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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: athni

hey,
This is the first time I am reading a FF n I hav to say u r an amazing writer..I read the 33 parts at a stretch and waz wishng it would jus continue further so ur apprehensions about new readers not reading it becuz of d length r totally uncalled for...
Congrats on your third thread !!!! You really deserve all the accolades!!! Your ff is just tooooooo awesome!!! I loved it!!! Gosh I reaaaaally can't wait for more!!! Spectacular!!
Love,
Kasturi 👏




hey thanx kasturi...that was so encouraging!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ArmiandRidz4eva

hey NJ, first of all congrats for your 3rd thread, well done girl!! you deserve it for giving an awesome ff for all us readers!!

2nd: sorry for commenting a little late than usual

and 3rd:
OMG, part 33, i think is one of my favourites, im so glad you have shown this side of Armaan, it was so needed as i thought there was too much on Ridz thinking, now its Armaans turn to show himself in a dilemma which i think is pretty cool!!

loved the intensity of this part, and you wrote it perfectly!!

loved how the party was organised and everything, finally Ridz began to calm down on her thinking and started enjoying the party,

i absolutely fell for Rahul in this part being the concerned friend for Armaan, and without even asking him Ridz found her answer"u want to help him???just be with him....thats all he needs....." i loved this line, and im so glad it showed how much he knows his friend

i liked the little dance part you put in, reminded me of the salsa dance in step up 2, so i enjoyed reading it.

coming up to the climax of the update, he whispered "i want you...." a couple of seconds went by...then she jerked open her eyes n stared back into his , as he stood so close....she felt blank n so were her eyes n expression..... OMG im wondering nervously what Ridz reaction is going to be - would have been nice if you continued it but you left a cliff hanger instead lol

it was a brilliant part as usual, thanks for the PM, and eagerly waiting to know what happens next

Sania 😳



well u read wat ridz did...um replying soooooo late...hope u enjoy the new update san!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: komalsirwani

Wowww....NJ....hw can u be so superbly perfect with every part...loved every scene described so beautifully in da last 2 parts...loved all the lil details...n i srsly love the raltionships u potray in ure FF...the ridz muski part...ridz rahul part...liked them totally....n the room scene....omggggggg i was blushin like hell....u excel ureself in every part n am srsly lost of words...everytime...im lovin ure fic totally...hw only i wish this could neva end.....well everythin has to come to an end...anyways...wil keep lovin it til u write it...great gong...cont soon....loved that dialogue whr ridz says "ure so embarrased to say ure attracted to me" n i actually started laughin hehehehe it was chooo chooo chooo chweet...lovin it 👏




thnx a bunch komal...the idea is to make u ppl like the fic...but um enjoying every bit of doing it trust me!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mar-

woooooow really good part 👏 pls continue sooon



thnx dear!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: missypatel

ummmmm!!

u koe!m ot on a lil vacation..wit family...n ive been watchin DMG late too..n i was DESPERATELY waitin for u 2 update!!
i wud hve surely sent u a spam if id nt seen an update tdy...later at ntie!!

neways!!
luved rahul-ridz convo...it was needed!!:D

d last bit...it cme as a surprise..1st cuz ridz gt him rong..cuz ter thots r always on d sme track..here tey wer nt...n even after he tld her...he gt carried away..he only thot abt wat was in her head already!
m soooooo glad it tk a turn..n he didnt end up tlkin abt it bt really showin it!!
tht was icin on d cake..luved it!!
man i gt gooseflesh again....n i cnt wait 4 u to update..yur updatez r mst awaited by me thn DMG gurl!!!!

uffff!!luved it!!i cn c thrugh tem rite nw...her blank luk!!OUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!




hey yeh ur right...well i didnt want it to be god like true...u can never know everything exactly the way the other person thinks so i thot i shud get it this way...but abt her not guessing even when he hinted....yeh that i just thot...its hard to analyse much when its real n on u....all ur sense can desert u at times...i was tryin to project that she really wasnt expectuing it n so cudnt guess...makes sense????

hope u enjoyed ur break,....
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: chillingal16

hey excellent part..hope i am not thinkin wrong by guessin that ridz will see armaan and sandy at the docs together and think of somehting?? pls conintue soon..can u pls Pm me..thanks in advance 😃



yeh u thinking wrong the new part up!!!enjoy!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

reserved me going to work now will comment soon love u NJ Hina


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😳😳😳


NJ,love u!


this was one of my fav parts ,everything was just perfect and exactly how it shud have been


Sandra will only make it more fun I'd say, sorry people ,don't kill mefor this


Love is all about tests and trials


the more you're exposed to them,the more your realise how much love you have and it just strengthens the bond


hope my PM made more sense,i would say more here,people might start hating me 😆


i loved the update and just can't appreciate it enuf,but u know how much i love it don't u?


thanks NJ


u're the best!





think i reply enuf in the PM's haha!!!thanx for the lovely comments hina di...i hope u too know exactly how much those simple words mean!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK

hey this was amazing NJ😳i luuuuvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv it..............that all i can say😃Armaan and Ridz are so understanding to each other.........😳Stupid Sandra, i just want to kill her man..............so chipku😕😕😕Reg was trying hard to make armaan go but that stupid girl, make him get stuck........Now why i m getting the feeling that riddhima will only see armaan and sandy out there in hospi except reg.................that will be awful man🤢Girl, trust him...........trust issues always break a relation.......don't make it so weak😊😊great work NJcont soon dear👏lolzana😳😳😳



thnx ana...its lovely to see ur regular pour of comments since u werent quite on the last 2 threads....um glad u enjoying it...i see u reserved a msg block for the new part hope u enjoy!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sasya

the part was great 👏 u handled it well,actually i was dieing to read her reation but now i am happy.i think armaan should talk to her as fast as possible.
that sandy 😡 😡 😡 i hate her,now i think riddhima will see armaan with sandy in the hospital,i hope she dose'nt missunderstand him.........
i am waiting to see how armaan will propose her for marraige..this part was really good i am happy that he finally decided to marry her.i hope the next part will not be bad,if it is then please try to make it abit happy till the end of the part
continue soon.......



think i made the new part quite cheerful...delayed the impending trouble a bit!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: missing Vmars

NJ i am gonna catch da next flight 2 US n have a major fight wit u if u dont get rid of dat Sandra B**** in da next part ... i mean get rid of her for gud !!!! da whole part was amazing ( one of da best actually ) but offcourse she had 2 cum n spoil it for me !!! u knw u ended da last part wit armaan saying " i want u " u knw i was most curious 2 knw wat did he want after dat .. .was he jus confessing his feeling for her ( but still wanted 2 maintian dis distance n all ) or did he want 2 take dere relation 2 da next level ... i really luved da way u handled dis aspect ... dere feeling for each other, da guilt which was overcuming dem .... n also not wanting 2 break a faith which dere parents had in dem ... amazing .... n den finally losing dere control ( almost loosing ) n her injured hand preventing nething further from happening OMG how do u ever think of all dis !!!! also riddhima lying 2 muskaan ( 2 cover up for dem) i thought was da cutest !!! sooo armaan's all set 2 propose ( complete wit a solitare ring ) OMG am soooo hoping sandra doesnt ruin it dem ( i sooo wanna beat her up right now ) .... coz am pretty sure armaan n riddhima r gonna cum face 2 face at da doctors ... since muskaan will take riddhima for her appointment n armaan wud have 2 take sandra dere ..... ( am pretty sure she hurt herself on purpose jus 2 get armaan's attention n sympathy ..... jus cudnt tolerate 2 c armaan caring for riddhima ) ..... am hoping it doesnt create ne misunderstandings between dem ( seriously hoping riddhima doesnt fall in sandra's trap once again n start doubting armaan or his luv .... it wud be a tragedy) ..... so no more misunderstandings NJ PLZ PLZ PLZ ( knwing u am expcting sumthing different from u ... so no typical nonsense hopefully ) !!!!


ok i think i have bored u enough wit my essay .... so no more comments ... jus waiting for ur next update .... i think i will kill myself trying 2 imagine wats gonna happen next .... Damn i wish i wasnt off from school .... have all a time in da world 2 sit n think abt it !!!! &n bsp;




hey hun...first sorry abt not getting ur question right the last time abt the i want u armi line...but guess my part explained before i actually answered u...next...sandra...haha yeh il fix her soon...but if u wana help sure drop in anytime i stay in michigan univ optics lab for like 18/24 hours a day!!!

when can i expect u?? :D

oki jokes apart hope u enjoy the new part!!!

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