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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
hey nice update...........thankc4 the pm........
❤️MONA
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
hi im anew reader . this ff roks can u pm when u updat eit
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
Wow wow wow!!! Now thats wat i call a short actually terribly short but an outstanding update Aarti!!!

Left me simply speechless with this entry of my hero.

T"he guy was certainly good-looking, people would call him arresting; with those blue-gray eyes surrounded by thick lashes any girl would happily kill for, eyes that twinkled with the mischievous glint of the born charmer. A glint that was currently almost extinguished but still lurked in the depths of those eyes that were made to drown in (as many a girl had found out first-hand before he found the love of his life and changed his Casanova ways). The rest of his features were equally eye-catching, the cherry on the cake being the stunning pair of dimples that softened that firm jaw. Moreover, he was blessed with the perfect physique; currently clad in a pair of faded blue jeans and a white shirt partially opened to reveal that hard chest"

Hailaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!! Gosh who told u to describe this like this??? got me all hyper now. Need some air!!! Hayeee Aarti why did u stop urself???Shud have continued na... we wud have read.... 😍 Excellent description there i must say!!!

"Waise, I do have the looks not to mention the body for it, you may well be looking at the next SRK if I hadn't decided to commit myself to serving humanity"

Waah waah kya dialog hai??? Awesome shots AArti!!! LOved the entire convo infact!!!

Looking forward to the plan now!!! Better have a longer part next time.😆

Love
Jia
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: meow23

luvd it .... it was amznggg n superb!!!! d way u described angad n den d intro of armi... dat was jus amzngg... n kripa teamng up wid armi.. dat was jus brilliant..
luvd d prt.... 2222222222222222222222222 guddddddddd...
hope kripa meets angad soon...
thnxxx 4 d pm.. update sooonn 😊 😊 😊

hmm... whn did i describe Angad?😕 it was Armaan, my Armaan (are u listening Irsa?😉😆) but don't worry Angad's part is coming up soon so i'll make his description equally hot though in a different way, cause each of our heros are unique. Yeah Kripa and Armaan are a crazy pair and will be coming up with some completely out there ideas (none of which will work, or maybe one might😉) but u'll have to wait to find out wht tht is though😈.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!! 👏

will do👍🏼, am working on it right now, will take some time to restart though, i'm completely burnt out right now🤢

thanx so much for all the appreciation🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.

hey nice update...........thankc4 the pm........
❤️MONA

your're welcome and i'll try to post again soon😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Ravishing_gal

OMG OMG OMG i'm FIRST................ again... wooo-hooo!!!!!🥳🥳...lol

superb update... loved it loadz... especially angad's description, no wait itz armaan's description, right???... coz i thought it was Angad's😕 when i 1st red it... so re-read the part nd now i'm clear😃 itz armi's😳..lol...anywayz i reli love ur way of describing things,, thr reli... ummm... descriptive??😉😆😆lol..haiyyyeee armaaannnn *sigh*...😳😳...

but the part was reli short... but the much u wrote was simply gr8... hats off

loved this particular line..
'wht kind of man is this angad khanna'...
'what kind of man should he be.. armaan mallik'..... ridz ka dil abhi tak armi ke liye dharakta hai... i hope they come up with a super cool plan soon 2 get ridz of angad.... no actually, they can't get rid of him.. coz u gotta love angad, right??😆... so they shud try nd hook up kripa wid angad, nd distract him.. but i'm guessing eithr Angad wudn't let them off so easily, , or he'd wudn't want 2 get married in the 1st place so wud also find a way 2 get out of the situation???😕... well, actually, these r the only 2 options na😆😆.. eithr he will or he won't???😆... so the question is wud he or wud he not???❓...ok so i'm probly confusing u with my inlogical explaination, but i guess itz coz i'm trying 2 make this comment xtra xtra long, 😆😆🤣...lol just kidding...

continue super soon, nd pm me plz... nd thanks 4 the pm😆... nd i hope itz a long enough comment😉😆

btw, thnx 4 the RELI sweet comment on my fic also.🤗.. it feels gr8 2 hv a gr8 reader reading ur fic!!!😆...lmao

Love,
Irsa

yeah u are, and i love u for it 🤗

and yeah tht was Armaan's desciption, he's the charmer, Angad is a bit more shall we say intense ☺️ his intro will be coming up soon so watch this space😆

btw love the predictions😆, keep it up, won't tell u whts gonna happen though, aren't i evil😈

and i adore ur ff sweety so how could i not comment?😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: ootp

hi im anew reader . this ff roks can u pm when u updat eit

thanx soo much🤗

i'm such a greedy pig🐷, i already have so many wonderful wonderful readers but kya kare? yeh dil mange more😳 😆

i'll definitly do tht😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: jia..

Wow wow wow!!! Now thats wat i call a short actually terribly short but an outstanding update Aarti!!!

Left me simply speechless with this entry of my hero.

T"he guy was certainly good-looking, people would call him arresting; with those blue-gray eyes surrounded by thick lashes any girl would happily kill for, eyes that twinkled with the mischievous glint of the born charmer. A glint that was currently almost extinguished but still lurked in the depths of those eyes that were made to drown in (as many a girl had found out first-hand before he found the love of his life and changed his Casanova ways). The rest of his features were equally eye-catching, the cherry on the cake being the stunning pair of dimples that softened that firm jaw. Moreover, he was blessed with the perfect physique; currently clad in a pair of faded blue jeans and a white shirt partially opened to reveal that hard chest"

Hailaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!! Gosh who told u to describe this like this??? got me all hyper now. Need some air!!! Hayeee Aarti why did u stop urself???Shud have continued na... we wud have read.... 😍 Excellent description there i must say!!!

"Waise, I do have the looks not to mention the body for it, you may well be looking at the next SRK if I hadn't decided to commit myself to serving humanity"

Waah waah kya dialog hai??? Awesome shots AArti!!! LOved the entire convo infact!!!

Looking forward to the plan now!!! Better have a longer part next time.😆

Love
Jia

thanx sooo much sweety🤗

btw loved tht last update of urs😃

Course i had to make the intro good after all this is Armaan Malik we're talking about, Our Armaan (See, i'm such a sweetheart, i've decided u can share him with me😆)

i'm glad u didn't find it too lng though, u knw i can go on forever whn i'm talking about him, i've tried to make him really charming in this ff, hope i succeed

glad u like liked the dialogues, it was all his of course, i was just writing it down, i could just picture him sitting in front of me with tht naughty glint in his eyes while i was writing it down

sorry the part was short😭, it was a crazy time for me🤢

will definitely try to make it up to u guys. promise😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#40

thanx for all the wonderful comments guys and i'm sorry i'm taking this long but i was busy with my admissions, i submitted my proposal yesterday and boy did the interview panel grill me🤢. i'm still i shock, the good news is tht the worst is over and i can concentrate on my ff again. the next part will be up in 3 days max (i need some time to recover frm the brain death😛)and i promise to make it extra long to make up 4 the delay.

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