FF:Back to Newton’s Laws-3...part 46.... - Page 71

Originally posted by: missing Vmars

OMG NJ i luved dis part ...... after weeks ( literally ) armaan n ridz r back on track ... all misunderstandings finally cleared n done away wit n OMG ( again ) i jus luved da part where ridz promises never 2 hide nething from him in future ...... dat whole conversation ... da way dey both addressed dere issues n insecurities it was jus SPLENDID !!!!!!

jeez am actually running short of words 2 describe dis part .....n now cuming 2 da fun element of da update i jus luved da whole idea of armaan trying 2 capture every beautiful moment ( of deres ) n riddhima i guess she knws how 2 twist him around her little finger ( i guess almost every girl knws how 2 do dat ) .... again dat was like one of my fav moments from da whole update !!!! infact was starting 2 miss dere friendly/ flirtatious banter ...... am glad its back !!!!!! reg n ammy wat can i say abt dese guys .... dey rock ya esp reg da way hes supported armaan thru thick n thin !!!! but i must say hes one curious guy is itching 2 knw da reason y armaan hastened da proposal 😉 ( again it was one of my fav moments from da update ..... actually without a doubt one of da best reg armaan moment from da whole FF ) !!!!!!

ok so lemme get dis straight angad n minnie r getting married , reg n muskaan will sooon get married , armaan n ridz r engaged ( dont knw wen dey r getting married ) n anjie's expecting a child ..... OMG does dis mean u will sooon b ending dis FF !!!!! awwwww am gonna b sooo sad once dat happens NJ

PS: sandra n ben thrown out of city .... Divine justice !!!!!!

Originally posted by: spln

hey missy first *hug back* thnx for the lovely comments.....um glad u like the part...hehe so u were in florida for a holiday....mid summer though??its more likely for winters n spring i mean so just curious or did u take a cruise????

oh well...yeh i had the ridz ammy convo, both sides quite clear in my head for a chnage....i was stuck at the part coz of the latter part, which was basically a filler i know...but i wanted to make ot happy, not tacky....so/.well...u know i was writing so much sad stuff last few parts think i lost my hang of the as it is diminished humor....anywaz....since u all liking it so gfar....um glad...n next part....is going to be the most unexpected ever....wont say anymore yet....just wait....it will take a wile havent started yet...but oh well....i dint leave a cliff here so u guys have to let me live!!!😆

Originally posted by: jia..

Ok please make way for me......😆😆 am finally gracing my comments....actually Nsm u can welcum me with chappels!! Honestly i am the biggest jerk....i am last wen i shud be the first out here.....

Read all three in one go........... Gosh girl....with one update i used to rush to find adjectives worth ur praise.....now with three?? Poor me.....😆😆

Ok lets start now......😆 Part 43....ok the start was tremendously intense....him holding her in his arms, gazing at her, wanting her to speak. Nsm if there anyone who cud hav described this in a more outstanding manner it has to be you only!!

armaan did not protest, he had not really registered anything around him post the moment he had spotted rahul supporting ridhima's limp body in the parking.....he had run n taken her into his arms hugging her body....but her lack of response for obvious reasons had just reaffirmed the fact of the moment to him although that did not keep him from whispering to her "ridhima....open ur eyes princess....please.....um...um here baby n i....i believe u.....n...." as she stayed still he said in a choking whisper "um sorry honey i should have....." and rahul had seen the look he gave to sandra without finishing off the sentence as she stood just short of trembling.....he still dint know what the hole issue was, but the basic was not hard to gues

awweee each line ....each para....ur a genius. The scenes following this were just as wonderful. I cud feel Armaan's concern going within me. To that extent u write this emotions with such finesse.

The entire description about her wound...omg was like gave me goosebumps....literally i cud feel the pain of the character!! Ok next....Muskaan's reactions!!! Wohooo that was some goal there......the way she insisted on signing the papers, ignoring poor Armaan. Then Rahul covering up for him. Nsm the entire scene was one of its king. Realistic, believable and outstandingly penned. Wat else to say i fail to know!!

The way the poor guy broke down!! Gosh i wished i cud give him my shoulder to cry!! Nsm how r u doing this girl??

Part44......Ahhh brilliant start scene...with Muski-armaan scene. Besides the sheer brilliance of the conversation the way u added those little details....coffee stirring....placing the cup aside....Nsm u hav a great writer's bone in you girl!! Um glad he explained her though....then the scene wen she wakes up....he goes away out!! am falling short of sum serious praises here....help me.....!!

The best part was the convo.....the words Armaan tells her.....

i let u down.....asked u to trust me with the rest of ur life, n failed miserably at the very first stumbling block....i know it will all work out, u will forgive me....we will get back to being the same happy us....like all hard moments this will pass us by even if its worse than any before.....but.......the whole thing......it just forces me to think....if it wasnt an indication of how undeserving of u i am.....so much to have decided il never let a tear come into ur eyes again....what i put u through was worse than hell.....u never abandoned my side, i never was there for u when u needed me most.....n so i....i need to etch this moment um with u....the only one when il dare to admit that i deserve to be told to never show u my face again, n the only moment where um almost hoping u do banish me to that punishment so atleast i could rid myself of this abyss of engulfing guilt.....its like ....the albatross"

he paused taking in a deep breath then said with a melancholy smile appearing on his lips....."u know sweetheart, mum said everyone has their cross.....i guess....this will be mine honey, being with u every second of my life knowing i never earned it in the face of a real test....perhaps u hear me subconsciously perhaps not....but i dont know if i can ever say any of this again n explain it the same way with u looking into my eyes.....so um saying it all now.....i feel like um beyond redemption in every way possible, i accused u, then i chose not believe u, n i was somewhere inherently responsible for all this physical pain u are going through....n now i dont have it in me to see you in the eye n say any of this, um not scared of admitting my wrong....um scared of.....how i will ever face myself after u just let it all go n forgive me....i dont think i could take a simple 'its ok' from u after all this n i know u wouldnt put me through trial cause u didnt even do that when i was framed so obviously before u for....."

Hawwwww they were like the most brilliant lines i ever read.....her reaction there after.....Nsm the entire scene was........outta the world.
Ok then the light scene.....Aryan one....and Anjie expecting!! It was again very well put. U know the simplicity with which u describe these emotion.....so much of excellence....leaves me amazed!!😳

Part45.....Ahhh the flashback has to be y most adored scene till now!! Besides them finally clearing up everything.....the depth with which u hav put it down really moved me....srslyy felt likee standing up and giving u a standing ovation .....again the minute details....very well taken care off.......

and he ran his fingers through his ruffled hair, then stood up n turned around for her inspection ...as she ran her eyes top to bottom, she looked at him with teasing 'need-i-say-much' look.....the tux of course had come off, also the shoes, the tie knot loosened ....n the red shirt with top few buttons undone wasnt quite perfectly tucked in....

but that was just him....whatever he may be dressed up as, or even messed up as, she couldnt deny the obvious....he could carry off any look, yet maintain the magnetic appeal.

So very very true .....hayeeeee☺️ he can look dashing in every attire he adorns....i know it was straight from ur heart rite???😆

Ok after the clarification loved the Newton hunour bits....." i promise il tell u everything....except...."

he looked at her frowning with raised eyebrows...."except about my secret dates with newton on full moon nights...." she said faking a look of being lovestruck....seeing his expression change rapidly from confusion n anticipation to a mean nasty look with narrowed eyes she burst out laughing

loved this one.....and ofcourse his pat cheeky reply.....😆

Then the entire cam recoder scene ....Kids above 18???🤣 Those wise cracks Nsm.....how do u even cook them up girl?? Ahhh so London trip now?? Lets see wat in store more now......um looking forward to a lot of pleasantries now....

Ahhh Sandy-pandy were out?? That was a divine revenge.....loved the way u put how the guys were not keen on girls getting in between and Ahh the last Reg-armi scene....😆😆 Nsm am at loss of words now....

As i said u have the bone, flesh,blood everything that of a writer. Seems like a descendant of the Lady Austen herself!! The finesse with which u write is marvelous....

i guess my comment is errm..........😆😆😆 put an alaram and read it....if u see this bottom line first......😆😆

Looking forward to ur next....am all up now....geared up and will catch u up for each update...as before....cant give u such liberties everyday .....😆

A big thankyou to u for this wonderful after exam treat....brought colour back on my face.....😆

love u tons
Jia

Originally posted by: Naina123

Ok so Im finally here again...wow I just realised I haven't commented on the last 5 parts. So now that I am here..let me make myself comfortable before I start...so here I go with my non-sensicle blabbering...

Part 41: Ok when I read that part, I was like 'no no no...this is getting complicated by the minute....oh how is this going to get resolved?' Lol but then I thought why worry when we have 'superwoman' here...😆 Ok jokes apart, you are just totally brilliant, how do you do it everytime you update, I am left wondering... what's going to happen next? or how is she going to sort this mess out? but everytime, you seem to surprise me with your sheer brilliance. I am rendered speechless with the way you define their thoughts and emotions. Truly this part was one of the best parts, don't ask me why? Even I don't why, I am still clueless😕. But may be It was the way you actually described both their turmoils and agony they were undergoing. Somehow I could empathise more with Armaan than Ridz in this part. The last bit to the part, I was like 'no no...where are the pictures?' but trust you to bring Ben in at that moment; and totally make me forget about the pics.

Part 42: Ok I am so glad Armaan found out about Sandra in this part; her and Ben are OMG...they are pure evilll. I don't know who I hate more Ben or Sandra? Guess they are both as bad as each other. I absoloutely adore Muski and Rahul in this FF, I think they have such a cute relationship, and they are both amazing friends. That Ben is not as dumb as he sounds, but he is a puppet in his sister's hands. The way you weaved this whole part was just awesome. I always seem to run short of words while commenting on your parts, I have so much to say, but can't manage to weave it in to words. I am so glad Rahul found her before anything could happen, and Armaan was seething, but then who wouldn't be.

Part 43: Like I have told you many a times, that I love uncle Arthur. He has to be one of my fav character from this FF. I simply love the way you've sketched his and Chris's character. I love Rahul, he is such a sweet friend, his and Armaan's relationship is so sweet. What I loved in this part is the way you worded Armaan's reaction, his thoughts, his pain, his guilt for not believing her. That was just truly magnificient and mindblowing. Muskaan's anger was justified, a bit rash I suppose, but still justified. Ridz is like a sister to her, so anyone would behave like that. I most probably would too, there are times when one doesn't think before acting. I really liked the car scene when Muskaan shows the picture, there were so many emotions that each were undergoing; anger, confusion, grief, guilt and trust. Rahul is an amazing friend, helping Armaan to sort his turmoil and confusion.

Part 44: The conversation that was shared between Armaan and Muskaan was sweet, and glad at least Muski's misunderstanding was cleared. I liked Muskaan's description of Ridz; sometimes even a life time is not enough to actually know everything about a person. Rahul and Uncle Arthur's conversation was quite enlightening, we got to know more about Armaan's vulnerablity. Armaan and Ridz''s confrontation was just Wow, that was just absoloutely amazing.I don't think I want to say anything about this part much, because I just loved that part. I really liked the ending to this part, because you decided to end it with a jovial part after all the sadness in the last couple of parts. Oh yay.. Anjie's pregnant!!! woohooo.."Its the time to disco..."😆 (Sorry about the tacky joke)

Part 45: I have no idea how you remembered each and everything that you needed to resolve. I loved their little nok-jhoks at the beginning of this part, oh poor Armaan is jealous of Sir Newton, not needed Armaan...he is not as cute as you. 😉 Ridz in some what way is similar to me, (No I don't like Newton😆, God help me if I did....no offence NJ😛) I mean I also tend to keep things in, and prefer to resolve things by myself. The entire flashback was just wow, I have no idea how you resolved and spelt it out so simply, now thats a stroke of a genius. I thoroughly enjoyed the little masti between the two. Girls surely do know how to wrap a guy around their finger, be it dad, bro, boy-fren etc. We are just too good, what say?😉 Aww Rids is so thoughtful; she wanting to come to London and give the first invite to his mum. Yay... time to disco again😆 the twins are out the way, and Rahul is so itching to know why Armaan was so hasty. Why don't you fill him in NJ? Poor dude, deserves that much.😆

This comment has become like a little essay, I am sorry to have bored you with my bak-bak, but I really hope this makes up for the lack of comments. You are just awesome awesome, so it's difficult to word it sometimes when there is so much to say.

Luv ya lots
Soon to be Mrs Bakri Imran Khan😳
XxX

PS: I hope u haven't posted the next part by the time I post this😛

Originally posted by: Naina123

🤣 I am not ditching Imran for anyone!! lol.... I just liked Severus Snape the charcter in the HP books...because I had told everyone that Snape wasnt evil...and nobody believed me until the last book came out!! heheh then I rubbed it in their faces, like no mans business!!! 😛

Gawd NJ ur just another one of us mad ppl on the forum! All leos are born like that!😛
🤣 I only say wow's because u deserve it😃 sure I'll keep writing u essays, just as long as u dont expect it to be coherent, or informative at all for that matter....😛

And Hunny, I told Imran not to buy me a solitare, I told him I want a private Island instead...Oh and the Island is called.....'The island where no insane india forum ppl are allowed ever' 😃 What do you think??

Oh and erm..seeing as I have commented on the last parts I missed out on...u can update 😃 lol...If u have the part written😛