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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

i hv read all parts of ur ff...interesting ff.... loved it...
hmmm... lovely promo.... waiting for the next part... 😳

Thank u soooooo much Shona n i am happy that u liked it. 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Haan Mujhe Pyaar Hai
part 28:-

"Kajal vaise I must say ki tum kaafi acchi aur morden biwi ho jo apne pati k saath dance karte hue kisi aur ko dekh kar bhi shaant rehti hai." Sanya taunted.

Kajal tried her best to ignore the dirty things she was pouring in her mind.

"Kajal tum ko bura to nahi lag raha hai na jo mai keh rahi hoon." Sanya asked her tried to be sweet with her.

Kajal looked at her with anger.

"Dekho Kajal mai samjhti hoon itne bade aadmi ki biwi hona kitna mushkil hai tum rok nahi sakti ladkiyon ya autron ko Vardaan k paas aane se ; vaise bhi kya kar sakte hain us ka charm hi aisa hai." Sanya gave a dirty look to Vardaan.

Kajal was fuming more now.

"Dekho Kajal mai bus itna kehna chahti hoon ki Vardaan par abhi se lagaam laga k rakho varna kabhi bhi kahin bhi fisal sakta hai vo." Sanya suggested.

Now this was the last thing she heard from her. "Aap ki himmat kaise hue mere Vardaan k bare me aisa kuch bolne ki. Aap samajhti kya hain apne aap ko?" Kajal screamed.

Sanya was shocked us ko umeed nahi thi ki Kajal aise respond kar sakti hai us ne socha tha ki Kajal apne pati par shak karegi ya us ko bhala bura kahegi par yahan to ulta hi ho gaya Kajal ka gussa Sanya par hi fat gaya.

"Aap ko kya laga ki aap mujh se kuch bhi kahengi aur mai maan loongi aap ki baat. Aap hoti kaun hain Vardaan par ungli uthane waali? Aap jaise log na kisi ki khusi bardaasht kar sakte hain na kisi ko chain se baithe rehne de sakte hain." She scolded her again.

"Kajal mai to bus??????.." Kajal didn't let her complete.

"Kuch nahi bolengi aap, bus bus kariye Vardaan k liye mere dil me zehar gholna kyounki mai us se pyaar karti hoon aur mai kabhi bhi us se nafrat nahi kar sakti hoon." She said it all in a single breath without thinking that what she should say.

Vardaan has just arrived there and he was in state of shock when he heard that what did Kajal just said.

Kajal turned and found him standing behind her in amazement. She bit her tongue. 'Hey bhagwaan maine kya bol diya ye mujhe aise nahi kehna tha.' Kajal ko samajh hi nahi aaya kya kare vo bus vo chup chaap bahar chali gayi.

Vardaan ko samajh me nahi aaya ki hua kya par jo suna us par us ko vishwaas nahi ho raha tha ki jis ko vo like karta hai vo bhi us ko????par ye sab itne jaldi ho raha hai kahin ye sapna to nahi.

"Vardaan tum Kajal ko dekho mai Sanya k saath hoon." Nisha said n Vardaan nodded n came out of the disc. Us ne Kajal ko dhoondhna start kiya par dikh nahi rahi thi vo.

Kuch der tak dhoondhne k baad us ki najar ek kone me khade ek insaan par gayi jis ki siskiyon ki awaaz aa rahi thi dheere dheere.

"Kajal, "he called softly.

But she didn't turn and continue sobbing. He went nearer to her. "Kajal just look at me." He requested her.

Still she didn't turn.

"Kajal pls meri taraf dekho na." he pleaded.

Fir bhi vo aise hi khadi rahi.

Now it was unbearable for him. He went up to her and made her turn into his direction and asked, "Kya hua Kajal?"

She shook her head in a way which showed nothing.

"Kajal jhooth mat bolo sach sach batao baat kya hai?" he insisited.

She couldn't control herself much and clung to him crying hard and still silent. Vardaan held her tightly as if protecting her from every evil. She continued crying till half n hour when Vardaan's cell rang. He picked it up n checked the number she was Nisha. Kajal realized it n parted.

"Haan Nish kaho." He asked.

"Mai Sanya ko le kar jaa rahi hoon raaste me tumhare ghar drop kar doongi tum dono pahuch jaana. Vaise ho kahan tum dono?" Nish asked.

"Mai baad me baat karta hoon tum se." he hung the phone saying this.

When he turned he saw Kajal going towards their car, Vardaan too went back after her and opened the car's door for her. She sat in quietly and both of them drove towards their home. She was silent throughout the way.

When they reached home Sanya was already there and us ne koshish bhi ki Kajal se maafi maangne ki par Kajal bina kuch kahe chali gayi vahan se.

"Vardaan pls meri baat suno." She pleaded Vardaan.

"Mujhe kuch nahi sun na hai Sanya maine har baar tum ko tumhari galtiyon k liye maaf kiya hai par is baar Kajal ka dil dukhane k liye kabhi maaf nahi karoonga." He said n left for his room.

When he reached there he found Kajal looking outside from the window. Her face was looking pale and extra cool.

"Kajal dekho meri baat suno mai nahi jaanta tha ki Sanya ye sab bhi kar sakti hai. Maine to bus ek accha dost hone k naate apne dosti nibhane ki koshish ki thi par mujhe lagta hai ki vo is kaabil nahi hai. Mai kal hi us se bol doonga ki vo yahan se chali jaaye." He said really disappointed by Sanya's behavior.

"Nahi aap aisa nahi kar sakte hain vo aap ki dost hai aur mai nahi chahti hoon ki meri wajah se aap dono ki dosti me koi differences aayein." She said coldly.

"Kajal mai nahi chahta ki meri ya kisi ki wajah se koi kuch kahe tum ko." He said sadly.

"Kyoun?" she shot back.

Vardaan has no answer to give.

Here in Delhi:-

"To ab hum chalte hain." Anchal's mom said whereas Anu n Mugdha was unhappy about this.

"Jaana jaroori hai aunty?" Anu asked.

"Haan beta vahan ghar khali choda hua hai aur agar nahi gaye to shaadi tak vapas kaise aayenge?" Mrs. Aggarwal said sweetly.

"To yahin ruk jaaiye na jaana jaroori hai kya?" Mugdha said.

"Nahi beta hum aayenge na shaadi me." she said again.

"Kajal di ko bhi le kar aayenge is baar." Anchal said with excitement.

"Ok jaldi aana aur shaadi k kam se kam ek hafte pehle aa jaroor jaana." Mugdha said.

Un logon k jaane k kuch der baad Mugdha k ghar se Anu bhi gayi.

"Thank god mai to pareshaan ho gayi thi apne ghar me itne bheed dekh kar." Durga ji said.

"Kya Durga kabhi to khush rehna seekho na." her husband said.

"Aap ko kuch karna pade tab pata chale na." she said angrily n left.

Here in New Jersey:-

"Kyounki mujhe lagta hai ki mai tum ko pasand karne laga hoon. I love u Kajal." Vardaan was so clear this time.

Kajal was shocked. She didn't expect that Vardaan would say it so easily.

"To mujhe jawaab do ki tum mere baare me kya sochti ho?" he asked straight.

"Mujhe nahi pata aur raat bahut ho chuki hai aap so jaaiye." She said n was about to turn when he caught her hand n pulled her to him.

"Kyoun nahi pata tum ko... Aaj jab tum ne vahan ye baat Sanya se kahi to mere saamne kehne me kya harz hai?" he asked looking in her eyes."Kyoun jab mai tum ko dekhta hoon to sharmaati ho. Jab mai tum ko choota hoon to kho jaati ho.Jab mai tumhare paas nahi hota to mujhe hi dhoondhti ho, jab mai kisi aur k saath hota hoon to gussa karti ho? Ab is ko pyaar nahi to aur kya kehte hain Kajal? Aaj Sanya se bhi tum ne kuch aisa hi kaha tha na? Batao jawaab do na Kajal." He asked.

"Pata nahi mujhe." She was still lost in his eyes. His questioning eyes were making her weak n she herself doesn't what to say.

He leaned on her and placed a kiss on her neck, she shivered by this brief contact. "I think jawaab jaldi hi mil jaayega kyoun?" He winked at her and left her.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!!

Sanya apna haath pair marna nahi bhuli aur Kajal aur Vardaan ke beech differences laane ki puri koshish kar rahi hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Kajal ka gussa was like lava erupting!!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

It was good that she shut Sanya up once and for all!!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

That stupid girl how dare she say those things about Vardaan!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Usse nahi pata ke jahan ek dusre ke liye pyaar aur bharosa khud se zyada hota hai wahan pe uski aisi ghatiya harkaton ka koi asar nahi hoga!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

I liked the way Kajal reacted when Sanya was trying to poison her mind!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Kajal ne gusse mein confess kar hi diya ke woh Vardaan se pyaar karti hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Vardaan was in a state of shock when he heard what Kajal just said!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Seeing Vardaan had heard her Kajal thought usse aisa nahi kehna chahiye tha!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Vardaan can't believe ke woh jisse like karta hai woh bhi usse pasand karti hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kajal is now crying and clung to him aur Vardaan ke puchne par bhi kuch nahi kaha!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Vardaan held her as if protecting her from every evil!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

When they reached home Sanya ne Kajal se maafi maangne ki koshish ki magar Kajal bina kuch kahe hi chali gayi waha se!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Yeh usne bahut accha kiya!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Vardaan also refused to listen to her aur kaha ke ish baar Kajal ka dil dukhane ke liye woh usse kabhi maaf nahi karega!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Good for him!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊This shows how much he loves and cares for Kajal ke woh usse dukh dene waale ko maaf nahi kar sakta!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Vardaan ne kaha ki kal hi woh Sanya ko bol dega ke woh yahan se chali jaye!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

But Kajal is behaving coldly with him and said ke woh nahi chahti uski wajah se dono ki dosti mein koi differences aaye!!!!!

Anchal's mom is going back and both Anu and Mugdha are unhappy about it!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Ancal promised ke isbaar Kajal ko bhi lekar aayenge and Mugdha told her ke shaadi ke ek hafte pehle aa jay kam se kam!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Kuch hi dino mein kitne ghul mil gaye hai!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Durga is relieved to see everyone go!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕Lagta hai unhe apne ghar mein zyada log pasand nahi hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Waise Varaan is so clever!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛Loha garam hai dekh kar hathoda mara hai usne!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Finally he said I love you to Kajal!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Kajal was shocked as she did not expect that Vardaan would say it so easily!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Jab Vardaan ne usse jawab maanga tab Kajal toh bol hi nahi rahi hai ke woh bhi usse pyaar karti hai aur baat ko tal rahi hai!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

The way Vardaan asked her why she behaves like this was very romantic!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

I loved it when he kissed her on the neck!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️It was soo romantic!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Tooooooooo Gooood.....Kajal ke javab ka to hamein bhi intezaar hai !😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
hot . both romance n anger
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Posted: 16 years ago
Haila ...


Kaajal Ka Ghussa ... It's like a Lava erupting!! 😆 😆 😆 but It was Good, she Shut Sanya up once and For all 😊 That Stupid Girl, How dare she Say those things about Vardaan 😡

Hmm so Vardaan dear has Accepted that he Loves Kaajal, ab Kaajal ki baari 😳 Although we all Know, Ki voh bhi usse Utna hee Pyaar karti hain 😳 Just let the Confession happen soon, so we can get to see some really Romantic Moments between the Two, Not that their isn't any Now, I just Loved the Last scene when his kisses her on the Neck 😳 a Small Gesture but soooooooo Passionate, that it sent chills down my spine 😳 I just Can't stop Blushing ..

Anyways a really Good Update di .. Hurry and Gave us Readers a New Part 😃

Take Care 🤗

Yashu
Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 16 years ago
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HII VERTIKA HOW R U? THE UD WAS............
AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOME.................
SUPERB.............
GR8...................
EXCELLENT............
JUST TOO GOOD................
DO CONT.SOON....................

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Posted: 16 years ago
totally jakaas updt.........too good just loved it....

bas kajal k ans ka wait hai.......hope shes positive as well....

lets c wats next by u...
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Posted: 16 years ago
tooo gud..!!!! mindblowing... 👏
kajal ke ans ka intezaar rahega.... 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
HII VARTIKA KAISI HO?
HMMM THE UPDATE WAS TOOO GOOD
EXCELLENT
AWESOME
AND I M REALLY WAITING FOR FOR KAJAL ANSWER..........AND I KNOW NEXT PART ROMANTIC HI HOGA.............
REALLY VERY NICE PART
UD SOOOOOOOOOON
JALDI KARNA MUJSE WAIT NAHI HOGA

LOVE
DEEPA...

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