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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chapter 2

Author's note (Important): All right people, to begin with remember I had given u some homework😆. I asked u to think about the following description:

The girl sat hugging her knees, her thick hair rippled around her face while falling to her waist in gorgeous swirls. Any man would be tempted seeing the promise of those sweet lips, tempted enough to ignore the warning of that stubborn chin. He would try to drown himself in her grey eyes surrounded by their extravagant eyelashes, eyes as changeable as the sea with the power to hold the attention of an onlooker for hours on the end. Eyes saved from being merely conventionally pretty by those slashing eyebrows surmounting a broad noble brow.

Well now, I want u to re-read Kripa's description:

Kripa, the youngest of the three had nothing to declare her lineage except the nose. Her eyes while beautiful were a stormy gray and expressed their owner's every emotion. Her hair though thick was horrendously curly and virtually untamable. Moreover, it had a tendency to eat combs. Her eyebrows looked like they had been drawn on with a ruler giving her a serious expression and no amount of threading could get them to arch. She was quite half a head shorter than her sisters both of who were around 5'6" and still retained some of her puppy fat at 20.

Yes people, it's the same person. I wanted you to read this because it's important to realize that every person is beautiful in his or her own way. Kripa IS pretty and the first description was the correct one. The second description (which was the one you read in chapter 1) was from Harshini's skewed perspective. And I hope you realized from the 1st part what kind of a person she is. Not that Harshini's evil, she's not, in fact there are no outright villains in this ff, just ordinary flawed human beings. Harshini's main fault is that she's shallow and she blindly imbibes the images fed her by the media. And she's not the only one; all of us at one point or the other have hated some aspect of our appearance. It's ok if that happens occasionally. The problem begins when we start to accept this twisted image of ourselves. (hope that clarifies the issue irsa😊)

Re-cap: "Harshini", said Sapna as she and Kripa hugged Riddhima, "How could you forget Armaan?!!!!!"

(Contd.) for a moment Harshini looked blank, "Oh, of course, Armaan! Yes, sure, but Riddhima, while Armaan might be a wonderful guy, I'm not saying he's not, but Angad!!! And he's just an intern right now and then his family, excellent of course, but there's not much Money there, I mean...love is wonderful and everything, but well, one must be practical as well you know", she continued.

"Practical, yes…" said Riddhima

I don't understand why Sapna can't marry him" Kripa said suddenly in her sweet husky voice.

"Kripa!!! How can you say such an idiotic thing?" Sapna exclaimed angrily

"Whaaat!!!, I mean it's not like…."

"Kripa, Enough!"

"oh sweetie", said Harshini with her irritating fake accented drawl, it's Riddhima he wants, not Sapna"

Kripa shook her head, "it's the Name that's important. And Sapna is the next Gupta daughter; I don't understand why mom didn't suggest Her."

"Really Kripa," said Sapna angrily, "Of course mom couldn't say such an idiotic thing, besides even if I do get married, it will be to someone Very different"

"Actually I like a flirt, and he is sooo handsome, not to mention sexy," said Harshini who understood what Sapna meant.

"Well I think mom could have suggested Sapna"

Riddhima hugged her and said, "I know you want me happy darling, but it would have sounded very strange if mom had said that".

"Are u being forced in to this marriage Ridzy?" Harshini asked in a sickly sweet voice eager to scent out potential gossip.

"Not at all Harshini, you know how sweet and understanding mom is"

Of course, of course, aunty's an angel, I knew she would never do such a thing" Harshini replied quickly and in a totally fake voice disappointed by her failure to scent out a scandal.

"Yeah right!!! Cow" muttered Kripa under her breath

"Kripa!!!" hissed Sapna who had unfortunately heard her, but Kripa just tossed her head and ignored her middle sister. She worshipped Riddhima who was more like a mother to her than an elder sister. The relations b/w Sapna and her was more prickly, all three sisters shared a deep love but Sapna was rather prim and proper and extremely particular about minding the 'Ps and Qs' and would often get exasperated at her younger sister who was tended to be distressingly frank at times.

I'm sorry guys, I know I promised to introduce Armaan in this chapter but it's the monsoons here in Kerala and I've come down with a fever and I'm feeling extremely miserable n woolly headed right now🤢. My brains' stopped working completely😕. Hopefully I'll feel better tomorrow and can continue then.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
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*edieted*

OMG OMG OMG.. i'm first 2day🥳... i'm soo happy, coz normally my comments r alwayz late, nd jia di's alwayz 1st...😆 *sigh* it feels gr8 2 b first.. reserving has itz own advantages!!😆

anywayz,,, omg thanx 4 clearing it out in the author's note... loved the 'new' description of Kripa... so now i knw the old description was 4m harshu's POV.... eewww... i'm seriously hating harshu, even though she's not exactly playing 'evil'.. but i guess she's jealous..lol... i'm hating her attitude- seems shes always fake, nd looking 4 the flirt types??😆😆... she's gonna have hard tym finding though...lol...anywayz, yeh i was wondering y kripa had been described the way she had, as she was gonna get paired up with Angad later (*fingers crossed real soon😉*), but now itz all cleared😊

seriously loved the part, nd loved ur way of describing things in detail...lol yes, the books have paid off😆

so Kripa hopes sapna 2 b married 2 Angad rather than ridz, meaning she knows abt AR's past... does kripa knw?? coz by the sounds of it, she herself is confused nd is trying 2 hook up sapna...lol... but i guess she'll end up *gasp* falling 4 the guy rather than sapna....

oooh, i commented b4 u pm'd me 2......lolz.. kk, i RELI need 2 stop going on abt being 1st...lmao...hmmm, hope itz a long enough comment 2 make up 4 the last😃

continue soon... nd pm me plz😳

Love,
Irsa
Edited by Ravishing_gal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
d description of kripa was amzng n gr8888.... n harshini i hate her man.... she playng a bigg tym devil...hehe.. luvd d prt n d way u carryng d story forward...... itz brilliant n amzng........ does kripa noe abt ar... i guess yez becoz she is adamant in sapna gettng married 2 angad........ 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25

Heya
OMG...a different story..!!
loved it yaar doo continue s0on..!!
adn yes doo PM meh..!!
tahnkz..!!
realiiee goodd
keep up da good work...!!!
😉
continuE super soon..!!
love yha
warda=)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26

[Quote=Ravishing_gal]OMG OMG OMG.. i'm first 2day🥳... i'm soo happy, coz normally my comments r alwayz late, nd jia di's alwayz 1st...😆 *sigh* it feels gr8 2 b first.. reserving has itz own advantages!!😆

anywayz,,, omg thanx 4 clearing it out in the author's note... loved the 'new' description of Kripa... so now i knw the old description was 4m harshu's POV.... eewww... i'm seriously hating harshu, even though she's not exactly playing 'evil'.. but i guess she's jealous..lol... i'm hating her attitude- seems shes always fake, nd looking 4 the flirt types??😆😆... she's gonna have hard tym finding though...lol...anywayz, yeh i was wondering y kripa had been described the way she had, as she was gonna get paired up with Angad later (*fingers crossed real soon😉*), but now itz all cleared😊

seriously loved the part, nd loved ur way of describing things in detail...lol yes, the books have paid off😆

so Kripa hopes sapna 2 b married 2 Angad rather than ridz, meaning she knows abt AR's past... does kripa knw?? coz by the sounds of it, she herself is confused nd is trying 2 hook up sapna...lol... but i guess she'll end up *gasp* falling 4 the guy rather than sapna....

oooh, i commented b4 u pm'd me 2......lolz.. kk, i RELI need 2 stop going on abt being 1st...lmao...hmmm, hope itz a long enough comment 2 make up 4 the last😃

continue soon... nd pm me plz😳

Love,
Irsa

ok first of all love u, love u, luv u for that amazing comment, u really made my day 🤗 God sweety, u guys are really spoiling me😳

i'm glad i could clear up the confusion, one seriously hot guy coming up see wht u make of him😉

harsu is not really imp to the storyline at the moment, course tht could always change😉 i just wanted a representive of that species of nasty frustrated b🤬 that seem to plague every family. each and every family i've ever known has at least one such specimen😡. and they turn up at every single goddamned function.

yeah Armaan -Ridz have been together for quite a while now and all three sisters and their frnds are aware of their couple status.

[Quote= meow23]d description of kripa was amzng n gr8888.... n harshini i hate her man.... she playng a bigg tym devil...hehe.. luvd d prt n d way u carryng d story forward...... itz brilliant n amzng........ does kripa noe abt ar... i guess yez becoz she is adamant in sapna gettng married 2 angad........ 😊

thank u soo much🤗 😳 i'm so glad you liked it😃 and yeah kripa knows

[Quote=iqbals4ever]awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!

thank u😃

[Quote=wardahere]Heya
OMG...a different story..!!
loved it yaar doo continue s0on..!!
adn yes doo PM meh..!!
tahnkz..!!
realiiee goodd
keep up da good work...!!!
😉
continuE super soon..!!
love yha
warda=)

thank u sooo much🤗🤗🤗 it really means a lot to me to get such wonderful comments from one of my favorite ff writers, can't wait for your next update either😉😆

Edited by sea_nyx - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27

Chapter 3

The couple sitting at the corner table made a charming pair but the experienced eyes of the waiter dismissed the idea immediately. He had seen too many courting couples at various stages of romance to mistake these two for one. They seemed to be more like brother and sister in the way they acted. There was even a superficially similarity. The guy was certainly good-looking, people would call him arresting; with those blue-gray eyes surrounded by thick lashes any girl would happily kill for, eyes that twinkled with the mischievous glint of the born charmer. A glint that was currently almost extinguished but still lurked in the depths of those eyes that were made to drown in 😍 (as many a girl had found out first-hand before he found the love of his life and changed his Casanova ways). The rest of his features were equally eye-catching, the cherry on the cake being the stunning pair of dimples that softened that firm jaw. Moreover, he was blessed with the perfect physique; currently clad in a pair of faded blue jeans and a white shirt partially opened to reveal that hard chest ☺️. No wonder then that a number of feminine gazes were conducting an intense perusal of him as well as the girl who was lucky enough to command his full attention 😉. The couple in question however was too engrossed in their own discussion to mind or even notice their scrutiny.

"So you're sure about it ?"

"Positive, I think his parents are going to make a formal visit next Saturday."

"Damn 😲, then we have less than two weeks to come up with a plan"

"Yeah, but that's not enough, remember we have to get di to agree to it as well"

"Don't I know it! It's amazing how a girl who looks so angelic can beat the mule for stubbornness😕"

"Hey! 😡"

"Come on krips, you know how stubborn ridz can get, besides I'm the man who loves her, I'm allowed 😉"

"I guess, but just loving her is not enough; you need to be a member of the family to get the full rights to criticize a fellow member and that Armaan, is not going to happen unless we find a way to deal with Mr. Angad Khanna"

"Angad Khanna, *hmph* what kind of a name is that? 😡"

"Then what kind of a name should it be? Armaan Malik? 😆

"Koi shak?"

"Relax jeej, you got smoke coming out of your ears and it doesn't suit your "cool dude" image" 😈

"God, I love it when you call me that!" 😍

"Yeah, well stop daydreaming and try to come up with a plan or I'll be calling someone else that"

"Over my dead body!!! 😡"

"Yeah, yeah, now stop over-acting and feed me, I'm starving; honestly, you should have been an actor not a doctor"

"Waise, I do have the looks not to mention the body for it, you may well be looking at the next SRK if I hadn't decided to commit myself to serving humanity ⭐️"

""

Well that's it guys, my proposal was going no where 🤢 so I decided to fulfill my promise to introduce Armaan ❤️. Hope you loved him as much as I do, God he's a sweetheart! 😍 I had to forcibly restrain myself in order to keep his description to a manageable length 😳. You'll have to wait for the next part to find out what the plan is though 😉.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
OMG OMG OMG i'm FIRST................ again... wooo-hooo!!!!!🥳🥳...lol

superb update... loved it loadz... especially angad's description, no wait itz armaan's description, right???... coz i thought it was Angad's😕 when i 1st red it... so re-read the part nd now i'm clear😃 itz armi's😳..lol...anywayz i reli love ur way of describing things,, thr reli... ummm... descriptive??😉😆😆lol..haiyyyeee armaaannnn *sigh*...😳😳...

but the part was reli short... but the much u wrote was simply gr8... hats off

loved this particular line..
'wht kind of man is this angad khanna'...
'what kind of man should he be.. armaan mallik'..... ridz ka dil abhi tak armi ke liye dharakta hai... i hope they come up with a super cool plan soon 2 get ridz of angad.... no actually, they can't get rid of him.. coz u gotta love angad, right??😆... so they shud try nd hook up kripa wid angad, nd distract him.. but i'm guessing eithr Angad wudn't let them off so easily, , or he'd wudn't want 2 get married in the 1st place so wud also find a way 2 get out of the situation???😕... well, actually, these r the only 2 options na😆😆.. eithr he will or he won't???😆... so the question is wud he or wud he not???❓...ok so i'm probly confusing u with my inlogical explaination, but i guess itz coz i'm trying 2 make this comment xtra xtra long, 😆😆🤣...lol just kidding...

continue super soon, nd pm me plz... nd thanks 4 the pm😆... nd i hope itz a long enough comment😉😆

btw, thnx 4 the RELI sweet comment on my fic also.🤗.. it feels gr8 2 hv a gr8 reader reading ur fic!!!😆...lmao

Love,
Irsa
Edited by Ravishing_gal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
luvd it .... it was amznggg n superb!!!! d way u described angad n den d intro of armi... dat was jus amzngg... n kripa teamng up wid armi.. dat was jus brilliant..
luvd d prt.... 2222222222222222222222222 guddddddddd...
hope kripa meets angad soon...
thnxxx 4 d pm.. update sooonn 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!! 👏

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