The Unknown Desire part 39 updated pg. 149

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#641

that was so good

i hope Kaajal's answer come soon

plz continue soon

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arpita25

@arpita25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#642

Hey tum ne aur bhi fics likhi hain kya? I think this is second fic of u i found here.

soon i would reply on it let me start first.

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 16 years ago

#643

awesome ud...par tujhe nahin lagta...yeh ud thoda chota tha...!!! matlab kab suru hua aur kab khatam hua pata hi nahin chala...!!! may b sayad isiliye bhi ki yeh ud baht baht achha tha...!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏

jab kajal ne gusse me confess kiya na...mujhe LRL ka voh scene yaad aa gaya...jab naina ne ritu se kaha tha...ki vo rajveer se pyar karti hai...!!! par yahan toh LRL jaisa koi bandhan nahin hai...isiliye mujhe lagta hai...kajal aur vardaan toh ek ho kar hi rahenge...!!!😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊

vaise saniya...apna hath pair marna nahin bhul rahi hai...kajal aur vardaan k bich me differencess lane ki...!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 par use nahin pata ki jahan ek dushre k liye pyar aur bharosha khud se jyada ho...vahan par kisi ka bhi aisi ghataya harkat ka koi mole nahin hota...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

vaise vardaan hai bada chalak...!!! loha garam dekh kar hathoda mara hai us ne...!!! matlab kajal kis baat se dukhi hai...yeh pata chalne par us ne sahi waqt par propose kar diya...😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛!!! i bet...kajal toh mana kar hi nahin sakti...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃!!! aur us ne agar mana kardiya na... vertika...toh teri khair nahin...samjhi...!!!

kaas...yaar...jab naina ne raj se LRL me kaha tha...ILU kaha tha...tab raj bhi kuch is tarah se react karta...aur dono mil jate...!!!

chal...ab next jaldi se post kar...aur us me kajal ka confession kuch romantic tarik se kar...!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago

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arpita25

@arpita25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#644

Hey the first n second part were awesome.

But i think ye waale part tak dono me pyaar abhi accept nahi hua hai na. Vardaan ne to finally keh diya ab baari Kajal ki hai dekhte hain kab tak khud ko rok paati hai?

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varshita

@varshita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#645

Hey kya tittle de rakha hai tum ne vow g8! 👏

Mujhe achank se umeed nahi thi ki Vardaan oh my god ......par Kajal ne kuch kaha kyoun nahi? I like the way Kajal reacted on Sanya when she was trying to poison her mind.😡

Par Kajal ne vahan keh diya aur fir rone bhi lagi.😭 Mujhe sab se jyada gussa Sanya pe aa raha tha phir bhi ye laga ki chalo accha hai is bahane hi sahi Kajal ne jo kaha vo Vardaan ne suna to.😉

I like all the scenes of hug n kiss b/w them so sweeeeet n romantic ud.😳

continue kar na Varti pls.😊

Edited by varshita - 16 years ago

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#646

Good nahi kahoongi very good kyounki mai kab se wait kar rahi thi ki kab Vardaan kahega is baare me ki vo Kajal se pyaar karta hai aur us ne keh hi diya aakhir.👏 Par ab Kajal kyoun natak kar rahi hai seedhe se kehne me koi problem hai kya us ko? I like his naughtiness so much n he is lovely in this.😳 Kajal ka gussa samajh aata hai par i think us ne bhi expect nahi kiya hoga ki Vardaan itne aaram se keh dega.😉 I like the emotinal hug scene b/w Vajal they were so cute.👏

ab aage likho jaldi se jyada intejaar nahi hota hai.😛

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago

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arpita25

@arpita25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#647

Mujhe Vardaan n Sameer ka character kaafi accha laga saath hi saath Kajal ki life me struggle bahut hai mujhe us k liye bahut dukh hai. Vaise bhi Prerna ka Anu aisa hi tha na humesha us ko pareshaan hi karta tha na.

good work.

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varshita

@varshita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#648

tujhe lagegi ek agar tu bahut time legi ab se ud karne me.

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#649

bus kar yaar tadpaana ud to kar is ko.

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arpita25

@arpita25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#650

Oh yaar abhi maine Shalabh n that bitch Mallika ka part padha, jahan vo padh k itna gussa aaya vahin Kajal n Vardaan k baare me soch k bahut accha laga. Soon they r going to meet each other. Ye Mallika kaise ladki hai yaar? Is k jaise logon ki vajah se sab gals ko hi bura samajhte hain. Next day Kajal will b in Mumbai, Kajal ki mom kitne pareshaan hain na ki Kajal door jaa rahi hai un se.