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Posted: 17 years ago
At night
Ud-sir ab hum chalet hainlights out hone vali hain
Shalini-capt. Apse ek baat poochu
Raj-ji puchie
Shalini-capt. Apne hame apni shaadi me to bulaya nahin ab kam se kam ek party to banti hai
Raj-sure jab ap chahe
Alekh-sir apun log kya chahe ga ap bataiye kahan dena chaienge aap party
Naina-apun log kma mein hi party kareinge mamu
Alekh-ap to
Naina-apun bhi tere jaisa hi tapori hai
Alekh-aila! Ap to ekdam mast tapori bolte ho
Every body-hahahahahah
Raj-ok to mein kal hi party ki permission bc se leta hoon
Pooja-ok sir ab hum chalet hain bye
Raj/naina-bye

(in raj's room)
raj-nia tum to bahut achi tapori boleti ho
naina-hahahaha vo toh munna bhai dekh dekh kar sikh li
raj-hmmmm….. ok to tum change kar lo
nia-ok
nia change kar ke ati hai or vo bohot hot lag rahi hoti hai
raj naina ko dekhe hija raha hai
naina-kya hua
raj naina ke paas ata hai
raj-shhhh
raj-aj kuch mat bolna bas jo me puchne jaa raha hoon uska apne dil se javab dena
naina-kya
raj-naina kya aj me tumhe apna bana sakta kuch iss tarah se ki aaj ke baad koi hume alag naa kar pae
kuch is tarah ki hum chahe bhi to alag naa ho pae kuch is tarah ki hamare pyar ki kahani in deevaron me bas jae
kuch is tarah ki yeh lamhe hum chah kar bhi bula naa pae
kuch is tarah ki tum sirf aur sirf meri ho jao
naina was looking at raj as she was hypnotised by raj
a tear came out from her eyes
raj kissed that tear and then kissed her chicks then her shoulders
naina ko apni bahon me le kar bed par lita deta hai and then wat happened
is just unsaid
d wind flowing, d light coming from moon are d only witness for their act of love 😳 😳

plzz comment
and I know every body is blushing because even I'm blushing
and this part was d most difficult part to be written so plzz mere kiye kare pe pani nmat pherna. I know ye chota part tha but next one will be a long one
Edited by KRIZZY - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

nice ud.plz cont soon......

thank u for d comment

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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome too good very nice part waiting for next asap with long part asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
really amazing..U expresed everything in such a cute manner
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part
but plzz font ka size thoda chota rakhna next update se
update long asap
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Posted: 17 years ago
Next ud
(morning)
naina got up
naina raj ko dekh rahi hai jo abhi bhi so raha hai naina apne upar se raj ka hath hatati hai phir washroom chali jati hai. Kuch der baad raj bhi uth jata hai aur raat ke scenes yaad karta hai
raj - blush+hundered million dollar smile
naina washroom se bahar ati hai
nia-uth gae
raj-hmmm…par uth ke bhi utha nahin hoon
nia-bas bas abhi itne romantic mat ho jao fresh ho kar ao
Raj-naina ko khich leta hai
Raj-mein to aise hi fresh ho jaunga
Naina-choro raj
Raj-kisses naina
Naina-rat ke baad abhi bhi tumhara dil nahin bhara
Raj-nahin
Naina-apne aap ko chudvate hue
Naina-to kabhi nahin bhar sakta
Raj-naina idhar naina
Naina-raj ko washroom ki taraf push karti hui
Naina-raj ab fresh ho ke ao hame mess jana hai aur jahan tak mujhe pata hai mess me 9;00 baje ke baad nashta nahin milta
Raj-ok baba jarah hu
Naina-kabhi nahin sudhrega

(pooja raj/naina ke room me ati hai)
pooja-naina me vo rajveer sir ko ye dene ayi thi
naina-ye kya hai
pooja-pata nahin ye bc ne mujhe rajveer sir ko dene ke lie kha tha
naina-ok me ye unhe de dungi
pooja-bye
naina-bye

raj-washroom se bahar ata hai
naina-raj tumhare lie ye bc ne bhijvaya hai
raj-bc ne dikhao
(raj letter padta hai)
naina-kya hai agar tum batana chaho to bata sakte ho aur agar nahin batana chahate to i'ts ok
raj-naina me tumse kyon chupaunga vo academy me kuch triggers hai jo bohot inp. Hai unki security ki zimedari meri hai so bas bc ne ye likha hai ki aj se iss mission par mere sath neev bhi kam karega
naina-ok vaise raj mai tumse kuch magu gi to doge
raj-jaan ke ilava sab kuch dunga
naina-baki lovers to jaan bhi dete hai
raj-are bhai me jaan nahin de sakta kyonki maine jaan di to tumhe chor kar jana padega or phir agar mere piche se tumhe koi or utha ke le gaya to
naina-hahahaha raj tum bhi naa
naina-ok let's come to d main topic mujhe gun chalana sikhna hai
raj-bas ok to tum aj 7:00 baje ground me aa jana
naina-thank u I lov u for this
raj-just for this
naina-raaaj
raj-ok ok chalo mess me jana hai der ho jaigi
(vo mess me jate hai)

comments plzzzzzzz……………………………
Edited by KRIZZY - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome too good very nice waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice ff dear... came across it just today... good goin... update soon.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Sorry!!for being late.
Main dono parts ke hi comments ek sath de rahi hoon.
For both the parts👏
the updates were excellent.
Continue soon😃😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Too good!!!Awesome!!!Mindblowing!!!

Naina toh wakai kamal ki tapori language bolti hai!!! 😆

Raj's words were so romatic!!!! 😳

It was very hot and romantic!!! 😳 Their love was just so beautiful!!! ☺️

Finally dono ek ho gaya!!! 😊 Har tarah se ab dono pati patni ban gaye!!! 😳

Raj was very naughty in the morning!!!! 😳 Subah uthte hi flirt karna shuru!!!! 😆

Raj ka bhi kehna theek hai!!! 😆 😆 😆 Jaan de dega toh Naina se dur jana padega!!! 😳

Triggers ki zimmedari ab Neev aur Raj dono sambhalega!!! 😊 😊 😊

Raj Naina ko gun chalana shikayega!!!Wow!!! 👏

I loved the dialogue at the end!!! 😳 Raj aur Naina pe yeh dialogue bahut suit karta hai!!! 😳 👏

Unfortunately serial mein yeh dialogue Ritu aur Raj par tha in the diwali sequence in which Ritu said ,"I love you for this."Raj said ,"Only for this!"

Mujhe tab accha nahi laga tha!!!! 😡

Par tumhari story mein bahut accha laga!!!!😊

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