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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey NJ,

Yippee finally managed to catch up with all the parts..

Part 41: the whole realization process that Armaan framed and the emotional turmoil both ridz and armaan went through was portrayed brilliantly….hmm I did wonder about the missing envelope and pictures and thought the obvious, that the twins had something to do with it…whoa " some real dance moves" to be shown by Mr Ben bet was a cliffhanger…good thing I am reading all the parts first or else I would have joined the "BE A PAIN AND WHINE ALONG UNTIL THE NEXT UPDATE CLUB " hehehe ..ok I think that was not even worthy a title of a PJ..

Part 42: Whooaaaaaa I so didn't see it coming out this way….rite I hear THUNDER LIGHTENINIG N MURDER ..and OMG she fainted but how , I mean he didn't give her the drug, did he? (Okie gal I know I have already read all the parts but since I'm commenting on each part lemme carry on with the MELODRAMA..gosh)

I liked the little and cute n mushy Rahul n muskaan fight and then sensing the "trouble" ridz was with.

Part 43: Hmmm this part was very gloomy…man that surely did wreck Armaan emotionally…but must admit this part is totally MUSKI's show..although she's misunderstood and reacted with both rahul and armaan, specially with the late justified her concern and love for her best friend riddhima.I have honestly loved Rahul's character a lot, he is the PERFECT FRIEND ..and the only one acting sane throughout..i loved the last bit where he tries to knock some real sense in to Armaan.

Part 44: U know I actually thought that it wud be ridz who wud clarify everything for armaan and muski…but naa u just made it perfect with muski and armaan conversation and must admit I like it better than any of the rahul and ammy talks…wow and armaan venting out all his feelings unknown to the fact that his lady love had heard everything was brilliant..wow and I can totally relate to the later part where ridz and armaan were in the " DANGER ZONE " with aryan and anjie..reminded me of my friends back in India when I told them um engaged..

Gal u sure have a knack of characterization…

Part 45: NOW THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT…lets start with the flashback..hmm finally the shell's been broken…well am at a loss of words hun..i just cant think of the apt words or lines or phrases so I think I'll just say that it was by far the best convo between armaan n ridz..and gosh men ..i mean come on don't they realize that the world will come to an end if we gals stopped our BLABBERING (oops I meant that we GALS STOP GIVING OUR ARTICULATE OPINIONS ON ANYTHING AND EVERYTHING) neways the cam part was simply mindblowing…and finally Sandra and Ben getting what they truly deserved..although I am in total agreement with MUSKI to deport them to African jungles…and lastly Rahul being cheeky,,well guess this wud be one of the very rare moments of LORD BENZ where he'll be tongue tied and blushing heheh.

Cheers

PS : Thanx for the pm hun and yeah feeling a little better..but it's a slow process so just hanging there ..am still not supposed to work full time or be on comps all the time, but its hard with work and studies and whatever AM FINE..😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
oki jhanvi this thing wont leme quote u n reply....but anyways here u go....wow i think its my day for getting feedback on 5 parts back to back first nainu now u....dont think um complaining in the least its great!!!loved reading ur comment n that was def not a pj....i was actually cracking reading that title!!!!

oki....glad u liked all the parts, even the tragic ones....i hated writing the 44th part i was like oki enuf now getting gloom into me ut seems....but yeh 45 i just had to make it sound normal...n so ur engaged....perhaps married...cool didnt know that....i hope ul recover soon....being on the bed is alwaz good to begin with everyone so pampers u but then after a bit i can never be patient enuf....seriously on that account the ridhima in the fic is exactly me, i didnt even reconsider giving her a difrnt outl;ok just penned down myself!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG awwww!!! The video was cho chweet!!! Haha..Armaan wanted to show it at the wedding!!! Lol...he's toooooo cute!!! Ridzi's just adorable as well!!! So easily excited....Glad that everything's ok b/w them...OMG Rahuuuuul!!! He still hasn't forgotten the proposing thing na?!?! Lolz...He's a gr8 guy!! Do continue soon n thanks alot for the pm...
Love,
Ananya
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet=me

OMG awwww!!! The video was cho chweet!!! Haha..Armaan wanted to show it at the wedding!!! Lol...he's toooooo cute!!! Ridzi's just adorable as well!!! So easily excited....Glad that everything's ok b/w them...OMG Rahuuuuul!!! He still hasn't forgotten the proposing thing na?!?! Lolz...He's a gr8 guy!! Do continue soon n thanks alot for the pm...

Love,
Ananya



thnx a ton ananya!!!glad u liked the part!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
phew!! finally finished readin d 2 parts n in insatalments as usual....

coming 2 d parts....whooopie...happy days are back again....there sure ws lot 2 resolve.....d parts wer simply superb.....nd u drifted them so swiftly frm d serious talk 2 d happy fights...especially dat flashback....hats off 2 u....

luvd d convo b/w muski n armaan...u kno i thot it wud be ridzy who wil clear dese thots bt i am glad muski did it....all ur characters are so.....so....ummmm...hav no words....so awesome....n ur ff has every relation focussed upon properly....ryt frm love to freindship to parent-child relation....i'm in absolute luv wit dem....

n at last armaan n ridzy spoke their heart out...... at last all the things got cleared up....

btw the cam idea ws awesome...i cud actually picturise ridzy fightin 2 get d cam frm armaan...lol...

n well nw dat everything seems 2 be gettin cleard up dat 2 at a qute gud speed....do i sense an ending/?? if u are thinkin of it den do start thinkin of anoder ff soon...take it as an advice or as an warnin.... :) actually m quite addicted 2 readin ur ffs....d same way u r to writin dem...

thnx for d pms...pls cont soon...wel atleast ders no cliffhangers nw...
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Posted: 17 years ago

okay..so we r close to the REAL happy ending now...now dat everything has fallen in place, wonder wat the finale wud be like..

the update was wonderful, as always..btw, which character in the story relates to u the most?? i mean, where u hardly had to think before jotting those expressions n feelings down?? which reminds u of u?

luv,

anu.😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pal_279

phew!! finally finished readin d 2 parts n in insatalments as usual....

coming 2 d parts....whooopie...happy days are back again....there sure ws lot 2 resolve.....d parts wer simply superb.....nd u drifted them so swiftly frm d serious talk 2 d happy fights...especially dat flashback....hats off 2 u....


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luvd d convo b/w muski n armaan...u kno i thot it wud be ridzy who wil clear dese thots bt i am glad muski did it....all ur characters are so.....so....ummmm...hav no words....so awesome....n ur ff has every relation focussed upon properly....ryt frm love to freindship to parent-child relation....i'm in absolute luv wit dem....


thanx hun, i kinda felt it wud be fair to let muski finally get some substantial role in the fic she been sidelined too long!!

n at last armaan n ridzy spoke their heart out...... at last all the things got cleared up....

btw the cam idea ws awesome...i cud actually picturise ridzy fightin 2 get d cam frm armaan...lol...

hehe i had no idea i was gona write it actually it just seemed to happen as i typed!!!

n well nw dat everything seems 2 be gettin cleard up dat 2 at a qute gud speed....do i sense an ending/?? if u are thinkin of it den do start thinkin of anoder ff soon...take it as an advice or as an warnin.... :) actually m quite addicted 2 readin ur ffs....d same way u r to writin dem...

haha....yar abi to yeh chalri hai jab tak tabi tak u ppl cant dhmkaaofy me...n this was like sooooooooooo long...3 threads i cant believe it...n it was actually meant to be a short one....😆

thnx for d pms...pls cont soon...wel atleast ders no cliffhangers nw...

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: lookwhoshere

okay..so we r close to the REAL happy ending now...now dat everything has fallen in place, wonder wat the finale wud be like..

the update was wonderful, as always..btw, which character in the story relates to u the most?? i mean, where u hardly had to think before jotting those expressions n feelings down?? which reminds u of u?

luv,

anu.😊



hey anu thnx for the comments missed u in the last few parts....n which character...there isnt any all like me but there bits of each here n there....ridzi as a patient is just like me....ppl hate me when i hit the bed n i oblige them quite often like n injury queen or something!!!

ummm...n i think i have the accent issue like armaan confused brit cum american accent...n yeh all that stuff abt not hearing seeing things arnd me when um reading, n sleeping with earphones plugged in n laptop running all that like me....n ridzi ka sudden night snacking n physics at 3am like me too!!!think thats mostly it!!!rest all pretty much fictitious!

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Posted: 17 years ago
am waiting am waiting......abhi aur kitna intezar..........then i'll hav to sing yaar..........intezaar....intezaarrrrrrrrr 😆
and i dont think u will want to ban ur such an ardent reader from this thread for incessant braying......(Seems like i hav got my armaan's effects still on me)😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jia..

am waiting am waiting......abhi aur kitna intezar..........then i'll hav to sing yaar..........intezaar....intezaarrrrrrrrr 😆
and i dont think u will want to ban ur such an ardent reader from this thread for incessant braying......(Seems like i hav got my armaan's effects still on me)😆



haha jia hun...trust me i wana post soon but me stuck....il telll u why n what with when i post the part....but...u just have to leme off the hook this time 😆

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