The Unknown Desire part 39 updated pg. 149

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 14 years ago

#991

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Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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arpita25

@arpita25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#992

Lovely updates too.

He is on his mission to make her feel for him and she accepted that too. She came back India alone but he has arranged everything on her way so she had no problem. I love him when he entered in her house as the door was open and the scenes after them between them were pretty lovely. Enjoyed their romance and once again she accepted her feelings in front of him. I like the way both said I LOVE U.

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#993

nice update vertika!!!😃

liked it soo much !

update soon !😊

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362035

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Posted: 14 years ago

#994

awesoooome....

superb....

fab......

loved it.....

thanx for the pm......

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 14 years ago

#995

cute ud tha yaar...

main na apne hero se suru karti hun...!!! vaise raj pe sab kuch achha lagta hai...n naina toh use dekhte hi aur jyada fida ho gayi...!!! vaise car ka scene mera fav tha...!!! kajal ko...vardan ko detail me samajhana pada...

lekin bichari puri baat jane bina naraz ho gayi...!!! lekin vardan ne use voh bhi samjha diya...!!! ab voh office me use avoid kyoun karr rahi hai...??? use kahin darr toh nahi ke vardan yahan bhi suru ho jayega...!!! ab office us ka hai...GF us ki hai...toh use toh sare rights hain...

ab salabh aur mugdha ke scene par aate hain...!!! sunny sach me baht itelligent hai...us ne sahi tarika dhundha hai mugdha ko apne feelings ko ehsaas dilane ki...!!! n salab ka voh scene bhi baht achha hai...jab voh us par chillata hai...!!!

kajal ki mom apne beti se us ke boss ke bare me puch rahi hai...!!! aur beti hai ke chup hai...obvious hai yaar...kitni tarif karegi...thakegi nahi kya...!!! tabhi us ne apne mom ko kuch nahi bola hoga...!!! par haan use laga jarur ki kahin us ke mom ne use pakad toh nahi liya...

chal ab next part jaldi ud kar de...

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 14 years ago

#996

Good part previous one,👏 kya kahoon the whole part was full of romance written by a great writer like you.👏 I love your writing abilities in romance. 😳
Loved so much Shalabh n Mugdha too and song selection was really nice.👏 You used it nicely with emotions, and it is one my fav collection.😳 Sms use is really cool and i loved that idea.😉
sorry for being late dear will reply in detail for another part soon.😛

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 14 years ago

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 14 years ago

#997

Oye hoye is part k liye mujhe kuch kehna hai kya 😳? Mujhe expected nahi tha ki itne smart ho gayi hai Kajal ki Vardaan ka dhaayn bhung kar degi i mean vo Menka hai aur Vishwamitra hai apne Vardaan jee.😆 Aaj kal khoob kisses bat rahi hain na aur aise dangerous kiss de jaa rahi hai ki accident hote hote bachta hai na. Ab ye kya baat hue saari galtiyon k liye to Vardaan us ko hi blame kar deta hai 😕 but hai bhi sahi na vo kiss karti na Vardaan ka mood hota bada kiss karne ka 😉. Khair mana hi liya apne hero ne heroine ko.😳 Shalabh itna gussa kyoun karta hai us par, but i know is me bhi care hai us ki. 😊 Ab maafi bhi maangani hogi us ko Mugdha se. 😛
abki fast update.

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 14 years ago