were injured and I could not even speak to you?I could not even feed you a morsel of food?? she pauses to wipe her tears ?But then... I must consider myself fortunate that as a mother, I could at least care for you?? i feel for pari 😭😭😭 as she could only spend some time with veer. she feels that she did not offer him much to eat but her love has made him strong and saved his life👏 she is so understanding and strong at the same time how the aryanagar crowd is so proud of the princess 👏 the fireworks started as veer and shera come face to face 😊. veer just says so loudly so you are here and before shera can even say something he starts shooting questions at her as to why she caused the misunderstanding👏👏 dharam and bhalla's shock to the rude way veer was talking to shera. I can so imagine veer bellowing at shera in front of everyone shera's feeling very humilated at being shouted rudely by veer.😭 she apologies to veer that it was a mistake but that does not stop veer as he says that she is devious and that he does not trust her dharam being a gentleman comes and calms veer down and makes him promise not to cause any arguments with shera Veer retorts "Why would I even want to ever associate myself with such a devious person again? Of course not..." that is harsh 😭 but little does veer know that he will change his mind one day😳 Veer's crushing words resound ceaselessly in Shera's ears, while she tries to evade the disgusting glares hurled by passerbys in her direction. Watching the blissful procession of the chariot disappearing towards the direction of the palace, the demeaned girl thinks to herself in silent rage ?Rajkumar Veer... I thought you were probably different... but your words and actions now appear frighteningly similar to those of any other man I have known all my life..." she smirks to herself in loathe "With the horrible fate that the Lord has etched for me, so far... and with all the horrible encounters I have had with men, is it any wonder that I now hate the very sight of them?" i feel so sorry for shera 😭😭😭 as she has totaly lost faith in men and feels so humilated by veer when he spoke so harshly to her in front of everyone. i loved how you describe this scene 👏👏👏 as it shows that neither of them are in the wrong, it is understandably that veer is angry at all the misunderstandings she has caused and shera should have not done those things.Veer could have just shouted at her 😭 when they are alone and not in front of everyone but i guess he is angry and upset. And we all know how honestly veer speaks without any Subtlety 😆😆. I could feel his anger 👏👏👏 so sweet almond milk is being prepared for veer. such a spoilt baby 😆😆 how nivritt runs so see her son and is shocked by the number of injuries on him and starts to cry 😭 love veer trying to reassure his mum when he said Ma... I am fine... I told you, didn?t I... your son is a warrior...?

    Amused by how engrossed his aunt seemed in tending to the fussy whims and fancies of her ailing son resting on his lush couch; Dharam tip toes from behind and alarms her by suddenly putting his arms around her shoulders ?Bua...what about me... you didn?t enquire about me... not once...ever since Veer has arrived...? this scene is so 🤗 veer is pura badshah ki tarah aaram phar ma raha hai and nivritti and everyone is running round trying to please him😆😆😆 bechare dharam ko toh koi poocho😆😆

    i love the relationship swati has with veer and nivritti has with dharam, so ncie why cant the sagars show this on tv 😊
    swati saying she made the almond milk for veer but dharam can have it if he wants.😆 veer has everyone's attention, never mind dharam i am sure siya will give you 100% attention😳😆😆
    Dharam irritates his brother by nonchalantly taking the almond milk from the giggling Swathi, Veer desperately rebels ?Mami no?please no don?t hand it to Dharam?he doesn?t even like almond milk?mami?I can?t even run behind him now??🤣🤣🤣 dharam irritating veer is good 🤣 and veer pura taking advantage of his situation and getting sympathy from mami 🤣. both their mischeifs are 😆
    i love the beautiful scenes you have described between nivritti and dharam and veer and swati. 👏so sweet nivritti playfully telling dharam off to leave veer alone and she will get him some milk as well😆 they are such close family
    how nivritti tells them that she was worried for them both when they went to fight and what would they do if something happened to either of them👏
    how veer reassures nivritti that all their prayers have protected them and how he stayed with pari and did not miss home because of all the love he received there.😊
    aww nivritti gets a bit jealous when she hears that and veer calling her maaji but once she remembers pari she understands 😊👏👏
    Yey dharam has received siya's scroll. It is so nice to see dharam teasing veer and bhalla as most of time he is getting teased. 😆
    I love how he dangles the message in front of veer and veer cannot take it so threatens with calling his mum or mami back. 🤣🤣🤣
    The minute veer notices that the message is from siya he know the reason for dharam being so mischievous. Kya kara dharam ko pyar ho gaya ha, all he sees is siya everywhere ❤️
    Veer reading the message out aloud to embarrass dharam, bechara has gone red like a tomato 🤣🤣vdon't worry dharam you can get your sweet revenge when veer falls for shera. 🤣
    I love what siya has written that since dharam cannot write his own messages so she wrote to veer instead. 👏👏🤣Veer she knew it was you because you signed the letter under your name. 🤣🤣🤣
    Lool dharam reply that it was because of his messy handwriting. Dono ki pittai hone wali hai ek din by siya and shera🤣🤣🤣
    Awww siya says that her heart and priorities lies with aryanagars first born prince, love the way she address her feeling for dharam by not saying his name but as the first born prince.😍I bet dharam was dancing when he read that she the engagement has been broken.😆😍
    Veer and bhalla being so bad to dharam,😆😆 bechara kitna sharma raha hai. 😆😆😆Awww siya has sent some herbs in case they are injured and prashad for them. I am sure siya your herbs has worked a miracle on dharam😳😳😳
    Aww she is so sweet 🤗🤗that she even remembers to wish balramji best wishes. I bet bhalla feels that he has been handed the world.😆
    I love the way she ends the letter that next time she will be waiting for a reply for dharam himself. 😆🤗🤗Don't worry siya, I am hoping next time dharam will come to see you in person 😍
    I like veer's reply as to how siya has become like warrior prince 😊 and than he taunts dharam that from now on he has to write his own letters.😆😆 I would love to see a letter written by dharam as well.😍😍
    Loool bhalla, veer is teasing dharam about siya and all of sudden he remembers the prashad. This guys is always thinking of food.🤣🤣🤣
  • I was surprised that dharam ate most of the prashad😲 normally this is what bhalla would do.😆😆 Awww he was so worried about veer that he ate most of it and read siya's letter again and again. I think he has memorised the letter and knows it by heart now 😍

will be back with more comments😳

Edited by divareena - 17 years ago

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