The Unknown Desire part 39 updated pg. 149 - Page 101

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: oliveya

woooooooo OMGGGGGG veritika ...... awesome

simply outstanding .....i am really enjoy myself after read whole story ....

u are amazing story writer ...keep it up..
i am looking forward for ur next rocking update....
love u oliveya.



veritika ..this for u ....




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Thanks Oliveya that u liked my work and my fic along with my writing skills. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is really good
thanks ria 😊 😊 😊

i liked the scene between mug and shalab
but as my fab is kajal and vardaan so there are the best
no doubt yes they are πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

vardaan is really naughty woh kiss bina kajal ko aapne car se jaane bi nahin de rahe the
Bus kaam chod kar aaj kal har sharat me man lag raha hai janab ka. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

plz cont soon and pm me



Thanks a lot dear for comment
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome part. loved it.
loved vardaan and kajaal scene and conversation.
continue soon.



Thanks a lot Rakhi πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Thanks Shaina πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

Vardaan and Kajal continue SMSing their cute messages to each other!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Yahi kaam hai aaj kal dono k pass πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Shalabh and Mugdha came out of their dreamland when everyone clapped!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Sunny knows that his friends have fallen hard for each other!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Vo to vaise bhi sab jaanta hai na. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

He tries to make Mugdha understand that she loves Shalabh!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Itna asaan nahi hone waala hai ye sab. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Shalabh is confident that Mugdha must be thinking about him!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Par Mugdha baat ko ghuma deti hai and says waqt aane pe batayegi!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aur kya itna asaani se apni feelings kaise bata de vo aakhir ladki hai na. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Shalabh was quiet on the way home and I wonder what he is thinking!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Sochne do thoda mehant karne do bacche ko. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Kajal was lost when she saw Vardaan looking so hot!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Vardaan had to blow the horn thrice to bring Kajal back to earth!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

She couldn't help kissing Vardaan and her action made Vardaan lose his senses!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Ab vo hai hi itna accha ki humare bhi hosh uda deta hai to Kajal ka to copy right hai na hosh udne ka 😳 😳 😳

Is baar us ki baari thi na hosh udane ki πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Kajal ne toh wakai uska dhyaan bhung kar diya!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Vardaan toh accident karne jaa raha tha but thankfully Kajal ne bacha liya!!!!!

Her warning scream made him control the car in time!!!!!

Soch lo pyaar me log kya kya nahi kar gujarte aur yahan Vardaan to kitne out of control ho raha hai ki poocho mat. 😳 😳 😳

Vardaan put the blame of his carelessness on Kajal and he is right in a way!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Ab apni galti accept kaise kar lein janab itne asaani se πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Kajal got annoyed and wanted to go to the office alone but Vardaan kaha aisa hone deta and he locked the door from inside!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Kam naughty samajhti hai kya us ko? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

He is too cute and loved his excuse of why the door is not opening!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

naughty too dear πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Issi bahane Vardaan usse apne kareeb le aaya and kissed her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Kajal toh wakai chali gayi and Vardaan had to plead her which made Kajal weak!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Vardaan then explains the reason which made her blush so much!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Ye dono bhi na na place dekhte hain na time, kabhi bhi kahin bhi shuru rehte hain na πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Shalabh is becoming really possessive of Mugdha and he didn't like her talking to the boys!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

pagal ho raha hai vo dheere dheere πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

He shouts at her for it and then at Sunny who signalled him to stop!!!!!

Tab akal aayi na in ko πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

He is very protective about her aur Shalabh ko kal raat se kuch ho gaya hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Bahut kuch ho gaya hai 😳 😳 😳

Now he himself felt ke usne galati ki hai and he should say sorry to Mugdha!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Obviously he should πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

I am sure ke Shalabh usse jaldi mana lega, after all he has Sunny to help him!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Tabhi to koi problem nahi hoti us ko πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Kajal is now avoiding Vardaan in the office!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kya kare jaanti hai ki kahin fir se accident na ho jaaye πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Kajal's mom felt a different type of happiness in her voice!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Kajal fumbled when she asked him about her boss aur isse kahi Anvita ka shaque yakeen mein na badal jaaye!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Kuch different us ki tone me aur us me us ki mom hi sab se acchi tarah se samajh sakti hai na? 😳 😳 😳 Let's see kya batati hai vo apni mom ko.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰



A big thank u Shaina for the comment πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

gr888 prt

thanxx 4 d pm



thanks dear πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Vertika

How was your trip to Vaishno Devi??? 😊 I have seen some of your pics on FB..πŸ˜ƒ

Hey hello and my trip was fantastic. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

Update was really gudπŸ˜ƒ
thanks a lot 😊 😊 😊

Kajal and Vardaan r really lost in their love..
Aaj kal kaam hi kya hai dono k pass πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Here Shalabh and Mugdha r confused abt their feelings..Never before they have felt something like this..Sunny is more intelligent than them..he knows that his friends have fallen hard for each other..
But still they are in a dilemma what to do and what not to do. πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Kajal was so lost when she Vardaan looking so hot and she cudn't help kissing him but her action made Vardaan loose all his sensesπŸ˜‰
Kabhi-2 bundi ka bhi mood romantic ho sakta hai na? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

When Vardaan told her the reason of his carelessness Kajal couldn't control her blushes,😳😳😳 πŸ˜‰ she was lost where Vardaan was concern.
Dono pagal hi ho gaye hain ek doosre k pyaar me. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Shalabh is really becoming possessive of Mugdha and this is the first step in love..πŸ˜ƒ
Shuruvaat hai na abhi to, aage aage dekhiye kya hota hai. 😳 😳 😳

Why is Kajal so hesitant to speak abt her boss to her mother..???πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Kya batayegi ki aaj kal boss se romance chal raha hai us ka. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Pls continue soon
Bye



A big thanks to my sweetest friend for reply πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

really awesome updt.........

luved kaajal and sarthak asusal ....

but also njoyed and luved salab and mug tooo...

too good
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Thanks Lipi dear for liking the update πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—
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Posted: 14 years ago


😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
day before yesterday i come to know about this fic and read it in two days and certainly it is mind blowingπŸ‘πŸΌand yes waiting for the update eeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaagerly😊.😊.😊.😊.😊....
Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Nice part!! Waise shukr manao meri dimagless dimag ka....ki mujhe yaad aa gaya last part me kya hua tha.....πŸ˜†....
Oho, vaise bahut jyada din bhi nahi hue the na since last update? πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Ab seriously...part pe ate hai...😳...it was soooooooo sweet!! Mujhe Vardaan n Kajal ka har scene badhiya laga....and of course highlight was their car scene....😳😳...it was trulyyyyyyyy cute and very very nice. 😳 Yeah yeah pata hai....meri vocabulary bakwas hai....but abhi kuch nahi ho sakta....issise kaam chalana hoga tumhe...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Koi baat nahi chal jaayega kaam and thanks dear. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

And now coming to Shaalab n Mughdha....u actually included much of them in this part...and I didnt mind that...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...the way Sunny tried to make Mugdha realize her feelings...it was really nice. And next....Shaalab feels protective abt her....and shouts at her too....aww....thats sweet actually!! πŸ˜³πŸ˜†
It happens in love, and soon i know that they will realize their feelings too. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ It will always be added as parallel story na. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

But ab....Kajal ki mom ko kuch khaas mehsus hua beti ki awaaz me...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†....and boss ke naam se Kajal jaise fumble kar rahi hai....shakh yakeen me badal jayega re...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...w8ing to knw wat happens to that!! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Sach me isliye bahut soch samajh k hi kuch bolna cahiye na us ko aakhir maa humesha bacchon ko pakad leti hain. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Continue soon Vertika....kya pata....har baar dimag saath de na de...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Ac
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Sahi kaha, πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† par mujhe ek maheena lag hi jaata hai but mai koshish karoongi aage jaldi jaldi update karne ki. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

thanks dear
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Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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