well well Miss powerpuff had to prove it to me once again didnt she??? that u can write more then outstanding and make me fetch out more words to praise you??? Shame Hawww!!!! 😆 😆 😆 do u have no sense of pity on me at all Nsm??? i guess i will have to catch the next flight to US to sort some issues out here, this is way to much, 😆 😆 😆
"<span>For the initial moments armaan stared back into her eyes, his look steadfast....but as the seconds ticked away, he felt restless at not getting any response....his eyes wandered in minute scrutiny of each subtlety in the softness of her face, desperate to detect even the hint of variation of expression which may reveal her thoughts at that moment....but she remained unfathomable....his lips still brushing almost close to her mouth, he dared not break his hold on her to move out of the overwhelming closeness which enveloped both of them, to a certain extent clouding their logic....for he feared what any physical disturbance to this stillness might consequence....if he had invited trouble, which he felt he most certainly had, breaking this spell might hasten its arrival n for then, though his anticipation was rising by the second, he preferred the moment of proximity, just him n her...would last an eternity.....but it could not....anticipation was giving way to anxiety....n ultimately after the lapse of a many inactive seconds frustration towered over him n he could contain himself no longer...why didnt she speak????was this the advent of his worst fears coming true????"
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<br><span>reading the start i knew u had set out to prove me wrong once again. I say that yup this part is THE BEST no match.....BANG u cum up with another??? Man u stumped with initial paras girl??
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<br><span>"how could she be when she wanted him too...had wanted him in every moment they were close, perhaps without even the conscious realization of what exactly it was she wanted.....but when he said it she knew that was it.....but how could she be thinking all this let alone not being offended???shouldnt she feel like he was being outrageous????n here she was feeling.....ALMOST HAPPY????n the feeling was rising within....like a surge of emotion unchecked.....she finally lowered her eyes.....oh my lord....forgive me....is it a sin to feel so for the one i love???the only one it will ever be????i almost feel happy to the extent of jubilation about him saying it n feeling my way....but this guilt.....please god... rid me of one of the two emotions for how can i face the two extremes together, in a situation which is hard enough without this dilemma.....n she wished, it would be the guilt that left her......"
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There go its like each line is outstanding, carefully woven into the part!! Brilliant will be an understatement!!
"<span>ur sorry cause u love me???then ur sorry about being honest???or are u sorry u feel the way u do????would you rather you didnt feel this way???"
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Hawwww, wat can i say Nsm??? Howon earth did u even think up of such dialogs will remain a mystery to me!! Outstanding!! U have sheer excellence oozing out from them girl!!👏
My gosh intensity, the desperation u portrayed scorched my screen!! Nev er have i read any part where intensity is described so effortlessly that it captivates u so very much that i didnt even blink once. Genius at work!!!
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They almost lost control but not fully and the scenes after that!!! Her covering up for him was like pouring hot chocolate over a sizzler (Do i make sense?)😆 😆
the finesse with which u described him feeling so guilty and confused my gosh Nsm feel like touching ur feet woman!!
<span>"she...is...the...one"...then after a pause he got up n started pacing around the dark room....ENOUGH....he thought.....I CANT TAKE THIS ANYMORE....i dont want to wait n prove to myself, to her or to anybody else that this relationship is meant to be....i know it...she knows it...i have seen enough of her n i dont care about what more there is to be seen....because i know nothing will change my mind....n i know she feels the same....pa u said lifelong decisions should be made in their good time....but u also said i should take the decision on my own terms....i have made up my mind now....i just have to get this relationship moving, n give it the place in my life it is meant for.... </span>"
Woahhhh a masterstroke again?? Am cuming to kidnap ur brain for sure!!
Next the Rahul-ammy scene was fab too. Rahul not missing a thing huh??? And OMG a solitare?? 😳
Gosh Nsm u better make the day one of its kind or i dunno what i will do!! 😆 😆 😆 Get tat sandy-pandy out for good!! or else......... 😈
Now finally my comment exceeded ur part length so i better stop!!! Will be very very very despo toread the next. Hope wat i fear wont be true....i am warning u.😆
Love
Jia
hey jia....sorry guess i dint quite go the usual way lolzzzz but sandy will be sorted soon i promise!!!
um glad u liked the part other than that....n hope u enjoy the next!!!
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