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Posted: 14 years ago

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day before yesterday i come to know about this fic and read it in two days and certainly it is mind blowing👍🏼and yes waiting for the update eeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaagerly😊.😊.😊.😊.😊....



thanks sweety for reading the whole fic in just two days. 😊 😊 😊

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Next part:-

"To meri burai ki jaa rahi thi maa se?" when she turned she found Vardaan standing there at the door and crossing his arms across his chest he was asking this to her.

"Accha, aap ko aisa laga kya?" she asked teasing him.

"Mujhe laga kya? Tum jo keh rahi thi vo mai sun raha tha."

"Mujhe nahi pata tha ki mere boss me itne kharab aadatein bhi hain ki vo chup k sab ki baatein sunte rehte hain."

"Jab mere employee mere baare me aise baatein karenge to mujhe pata nahi chalega kya?" he asked her raising his eye brows.

"Ab Maine aisa kya keh diya hai jo mere boss itna naraj ho rahein hain mujh par?" she asked confusingly.

He moved towards her and she backed, they continued until she got bumped between him n wall. "Tum ne maa se kaha, mere boss theek hi hain i mean jaise saare boss hote hain. Mai bus theek hi hoon tumahre hisaab se? Mere boss mere saath theek se behave karte hain. Tum ko nahi lagta ki mai tumhare saath itna romantically behave karta hoon? Tum ne kaha ki mere boss mujhe pareshaan nahi karte hain. Mujhe lagta hai ki mai aksar pareshaan karta hoon tum ko, kitne baar to mai bina bulaye aa jaata hoon, jab tum nighty me ya fir towel me hoti ho." Kajal ko bahut jyada sharm aa rahi thi aur abhi tak itne baaton ko sun ne me us ne ek baar bhi Vardaan ki aakhon me aakhein daal kar nahi dekha tha.

"Tum ko ye bhi batana tha ki mai kya karta hoon tumhare saath, ye" and he kissed her one hand, "ye bhi". He kissed her eyes, "ye bhi to karta hoon". He than kissed her forehead. "ye to humesha karta hoon na." He said n give a quick peck on her lips. "are mai to bhool hi gaya ki ye bhi karta hoon." And he gave a series of sweet and thundering kisses on her neck and deepness of her chest."this time Kajal shivered by his touch there and she held him tightly, "Ab batao ye sab to tum ne bataya hi nahi na. She was really blushing badly she tried to escape but Vardaan didn't let her go so easily he pulled back her again in his arms holding her waist tightly, "Aur bahut kuch karna hai jo karoonga bhi aage."She was still silent n blushing. "Par agar tum abhi bhi chaho to banda humesha haazir hai, humesha at your service mam kabhi bhi kahin bhi azma k dekh lijiye." He waited for sometime, "Ab kuch bologi?"

"Kya boloon mai, aap sach me itne shamless hain maine nahi socha tha."

Vardaan gave a laugh, "Jab shamless rahoonga tab kuch kar paaonga na varna to kuch nahi kar sakta."

"hatiye abhi koi aa jaayega mujhe jaane dijiye yahan se."

"Aise kaise?"

"Ab kya chahiye?"

"Bahut bhookh lagi hai." He winked at her. She gave a hit on his chest, "Are uff............. tum to yaar bahut viloent hoti jaa rahi ho. Abhi tumhara ye haal hai to shaadi k baad to mujhe lagta hai tum haath bhi nahi lagane dogi." He made a sad face.

This time she smiled, "Chalein bhook lag rahi thi na aap ko."

"Vo to bus tum hi mita sakti ho."

"Shut up Vardaan chaliye na." She pulled him out and both went for lunch in Vardaan's rest room.

"Ye sab kya hai?"Kajal was astonished to see that variety of food.

Vardaan smiled, "Ab actually mujhe pata nahi tha na ki kis type ka khana pasand karogi tum to maine har type ka managa liya." He gave a reason.

She laughed her heart out. "Oh Vardaan tum bhi na............." she was still laughing.

"Ab is me itna hasne waali kya baat ha?" he made a sad face.

She was still laughing, she was trying her best to control her laughter now, "u remember ek baar maine bataya tha na tum ko."

"Kab?"

"Yaad karo na, jab hum sab saath me dinner pe gaye the i mean mai, tum n Sanya?" she tried to recall.

Flashback:-

"So i want o have..............", but Vardaan cut her between.

"I know thai haan."

"U know me so well na dear." Sanya said just to tease him.

Vardaan gave an uncomfortable look to Kajal who ignored it. "Vaise tum ko kya khana hai?"

"What?" Sanya gave a surprised look.

"Ab is what ka kya matlab hai?" he asked.

"I mean tum ko abhi tak ye bhi nahi pata hai ki tumhare wife ko kaun sa khaana pasand hai?"

Kajal and Vardaan both gave each other so dead type of look but Vardaan managed all that. "Actually mam ka mood har baar alag alag khaane ka hota hai na to mai har baar poochta hoon ki ab kya khaana hai in ko."

Kajal gave a smile, "Oh, vaise Kajal itne mood swings kyoun aate hain tum ko."

"Aise hi, kabhi kabhi ho jaata hai. Jaise aaj mujhe Indian khaana hai." And she did her order.

"Mujhe kuch aur lag raha hai." Sanya said thinking.

"Oho to tumhare pass dimag bhi hai." Vardaan tesaed Sanya.

"This was mean Vardaan," she made a sad face.

"Aap bhi na,kyoun pareshaan karte hain." She gave a look to Vardaan and he smiled.

"Badi baatein maante ho biwi ki." She taunted.

"Wife life hoti hai na." Vardaan replied and Kajal gave him unbelieveable look. When he saw her staring at him , "Are aise kya dekh rahi ho? Lo food is here haan."

And they started serving food for all three of them and they started having it when Kajal said, "Jara bhi khatta nahi hai ye aur likha tha aise lag raha tha khatta hoga."

"So y don't u try this?" Vardaan asked.

"ok", and she tried another food.

"U like soar taste?"

Kajal was still busy in having her food as she was so hungry so she didn't pay any attention to it. Vardaan asked, "Kis ko kaha?"

"Mai Kajal ki baat kar rahi hoon."

"Yeah, i like soar taste n i think most of the girls like that na? Vaise bhi mujhe last ten days se kuch aisa khaane ka mood kar raha tha."

"Ok, tum ne apna check up karwaya doc se?" she said to Kajal.

"Kyoun mujhe kya hua hai?" Kajal asked in confusin.

"I think u r pregnent."she stated and this made Vardaan n Kajal choke their food. They both were amazed when Sanya said that.

"Sanya tum?"

"Kya mai? I am right u must get ur wife checked by doc for pregnency test."

Now both Vardaan n Kajal were giving each other shocking expressions. Both were unable to think what should they say so they continued eating the food silently.

(Flashback over)

"Yaad kaise nahi aayega, aakhir pehli baar Maine apne zindagi me bina shaadi kiye ye suna tha ki mai baap ban ne jaa raha hoon."

Kajal again gave a laugh and said, "aisa nahi hai bahut logon ko apni life me aisa experience hota rehta hai i mean tum ne movies nahi dekhi hai kya jis me heroines kehti hain heros se mai tumhare bacche ki maa bannewaali hoon type dialogues na?" they both laughed.

"Ek baat batao Kajal tum to aisa nahi kehne waali ho mujh se kabhi?"

Kajal who just took a bite in her mouth, stoped suddnely and looked at him. "What?"

"No i mean as u know ki ye sab...........".

"Shut up Vardaan, chup chaap se khaana khaao." She said.

"Batao na." He requested.

"Besharam insaan, theek se mujhe khaana khaane do varna mai jaa rahi hoon yahan se abhi." She warned him.

"Ok...ok theek hai pehle khana khaa lo fir baat karte hain."and they took food quickly and as they finished it soon Vardaan's secreartary Maya called him and told that clients are waiting for them in conference hall for presentation.

Here Arjun's home:-

"Kahan ho be tum sab aaj kal kuch pata hi nahi hai tumhara?"

"Kuch nahi yaar yahin the, u know college me to time nahi milta vaise bhi."

"Theek hai, chal ye bata kitne der me aa raha hai shopping pe jaana hai tum dono k saath."

"Mai aata hoon vahan bus thode der me."

"Fir bhi kitna time lagega?"

"Bus half an hour me."

"Theek hai, Sameer ko le kar aana saath."

"Ok", and he hung the phone, "ab kya karein?"

"Kya ho gaya?"

"Arjun ka call aaya tha band baja di us ne ki hum us ki shaadi ki shopping me koi bhi help nahi kar rahe hain."

Sunny grinned, "I am sure ab to bahut gussa karne waala hai vo tere pe."

"Tujh pe bhi naraj hai be."

"Oye haan vo to mai bhool hi gaya tha."

"Par abhi bhi ek problema hai."

"Kya?"

"Mujhe sorry bolna tha na Mugdh se, ab chala jaaonga to kaise sorry bolonga aur us k baad na jaane vo mere baare me kya kya sochti rahegi?"

"Oye hoye us k naam se tune a gayab hi kar diya haan, chal accha hai jitna naam chota hoga utni pass aayegi na vo?" and he winked Shalabh.

He embarrassed, "abe saale, tu bus itna bata karna kya hai samjha."

A while later:-

When Mugdha came out of the college Shalabh was waiting for her in his car. "Hey".

"Hi, tum yahan?"

"Tumhara hi wait kar raha tha."

"Any special reasons?"

"Nops, agar koi problema na ho to kahin coffee pene chalein?" he suggested.

"Par mujhe abhi ghar jaana hoga, mom akele hongi na vahan." She told.

Shalabh got disappointed but he managed to smile, "theek hai, it's fine some other day. May i drop you at your home?"

"Oh Shalabh, don't try to be that much formal." She said and she could clearly see the disappointement in his eyes but she knew her mom so well.

They got seated in his car and he drove of, after thinking for a while he started, "Mujhe kuch kehna hai tum se Mugdh."

She was surprised by her new name, "ye kab mila?"

"kya?"

"u know tum ne mere naam se ek 'a' hata diya." She said smiling.

"Kyoun pasand nahi aaya kya ye naam?" he asked confusingly.

She smiled and he was unable to blink his eyes when she smiled, she looked so lovely and pretty when she smiled. A sudden urge he felt in his heart to hug her and to touch that sweet lips which twirled to form a beautiful curve which made her gorgeous.

Here:-

"Thank god it gone well." He thanked god.

"Vo to accha jaana hi tha, aakhir hum ne itne hard work ki thi is presentation and than is contract k liye." Kajal said giving a smile and both were sharing a relax time in Vardaan's cabin.

"Nahi, vo sab to theek hai but u know jab mujhe dena tha presentation ek pal k liye mujhe laga mai sab kuch bhool gaya." He answered thinking deeply.

"What, par vo kaise?" she was surprised.

"Tum has rahi thi na kisi baat pe." He told.

"so?"

"I mean tum ko Sharma jee ki kisi baat pe bahut jyada hassi aa rahi thi aur.........", he pulled her in his hug, "jab maine tum ko is tarah se haste hue dekha to kuch aur dekh hi nahi paaya. I mean kuch yaad hi nahi raha bus aakhon k saamne tum hi aur kuch na soch paaya na samajh paaya."

Kajal was surprised cum shocked to know the reason he gave to her so innocently. She didn't know how to react at this and Vardaan was just enjoying her expressions.

"Ab aise kya dekh rahi ho mujhe? Mera kya kasoor hai is me? Jab se tum se pyaar hua hai tumhare alawa kuch aur yaad hi kahan hai mujhe, har pal bus tumhare baare me khayal rahta hai dimaag me aur ab dekho mujh se kaam bhi nahi ho paa raha hai." He made a sad face.Kajal was just looking at him in awe and he pulled her more close, "ye jo do pyaari se aakhien hain na jab ye meri taraf dekhti hain na to lagta hai jaise duniya hi ruk gayi hai meri. Jo hoth jab bhi smile karte hain na to lagta hai bus ab har pal yahin tehar jaaye. Ye ho hassi hai na jo tumhari aakhon tak jaati hai mujhe blikul madhosh hi kar deti hai tab mere dimaag se sab gayab hi ho jaata hai." And now she smiled at him.

"Sach me pagal hain aap." All she managed to say in a shy and low tone.

Tabhi someone knocked at the door and they parted, "yes come in".

"Yes Mr. Malhotra bataiye."

"Sir Pune waali deal final karni hai aur is k liye kal aap ko Pune jaana hoga."

"Kisi aur ko bhejne se kaam nahi hoga kya?" he asked looking at Kajal.

"Nahi sir, vo log bus aap k saath hi deal karna chahte hain aur un ki request hai ki aap jaaiye signature karne k liye." He told.

Vardaan thought for a while and than said, "ok fine, kal morning me mai nikloonga yahan se Pune k liye and inform them that i will be avilable at 11:00 a.m. Sharp."

When he left Kajal looked at him and said, "Mai bhi chal rahi hoon aap k saath."

Vardaan looked at her and smiled, "kyoun ab mere bina ek pal bhi nahi raha jaa raha hai kya?"

"Nahi aisa kuch nahi hai, but mujhe kuch doubts hain un k contract pe."

Vardaan gave a keen expression as if asking her to clear the things more. " Mai samjha nahi kya kehna chahti ho tum?"

"Mujhe vo contract papers dekhne hain acche se before signing. Kyoun mujhe kuch aise baatein pata chali hain us company k baare me jis k hissab se us ki credit pe mujhe doubt hai."

"To hum deal hi cancel kar dete hain na?" he suggested.

"No need of that, agar ye deal theek se i mean fair hoti hai to it's beneficial for us."


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice part 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry i forgot to comment on previous update.
Cute one. 😳
Kajal was lost after seeing Vardaan 😍 as he was looking so handsome and this time she lost whenever everytime 😆 Vardaan has lost himself in her 😉. Thank god the escaped from the accident othewise the story's track has been sad till now. 😭 I liked the way she kissed him on his cheek 😳 and after that the naughtiness of Vardaan when he closed the car and kissed her inside. ☺️ Afer that they way he carried her and placed her inside the car was super rocking. 👏 I like Mugdha & Shalabh's story, ⭐️ good improvement. 👏 Shalabh is really possessive for her and Sunny understands this. 😊 Now he wants to say sorry to Mugdha for his behavior and i know she will forgive him. 😛
Edited by arpita25 - 14 years ago
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Recent one is super fantastic yaar, 👏 i didn't comment for Kajal's conversation with her mom as i knew that u will continue that in this part. 😉 Lovely super romatic part one yaar. 😳 The way Vardaan was saying mai ye karta hoon, ye karta hoon aur ye bhi was amazing and i liked that the most. 😍 Flashback was really interesting where Sanya thought about Kajal that she is pregnent but Vardaan is really naughty, 🤣 kaise kaise questions poochta hai na. ☺️ Mugdha to jara bhi naraj nahi hai Shalabh se aur aaram se baith bhi gayi car me us ki. 😉 I liked him calling Mugdh. 😃 Arjun was calling them and Sunny went there leaving Shalabh with Mugdh. 😛 Now Kajal is going with Vardaan for the new deal, good lot more romance na? 👍🏼

jaldi se karna aage update varna mai bataoongi tujhe. 😆
Edited by arpita25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME
SUPERB
LUVD IT
CONT SOON😃


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Posted: 14 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Vardaan is too naughty and he was listening when Kajal was talking with Anvita!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

He got a full chance to tease her and he started clarifying her convo in his own romantic manner!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I just love his romantic nature!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

His romantic endearments are making Kajal blush like anything!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

The way he said and demonstrated what he does with Kajal was just amazing!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

Now obviously Kajal can't tell her mom how flirty her boss is!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Bhookh is really a double meaning word!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Vardaan has ordered every type of food for their lunch as he didn't know what Kajal would like to have!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

He is soo sweet and Kajal started laughing at this and remembered the time she and Vardaan had dinner with Sanya!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

The flashback was really interesting and funny!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Vardaan didn't know what Kajal liked but he managed to cover it up very well in front of Sanya!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Sanya ka dimaag chalne laga when she heard about mood swings!!!!!!!

I loved Vardaan's line wife life hoti hai and am sure this is true for both Vardaan and his dad!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Seeing Kajal like sour food, Sanya thought that she was pregnant!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Vardaan and Kajal were shocked and choked on their food!!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Vardaan's line ke zindagi mein pehli baar bina shaadi kiye yeh suna ki woh baap banne jaa raha hai is too funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

He is further teasing her ke kahi woh toh aisa nahi kahegi na usse!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Arjun wants Shalabh and Sameer to go shopping with him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Shalabh wanted to say sorry to Mugdha and so went to meet her!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Mugdha doesn't seem to be angry with him at all aur araam se baith gayi uske car mein!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

She had to refuse him for coffee only because of her mom!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Mugdha has become "Mugdh" for Shalabh and she liked her new name!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Shalabh is too much in love with her and wanted to hug her and kiss her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Kajal is surprised to hear his innocent confession of how he got distracted before the presentation!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Vardaan wakai deewana hai Kajal ka and he is madly in love with her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Vardaan is going to Pune the next day and Kajal is also going with him as she wants to go through the contract papers before the deal!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 13 years ago
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Awww......I loved the beginning of the part yaar!! Ohh....this naughtiness of Vardaan is wat takes the heart away!! His romantic cum naughty side is always pleasant to imagine. The first portion was definitely romantic and I was smiling all thruout coz of Vardaan's wit.....as to how he makes her blush all the tym!!

The dinner flashback was nice...haha! Pregnant bana diya....and Vardaan says 'bina shaadi ke baap'....aww....😆

Next Shalaab ka 'Mugdh' factor badhiya tha....haha. And the reason by Arjun....even that was nice.

And now after the meeting Kajal is surprised to hear his innocent confession of the reason of losing attention....how sweet is that!! Now they'll go to Pune together.....looking forward to that!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Vertika

Nice part as always..👏👏👏
Vardaan is too naughty indeed..He was listening when Kajal was talking with her mom and he got a full chance to tease her.😉😆😆😆.He is indeed too naughty but I like his romantic nature.😃😳😳.His cute romantic endearments were making Kajal blush more and more..she was not able to say anything..
Here Arjun was angry on Shalabh and Sameer coz they were not helping him in his shopping..
Shalabh is too much in love with Mugdha but he is still hesitant to express his feelings to her..
Vardaan has ordered so much for thier lunch that Kajal suddenly remembered the time when she and Vardaan had dinner with Sanya..Sanya expected her to b pregnant when she ate the sour food😆😆
Vardaan is indeed a very cute lover and he is madly in love with Kajal..I hope he gets married to her soon or else he'll go mad..😃
Pls update soon😃
Bye
Edited by suhana.dixit - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey vertika........
awesome.
superb.
fab.
loved the upd.
thanx for the pm......

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