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koolarch2001

@koolarch2001

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Posted: 17 years ago

#131

hey when s the next update?? 😭

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karishma

@KRIZZY

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Posted: 17 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: sweta2005
waitingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

1 min me kar rahi hoon

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karishma

@KRIZZY

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Posted: 17 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: koolarch2001
hey when s the next update?? 😭

abhi bas 1 min me kar rahi hoo

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karishma

@KRIZZY

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#134

Next ud
(in d mess)
raj aur naina ko mess me ata dekh huda aona muh chupa leta hai or ye sab dekhte hai
naina-oho huda eumhe apna muh chupane ki koi zaroorat nahin hai it was all right
raj-haan huda it was really ok
huda-sir apko bura nahin laga
raj-nahin tumhari to adat hai har laki se flirt karne ki aur tumne naina ko koi unmarried ladki samaj kar hi toh uske sath flirt kiya tha
but ab tum jante ho ki naina is my wife aur ab tumne
huda-nahin sir never vaise mam bohot yong dikhti hain or sir agar apki shaadi mam se nahin hui hoti to mein unse shaadi kar ke reheat
raj looking at huda with I'll kill u look
and every body else was giggling and naina she don't know what to do
raj-huda tum nahin sudhro ge naa

(mc ata hai mess me)
mc-cadets aj pki first class jo merit hi vo off hai lekin kal apki claas hogi
neev-par sir kal to Sunday kal off hota hai
mc-capt.navin aj unhe meri class se off mil raha hai
(mc chala jata hai)
nia-oh to ye hai tumhare muchad
pooja-iske dimag ke circuit to hamesha fuse hi reheta hai
naina-pooja jab kisi ke dimag ka circuit fuse ho jata hai naa to use thik kara dena chahie
aur agar thik naa ho toh system ko pehek dena chahie
raj-naina tum kya karne vali ho
naina-tum dekhte jao is ko chik kar naa lia na toh mera naam bhi naina nahin
ali-par aap karne kya vali hai
(naina sabko apne plaan ka first step batati hai)
neev-perfect
abhi-best of luck
naina-(with smile)thank u

(in bc's room)
bc-capt. Rajveer aap yahan kahie
raj-vo sir actually naina ko kuch shopping karni thi toh kya aj me off le sakta hoon
bc-capt. Ap zaroor off le sakte hai vaise bhi yahi din hai enjoy karne ke jo din humne gavae hai vo app logon ko nahin gavane chahie nahi toh baad me afsoos karoge ki vo din jie kyo nahin
raj-thank u sir
bc-that's alright capt.
Raj-jai hind sir
Bc-jai hind capt. Dismiss
Raj-sir

(out of bc's room)
raj-done
naina really
raj-yup
naina-so mission muchad exit starts
(in d ground)
mc was going from there
raj-naina mc
naina-shows thums up to raj
raj naina ka hath pakarta hai jaise use gun chalana sikha raha hai
raj-ready
naina-hmm…
actually raj hi gun chala raha hota hai par naina ka hath zaroor uske sath hota hai
first goli nair pe pair ko paas lagti hai
jaise hi nair kuch bole use pehele raj usri goli se uske dusre pair ke paas marta hai
kuch der baad uske sar ki topi pe marta hai or vo ud jati hai vo dar ke mare andar academy me bhag jata hai

raj-well done
sare ass paas hi khare hote hai
raj-are get to work
ab sari goliya and all yahan se utha dete hai nair ki topi vahan giri hoti hai jise change kar ke nai topi uski gadi me rakh dete hai sab thik kar dete hai ki aisa lage jaise kuch hua hi nahin

(in bc room)
mc-sir mrs. Shekhawat vahan bina dekhe goli chalai jaa rahin hai capt. Rajveer unhe sikha rahe hai
bc-wat

(in d ground)
bc-bc dekhte hai ki vahan to koi bhi nahin hai naa hi raj naa hi naina aur koi goli nahin
bc-nair yahan to koi bhi nahin hai
nair-par sir vo log to
bc-vo log shopping ke lie gae hue hai
nair-nahin sir vo yahin themeri topi bhi
nair-nahin hai
bc-tumhari topi tumhari jeep me pari hai
bc vahan se gusse me chale jaate hai or nair confuse khara reheta he .

Edited by KRIZZY - 17 years ago

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Riya

@Riya_16

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#135

Too good👏👏
Thanks for this wonderful part😃😃

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#136

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Huda bhi naa!!!! 😡 Ab bhi baaz nahi aaya!!!! 😡

Nair ko kya mazza chakhaya Raj aur Naina ne!!! 👏

Nair was looking like a fool in front of BC!!!! 🤣

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jane

@george eliot

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#137

Hey Krizzy, I just started reading your fic, it's so funny yaar, loved it, please update soon 👏

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karishma

@KRIZZY

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#138

Next part
(every body in games room)
Everybody-hahahaha🤣hahahahahahahahaha 😆 😆 🤣
Raj-naina that was hilarious I mean oh god uska muh dekhne layak tha hahahaha 🤣
Abhi-relly naina apne to kamal kar diya ab vo yahan se bhage ya naa bhageusko ye din zaroor yad rahega
Pooja-sir kaise nahin bhage ge uska signal to ab tod ke rahenge
Naina-abhi shuruat hai age age dekho hota hai kya
Neev-ab hamara second step kya hoga
Nia-are thori der to use bhi aram lene do next step kal shuru kareinge
Raj-naina me to bc se party ke bare me puchnaa bhul hi gaya
Nia-tum ekdum bhulakad ho tumhe kuch yaad bhi reheat hai
Raj-nia dekho merepe sara ilzam mat lgao tum bhi to yaad rakh saktio thi naa
Nia-mene yaad nahin rakha to tum bhi yaad nahin rakh sakte haar bar ki tarah tumhare dimaag ki tube light der se hi kyon jalti hai
Raj-come on naina mere dimaag ki tube light jalti to hai tumhe to abhi tak yaad nahin aya tha
Naina-me mc ko nikalne ke steps yaad kar rahi thi par tumhe to kuch yaad nahin karnaa tha naa kuch yaad yaad nahin reheat tumhe
Neev/shalu/abhi/pooja all d cadets-chuuuuuuuuuuppp
Neev-chup ho jao tum dono jangli biliyon ki tarah ladte ho
Naina-soorry
Raj-acha abhi jata hoon

]raj chala jata hai
shalu-oh god kitnaa ladhte ho yaar tum
naina-vo kya hai naa ladhne ki toh hamari khandani bimaari hai
abhi-vaise jo bhi ho raj sahi tha hamesha vo hi to yaad rakhta hai
shulu-capt. Naina thik thi uske paas or bhi cheese hain yaad rakhne ke lie jo kam jisko diya jata hai use hi yaad rakhna chahie
abhi raj thik tha
shalu-naina thik thi
abi-raj
shalu-naina
(and d fight goes on)
naina in her mind-bimari itni jaldi phel gai keep it up naina

(bc's room)
raj-may I come in sir
bc-yes sure capt.
Bc-kafi jaldi aa gae ap capt.
Raj-vo sir actually mall band the aaj late khulne the to humne socha kisi or din shopping kar lenge
Bc-oh
Raj-sir vo me ye kehene I mean puchne aya tha ki kya hum kma me ek choti si party rakh sakte hai
Bc-party?
Raj-vo sir cadets insist kar rahe hai ki maine aoni marriage pe nahin bulaya to
Bc-ok capt. Aap kal de dijie ga or major nair ki class mene cncel karva di hai
Raj-thank u sir or sir agar ap aa sake to plzz kuch der ke lie
Bc-ok capt.i'll try
Raj-thak u sir
Raj-jai hind sir
Bc-jai hind. Dismiss

Games room
Raj-latka hua muh bana ke
Abi-kya hua raj
Ud-wat happen sir apko permission mili
Raj-cadet ud mjhe
Permission
Mil gai
Naina-wat yes
Raj-ab hasta hai
Pooja-chalo bohot sari taiyariya karni hai or dress bhitoh sochni hai
(sab chale jate hai apne-2 rooms mein)

reply plzzz….. and silent readers plzz reply karo
ur replies means a lot to me

Edited by KRIZZY - 17 years ago

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karishma

@KRIZZY

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985
Too good👏👏
Thanks for this wonderful part😃😃

tahku forreading and making it wonderfull because ur repies made it wonderfull

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karishma

@KRIZZY

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Huda bhi naa!!!! 😡 Ab bhi baaz nahi aaya!!!! 😡

Nair ko kya mazza chakhaya Raj aur Naina ne!!! 👏

Nair was looking like a fool in front of BC!!!! 🤣

he was not looking like fool he is a fool

vaise thank for d reply